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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello ppl..this is the first tym i m writing a story so plz bear wid the mistakes and kindly give ur opinions and ideas..i wud love ur takes on my story and wud try to improve upon the same...

PROLOGUE and CHAPTER 1- PG1

PROLOGUE

It is 20th sept today.it is the 20th anniversary of the most memorable day of my life.i see a lot of hustle in the house.salim and aaram are sitting and enjoying the scene.hakim was as usual the silent observer.but here comes the reason for all this..my beautiful wife..jodha.if ppl ask me do miracles happen i just point at my wife..she s an angel who was sent by the heavens for me and hakim..and she has given me the gifts of life ..salim and aaram.
Here she comes and complains me abt the cake been damaged by the shopkeeper but i just keep looking at her moving her head and making the most adorable faces..she s my life..my jodha..and i jalal,am ur narrator for this story.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Update update update update ! Lovd the idea

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malla88

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...rio...
Update update update update ! Lovd the idea

Thank u..will try to update chap 1 today only

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats for the new story dr..continue soon..nice chapter..

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats on new ff

Interesting concept

Continue soon dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: malla88

Thank u..will try to update chap 1 today only

aree thank you maat bolo! No ty no wc no sowie in frndshp!! And send me a buddy req!!! Ya update sn and pm me

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malla88

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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1

21 years ago

I jallaluddin mohammed was a now by all means a loner..being thrusted with responsibility at a v young age of household was very regressive for my hobbies..earlier i used to enjoy life with the funda tat squeeze out the max fun out of ur lyf as it is ur last day but today the daily survival was itself taking a toll on my mental health..plus hakim my bro had also become a mystery to me..all this due to the sudden demise of my parents in a car crash..v belong to a middle class family so my parents left savings was used by me for the completion of my studies and hakim s tuition..as hakim dint go to school
Hakim was not always like this..he was a silent person before also but the accident had totally numbed him..sometimes in the nyt i cud hear him sobbing but somehw i cudnt go n console him properly..coz i too was crying from inside..and this had brought a strange silence in our house..yes it was only a house but became home only after jodha came..

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malla88

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...rio...
aree thank you maat bolo! No ty no wc no sowie in frndshp!! And send me a buddy req!!! Ya update sn and pm me

Oh yr chap 1 was small..but next chap wud b a longer one