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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic


i thought koi gud news degi ishu.. 😉
jo b ho plz updt it asap...
waited 2 much.. 😆

Aise vaise good news nahi hai.😉
I'm writing it now.Half completed
You decide if you want i'll post but it's not long 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Aise vaise good news nahi hai.😉
I'm writing it now.Half completed
You decide if you want i'll post but it's not long 😆


no dont post half updt..
long updt is gud.. 😆
han tau jesi b news h post but when u'll cmplt it..
😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic


no dont post half updt..
long updt is gud.. 😆
han tau jesi b news h post but when u'll cmplt it..
😉

hehehe
i'll complete after i read desire and chaar kadam
wait dearie
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Posted: 10 years ago
part15
awesome update
confession was nice
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part16
awesome update
so finally ishu knows d truth
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part17 so ishu ko sab yaad agaya nice update now who r this guest ?? ishu ke liye rishta nhi ayana or its bhalla family
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Friends

I'm here with another part. Hope you enjoy this

Not proofread. So ignore all typos and errors.


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Raman and Ishita both walk out of the temple into the park nearby. They sit on a bench.

Ishita says "Raman,main kuch batao"

Raman "What?"

Ishita "I have a news for you"

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Raman "Tell"

Ishita catches his hand and tells "I remember"

Raman "What do you remember?"

Ishita "Everything"

"Oh every...What you remember everything. Really."

"Really."

"Yeh kab huva?"

"Jab maine tumko propose kiya"

"Ha,Sacchi...bataya kyun nahi"

"Main tumhari honesty check kar rahi thi"

"checking...umm"

"Haan jaisa maine socha vaisa hi huva"

"Kya huva?"

"I know you would stop it and tell me the truth"

"I had to-"

"I Love you"

"Love you too baby"

They both hug. He asks "How come you remembered everything after the proposal?"

"Yaad nahi Mr.bhalla , pehle bhi maine aisa hi propose kiya tha"

"Haa...tum jealously and gusse me bahot acchi lagti thi aur lagti ho"

*FLASHBACK*

Ishita is very angry. She comes to canteen and runs to table where Mihika is sitting.

She angrily throws her book on the table and sits down.

Mihika "What happened Ishu?"

Ishita "Why didn't you come to class today"

Mihika "Actually I and mihir went on a date so"

Ishita pouted and gave mihika angry glare

Mihika "Gusse me laal kyu ho."

Ishiat "This raman"

Mihika "Usne kya kiya"

Ishita "Ask what he didn't do."

Mihika "Ok. What did he not do?"

Ishita "What. Mihika. he is always flirting"

Mihika "He always does that ishu what's new in that. Haww...did he flirt with you?"

Ishita "No."

Mihika "Then what's your problem"

Ishita imitates him "Why does he always roam behind that Sona? Sona tum kitni khoobsurat ho.You're so pretty.Your eyes are so...vagera vagera"

Mihika "Hey ish. He is like that"

Ishita "No.He had stopped it. Again he has started"

Mihika "Huh?"

Ishita "You know every day we sit together in class and he takes my notes and today"

Mihika "Today?"

Ishita "Today he didn't even greet me, he went and sat beside sona and was talking with her continuously"

Mihika "So. You got rid of him know. So be happy"

Ishita "Miku. Why should he do that?"

Mihika "Ishu..."

Ishita "I will not talk to him. Why should he talk with her, sit beside her when I'm there"

Mihika "I'm there?"

Raman comes there and occupies one empty chair

Raman "Hey Mihika, Ishita"

Mihika "Hi"

Raman "Kya ho raha tha"

Mihika "Tumhari hi baatein ho rahi thi"

Raman "Meri...Isko kya huva" pointing Ishita

Ishita "Kuch nahi yaar"

Raman "Accha Ishita aaj ke class ki notes de"

Ishita "Mihika inse keh do ki aaj maine notes nahi banaya hai"

Raman "Jhooti.Bana ya hai.I saw it"

Ishita "Inse keh do ki yeh notes khud bana ye yaa sona se le le"

Raman "Ishita stop joking.Vo kabhi bana thi hai kya?"

Ishita got up and left the place. Raman followed her

Mihika was confused "Kab se chilla rahi thi notes nahi liya, notes nahi liya.Par ab maang raha hai toh yeh bhaav de rahi hai."

Raman shouted "Kaha bhaag rahi ho madrasan"

Ishita turned and told "Tumse dhoor"

Ishita went to the secluded place in the campus with Raman behind her. He finally caught by her arms and "Why are you behaving Like that yaar?"

Ishita "Leave me Raman. It's hurting"

Raman "No, tell me "

Ishita "I'm not telling you anything Raman. Why did you come behind me?"

Raman "Ishita Why are you angry?"

He pinned her to the nearby wall. Entwined his fingers with his and moved closer to her and whispered in her ears "I'm not gonna leave you so easily Madrasan. Tell me"

She struggled and then finally pushed him and walked away. He caught her hands and pulled her towards him

She fell in his arms.

Raman "Why were you jealous darling?"

Ishita "Don't call me darling and I'm not jealous. get it"

Raman "You're ,sweetheart. It's clearly written on your face"

Ishita "Bakwas."

Raman "Tell me why were you jealous of Sona?"

Ishiat "Raman..."

Raman "Yes sweetheart. I know what you want to tell me"

Ishita "What?"

Raman "Do one thing. I'll go to Sona only. She's better"

Ishita "Why better. What's wrong with me?"

Raman "Everything's wrong with you"

Ishita "Nothing like that. I'm better than her"

Raman "See again you're jealous. Why?"

Ishita got up from his arms and said "Because I Love You"

Rman "Kya kya kya"

Ishita got all shy and was looking down.

He lifted her chin and replied "I Love you too. Itna time laga thi ho yaar itni si baat kehne main"

They both hug"

*END OF FLASHBACK*

They both smile remembering that.

Ishita "Arrey uske baad main poori raat nahi soyi"

Raman "Main konsa kumbhkaran ki karate maar raha tha"

Ishita "Kumbhkaran...HaHa" she laughs

Raman "Oh! Sacchai ki murti chup.Daant kya dikha rahi ho. Tumhari wajah se main class ko late aaya tha"

Ishita "Meri wajah se...Tum tho hamesha hi late aate the class me.Uss din mein bhi late thi"

Raman "Haan verma ki class me aur uske baad you almost killed me"

Ishita "Yeh me me kya lagaya hai.Hum kyu nahi kehte"

Raman "Tum tho Daayan ho.kuch bhi handle karti hoon par main ek bechara bhola bhala inssan phas gaya in lambe baalon daayan ke haaton"

Ishita "Very funny. Par iss bhole bhale insaan ko Verma se bahot darr lagta tha" she winked at him

Raman "Chup kar. Vaise haan. Woh tho hamesha mujhe dekhke hi chidta tha,issliye main bhi thoda bahot darta tha"

Ishita "Thoda bahot.Tum toh mu bhi nahi khol sakte the unke saamne.Tum roz unki class either bunk karte the yaa late aate the tho voh karega kya"

Raman "Kuch bhi..."

Ishita "Mera hai voh.Dialogue writer change karo.Nakal kar raha hai meri. But uss din bahot funny tha - Bread jam"

*FLASHBACK*

Ishita and Raman had already proposed but Ishita couldn't believe that it happened. Because Raman was guy who used to flirt with every girl and did he really mean what he told her - the magical words.

Full night she thought about it and couldn't sleep at all. She checked her alarm clock which was showing half past 2.She thought if she was like this only, she would never sleep. So she thought of clarifying. She got up and picked her mobile.

She called him. After many rings he picked up the call.

Raman "Sorry yaar aaj no party"

Ishita "Party?"

Raman "Kaon? Kaon bol rha hai"

Ishita "Main ishita"

Raman "Why are you calling at this time? Is everything all right?"

Ishita "No. I wanted to ask you something"

Raman asked sleepily "What?"

Ishita "Do you really love me?"

Raman "What? Is this question to be asked at midnight?"

Ishita "Answer please. I'm not able to sleep"

Ramam "Khud so nahi paayi aur doosro ko bhi nahi sone de rahi hai"

Ishita "bolo na Raman"

Raman "Oh despo.Main kabhi bhi kisi ka proposal accept kiya hai.I just flirt with them.Tum sochna good night"

He kept the phone

Ishita"Par...kaat diya"

Ishita was then thinking. He is right. Many girls proposed him in front of me and he shooed them away. And even he listens to me and that day when I went to his house also he was dreaming of me. She thought about this for another 2-3 hours and finally slept

Otherside Raman who was disturbed from his sleep couldn't sleep .So even he was awake. Next day,both wake up late.

Ishita ran to her class and stopped at the room. Coincidently Mr.Verma called "Ishita Iyer".

"Present" she shouted from the entrance of the room. He turned to look at her and again looked down to the attendance register.He told "Stand there.Why were you late?"

Ishita "I was reading sir" who couldn't find any better answer.

"Very well. Wait " he looked down to the register.

Raman came running in the corridor and dashed Ishita. Whole class turned towards him. Ishita caught him and made him stand properly.

Mr.Verma looked at him and whispered "As always"

Raman came closer to Ishita and asked "Why didn't you tell me it was his class?"

Ishita "Even this I have to tell you. Why the hell do you come late on this day only? So only he hates you. Late latif"

Raman "Verma ki chamchi ho kya.I'm late because of you"

Ishita "what did I do?"

Raman "You called me late night"

Ishita "So why did you pick it up"

Mr.verma "What's happening there?"

Raman almost jumped being scared.

Mr.Verma "So Mr.Bhalla why were you late?"

Raman without thinking blurted "Bread-jam"

Again the whole class turned to him. He didn't understand why. Ishita bent near him and whispered "Traffic-jam"

Raman "Umm..."

Mr,Verma "Bread-jam"

Raman "Yes Sir. There was so much in the road"

Ishita caught his hand, pressed it and told "Traffic jam"

Raman then got it

Raman "Sorry sir. Traffic jam"

Mr.Verma "Weren't just saying bread jam sir"

Raman "No sir. I mean yes sir"

Mr.verma "Very well I see. I think you haven't had a proper sleep. Hope you don't sleep here"

Raman glared Ishita

Mr.Verma "Both of you will not get attendance and internal marks cut"

They come in canteen fighting with each other.

"Your fault"

"Your fault"

Mihir and mihika there sees them fighting and laugh.

They both keep on fighting continuously

Mihir "Kal patch-up aur aaj break-up"

IshRa "Shut up"

Mihika "whatever happened is over guys.Leave it"

Ishita "Raman she is telling you "

Rman "Me...she's telling you"

Ishits "What do you mean?"

Mihir "Why are you fighting?"

Mihika "Chod na Mihir.Yeh tho inka roz ka hai"

Mihir "Haan right"

Mihika "Accha Raman. Yeh class me kya drama lagaya tha Bread-jam"

Raman "Sab iska kiya dhara hai" pointing to Ishita

Ishita "Sab kuch tho main ki karti hoon.Shayad tum paida bhi mere wajah se huve the"

Mihir "Ishita matlab tum Raman ki mom ho tho phir-"

Raman "Shut up mihir.Yeh kuch bhi bakwas karti hai"

Ishita "Bakwas main nahi tum karte ho.Bread -jam sir" she imimtated him

Mihir and Mihika laughed

Raman "Bread-jam...bread-jam...bread-jam...Paagal"

He got up and went away.

*End of flashback*

IshRa were laughing.

Raman "Hmm...Ab hasna hogaya tho ghar chale"

Ishita "Haan chalo"

They drive to ishita's house.Ishita gets down.

Raman "You go. I'll park and come"

Ishita enters the hall.MiMi run to her asking "Rman kaha hai"

Ishita tells "Baahar.Aa raha hai"

MiMi starts dancing.

Mihir "Miku bhai zinda hai"

Mihika "Yes mihir"

Ishita "yeh tho kahi pe bhi shuru ho jate hai.yeh dance karke ki thodi jagah hai"

"Surprise" Three voices come.

Ishita turns to see, it's Raman's siblings - Romi,Simmi and rinki. They hug her turn by turn

Romi "Bhabhi...long time"

Simmi hits Romi on his head while mihika tells "He means didi...didi"

Rinki "Haaan...Ishu didi"

Raman walks inside and goes to dancing Mihir "Abe khud na bandh kar aur sun"

Mihir "Aapki hi party hai bhai"

Raman "Arrey bandh kar yaar.isko sab yaad aa gaya"

Mihir stops dancing.Both MiMi turn to him "What!"

Raman nodded in positive.

Ishita there tells Romi "Not fair Romi.Pehle main bhabhi thi ab didi"

Simmi covers up "Galathi se bhola isne"

Ishita "Oh kitni galathi karoge Romi.Chalo thik hai ab tum nahi chahte ki meri aur Raman ki shaadi ho tho thik hai"

Rinki stammered "sh...shaadi"

Ishita "Yes.Ask him. He used to beg me before...Ishita di maine aapko apna bhabhi maan liya.Aap bhai se shaadi karlo aur thoda control ki jiye unko.Hamesha meri class lete hai"

Everyone laughs.

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That's it guys. Hope this is a long part. Drop down your comments. Criticism and appreciation both are welcome.For pm's buddy me.

Precap: IshRa discuss about each other's weakness.


Part 19 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122045571

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loveee uh vidya Darling... ❤️
Thank u 4 d long update.
And it was superb se b upar... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👏
So d gud news is ishu ko sab yad aagya tha.. 😃
Loved all d fb scenes and enyd it also...
Dat bread-jam bread-jam it was traffic jam... 🤣
Such a hilarious scene..
Few scenes which was ROFL moment 4 mee...

Ishita "Sab kuch tho main ki karti hoon.Shayad tum paida bhi mere wajah se huve the"

Mihir "Ishita matlab tum Raman ki mom ho tho phir-"


Ishita "Yes.Ask him. He used to beg me before...Ishita di maine aapko apna bhabhi maan liya.Aap bhai se shaadi karlo aur thoda control ki jiye unko.Hamesha meri class lete hai"


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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb...update
loved bread jam scene .
Thanks
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