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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

its brilliant..loved it...so much happened...in one chapter...
as u said...all should face their karma...
poor nandini...feeling so sad for her...hope she will recover soon from this shock...
pls continue soon...
thanks a lot for the scrap...take care...

heheh thank yu so much..am glad ki u loved it..well yeah !! Wil continue soon..thanks for reading n commenting..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: drnidsur

i loved the way u wrote the part

more than the part i loved ur pov
indeed in real life , betrayal from our loved ones hurt is badly ...sooo true and apt
i feel sorry for nandini ...and even manik ...
ty for the pm 😳

Thank yu so much..am glad ki u loved the part n pov too..
Yeah !! It is...well I feel too..thanks for sharing ur views..thanks for reading n commenting..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan FF : Love Keeps US Together


~CHAPTER 11~


There is no menu in Karma cafe.You get what you deserve


Manik is hugging Nandini saying that she is safe.She is safe in his arms.No one is going to hurt her.He is afraid that she is not crying.If she cries then she will somewhat better.He breaks the hug and cups her face in his hands and says you are safe.Don't fear.Cry if you want to cry but don't be silent.Your silence kills me.Please say something.He literally pleaded her.She just saw his face.She says .The...they..tried to..too...Manik didn't let her complete.He just hugged her.Nandini finally cried.Manik they tried to .Shhh Nandini.It's over.He can't even listen that word from her mouth.Nandini cried.Manik just let her cry how much she wants.Because right now she needs to cry.Manik and Cabir have tears in their eyes.Seriously no one has any idea what must be going through her.Nandini passed out in Manik' arms.Nandini !! Manik shouted,Cabir take the car out !! Cabir took the car and Manik sat with Nandini in back seat. Cabir drove the car to Nandini' house Canir searched for keys in Nandini's purse and opened the door.Manik placed her on the bed .He caressed her hair gently. Cabir stood near the door watching them.

Manik saw Cabir and he thought of talking to him.He got up from bed but Nandini had tightly held his hand from going.Manik !! manik !, Please don't go.They will come .Please !! she said in sleep.Manik's heart ached seeing her.He just wished to erase her pain in one go.Manik said to cabir come and sit.I need to talk you.Cabir sat in the couch and said I also need to talk to you.It is regarding to Aliya both said at the same time.Cabir and Manik saw each other.They just couldnt believe that Aliya had panned this ? How could she do this to her Cabir ? What Nandini did to Aliya .? How can a girl think this badly about another girl ? how Cabir ? and Why ? Why ? Nandini is so innocent and she never cause any trouble for Aliya .Why Aliya did this Cabir ? She had broken my trust completely.Am ashamed that am her friend,boyfriend.Canir says I totally agree with you.I was completely in shock when the boy showed that Aloya did this.I just couldnt believe my ears.I wish he was saying a lie.I too wished Cabir.But he was the truth.I can see it his eyes.Cabir says Yeah !! but we still dont know why she did all this.? What is the reason behind this ? suddenly Cabir cell rings .It is Mukti's call.


oh shit !, We completely forgot about the party.Manik says make some excuse.We can't come .Cabir says ok.I will keep on speaker.Manik says ok.Cabir answers the phone and puts the phone on speaker and Mukti shouts from other side saying where the hell are you guys ? Dhruv and me are waiting for you.Cabir says Dhruv and you ? Where is Aliya.Aliya is not picking up the phone and she messaged me saying she got some important work so she wont be coming.So where are you guys .Manik says actually we are tired.I mean medicines are affecting us.We are feeling sleepy so we thought you will understand that we wont be able to come.Mukti says are you guys ok ? Where are you guys ? i and Dhruv will come right now ? Yes buddy !! where are you guys ? Manik says no guys you dont worry.We are good.Okay now am feeling sleepy bye.He cuts the phone without listening to them.Uff Cabir !! How many questions they ask !! Mukti really cares for us.Yeah Manik !! she really does.You noticed that Aliya is not present in the party.Something is fishy Manik.Something is going wrong.Yeah Cabir !! i too feel the same.


Aliya not being in the party and Nandini is facing this thing .Something relation is there.We need to find out.But before that we need to leave from here.But I cant leave Nandini like this.Not in this state.I cant leave her alone anymore.Maybe like this attacks can happen with her more.Manik said.Cabir says are you thinking the same what I am thinking ? Manik says is this related something to my parents ?But Manik says Aliya doesn't know anything about my parents .So it cant be that. Cabir also agrees.Nandini saying No !! please stay away from me..Don't do anything.Manik !! she woke up from her sleep.She just hugged Manik !! Manik says Am here now.Nothing is going to happen.Shh !! Nothing is going to happen to you.Nandini saw him and Manik planted a kiss on her forehead. Cabir coughs saying that he is there.Nandini composes herself.She decides she needs to be strong.She needs to face it.She composes and asks Manik did Aliya do this ? i listened your conversation.So please dont say any lies.Manik just nodded his head and he hung his head down feeling ashamed.Nandini lifted his head saying why are feeling ashamed.Am thankful to you because you saved me today like always.You are my saviour.Manik just hugged her. Cabir saw them sensing that love is starting to bloom.He is smiling but this smile is placed with sudden fear.Cabir says we need to go to Aliya's house.Nandini and Manik broke the hug and says yeah !!

They all go to Aliya' home.Manik says to Nandini you stay here only . Don't come.I dont want to see you hurt again.But Manik..Please Nandini for once listen to me.Nandini nodded her head in yes.Manik kissed her forehead and went to the door.Cabir rang the doorbell.No one opened.I think Aliya is not there .Cabir exclaimed.We will see her wardrobe once.By chance we can get something.Cabir agreed with Manik.Manik broke the door.They entered the house.Manik and Cabir stopped in their way.Nandini is scared sitting alone.So she just goes inside and gets collide with Manik as she is running seeing back.Nandini sees Manik is not moving.Nandini comes forward and her breath stopped.She find..she find Aliya DEAD !! Aliya is DEAD !! all three are rooted in their spots.


MY POV

People who create their own drama will deserve their Karma.Indeed that is true.Life is like a boomerang.What you give,you get.Doing bad things to others and Karma will find its way and gives double to you.Karma gave Aliya what she deserved.She is dead.She paid for her deeds.Just the thing remains that she never got a chance to explain and apologise for her deeds.This gives us another mystery which needs to be unfold.Will Manik,Cabir,Nandini will unfold this Mystery.To know ,stay tuned..



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So . i guess this is the biggest shock of this story plot.This is the turnover of the story.I dont know how it turned out because I have no idea how I wrote it.Ignore the mistakes and please dont forget to hit like and comment and share your views.Thank yu so much for the likes and comments on previous chapter.Am sorry for Aliya's fans.Cant help it.I hope you will take it as a story.Thank yu..Am extremely sorry ..😭

Love,
Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
cont soon
Posted: 10 years ago
res ;) /unres
tks for the pm..and sorry for late comment..
really this was shocking aliya dead😲..guess too many unexpected turns r on th way...
loves the way Manik made Nandini feel better...😳
jst waiting for the update..
update soon.. :)
Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woah! That was a big twist! I got shocked reading the last sentence...okie now you better update soon coz i really want to know what really happened...
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Posted: 10 years ago
OK dude no offense but
This story is getting dark
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh kya kr diya jaan sirf kisss manga front of her and u just killed her omg its sooo horrible
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

yeh kya kr diya jaan sirf kisss manga front of her and u just killed her omg its sooo horrible

sorry yar..but I planned it long ago..sorry..Its horrible..?😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god
apne toh fab 5 ka ek member hi maar diya such a big twist...
Cont soon
Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago

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