KaYa SS : Beautiful Disaster |Chap 03| Pg16 | 21/05 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice and unique concept...
It seems so interesting...
Its really tough to wait...
plezzz update soon and pm me...
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this was one is really good..pls do pm me fr updates :)
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omg !! do continue sooon plz its amazing n such a precise strt.
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Are we gonna get an update Madam?😳😆 Ek week ho gya na 🥳🤣
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Chapter One

It is been almost a month and my feelings for him never seems to fade. Kavya is unaware of the fact that I am in love with her father. I don't know how I am going to tell her but I know that I have to tell her before I tell Kabir. I have never been in love before and I don't know how to stop it. When ever I see him I feel like being with him. When ever I see Kavya around him I can feel that the love still exists in this world I haven't got to love since I was a child but that does not mean I don't understand what it is. And for me love is Kabir. And for the first time in my life I want to be loved I want to be wanted I want to be someone's I want to be his Forever.

I have a feeling that he knows about my state maybe that is the reason he stays away from me. No matter how much I want him to be around me he's always maintained a distance since I have started living with Kavya. And I don't feel good about it. I still remember the day when I first saw him. He looked like a man a girl can ever dream of. It's unnatural to fall in love with the person who is more than a decade older than you. But with Kabir what I love the most, Love the most, is his love and dedication for his daughter. If I ever conceive a baby I would want to conceive his babies because I know that he would be the best father in this whole world. And I don't want my children to be deprived like I was when I was a baby.

"Sweetie what are you thinking". Kavya chipped and hugged me from behind almost spilling my coffee.

I smiled at the thought of coffee. I was never a coffee person before. But the moment I saw him drinking one morning wearing his silver business suit I just fell in love with the attitude. It was a site that no girl can ever forget. he was looking so handsome in his grey suit drinking his perfect black coffee and that's when I fell in love with coffee.

I smiled at the thought. And my best friend got me once again.

"You're smiling. You are freaking smiling Ananya". She jumped on the bed right beside me and took away is the coffee mug from my hand. "Oh my god Annie you are so in love".

"Not again kavz". I shied and tried to pull my hand away from her.

"Oh no, you don't Kavz me. I know that look. You are ridiculously in love with this guy and I don't know about it. You better spill the beans girl or else I'm not going to talk to you".

Her eyes for mixture of amusement and inquisitiveness. I know I have to tell her at some point of time but I'm not sure whether this is the right time to do so. "...Erm kavz", I tried to say something, to divert her but...

She pushed me on the bed and laid just beside me clutching her favourite soft toy Mr doodle. "You know I should not talk to you. You are hiding something from me. Let me guess is he some criminal? Oh my god wait does he do drugs. Annie you better not select someone so freaky".

She has no idea that The name of the person will freak out the most. I don't know how I'm going to see his name in front of her. Kavz The name of the guy is Kabir. Or the guy with whom I fell in love is none other than your father.

"how I don't know about it Annie. I am there with you 24 seven and I haven't seen a guy with you for the last one month. And I'm sure he cannot be from the school because you never spoke to any guy".

"Kavz, I really cannot explain.. The guy is" I held your hand and squeezed it because I was nervous."He is pretty elder to me"

The moment I said the word elder, She seems to freeze. She then throw mr doodle and set up.

Her eyes became white and her mouth became like a goldfish. I know she tried to speak but words fail to come in her mouth. "Is it what I'm thinking? Or am I seeing things rather feeling things?"

"I...I'm in love with him".

She gave me a disbelieved look. "Are you serious Annie? Is this like real? You are telling me that you are in love with my dad?"

I looked down at our joint hands. The only word that came in my mouth was "yes".


Her expression was blank I was unable to read what was going on in her head. Should I apologise? But the question was why because I have not committed any crime loving someone is not crime. He could've been someone else's father and still then it wouldn't have stopped me from loving him. I hope Kavya understands that. But since I could not read what she was thinking I have no clue what she's going to gym or do about it.

"When did this happen?'

"I don't know I have no idea when I started feeling for you. But I can only say that the way I feel for him I have never felt for anybody".

"He is the father of the girl who is of your age annie. What exactly were you thinking when you started feeling for him? Annie she is not someone who do you love. I have never seen him with any woman in entire life. I don't think it's very good idea of you loving you because I know you are not going to get anything out of it. If he comes to know I'm not sure what he's going to tell you or do with you. You are my freaking friend. Just think about him what will he say".

"Kavz I think let's just drop it just forget that I have told you this. You are my best friend and you had every right to know about my feelings to words Kabir. For me he is Kabir not your father he could've been anybody's is father but my feelings for him would have been seen. I'm not sure whether I'm going to tell him about it ever but I know one thing that he will always be my first love. I don't know what society will say I don't know whether he will ever accept me. I know he's going to be really mad when you comes to know about it but yes he deserves to know my feelings whether he reciprocates or not".

"oh my god oh.MY.GOD". Suddenly she hugged me almost choking me to the death. "oh Annie you have no idea how happy I am to hear. I always thought you had a thing for him and secretly wished that my thinking is true. And here you are confessing all your love for my father. I am so into this. Oh sweetie I am your best friend and I will always support you. I love the fact that you love my father. He deserves to be loved his deserves to live and he deserves you someone who will love you unconditionally I'm like my mother. She has given his precious 18 years to me taking care of me and making sure that I grow into a woman. He has never compromised in anything when it came to me. He never did woman because he never wanted to get Diverted from his responsibilities. I know he never marry just because of me thinking what if the stepmother does not behave properly what if she tortures me and what if one fine day he come to the house and see me getting beaten by my stepmother. And today I'm really happy that he is going to get someone who is capable of loving unconditionally".

I just could not control my tears after what she said. I always thought she has so much of that but today I could feel it. She is not only my best friend but she is a big part of my life. I don't know what our future is but I'm sure that we are going to stay together forever.

"You are so going to tell him about it and guess what miss Kavya is going to help you out".

"miss Kavya is going to help her out in what", came to ask you reply making both our heads turn. He was leaning on the door frame and looking intently towards me did Kavya jumped out of the bed and sprinted across the room to give him a big hug. He straightened up and took his daughter in a warm embrace and then kissed the top of her head. I so want to to be had like that.

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Chap 02

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Edited by -Koeli_Appy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Kavya supported her, they have such a great friendship bond.
I would love see what kabir has to say.
Well done appy di jim
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
wow appy super like for the amazing update.
Really enjoyed it.
Specially the bond of kabir and kavya..
can't wait for the next part.
tfd pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Superb Update..Annie told kavz about her love for kabir.Kavz is such a darling friend.She is happy for her friend and will support her.She is indeed the True Friend.Really loved the update.Waiting eagerly for next update.Continue soon.Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
WoW! Amazing
Ananya is in love with her besties father
And kavya is happy to know this and going help her in confessing love
Great concept
Update soon and please pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
I loved the way you described Ananya's feelings..and wrote that conversation between Ananya and Kavya. I am happy that their friendship is strong.
I wonder what will be Kabir's reaction. I am afraid he may behave like Anil Kapoor in Lamhe.

Thanks for writing this interesting story. I hope you feel better now..And I am eagerly waiting for next update.

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