SanDhir OS: A Beautiful Birthday Surprise!!!

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A BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY SURPRISE..


Tring.. Tring.. Tring..

Randhir's phone again rang for the 6th time.. He looked at his phone but didn't picked it up..

Randhir: Jitni baar bhi call karo par main phone nahi uthaunga..

Sanyukta threw her phone on the bed in anger..

Sanyukta: What the hell..? Do saal ho gaye hamare relationship ko lekin iss ladke ko kuch bhi yaad kyun nahi rehta..?

Sanyukta murmured while pacing across her room.. It's being two years that Sanyukta and Randhir are in relationship... It was a special day for Sanyukta as it was her 22nd birthday.. But as usual Randhir forgot her birthday..(According to Sanyukta 😉)

Vidushi was in their room watching her bestie roaming here and there..

Vidushi:Sanyukta.. Kya hua...? Itna kyun chilla rahi ho..?

Sanyukta: Kal birthday hai mera aur mera boyfriend meri birthday bhul gaya...

Vidushi: Issmein kya hai..? Yaad dila do usse...

Sanyukta: Kabhi nahi.. Agar usse yaad aata hai toh theek warna

Vidushi: Warna..? (Confused)

Sanyukta: Warna breakup... (sternly)

Vidushi: What..?

Sanyukta: Haan..

Sanyukta took her bag and went from there... She entered the library and took out a book and started to read it... After few hours, she came out and found YoYo sitting on the bench at the basket ball ground.. She went to him..

Sanyukta: YoYo.. Tumne Randhir ko kahin dekha..?

YoYo: Oji nahi ji Sanyukta ji, maine toh Randhir paji ko kal se nahi dekha.. Aapne Aister ko kahin dekha hai..?

Sanyukta: Nahi..

And Sanyukta went from there.. YoYo took out his phone and dial someone's number..

YoYo: Hello ji.. Haan ji.. Haan ji aapne jaisa kaha tha bolne ko maine waisa hi kaha hai.. Acha theek hai ji..

YoYo disconnected the call and went from there...

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Sanyukta was sitting in the canteen and was eating maggie.. Vidushi came and sat in front of her..

Vidushi: Randhir kahin mila..?

Sanyukta shook her head in a no..

Sanyukta: Vidu, tu plz Parth ko call karke puch na.. Shayad usse kuch pata ho...

Vidushi nodded her head in a yes, took out her phone and dailed Parth's number.. After few attempts she looked at Sanyukta and shook her head..

Sanyukta: Nahi lag raha..?

Vidushi: Nahi...

Sanyukta stood up and went from there... Someone came from behind and dragged her to a corner..

Vidushi: Kya hua Parth..?

Parth: Sab kuch theek hai na..? I mean to say Sanyukta theek toh hai na..?

Vidushi: Nahi na.. Bahut sad hai.. Aur bol rahi thi ki agar Randhir ko kuch yaad nahi aaya toh usse breakup kar legi...

Parth: Tum tension mat lo.. Bas aur thosa sa hi arrangement karna baki hai.. Fir tum dekhna Sanyukta ka gussa kaise gayab hota hai...

Vidushi: I just hope.. Waise arrangements sare ho gaye..?

Parth: Haan.. bas thoda bahut baki hai... Theek hai main chalta hun... You take care of urself and Sanyukta..

Vidushi: Yaa...

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Sanyukta was sitting near the window of her room.. Vidushi was not there... She was thinking about the moments she spend with Randhir...

Suddenly her phone buzzed and it flashed Parth Calling.. She immediately picked the call..

Sanyukta: Hello Parth.. Kahan ho tum sab..? Na tumhara kuch pata hai aur na hi Randhir ka... Kahan ha woh...?

Parth: Sanyukta.. Sanyukta jaldi se terrace pe aa jao.. Randhir ko kuch ho gaya hai... (Tensed)

Sanyukta: Kya hua usse...?

Parth: Sanyukta tum jaldi upar aa jao..

Sanyukta: Haan haan aa rahi hoon...

Sanyukta was crying very much.. She ran from there to the terrace..

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Sanyukta reached the terrace and found it was dark everywhere... She wiped her tears and screamed for Randhir...
Sanyukta: Randhirrr... Parth... Randhir...

But no one replied... She dailed Parth's number but it was unreachable... She was about to go but suddenly stopped hearing a voice... It was of Randhir... She turned back and saw Randhir standing with a bouquet of red roses... A spotlight was spotting him...

Randhir: Aaj se do saal pehle agar koi mujhse yeh puchta ki aaj kya kuch special hai toh main bolta nahi toh aaj toh ek normal day hai... Lekin aaj main yeh keh sakta hun ki aaj woh insan iss duniya mein aaya tha jisne meri life mein aakar meri life badal di.. Ladkiyon se nafrat karta tha... Yeh sochta tha ki engineering ladkiyon ke liye bani hi nahi hai... But ussne meri life aur mere point of view ko badal diya... Usne mujhe ladkiyon ki respect karna sikhaya...

Sanyukta's eyes were full of tears...

Randhir: Hum dono hamesha jhagadte the... "Angry Birds" issi naam se pura college humein janta tha.. Na hi usne aur na hi maine kabhi yeh socha tha ki hum dono ek dusre se itna pyaar karenge ki ek dusre ke bina reh hi nahi payenge... Aur woh koi aur nahi balki Sanyukta hai.. Meri Sanyukta.. Aur aaj uska birthday hai.. Do saal se hum relationship mein hain.. Aur har baar main tumhara birthday bhul gaya tha.. Lekin iss baar nahi... Mujhe pata hai tum mujh pe bahut gussa hogi.. Infact mujhse breakup karne ke baare mein soch rahi hogi... Lekin kya karun..? Tumhe surprise dena tha... So Sanyukta, HAPPY BIRTHDAY and I AM SORRY...

He came to her.. And passed her the bouquet.. She was smiling and her eyes were full of tears too... Suddenly the lights came and Sanyukta saw a board on Randhir's back.. "Happy Birthday Sanyukta" was written there... She looked here and there and found the terrace decorated beautifully... There were white and blue balloons everywhere on the ground..

There was a round table where there was a cake.. She again looked at Randhir and hugged him tightly...

Sanyukta: Thank you soo much for in my life.. Thank you soo much for giving me all my happiness... Thank you soo much for making my life complete...

Randhir: Sanyukta.. Tum toh sirf trailer se itna khush ho ab jab puri film dekhogi tab kya hoga...?

Sanyukta: Aage aur bhi kuch hai...?

Randhir: Yes My love.. Chalo aur jaldi cake kato...

Sanyukta went to the table and cut the cake... She fed to Randhir and Randhir too fed her back... Then Randhir pulled a chair for her and she sat there... Randhir went somewhere and came back with a bowl in his hand... He then sat infront of her...

Sanyukta: Iss mein kya hai..?

Randhir: Khud hi dekhlo..

She opened it and found noodles..

Sanyukta: Wooow.. Kahan se order kiya..?

Randhir: Sanyukta.. Maine banaya hai...

Sanyukta: What...?

Randhir: Yaaa...

Sanyukta: Khaane layak toh hai na...? Nahi matlab yaad hai na last time tumne banaya tha aur ekdum bekar bana tha...

He remembered the day when they were making the prototype and were so tired so he made noodles which was not at all edible...

He giggled remembering that incident...

Randhir: Iss baar aisa kuch nahi hai.. Main dhyan se sab kuch banaya hai...

Sanyukta: Lets see..

She took a spoonful of noodles and ate it... He asked through signals how it is... She joined the index and thumb finger of her left hand to say awesome... Here Randhir pulled his imaginary collar...

Then Sanyukta fed him the noodles.. After finishing the noodles, Randhir again went somewhere and came back after 1 min.. He placed a box infront of her... It was a big and rectangular box... Then he gestures her to open it.. She opened the first box and found another box inside.. Then again opened thag and found another box.. After opening 5 boxes she found a small box.. She opened it and found a beautiful chain with a half heart pendent... "R" was written on it..

Sanyukta: Wooow.. Yeh kitna beautiful hai.. Lekin Randhir dusra wala part kahan hai..?

Randhir: Ishika ko diya tha...

Sanyukta: Randhirrr.. (angrily)

Randhir: Sorry baba.. Mazak kar raha hun.. Dusra wala part mere paas hai.. Tumhare paas jo part hai usmein R likha hai aur mere paas jo part hai usmein S likha hai.. Jab bhi kabhi hum durr honge toh yeh hume ek dusre ke karib hone ka ehsas karayenge...

Sanyukta's eyes were again full of tears... Randhir wiped them and again placed a big box infront of her..

Sanyukta: Ab ismein aur kitne chotw boxes hain...?

Randhir: Ismein ek hi hai...

Sanyukta opened it and found two small teady bears holding a heart in which SanDhir's pic was there...

Sanyukta: Woow.. This is soo beautiful... Thank you Randhir...

She stood up from her sit and hugged Randhir... He too hugged her back... Then Randhir made her wear that locket... He turned on his Tum Hi ho from his phone and they both danced..

Then Randhir sat on the floor resting his back on the wall with Sanyukta sitting on his left side resting her head on his shoulder.. They had entwined their fingers... Sanyukta was holding that teady with her left hand...

Sanyukta: Randhir...

Randhir: Hmm..

Randhir: Yeh meri life ka sabse best aur special birthday tha...Thank you so much for making it soo special... Aaj se pehle kisine mujhe itna special feel nahi karwaya tha... Thank you..

Randhir: Jabse tum meri life mein aayi ho meri puri life special ban chuki hai.. Toh kya main tumhara yeh din special nahi bana sakta..?

Sanyukta: I Love You Randhir...

Randhir: I Love You Too Sanyukta...

And then they both dozed off in that same position...

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Hey everyone... This is the first ever os written by me.. I am not a very good writer.. But I tried to write one... Hope you all will like it... Please comment your views and hit the like button... And sorry for any mistake...

Love

Sanju.. 😊

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anudoll thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was a super cute os
Loved it
Keep writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a cute os!
Loved it...
Sachme the b'day prep waz very beautiful...
It can be said sanyu's long wait bore the fruit 😊...otherwise kya pata sachme break up kar deti toh :P...
Very nicely written...
Strt writing more...u'll find lots of readers here 😊...

Love
Rakhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow first a OS on Parsh Birthday and now Sandhir❤️
This forum surely got some First Rate writer⭐️
Keep up the Bright work😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww !! its hard to belive dat it was ur first OS 👏
wonderfully penned 👏
Aww !! such a cute story it was 😳
Loved d way Randhir surprised Sanyukta n yee it was really overwhelming 😃
Keep writing for sure 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely sanju
it was beautiful

Loved d surprise of rd for sanyu

Hope aisa kch serial mei v dikh jaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Sanju
Your First OS
Awesome
So Lovely
Gr8 work
Well done
Keep write more nd more
Thanks for PM;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb try yr
Really I so loved it


Shq me toh pta nhi ki kbhi sanyu k b'day manega bt tumahare is amzng os ne sari kami puri kar di


Awww rd planning surprise for sanyu
Sanyu super angry
Whole gang helping rd n hiding surprise from sanyu
Mind blowing surprise


Sandhir perfect together


Keep writing


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice os
Very nicely penned
Hope we get more like this
Keep writing
I have also written my first os today
" My Birthday Surprise "
So similiar 😊 but mine is based on parsh
Do peep in
Hope u like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: raksbasu

Such a cute os!
Loved it...
Sachme the b'day prep waz very beautiful...
It can be said sanyu's long wait bore the fruit 😊...otherwise kya pata sachme break up kar deti toh :P...
Very nicely written...
Strt writing more...u'll find lots of readers here 😊...

Love
Rakhi



Thank you Rakhi...

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