MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 5 pg 47 / PM LIST + TEASER PG 52 JUN 2 - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago


Awesome update ...
very touchy ...
😡 now he realized how much he ignored her nd what she bore,,?
he prayed for her ...
waiting .. will he ask her for him..?

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice parts dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Updates Suhaana 👏
Why Maan behaved so rude with Geet
Loved t pts dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 3







the fakir baba's words rang in his ears..' apne liye maang use kahin nahin jayegi use '
yes it was indeed true ... The reality and the ultimate truth that if he had a little bit of affection and attraction , thode ankahe jazbaat (SOME UNTOLD EMOTIONS),some sort of affection and undiscovered emotions than she will be alright no one is going to snatch her from him.. Even if he had done many things wrong to her still he was the one who can revive her... there was a firm belief this time.. there was a emotion that was just connected to GEET , his GEET and no one else... no one knew why he married her and even that time he didn't got to know what was the sort of attraction that got him her..

No one will believe but the hard and tough MSK felt weak, the fear of losing her was lurking deep inside his heart that fear from loving.. That fear from exposing the weaker side of his.. the MSK world knows was not him , he was the exposed husband in front of the hard situations...

Tears felt from his eyes those were defenseless weapon showing his vulnerable side.. it was truth that he was letting the almighty know how important she was in his life..

No word came from his mouth, he just hung his head down and shed the tears which were the proof of his unsaid commitment towards her and her love.. There was a promise of never leaving her..There was a plea of making her good for his mean self..

His mouth was sealed but the words that were coming directly from his feeble heart were much more effective that they would have been..


maan again prayed to the lord this time for himself... It is true that if the intentions are right and your heart is pure than the DUA is all like a life giving aid..maan folded his hands his eyes closed head bent... He was begging the almighty for her life for him... For the ultimate truth that he can't live without her.. She was the sole reason of his living and today she had proved this...

maan : mere liye meri geet ko theek kardijiye... Zindagi me sab kuch khoya hai maine ab geet ko khokar main ye dard aur nai bardaast kar sakta... final words that came were for her just for her that too for him.. he was selfish said his brain but his heart knew that if she was there then his life was peaceful.. she was the better half completing him in every sense..

the fakir baba handed him a black thread with a small taveez instructing him that this will protect her from all evils... Maan silently kept it with him without questioning.. The person who never believes in this kind of stuff and god was now there and bending towards the ultimate truth of universe just to seek his blessing and aid for her... Dil se dua managane aaya hai...

at the hospital
it was like his DUA was heard by the almighty she was taking small shots of breathing... Her ragged and uneven breathing first created panic... They could have lost her... Due to the excessive blood loss.. But suddenly just like she was give life to live .. To live for him... She was revived declaring out of danger...
the doctors came outside the ward.. Yash and daadima were there tensed and worried ... Yash was there giving maan each and every detail of what was going on and of the culprits too... , the culprits were meant to shot him for the loss that they incurred but she was hot in his place.. it was her test for her love towards him but he knew that this was not coincidental..


maan was his way back to the hospital when he suddenly halted the car.. He looked around and saw no one was there.. It was her his mind screamed.. She was there right in front of him...
when his mind was not satisfied he looked around and found six seven small girls playing from 2 to 5 of age... They were smiling and running behind each other.. For a second he knew that she was fine... The small smiling children were the indication that she was fine...

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she was unconscious due to sedatives but out of danger... His eyes didn't even blinked for a second he was with her from last six hours the moment he reached the hospital he was given the indication that she was fine... Maan looked like still having no emotions.. Yet the whirlpool of intense emotions was going on.. He was fighting for himself and for her...
he knew that she wanted herself to be his wife in every sense.. But never voiced it.. He knew it's her modesty and her respect towards daadima that she was quiet.. On the other side it was him... Fighting with himself for her better.. He was the worst person she could have in her life and lastly he was incompetent to make sure that she was having all the happiness of the world... Being the great and the owner of five thousand crore empire it was not difficult for him to keep her happy but monetary status was not all that she will need and ask.. She will want him in her life at every single step of her life that till now he was not able to fulfill...

holding her hands he slept in the same position still with a flickering mind set...

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 3
fakir baba's word gave maan much needed belive that no one can snatch his geet from him...he gave her many pain but also his affection can return geet to him..
maan is scared of losing geet...
maan silently promising he will never leave her...
finally geet is out of danger...maan knew geet wanted to be his wife in every sence but he kept denying...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan praying for geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read all three parts. when maan came to know about his feelings geet's life is in danger while saving maan.😭😭😭kitna hurt kiya maan geet ko apne ignorance se. poor geet kitna kuch sehna pada usse. finally maan apne pyaar keliye bhagwaan ne maangne gaye.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update...maan praying for geet, and his prayers are heard by god...geet is out of danget...
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Posted: 10 years ago
he never said he loves her
n she never claimed her r8s on him
she beared everything silently
babas words gave courage to him
n geet is well now
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part. ..waiting to see the aftereffects of the incident. ..from maaneet pov

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