The hurt of love - IshRa OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

res 😳

EDITED

Mallu 🤗

this was such a cute OS. And Yay *hi5* we both wrote something similar Raavan blasting Ishita for her carelessness and Ishita taking his anger silently for the first time because she knows he is right and he was scared because of her.

What I liked the most was the end of the OS though - she got into bed on her own and not Ruhi ke liye 🤣 I swear sometimes I have the most absurd things pop into my head that IshRa can do and label as Sirf Ruhi ke Liye 😉🤣 

Write more hon, I miss your stuff 🤗

Aani 🤗

Am so glad u read it and commented too...Its so long since we read each others work..its great we are on the same page after years! 😳

thankyou so mch for the sweet words aani...so glad u liked it! 😊

@bold - absolutely!! And not just absurd but some romantic things too ☺️ 😉

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Beautiful

Thnkks dear! 😊😳

Originally posted by: ruhanikadhawan

Aiyooo...murgan...actually...raman and ishita have something 4 each other...😛😛

" mera kya hota "...wow...what a dialogue..

Ofcrse Ishu n ramz have much more than something for each other 😉😳 Its just that they dont realize it now and such moments help them to confront their own emotions.
Anyways thnks for liking buddy. 😊

I read a few OSs before i landed on yours and your the one who have come the clostest to nailing Raman and Ishita. The dialogues you have written for both Raman and Ishita are what i would expect them to say.
The way in which Raman expresess his concern with his usual lashing out was so him.
Well done!

Edited by loveabletwinz - 10 years ago

Lovely OS Malika Di!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

loved it, you've written the anger in raman's voice very well, i was myself a little bit scared!!

That was a good one...very sweet! PM me if u write another OS :)

Awesome OS..
Loved his outburst and her understanding...
It was s sweet of her to tend to his woulds while he was asleep.. <3

Thanks for the beautiful OS.! :)

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Such an intense OS! Nice attempt! 😊