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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys.
How are you all?
I was getting bored and wanted to read some manan stuff on this ongoing track so wrote one os.
If you guys have some other manan OS or TS than plz tell me comments.
And yes this is update is combo of ideas by aYashika and words are mine. So credit goes to us.
Shukria yashu for olways being with me.


Manan OS: Khuda Bhi


Finally the day has arrived when everything is gonna be alrigt. They ll be one today, they ll confess. She is so happy that cant express. But where is that one person whom she needs right Now.
Nandini who was waiting for manik now voiced her thoughts.
Manik kaha ho tum? Tum jante ho i need you here than where are you.
Being oblivious that someone is listening to her.

Ya mr. Trilok pandit. He said with a smirk. Aaj hamare beetch koi nahi aayega nandini, aaj manik nahi ayega yaha. After all the hardwork finally uh ll be all mine. Kya kya karna pada tumhe pane ke liye. Dhruv ka mind brainwash kia, Gurumaa ko bulaya. Bas ab kuch ghante and you ll be all mine. Saying so he left from there.
But someone heard everything, ya its dhruv. Finally he got some sense.

Dhruv- yeh maine kya kar dia apne gusse mein sab kharab kar dia. Agar manik ko kuch bhi hua toh i ll not be able to forgive myself. God plz protect him.

Meanwhile in the green room.
Nandini was now really worried only 2 hours are left and manik is no where.
She called him after few rings he picked.
Nandini- hlo manik kaha ho tum?
Manik- sorry nandu bas i am 1 km away. I ll be there in 5 mins. What the hell. He shouted.
Nandini- manik kya hua?
Manik- someone has attacked my car. Let me fix them. I ll talk to you later(Ttyl)
Nandu- hlo hlo. Manik. She talked to herself. Manik kya hua, i ll have to check.
Than only dhruv entered.
Dhruv- nandini manik kaha hai?
Nandini in anger- tumse matlab? And plz get a side i am in a rush.
Dhruv- plz nandini tell me where is he? I am sorry for everything. He is in danger, plz tell me where is he?
Nandini- how do uh know he is in danger?
Dhruv than told her about Tk while walking out.
Nandini- i cant believe he can do this i won't leave but for now manik is important. Vo 1 khi dur hai yaha se.
Dhruv- ok. You stay here i ll go
Nandini- no i ll also come.
Dhruv- there is risk nandini. And performance bhi hai.
Nandini- do you really think so ki manik se important kuch bhi hai mere liye. I ll come with you. Infact you stay here.
Dhruv- no way. Agar jana hi hai done ne toh come fast.
Nandini took some thing to save them.

Within minutes they reached there, manik was fighting with 7-8 goons.
Dhruv and nandini helped him. Manik was surprised to see both of them there.
Manik- buddy uh here.
Dhruv- lets deal with the goons than we ll talk.
Manik nodded. Nandini also sprayed pepper in one's eye. Than other came and slapped her the force was so much that she fell backwards but touched with a petite figure.
It was aliaa and mukti.
They all were going to college when saw all this and came to help them. Cabir went and started beating them.
Aliaa- are you fine?
Mukti- her your lip is bleeding.
Nandini- i am fine guys. Lets tackle with them first. Here have this pepper and red chilies.
The three of them started beating the goons and sprayed pepper and chillies.
Manik who saw this was in his monster avtar. He punched the man who touched his nandu till he was half dead.
Manik- dont you dare touch my nandu.
Nandini stopping him, plz manik he ll die leave him. Manik for my sake plz.
Manik left him and held nandini and shouted on her. What is wrong with you? Kyu aayi ho yaha? Kuch ho jata toh? Performance hai tumhari.
Nandini also shouted this time.(Till now all goons ran from there with chillies and pepper in their eyes.) To hell with the performance manik. Tumhe kya lagta hai tumse zada important vo concert hai mere liye? No mr. Manik malhotra. You are more important dammit. And you know why coz i love.
Manik kept his finger on her lips to shut her. Not now after concert.
Mukti- tumhara romance ho gaya ho toh chale?
They both blushed.
Dhruv- guys plz mujhe maaf kardo. Its all because of me. Pandit did all this he took advantage of our fight. Than he told everyone what he listened.
Manik- aaj nahi chodunga is pandit ko. Meri nandu ko apna banayega
Nandini- nahi manik hum aisa kuch nahi karenge.
Manik- what?
Dhruv- she is right. Dont say anything to him, he ll be in ashes after seeing you both performing.
Manik- but Buddy its your cgance.
Dhruv- nahi manik main already bht blunders kar chuka now lets just solve problems. And you are meant to be together. Perform and shut there mouths.
Manik- thank you buddy.
Nandini- Thanku dhruv.
Dhruv- plz guys dont say that. You guys forgive me. And aliaa plz forgive me i was always wrong. Plz forgive me.
Aliaa- lets go guys we are getting late.
Manik- hum sab jate hai in my car you both(dhruni) come in your car and sort ut.
They all left.
Dhruv- aliaa plz myjhe maf kardo i am sorry. Mujhe maro gusaa karo but don't be silent.
Aliaa- you always insulted my love dhruv with lust.
Dhruv- plz forgive me. With that he placed a kiss on her forehead and hugged her tightly.
At first aliaa protested but than she too hugged him back saying i luv you.
They too left from there to get ready

In Green room

Manik was getting ready. Than only nandini entered wearing a white anarkali suit looking ethereal
Manik- looking beautiful as always.
Nandini blushed-thanku. Acha chalo.
Manik- nandu yeh concert tumhare liye kitna important hai?
Nandini didn't understand the purpose behind his question. She answered- this concert is very important manik cox i want my hope to win.
Manik- aur tum aise hi apni jaan risk par dalkar aa gyi. Late ho jati toh?
Nandini- i am telling you again, meri jaan tum ho manik, And hope bhi. Agar tumhe hi kuch ho jata toh main kya karti apni life or is hope ka. And now lets go.
He was feeling special, noone did so much for him before. Before she could move manik held her with force and took her in a tight hug. All the best nandini. Aaj tumhari hope hi jeetegi.
Nandini too hugged him back- thanku. And all the best to you too.
Manik- thanku. Chalo lets rock the stage. And show pandit his place.

On stage
After the opening act by fab 5 it was now turn of dhruv and nandini. Oops manik and nandini.
Host- so now hold your breath for the handsome Manik Malhotra and beautiful Nandini Moorthy.
Pandit and noyonika were shocked beyond limits. How is this possible.

Manik and nandini started their performance.
On Tere Liye and Teri Janib of Dilliwali Zalim Girlfriend.

The audience was cheering at top of there lungs. It was so melodious. Whole fab 5 could witness the love they had for eachother
Pandit was burning with anger and jealousy.

Fusion concert came to end.
Host so with this we end the concert here. Meet you the next time till then...
Manik interupted. Sorry guys byt i have a performance for special one. So may i?
Audience cheered and host too.
Fab 5 and nandini who didnt know anything were confused.

Manik started the song.

Khuda bhi jab tumhe mere paas dekhta hoga
He took nandini's hand and brought her to the stage.
At first nandini was shocked that what he is doing but than went with the flow.

Khuda bhi jab tumhe mere paas dekhta hoga
Itni anmol cheez de di kaise, sochta hoga!
Tu be-misaal hai, teri kya misaal doon
Aasmaan se aayi hai, yehi keh ke taal doon
Phir bhi koi jo pooche, kya hai tu kaisi hai
Hathon me rang leke, hawaa me uchaal doon

Nandini was feeling very special. Any girl would want her man to dedicate this song to her and here manik was doing that with only loved filled in his eyes and voice.

Khuda bhi jab tumhe mere paas dekhta hoga
Itni anmol cheez de di kaise, sochta hoga!

Jo bhi zameen tere paaon tale aaye
Kadmon se chooke woh aasmaan ho jaaye
Tere aage pheeke pheeke saare shringar hai
Main toh kya farishte bhi tujhpe nissar hain
Garmi ki shaam hai tu, jaadon ki dhoop hai
Jitne bhi mausam hain, tere karzdaar hain

Whole fab 4 were happy to witness this beautiful scene

Khuda bhi jab tere andaaz dekhta hoga
Itni anmol cheej de di kaise, sochta hoga!

Chehra hai ya jaadu, roop hai ya khwab hai
Aankhein hain ya afsaana, jism ya kitaab hai
Aaja tujhe main padh loon, dil mein utaar loon
Hothon se dekhun tujhe, aankhon se pukar loon
Khwahishein ye kehti hain, kehti rehti hain
Leke tujhe baahon mein shaamein guzaar loon


Khuda bhi ab tujhe din raat dhoondta hoga
Itni anmol cheej de di kaise, sochta hoga!

With the end of song, manik sat on one knee and confessed.
As the song says nandini vo khuda bhi tumhe mere paas dekhkar hairan hota higa.
You are the most beautiful girl in this world. I love you nandini. Finally your hope won.
Will you be mine?

Nandini who had tears in her eyes sat on floor with him.
Nandu- thanku so much manik today i am feeling like a princess. I love you too mere monster manik.
With that curtains fell and they were now away from audience but fab 4, pandit, noyonika could see them.
Nandini saw pandit's face.
Nandini- lets seal this deal with a kiss.
Before shocked manik could respond nandini smacked her lips with him.

All were shocked, pandit and noyonika left in anger.

All came to manan.
Cabir- woah. Bold nandini.
They both broke the kiss and blushed.
Nandini- i am sorry manik for displaying our private moment but pandit needs to know his true place.
Manik- wow meri nandu bhi logo ko jealous karti hai.
Nandini blushed and hid her face in his chest.
Others to joined them in a group hug.

So how was it guys?
Do like and comment.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Vish this ws awesome
Brilliant.. Superb..
Like a dream.. This bold nandu we cn nvr gt..haha
I dnt knw Wht happening in FC..bt this ws superb
U refreshed my mood
Keep writinwritin😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Os
Im kinda new here and this is the first os I read , it is awesome 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for the pm
amazing os
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it 😃
Manik performing for his girl ahhh
Nandu taking initiative 😉

Its not easy to put so much in a OS and I must say you guys did a very good job 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's beaautiful..
loved bold nandu..
overall was very lovely...
it's awesome..hope to see something alike in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awaaa itss so cute...
kash yeh show me hota...
itz superb

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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
It's amazing ... manik perfomance and a public kiss! I so Want it to happen on the show
RomComFan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so cute... loved Nandu taking a stand..pleas write again soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nandini said Manik is her hope and life :,)

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