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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Amazing part sanju !!
Finally Ar meet :)
Armaan loves ridz ...
Continue asap !!
Pls pls do write an epilogue !!
Thnxx for pm !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing part sanju !!
Finally Ar meet :)
Armaan loves ridz ...
Continue asap !!
Pls pls do write an epilogue !!
Thnxx for pm !!

thnx...i always wait for ur cmnt...
yess he loves
will cont..
u ill come to know tye reason for no epilogue in the last part...
well i had to pm u...nahi toh mere works par sabse pehla cmnt kaun karega??!!
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
hey sanju
i hope ur not angry with me as i didn't commented on previous part
actually i was last week so time nah mila love u
now coming to the both the parts
both r awesome
first loved tge girls tour in Sydney
all the pics are superb
lovee their girl gang how they faught nd do crazy things their outing
then the last part ar meet
loved all gelled up together so well
so armaan also loved ridhz that's so gud
but yeh anjali kahan se tapak gyi yaar beech mein
but i think ek confusion h jo mujhe samajh agaya i think i have guessed the situation r8
ridhz think armaan anjy r together but armaan loves her
anjy i think she is married to atul ridhz is again doing mistake by assuming things
chalo lets see aage kya hota h
but loved this nd waiting for the coming part eagerly
bye tc love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
humaira

os is super rocking yaar..

i loved the whole

ps sory for a shot rply bsy..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Part 4(Last):Baatein Yeh Kabhina



Ridzi breathed in and out and then started to speak...
ridzi- guys aaj shaam jab tu muski party venue chali gayi thi aur nikki tu hospital...mai yehi thi..ki tab bhi ek ladki ayi..mukje nhai pata tha kaun tha...par phir pata chala vo anjali hai...phir mai kisi kaam sai kamre mai ayi ki tab bhi maine balcony mai suna armana aur anji ek dusre sia pyaar karte hai...


nikki looked at muskaan unbelievably
nikki- aisa...
ridzi- guys bass...i wnat just to be frnz...mai usse pyaar nahi karti
muski- really (sarcastically )
ridzi- haan..bass ab so jao...
ridzi went
muskaan to nikki- yeh bohut jaldi assume nahi karti (gritting her teeth)
nikki- hmm vo tou hai parr...ab kyaa kare..
muski- iss anjali ka kyaa chakkar hai yeh pata lagate hai...
mai abhi ko kehti hoon ridzi ko apne saath lai jaane kai liye
nikki- yeh right...

and then asked abhi to take ridhima out tom...abhi agreed...
And ridhima with lot of insist agreed...
Anjali- hey guys...ridzi kaha hai
nikki- wo bahi kai saath bahar gayi hai...shaam tak ayegi
armaan- kyon
muski- wo abhi kuch kaam tha toh abhi ridzi ko lai gaya
armaan- hmmm...
suddenly a voice comes
voice- armaan mere bhai kaha tha tu...maine tujhe pata hai kitna jyada miss kiya
armaan- champ and went to hug the boy...kaise hai yaar tu..
champ- mai theek hu yaar tu bata
armaan- mai bhi acha
then anjali spoke- Atul tum mujhse nahi miloge (yess yes yess thts atul)
atul- kyon nahi jilunga well...apni beautiful wife kai liue toh aya hun and apne frnd kai liye
anjali- awww and they hug
nikki and muski were shocked and then looked at each others face...
nikki looked at muski and muski at nikki and then spoke together- OH SHITTS!!!
armaan- kyaa hua
muski- ridhima paagal ho gayi hai..
anji- kyaa matlab
nikki and muski told them everything bt atul was still unaware tht she was his frnd ridhima..
armaan- ohh gawwwdd...tum log..mujhe pehle nahi bata sakte thai
nikki- humne usse vada kiya tha
armaan- ab vada nibhaya
nikki- yess...usne kaha tha armaan anji sai pyaar karta hai...vo usse pyaar nahi karta toh shayad mai usse bata bhi deti
muski- toh bass humne bata diya
rahul- toh ab...
muski- i have an idea
and they came closer and she started to speak abt the plan and told them wht to do...
it was 6 in the eve when Abhi took her to a place...it was like a party hall..
as she reached thr she saw everyone from the party yesterday...and then saw nikki and muski
ridz to abhi- yeh..
abhi- wo hum aab ab alag hone vale hai...toh we decided to organize a gud bye party..
ridzi- ohh...
muski- ridzi jaldi aa..
and they took her...
ridz- kahn...
nikki- kapde nahi pehnne..
muski- maine hum teeno ki dresses banayi hai...
ridz- kk..
They got dressed up and then came out of the room moving slowly..

When three were coming down...a pairs of eyes was seeing intensly on ridhima and it was armaan...

Ridhima looked up and was in awww seeing armaan in a two piece suit..white shirt with royal blue half coat and black denim jeans...

And same goes with Armaan..he was in awwwee seeing her in in White crop top with white above knee lenght skirt with a royal blue button up full sleeps plain net shrug whose buttons were like crystals and her hair with step cut into high pony tail...

As they entered into the party hall..everyone was in awee seein the girls...
Ridhima was smiling seein Armaan when her smile vanished as she saw anjali standing thr...bt she controlled her emotions..

they were dancing on the floor...
when suddenly a spotlight falls on Ridhima and a man comes with a guitar in his hands..
Ridhima looked around and realised spotlight is on her and was shocked even more when she saw the person...only one word came from her mouth ""Armaan""

(Baatein yeh kabhina song is in female as well as male voice soo here is a mix up)

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

[Armaan sang as he let the guitar aside and backgroud music played...he looked ta ridhima bt as behind ridhima was anjali ridhima thought it was for anjali]

Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

[Armaan sang while coming forward to ridhima]

Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Dil mera maange bas ye duaa

[Ridhima sang with smiling face at armaan as she thought this is for anjali]

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

[Nikki comes singing and holded her hands...ridhima looked at her and she blinked her eyes]

Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai
Tu saath hai toh zindagi
Tu jo kabhi door rahe
Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi

[ Anjali sang while lookin at atul who was standing behind curtains and armaan smiled as he relised this bt ridhima mistook him]

Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo

[Muskaan came forward and held her hand and hugged her]

Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

[ Anajli sang with the tune]

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

[ Armaan sang lookin intensely at ridhima ]

Jaagi bhi hai royi bhi hai
Aankhein ye raaton mein mere
Kyun har ghadi milke tujhe
Lagti rahe bas teri kami
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Hum toh na samjhe tum hi kaho
Kyun tumko paake tumse juda

[ Ridhima sang while lookin at armaan...now every couple was on floor dancing...armana came and asked ridhima for dance amd she accepted ... as they were dancing ridhima felt nervous so she took his hand and then moved and placed his hand on anjali's and smiled.]

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee rahaa

[ Nikki and muskaan sang with Armaan while Abhi asked ridhima for dance as requested by armaan]

They danced untill the tune played..

Ridhima was feeling vunerable and she couldn't hold her tears so she ran outside the hall and stand near a pool in the garden..she stepped down on the 2nd step of the pool and sat thr and tears started falling down from her eyes..

when she saw atul thr hugging anjali and then kissing..she was shocked and then she saw armaan thr smiling while lookin at them...She was shocked again when she hear atul shouting HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MRS.JOSHI and anjali sayin the same HAPPY ANNIVERAARY TO U TOO MR.JOSHI...she was shocked hearing this...when she saw armaan approaching her...she stood up and was about to go when armaan held her hand and she looked back..
she slipped her hands out of his grip and again was leaving when armana called her

Armaan- ridhima...kyaa hua
ridhima- ku..kuch nahi..
Armaan- phir ro kyon rahi ho
ridhima- naa nahi ro rahi
Armaan- ridhima plss
Ridhima- nahi ro rahi hoon mai tumhe samjh kyon nahi ata..
Armaan- nahi ro rahi toh nazre mila kar baat kyon nahi kar rhai
Ridhima- plss Armaan jen do mujhe
Armaan- kyon
Ridhima turned around and said - Kyon..Kyonki agar mai ek second bhi yaha rukki toh mujhe tumse pyaar ho jayega...phirse...Aur tumhe nahi hoga...phirse...
and with this her damn of tears broke...Armaan heart was like someone stabbed a knife seein her like this..

He went towards her and held her with her shoulder...she looked up and he hugged her...she was shocked bt soon reciprocated the hug...

Armaan- Aur agar mai tumse kahu ki ... Mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai tumse...vo bhi phirse nahi kyonki maine tumhe kabhinnahi bhulaya aur tumse kabhi bhi pyaar karna nahi choda...toh kya tum kahogi ki tumhe mujhse pyaar hai...

Ridhima looked at him shockingly...she was shocked to wits..

Armaan- haan muchkin tumhara peanut tumse pyaar karta hai...I LOVE U
Ridhima hugged him and said- I...I LOVE..U...TOO

and they both hugged eachother with smiling face...

Everyone came and clapped...

Atul- congo ridhima...
ridhiam- thnx AJ
Anjali - u r THE DR.RIDHIMA
Ridz- And u r THE FASHION DESIGNER MRS.JOSHI

armaan- forget it guys...ab toh mujhe aur muckphkin ko akela chod do..
Ridhima hit armana and looke pd down being all shy
Armana- Oyee hoyee
and they both hug eachother

nikki and muskaan came forward to and sang

BAATEIN YEH KABHINA TU BHOOLNA

armaan sang while holding her hand and hugging her

KOI TERI KHAATIR HAI JI RAHA

and they all Nikki,Muskaan,Rahul,Abhi,Atul,Anjali hugged them...

...


THE END

ITS NOT ENDING BT THE BEGINING OF THR LIFE...

Hey guys...sooo ummm... I will miss this story...Its really close to my heart...I had written ONE SHOTS be4 bt I m feeling really sad ending this...

I LUV U READERS FOR LIKIN AND CMNTING ON IT...

Hope u guys like the end as this was it which i could give coz its a real story turned into FICTION...and hope even did justice with the title...

Do cmnt and like...,,

With love
Sanju & ********
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Amazing story !!
Loved it <3
Finally AR met ..!!
Keep writing more sanju :)
Thnxx for pm !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
hey sanju n the mystry write..

i finally read ur fs..
its awsome..

kitni bdi misunderstanding.. baba re..

ill start with part one..
hww ridhima mising armaan..
ar frnds since childhood..
i n loved their nik names..

armaan loves anjali.. ak ki kita..??? :-(
poor ridz.. she is so hurt n ignoring her peanut..😭
ab armaan ne bhi ignore shuru...😲
poor ridz bechari ne itni himat krke armaan ko face krne ka soch pr armaan bsy with anji..

hope vo dono mil jaye..

ab hm part 2 pr chalte hai..

are ye kya sabhi frnds ko alag krdia..
trip ki discription is awsome.. hme bhi sath main tumne sydney ghuma dia...😛😉
loved the trio bonding... their masti n how they suport each other..

part 3
sabki live main new frns..
waoo they all meting again.. in lodon.. N sab ka reunion.. 😊😃

muski n rahul ki fight to world famous hai...😆😆
hayi la armaan loves ridhima.. no this is confusing man.. toh pehle usne anji kyu bola ridhima ko...

ar face to face finally after soo many years..

upss ridhima is sad seeing anji n armaan..
finaly dono mile.. pr ridhima thinks he still loves anji..

anji atul's wife..???

woo ar ka itna filmy confetion.. ye jawami hai dewani types..😳😳

ek baat ko leke im confused armaan ko ridhima se pyaar kb huaaa..??/


i loved the wholeee...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing story !!
Loved it <3
Finally AR met ..!!
Keep writing more sanju :)
Thnxx for pm !!

glad unloved it...
Tumhara naam should be...ummm haan FIRST CMNT KARNE WALI GIRL= FCKWG
yess AR met...will keep writing if i cont to get encouraging cmnts...

With love
sanju
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: palakajenian

hey sanju
i hope ur not angry with me as i didn't commented on previous part
actually i was last week so time nah mila love u
now coming to the both the parts
both r awesome
first loved tge girls tour in Sydney
all the pics are superb
lovee their girl gang how they faught nd do crazy things their outing
then the last part ar meet
loved all gelled up together so well
so armaan also loved ridhz that's so gud
but yeh anjali kahan se tapak gyi yaar beech mein
but i think ek confusion h jo mujhe samajh agaya i think i have guessed the situation r8
ridhz think armaan anjy r together but armaan loves her
anjy i think she is married to atul ridhz is again doing mistake by assuming things
chalo lets see aage kya hota h
but loved this nd waiting for the coming part eagerly
bye tc love u


Hey noo m not angry...how could i be angry with PS
hmmm love u tooo
hehehe...even i wrote it for fun...didn't knew ot would be appreciated bt it was...
hey bhagwaan...sab confusion samjh ata hai right...
part 4 update kiya phir rply kiya coz aapko sab pata chal gaya...
glad u luve it
muuwaaahh
even i luved ur cmnt
with love
sanju.. ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: little_angle

hey sanju n the mystry write..

i finally read ur fs..
its awsome..

kitni bdi misunderstanding.. baba re..

ill start with part one..
hww ridhima mising armaan..
ar frnds since childhood..
i n loved their nik names..

armaan loves anjali.. ak ki kita..??? :-(
poor ridz.. she is so hurt n ignoring her peanut..😭
ab armaan ne bhi ignore shuru...😲
poor ridz bechari ne itni himat krke armaan ko face krne ka soch pr armaan bsy with anji..

hope vo dono mil jaye..

ab hm part 2 pr chalte hai..

are ye kya sabhi frnds ko alag krdia..
trip ki discription is awsome.. hme bhi sath main tumne sydney ghuma dia...😛😉
loved the trio bonding... their masti n how they suport each other..

part 3
sabki live main new frns..
waoo they all meting again.. in lodon.. N sab ka reunion.. 😊😃

muski n rahul ki fight to world famous hai...😆😆
hayi la armaan loves ridhima.. no this is confusing man.. toh pehle usne anji kyu bola ridhima ko...

ar face to face finally after soo many years..

upss ridhima is sad seeing anji n armaan..
finaly dono mile.. pr ridhima thinks he still loves anji..

anji atul's wife..???

woo ar ka itna filmy confetion.. ye jawami hai dewani types..😳😳

ek baat ko leke im confused armaan ko ridhima se pyaar kb huaaa..??/


i loved the wholeee...



Hey

Glad u found it aweesome..

Hmm baba re..

Kks
even i love thr childhood names...wht a co incident...wo AWOTB kai M&P i m in love
hmmm...

2nd part
yess ho gaye...aww...hmm mai bhi ghumi sydney..wht a co incidence again..
Glad u loved it..

Arrre AR hai...i was thinking the same par tab tak likh chuki thi...actuaLly armaan nai anji sai ]yaar karne kai baare mai kaha hi isiliye tha...
phir itne saal beet gaye... ^_^

Yess anji is atul wife...she was ridz bestfrnd how could she betray her she was helpin armaan bt vo phir alag ho gaye.. :(

Yess i love YJHD
toh usi kai types ka confession karwa diya. ^_^...we need a new confsconfession though DMG real confessions r always epic.. ;)

I did the confusion over in the cmnt.. ^_*

Glad u loved it...

with love
sanju

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