Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all thank god you updated! i was waiting sooo egarly for your update😃 i didnkt even read the teaser cause knew wouldn't be able to wait!
Now coming to the update it was too emotional its like the both are in this deep agony because of hurting each other somehow andd even though they both have forgiven each other they still have to forgive themselves😭

And the suspense is killing me. How did tat perfect day turn into a disaster. and who is that man😡

Manan on a vacation yipeee!!! it will be perfect for them plsss udate asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Once again lovely piece of writing..
MaNan on Holiday...hmmm seems to.be interesting...
Update soon..
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
its a healthy delay...for me atleast... the way you portray their emotion is so beautiful twinkle...

She's my morning,
She's my favourite song to sing,
She's the poems that I write,
She's my everything

She's my sparkle,
She's my shine,
She's the only thing,
I want to call mine

She's my voice,
She's my ears,
And being without her,
Is one of my biggest fears

She's the reason I dream,
She's the reason I follow my heart,
She's the reason why,
I want this relationship to start

She's my afternoon,
She's my thoughts all day,
She's the reason why,
I say the sweet things I say

She's my sleepless nights,
She's my soul,
She's the reason why,
I can't keep control

She's my heart,
She's the reason I'm in love,
She's the reason why,
I thank god above

She's my everyday,
She's my everynight,
And I would never give up on her,
Not without a fight

She's my morning,
She's my favourite song to sing,
She's the poems that I write,
She's my everything...

Edited by aairahahmad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i m loving this!the characterization of manik and nandini.so in character.just the way they'd behave.they'd talk.

i m not good with words.i m losing ability to express myself :/ all i can say is loved this chapter.loved how nandu tried to make him talk.how he tried to avoid.that part where he says i wish it was me made me feel like a part of my heart got slashed !i could feel nandini's pain after he uttered those words.his guilt,his pain is becoming too much for them.

Can't wait for the next chapter.i was feeling kinda upset today.your fic cheered me up.thanks

update and update soon
Edited by filter.coffee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written...love the way you express, I literally had goose bumps while reading!
Heart warming & so touching ...please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow wat an update

loved it
cont soon


Thank you so much! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_


wow

you pen down all the emotions so beautifully I could always feel the emotion ...so we got to know a little bit of thier past and I love when they both care for each other nandini wants manik to continue singing and manik wants nandini to be safe interesting...and both are living in aguilt ...it was too emotional...and as always I will say U R brilliant writter twinkle ...
Cont soon


Thank you so much babe! Your words always leave me speechless...I truly appreciate all the praises! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
After reading your chapters, I often don't know what to write 😊
As a reader I was upset that we didn't get the whole story of what happened to nandini
As a writer, I understand that you can't tell us everything so soon (no matter how much I wish otherwise)

I liked that you focussed on nandini in this chapter, this way we got to know about both of their feelings and pain.

It was heartbraking how nandini blamed herself, they are both so similar, thinking about the other. You showed that beautifully

Nandini thinking of ways of getting her happy majnu back
Manik thinking that a change of scenery would make her happy
👏👏👏

Have you outlined everything or do you go with the flow? You don't have to answer I am just curious because of the "I love you"

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vihaa

First of all thank god you updated! i was waiting sooo egarly for your update😃i didnkt even read the teaser cause knew wouldn't be able to wait!

Now coming to the update it was too emotional its like the both are in this deep agony because of hurting each other somehow andd even though they both have forgiven each other they still have to forgive themselves😭

And the suspense is killing me. How did tat perfect day turn into a disaster. and who is that man😡

Manan on a vacation yipeee!!! it will be perfect for them plsss udate asap


Awww this is so sweet!! <3 thanks love for the beautiful words. So I'm rubbing out of words to thank you guys but hopefully you know that every praise of yours touches the heart and so words fall short in thanking you. They've always been like that haven't they...always so keenly ready to sacrifice their own happiness for each other and that's what makes them made for each other I guess. It's why we fall in love with them again and again because they continuously are on a journey to re-define the meaning of true love.
The revelation of the guy will happen really soon I promise ;)

Thankyou for the love and support again? <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

Once again lovely piece of writing..
MaNan on Holiday...hmmm seems to.be interesting...
Update soon..
Thnx for the pm


CHeers girl! Glad you enjoyed the chapter... You're always welcome <3

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