MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 5 pg 47 / PM LIST + TEASER PG 52 JUN 2 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Painful part
poor geet fighting 4 her life...can't w8 for next
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Geet is shot and Maan is devastated...

first because he now understood her worth and second she is badly hurt...he is scared that may be she will not survive...

very emotional update...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very emotional and touchy update. 😭
maan always find out her importance after nearly lost her. update FAST STILL WAITING.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice geet badly injured and maan taking
her to hospital someone try to harm her
and he told yash to found out who were they
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
its important to tel someone u love them before its to late n faith plays it path n gives u a reality check than nothing is constant
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet is shot n maan is numb seeing her going numb
awesome start
sometimes when we ose the thing we will get to know how much priceless it is
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Posted: 10 years ago
painful update
geet was injured
maan ussko hospital le jaata hai
ab doctors kya karte hai dekhna hai!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome start,maan trying to save geet,it says true we realise the value of our dear ones when there comes a fear of losing them forever,and here maan's care and anxiety towards geet shows howmuch he loves her,waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 2





Emotions never counted for him...he was a tough and ruthless soul who just knew and thinks of himself his everything was just related to him and his family that only counts his daadima.. His life was just a perfect for any non human..he never had feeling she knew but what were those emotions that he felt when she was in his arms dying...she was counting her every breath to live and he was helpless the multi millionaire couldn't help but to see her life going away ... for the first time he felt that she was there, for him and he had to make sure that she won't leave him.. She will be with him..

She was his.. Her every coming breath was his..Her life was his... in short she was the only thing he wants know... till now he never let her feel her that she was a part of mansion.. a part of his life..Though they were husband and wife but she was just the only one who always fulfills her duty towards him as a true devotee to their relation...

Maan looked through the small glass she was almost losing... he never wanted her to go..If she was there then he will be the one who will win every battle of his life.. Their life... he was in a deep remorse his all earnings were in front of him the pain the unwanted wounds he had inflicted upon her were in front of him...

He was a selfish

But she was selfless

He lived for himself

and loosing his life

She lived for him and was somewhere ready to even leave him for him ...

Eyes red ... tears fading his view...

He wanted to cry..he wanted to hold her and tell her that he was wrong..MAAN SINGH KHURANA was wrong... she was right he still remember her words...

"

It was after two months of their marriage ...maan was all aloof he never tried to come near her or even talk to her they were complete strangers for each other... in fact he was distancing with her every second...every minute he never lets her do what she wants...he was a perfect stranger she know..

Ajnabee na hokar bhi ajnabee...

Geet was feeling like she was unwanted..she was not needed in the house ..he was aloof ..her only support was daadima..she was the one who talks to her ... she dines with her when her husband was all the way busy in his own personal life where she was never included..for him.. his life counts only him...

Geet was frustrated that day, they were to go at a relative's place ..Both of them were invited and she was all ready..She was waiting for him..But when he came he never even looked at her..maan was all drowned in his work..For him this marriage was just to please his daadima and that he did.. but the main problem was that the girl he choose to marry was her ..And he himself told daadima that he will marry her only because she wants him to get settled..His own life emotions nothing mattered to him...

Things were really complicated and maan had made them a complete puzzle.. , no one knew why he chose to marry her only , but even after marrying her with his own will , his isolated self , isolated behavior was much contradictory..

There was no love..no infatuation from his side but a certain deep attraction towards her that made him to every time she came ...maan looses his himself unaware to himself that he was falling for his wife... but the realization was far , beyond his reach..

It was eleven when maan arrived.. geet didn't questioned him..She was all ready and irritated by his behavior but still she never even opened her mouth for him.. Silently she went to arrange dinner for him...

After good fifteen minutes she came with his dinner but maan ignored her and went to his study..

This was the first time she felt neglected and unwanted... but still she never said anything...

"

Maan came out of his thought..Every second he had hurt her... every minute he was responsible for her gloomy eyes.. He knew she cries every night ..Though they never shared same bed but his eyes his mind was always on her... GEET...

She was losing herself..maan knew that he wanted her..he will never let anything happen to her... he was somewhere responsible for her condition she shouldn't have came infront of him...

LAG JAANE DETI USE GOLI...

KOI FARAK NAHI PADHTA ... KON HAI WAISE BHI USKE PAAS NO ONE... even his DAADIMA was not his..She was the daai ma of his father and after his parent's demise she was only there for him...

She was more than a family for him...

Maan heard someone saying..

" PAAS KI DARGAH PAR JO MANGOGE WO MIL JAYEGA "

For now he was in desperate need of her... he couldn't see her losing her life because of him...

Maan was stood rooted his legs froze the maan singh khurana who never believed in almighty since the day his parents left him will now go and ask and beg for her... yah his ego was there which was not letting him realize that he was just doing it for her... for her because his heart craves for her one smile..Because it longs for its one touch... Dil ka dharakna usi se toh hai uska... bas maanne se inkaar hai...

Maan was about to go when the doctor informed him...

Doctor: Mr. khurana I am sorry to say that the bullet had pierced on her left side of the chest and due to excessive bleeding she is not responding we can now only wait for twenty four hours if she still didn't respond then I am sorry we won't be able to save her...

Meanwhile yash had informed daadima.. she immediately came to the hospital still she was unaware of the whole fact that who tried to kill maan... and how did geet knew...

Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa.. Aa..

Jo bandishein thi zamaane ki tod aaya hoon Main tere
vaaste duniya ko chhod aaya hoon Aaya tere dar par diwaana -

Aaya hoon aaya, aaya tera
diwaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -

Tera diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana Aaya tere dar par
diwaana -2 Tera diwaana, (tera) Tera diwaana, (diwaana) Tera diwaana, tera Tera diwaana Tera
diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -

Ye hai tera hi saudaayee, ye hai
tera hi shahdaayee -2 Tere ishq mein hai isse mar jaana Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2 Aa...
Aa... Aa...

A serene atmosphere was there...everywhere there were the solicitors asking for something or the other... he tied a crisp white hanky on his forehead and took the chaadar as an offering to the lord..

Heavy steps and turmoil filled heart..One side he was feeling relaxed and on the other side the constant fear to lose her...

Maan tied the mannat ka dhaga for her and her life...

He never knew how to pray but strangely today he just bows down and asked for his life ...

Maan: geet ne hamesha aap ko maana hai.. uske liye use theek kar dijiye...

His words were filled with pain... but the main thing that his eyes were saying were his own actions...

Maan was going ...a fakir baba have him a black thread...

" APNE LIYE USE MAANG KAHIN NAHI JAYEGI WOH"

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan jst want geet to b alright for him.
he is remembering deir past where he neglected her at each step nd she is bearing all dat.
maan goes to dargah.
he prays for geet safety.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago

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