NeiRa Drabble : Amour Ravive (Rekindled Love)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey folks,
This is my first attempt on NeiRa. It is a very short one and related to what is going on right now on the story. I have not seen the show for a long time now but have read the written updates so i may not be able to grasp the essence of NeiRa properly. Still enjoy the drabble !!

"Sometimes two people have to fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together."


Ragini was sitting near the window of her bedroom, staring at the perfect crescent shaped moon. Tears welled up in her eyes as she remembered the moments she had spent with HIM. They were apart from each other for 15 years because of a small misunderstanding; and now when they had cleared it they still couldn't be together. HE was getting engaged the very next day. Tears rolled down her cheeks, she rubs her nose as she cried looking at the picture which she was holding in her hands; the same picture that she used to look at whenever she reminisced about him and her other two kids. She places the picture near her heart and weeps silently. All of a sudden she hears a commotion outside her room; she comes out to check what it was. She comes outside and looks all around the hall and goes to check the kitchen. Finding nothing she returns to her room. Her mind was occupied elsewhere and she failed to notice the man who was lying on her bed comfortably looking at her intensely.

She looks up and finally notices HIM. She was taken aback; all she could do was stare at him open-mouthed. He was beaming with happiness. He winks at her which finally makes her come out of her shock.

"Nachiket, what are you doing here? Mere bed pe kya kar rahe ho?" she asked incredulously.

"Ragini, main tumhare room mein hun, so it is pretty obvious ki main tumse milne aaya hun! Aur rahi baat bed ki.. tum chahti ho main kisi aur ke bed pe jau?" he teased.

"Nachiket!! Tum kya bakwaas kiye ja rahe ho!" she said. He gets up from the bed and comes near her.

"Tumhari engagement hai kal kisi aur ke sang aur tum yaha aise.." she murmurs and loses her voice as he kept walking towards her. She could see in his eyes, his intentions clearly. She starts taking small steps backwards as he moved towards her. Not even for a second did he look anywhere but her eyes since she entered the room. His continuous stare intimidated her.

"Nach..Nachiket.. tum.. yeh.." she stammered as she finally reached the end of the room and now was standing against the wall behind her. He doesn't stop at all, and finally stands in front of her; inches apart. He puts his hand on the either side so she could not escape his hold this time. This was it he had to say it to her; he had to make her understand that he was hers forever.

"Nach-"she started. He puts his fingers on her lips and says,

"Shh.. tum kitna bolti ho Ragini.. ek baar meri bhi toh baat sun lo."

She looks at him innocently; he takes her right hand in his and says,

"Haan kal meri engagement hai Ragini... aur jiske saath hai woh mere saamne khari hai. I love you, Ragini. Mere dil mein sirf tum ho Ragini.. aur tumhari jagah koi bhi nahi le sakta. Yes, I had proposed to Nivideta but I was drunk and I thought you had moved on... par woh toh dikhawa tha na? You love me too... and you know it.. toh phir hum kyu ek sang nahi reh sakte?" he said softly.

She looked at him innocently, melting with each of his words. He starts caressing her wrists; before she could say anything he continues,

"I know what you will say.. that I promised Nivideta and one shouldn't break his promise.. but hamne bhi toh ek dusre se kaafi waadein kiye the.. saath rehne ki...rishtey nibhane ki... Kya humne woh sab nahi tode pichle 15 saalo mein?"

"Nachiket par.." he shushed her again. He finally bends down on one knee; takes out a ring from his back pocket and says,

"Ragini Patel, kya tum firse Ragini Khanna banna pasand karogi? Will you be mine, again?" he asked huskily.

Looking at the love in his eyes, his kind words and his gesture she could not resist herself from this happiness. She sobs gently and nods a yes. He puts the ring on her finger and sighs with relief; grinning broadly. He kisses her hands and gets up. She hugs him immediately without wasting any other minute.

"I love you, Nachiket." she whispered in his ears.

"I know." he responded which made her loosen the hug and smack him as she wanted to hear him say something else. He chuckled and pulls her towards him again embracing her in his arms.

"I mean.. I love you too." he said and kisses her hair. She tightens her hold around him bringing him closer to her further so that there was no space between them.


I hope you guys liked it, if not then you wasted your time already 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant!👏
I wish the CVs do something like this when Neil backs out from the engagement
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is nice actually. It was fun to read.
Hopefully, N will do somethign like this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xyze

Brilliant!👏

I wish the CVs do something like this when Neil backs out from the engagement


Thanks a tonne!! Yeah lets see what cvs have in store for us! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

Awesome...

Please write more


Thank you..
Will do if i get more time...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eepsss Supaa haapy update... NeRa scenes.. please write more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

This is nice actually. It was fun to read.

Hopefully, N will do somethign like this.


Thank you so much.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cutest, I can imagine my Nachiket being like this only in front of his Ragini. So cheerful, so naughty. Awww
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So sweet!
And no it was definitely not a waste of time..
I am sure she will be Mrs.Khanna soon.. :)

Lovely!

Thanks for writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

So sweet!

And no it was definitely not a waste of time..
I am sure she will be Mrs.Khanna soon.. :)

Lovely!

Thanks for writing :)



Thank you so much!! and thanks for asking me to write about them! :-)

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