MG FF : A SECOND LIFE #5 Discontinued Note page 110 , May 1st, 2018 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

hopefully updating tomorrow


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Posted: 10 years ago


😊 waiting..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Why I did not get pm for this ff?
Nice update Maan and geet both wanted to know if other was fine or not.. maan too got confirmation by Geet's retorting back to him that she is now comfortable with him...
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Poor Maan sab natak bhool gaya jab wify ki sefty ki baat aayi ..He seriously helped her to come canteen and said to have dinner
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PART 55

Maan was in the mansion and there was a perfect silence, though he would have expected his daadi to be there but today no one was there.. He was moving towards his room when he heard some commotion in kitchen.. maan thought that many be his wife would be there , but to his surprise he saw arjun in kitchen maan couldn't believe what he just saw, well he knew arjun's love for his gf and now gf turned wife.. arjun was following her and she was highly ignoring him

Arjun : arohi listen to me.. I said sorry... arjun was following arohi while she was pretending not to hear him.. arohi was having a pretty bad day.. First arjun cancelled their lunch date and then she was worried about geet.. She was actually scared for her geetu.. geet's actions and reactions were so contrasting , one side arohi got to know that geet was developing some feelings for her hubby and other side her angry avatar scared her. Well never saw geet so angry , her baby anger was always admired by her and their veerji but now geet saying something about maan was confusing .. arohi was thinking about geet when she bumped into arjun who was following her trying to manaofy her..

Arohi st : should I ask arjn.. ye geet bhi na..She is making me mad.. babaji bhali karna.. geet is losing her senses.. mujhe toh laga tha , sab theek hai but geet ki baton se aisa nai lagta.. arohi was in a trance when she bumped to her hubby and arjun was looking so cute.. maan who was actually about to go just somehow stopped himself from giggling..

Arjun : baby.. Listen please..

While arohi ignored..

.. maan thought for a second to stop but then he left knowing that it won't be nice.. He likes his own privacy but he was amused to no extent seeing his bhai's face... and left thinking

Maan : meri geet bhi aisi hi hai.. he was so much engrossed that he didn't even saw what he was thinking ..

Meanwhile maan reached his room only to see his wify all busy with his clothes.. maan was a cleanliness freak but seeing the mess she created he somehow held himself back.. He knew that he would say something in anger and then he couldn't even dared to say anything seeing her folding one of his shirt and then murmuring something.. She was looking up and the face that she was making he was damn sure that she must be complaining to her babaji..Next second he saw his shirt being dumped as it was just washed..Next he saw the bed and his anger actually was rising all the ironed clothes were dumped like garbage.. And one after other she was picking his clothes and sometimes staring at it , with so much anger .. Like glaring..

Maan was having pity on his clothes.. and next moment he found himself shouting at her and she getting shocked almost stumbling back and in a nick of second he grabbing her by her waist making her stand..

Maan : geet!!!!

For a moment geet thought that the volcano erupted and she looked here and there but didn't saw in the direction where her dusht danav was standing and when she saw him..His anger was very much evident on his face and he was looking at the bed and the innocent wify of his who was right now making him losing his mind..

Maan : geet , what is all this.. Why are my clothes here.. He said picking them up one by one and started arranging them but the condition of the cupboard was more than what he could call a garbage bin.. he took out all glaring her simultaneously while she was no less , she came in front in the pretext of helping him..

Maan stopped her by holding her waist and next moment he pinned her to the cupboard and tilt side ways locking her in his arms.. his eyes were on the open cupboard while one was holding her close.. he could hear her soft breathing , the faint scent of roses mixed with her own fragrance.. He could hear her mumbling still and next moment his other hand was on her mouth..

Maan : what is this.. He asked pointing to the cupboard and she looked at him and then the clothes.. maan didn't knew what to do but he didn't knew that his wify was so much in anger that his palm was bit the next second making him to yelp in pain..

Maan : GEETTT!!!!!!!

Geet this time held him captive turning the position and now maan was facing the open cupboard..

Geet with her eyebrows scrunched and lips curved in a pout..

Geet : I know my name is geet..And this is cupboard..She pointed at the poor cupboard and next moment he wanted to close her in the same.. But sadly even after his anger her pouts and those frown never let him get angry with her..She was having such a charming aura that always held him captive in her no matter what she do..

Geet : aur haan , main koi puppy nai hun that you call my name by stretching this much.. jante hain kitna bura lagta hai.. She said with her one hand on his chest and next moment he was pushed and she gathered his clothes and maan closed his eyes knowing that he can't do anything.. She was such a BEAUTIFUL THREAT to his life..

Maan : geet , listen to me I will clean the mess tum baith jao..Finally he asked her and what he saw, he knew that she won't budge.. She was such a baby..And now he was determined to call her as baby only..

Geet nodded in a no listening to him and she was having such a huge pile of clothes in her hands that she didn't noticed herself falling with her one foot entangled with the one of the dupptta of hers that had fallen down on the floor and she yelped in pain that was never to come for her..

Geet : babaji..hayee main margayi... but before she could fall her husband pulled her towards him making both of them fall on their bed and the clothes that were in her hands were showered on them.. geet fell straight on maan while maan held her making sure that she shouldn't be hurt.. her eyes went wide while maan was having shocks aftershocks seeing the messy queen of his life..She with so much delicacy picked up the clothes from them and she very comfortably settled herself on maan making sure that she would collect each and every thing while lying on him..maan noticed her again messing things and she was so naively was moving making maan hard to control , she was unknowingly arousing him while not paying any attentions.. and she not done yet when maan held her hands and glared at her..she didn't understand this time , what he was indicating at and pulled her up from him making her lie on the bed and he got up..

Maan : dare you get up now..his voice was so firm that she immediately got up and sat on the bed with crossed legs keeping her hands on her lips while her eyes were following him..maan first went to the washroom changed and then cleaned the mess..while in between geet tried to speak..

Geet : main help kardun.. meine kiya hai ye sab.. she said confessing her deeds so inncently that for once maan wanted to take er in his arms and love her beyond linits..

Maan : I know baby but aap chup chap baith jaiye that will be a great help.. His sarcastic voice made her to pout and crib to her favorite babaji..

Geet : dekha babaji.. I was just tryig to help but NO, ye toh hain hi dusht danav, maine aapko kaha than na.. Now see.. She made a baby face while continue staring at her hubby darling making sure that she try to intervene but maan's one glare was enough to make her quite..

When maan was done she meekly asked..

Geet : acha main coffee le aun.. She asked with so much hope while after the mess was cleared maan glanced at the folder that she had kept while she quickly sneaked out of the room before maan could say..She knew his routine too well and maan was early today but his time was wasted by her..and geet was really feeling odd.. she thought to talk to him and clear everything...

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Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UPDATED PART 55


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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting update
Lolz bechare maan and geet ki train Abi bi rukhi hui hai
Bt loving their cute moments oops fighting moments
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Posted: 10 years ago
what was that
she confuses him so much naa
poor maan
but he loves her too
but doesnt know it
geet yaara what were you doing
but so funny it was
these two are so cute together
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Love there cute fight
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
so lovely update his messy queen really messed up his cloth n he even cant scold her properly very nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan is amuse with the way his brother mnfy his wife. Geet have mess his clothes because of anger and made a disaster. Finally maan hv clear the mess. Arohi is worried for geet... I think maan can handle our angel.. Lovely part.pls cont soon.
Edited by Hanishadevi - 10 years ago

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