Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: chair1992
After reading your chapters, I often don't know what to write 😊
As a reader I was upset that we didn't get the whole story of what happened to nandini

As a writer, I understand that you can't tell us everything so soon (no matter how much I wish otherwise)

I liked that you focussed on nandini in this chapter, this way we got to know about both of their feelings and pain.

It was heartbraking how nandini blamed herself, they are both so similar, thinking about the other. You showed that beautifully

Nandini thinking of ways of getting her happy majnu back

Manik thinking that a change of scenery would make her happy

👏👏👏

Have you outlined everything or do you go with the flow? You don't have to answer I am just curious because of the "I love you"

Thankyou so much for understanding the pace of the story and being so patient with my writing tbh. I know everyone is very keen on leanring how Nandini landed up in such a state but just a few more chapters and it will be disclosed.

Your support and love is something I will always cherish and I'm glad that even though I left the story half untold, you didn't mind it too much and still appreciated the chapter! <3

It's a mix honestly. I know of a few ideas that I really want to incorporate in the story but those ideas might be in the middle somewhere or maybe in the end, it all depends how long I want this story to go and where I want to draw the line which I haven't decided yet. So mostly I think I just prefer going with the flow because I feel a creative piece can never be written with stubborn and rigid ideas, you should alter and amend your ideas a little if you feel that the story isn't shaping up how you would like it to.

Once again... thankyou so much for the kind words! <3

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

loved this.simple,sweet

thank you...

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: twinkle10

This was so beautiful! I'm telling you the girl you can become the official poet of this forum because I haven't come across anyone else here who has such a grasp on their thoughtful words and still your writing never lacks that flow that a poem reiqires. Simply superb babe!! <3
I'm always going to remain your no. 1 fan of your poems.

Take care and stay writing <3

thank you but...u r exaggerating...😳

and i am your fan...

the way u pen their love...its like u can actually feel them...

twinkle...u r awesome...

bye..

take care...

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

thank you but...u r exaggerating...😳

and i am your fan...

the way u pen their love...its like u can actually feel them...

twinkle...u r awesome...

bye..

take care...

Nope... not at all exaggerating Going to start calling you Poet Aairah from now on! (taking that from your user name, so hopefully that is the correct name and I'm not missing anything lol)! And we can be fan of each other's work don't worry! haha Take care <3

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

CHAPTER 6! - TEASER!

"I want to be able to carry you in my arms every day Nandini. I want to be able to hold you tight in my arms and cuddle against your warmth every night. I want to be able to wake up every morning to the mesmerising sight of your flawless face, sleeping like the most peaceful and innocent baby ever. I want to grow old with you. I want to start a..."

"Stop...", Nandini sealed his moving lips with her trembling fingers. The tears had ceased their movement now and there was an unusual sparkle of excitement dancing in her pained eyes.

"You...You're joking right? I mean we're at an airport Manik...", she asked with widened eyes. Her voice was still hiccuping because of the sobs she had been weeping a few minuts ago. She glanced around her and saw that an unbelievably large crowd had gathered to witness the sight which was going to change her life forever.

Manik softly kissed her fingers that were placed on his lips and moved them away just enough so he could start talking again. A reassuring smile spread across his face.

"Will you marry me Nandini Murthy?"

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It's been way too long I know...I usually post my Teaser in the middle of the week but I couldn't this week and I'm so sorry for that! But full chaper will be up tomorrow I promise!

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

First one to write a review

I was holding my breath and I knew what was coming but than to end it here 😭😭😭

I demand a YES YES YES!!!

With Manan its normal to expect the unexpected, an airport proposal 😳

Just saw the promo and was literally on cloud nine and than saw your teaser

My day began in a bad way but it ends good

Edited by chair1992 - 10 years ago

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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

loved the teaser ...eagerly waiting...

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Kaju.acacia

@Kaju.acacia

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

proposal on airport!!😃

m waiting for full ch (how will I wait till tomorrow?)

ur teasers always make me impatient

n again luv u. ❤️(I know that this has become boring now all this appreciation

but if u want to hear burai of urs than u have to write something bad

which u won't as it is impossible for u to write something bakwas)😆

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twinkle10

@twinkle10

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: chair1992

First one to write a review
I was holding my breath and I knew what was coming but than to end it here😭😭😭
I demand a YES YES YES!!!
With Manan its normal to expect the unexpected, an airport proposal😳

Just saw the promo and was literally on cloud nine and than saw your teaser
My day began in a bad way but it ends good

Okay like promo... Can we just... Sighhh I've watched it 9 times now and I'm pretty I'll be heading back to watch it again once I finish replying. I need Monday to come already!!
Uh oh... Hope you're feeling better now lovely. Take care of yourself yeh? And chapter will be up tomorrow so hopefully everyone's answers are cleared then. Won't be a sad chapter though, I promise! :)

<3