NIRAJ ff-Kitna pyara hai ye chehra jispe hum marten hain/chap1-pg:2

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hi, guz. I am back after a long while. actually my PC was not working and today only it got repaired. I was waiting for so long to meet my cousins. u all r really the best.
now let's come to the point. I am here with an all new niraj fan-fiction. plz hit the like button if u liked my off and do comment. it encourages me a lot.
here u go with the prologue.
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PROLOGUE
in Lakshya Academy:-
viraj was sitting in his cabin, with a photo frame in his hand. he was caressing the photo with his hand and tears were rolling down his cheek. kabir was watching all this sitting on the couch, inside the cabin. he first tried to shift his concentration to other things but seeing his brothers condition, he finally spoke.
kabir-(walking towards viraj's table) bhai, bhabi ko gaye hue 3 saal ho chuke hain aur aapke aansu aaj bhi unki tasveer dekhte hi nikal aate hai. aap maan kyon nahi lete ki bhabi ab kabhi wapas laut ke nahi aa saktin. she is dead. bhai, u need to be strong. aapko apne aapko samhaalna hoga. bhabi jahan kahin bhi hai, agar woh aapko aise dekhengi toh unhe bohot bura lagega.
viraj -(wiping his tears) kabir, she is not dead. do u get that?... woh aaj bhi zinda hain, humare saath hain, humare dil mein hain. ko unhe humse alag nahi kar sakta, woh bhagwan bhi nahi.
kabir -(putting his hand on viraj's shoulder) bhai, nisha bhabi aap se kabhi alag nahi hongi, par aap ke yeh aansu dekh kar Suhana ko kaisa lagega, kabhi socha hai??? aap kam se kam apni beti ke liye toh yeh aansu poch lijiye, uss nanhi si jaan ki khushi ke liye toh aap smile kijiye.
viraj - kabir aap sahi keh rahe hain. nisha ke jaane ke baad humare jeene ki wajah sirf Suhana hai. uske liye humen move on karna hoga, khush rehna hoga...par him nisha ki yaadon kya karen?? jab bhi unke baare mein sochte hai, woh rasta yaad aati hai jab woh humse dur ho gayi thi, aur hum unhe bachaane ke liye kuch nahi kar paye. bhagwan ne unhe humare kyon chhin liya kabir, ek bachchi ko uski maa se kyon alag kar diya gaya?
kabir - bhai aap plz chodiye inn baaton ko. Jo hua usse hum badal nahi sakten, aapko aage badhna hoga... chaliye bhai mai chalta hun, kuch kaam hai, but u plz take care of urself.
viraj - yes kabir, I will.
after kabir left, a boy stood on the door.
boy - may I come in sir?
viraj - yes saurav, u can come in.
saurav -(walking in and giving the coffee to viraj) sir, aap ki coffee. ...woh sir mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.
viraj -(taking the mug from him) boliye, saurav.
saurav - sir aap ne bola tha na ki iss office mein aapke assistant ki post khali hai and u wanted to appoint a capable person to the post. well, meri ek frnd hai jo iss job ke liye taiyaar hai. she is just perfect for this job, I can assure u that sir.
viraj - that's a gr8 news saurav. woh kal hi humare paas interview ke liye aa sakti hain. aise unka naam kya hai???
saurav - nisha...nisha ganghwal, sir.
viraj's heart stopped beating for a moment. NISHA??? how could it be possible? was she really his Nisha?...no...no, she couldn't be. it could be some other girl.
looking at viraj motionless and lost in his own world saurav waved his hand in front of his eyes. viraj came back to present.
viraj - umm... haan saurav, aap unhe kal time pe yahan le aayiyega, at 10:00am.
saurav - yes sir nd thank u so much sir.
saurav left, after that.

chalo guz, done with the prologue, now plz hit the like button and leave ur replies. am waiting...character sketch kal update karungi aur chapter 1 Saturday ya Sunday tak update kar dungi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Umm! Interesting!
Suspense.. Like it!
Update soonish dear..
And ur other ffs too..
Glad ua back! And with a bang.. :))
Edited by Taherianforeva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME
happy to see you back...but confused a bit...please convert your thoughts to words soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: achirasingh16

AWESOME

happy to see you back...but confused a bit...please convert your thoughts to words soon!!


wats da confusion Achira? u can ask me now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samara_raichand


wats da confusion Achira? u can ask me now


is viru married to nisha??
and the new OA is some other girl or the same NG??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another intertesting story.
Plz do continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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achira, viraj's first wife was nisha who is dead. this nisha ganghwal is our nishu bro, a look alike of the first one. so now the story of niraj strts. chaptr 1 will be nisha's entry. nd i hope i hav revealed much about the ff. So stay tuned fr da update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh my GOD it's really interesting pls continue fast loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
after saurav left, viraj again got himself engrossed in his work. it was around 12 noon when viraj took a break from his work. he was working since many hours as there was a lot of work to be completed. viraj drank a full glass of water and then looked at his watch to keep the track of time. looking at it, he realised that he was late yet again, Suhana's school might be over. he wondered wat would be her reaction now? her anger would be on cloud 9, as she was just like her mother. nisha and suhana, both didn't like the promises to be broken and last time when when viraj was late, he made a promise to Suhana that he would not be late again. but today, he unknowingly broke his promise. what would he do now? thinking that, he picked up his mobile and walked out of the academy. sitting in his car he drove off to St. Florence's Convent School.
saurav was being restless in the academy, excited to tell nisha about her new job. nisha was his best friend since childhood. they had a great bond of friendship between them. the could understand each other's feelings very easily by just looking at the other's face. nisha alwaz helped him in his every problem. nisha had solutions for each and every problem, but sometimes that solution lead to another big problem. her cousins were also the same. but nisha and her cousins alwaz remained together in every happy and sad moments of their life. their togetherness and devotion to each other were the 2 best qualities of saurav was a fan. these 2 qualities in them were the greatest cause of their victory in whatever they did.
but , 4 years ago, nisha was shifted to Delhi because of her maternal grandmother's illness. saurav was in touch with her all along these years but somewhere he was missing her presence.
saurav was working in Lakshya Academy, since one year. he accepted this job to reduce his loneliness and to support his family financially. when he joined this academy, he new nothing about this place and its owner. and now also he didn't have much information. he only knew that his boss was a great shooter and the King of Jaipur. his name was Mr. Viraj Singh Rathore. he had one daughter whose name was Suhana. his wife died 3 years ago due to some reason which was unknown yet. he also had a younger brother. his name was Kabir. well, Lakshya academy was a great workplace with every facility to the staff members as well as people who visited. saurav was very happy when he came to know that she was back from delhi. now she would also work with him in this academy.
yesterday, at midnight she and her cousins gave him a surprise as it was saurav's birthday. they celebrated it together. now, saurav would give her a surprise of her new job. saurav quickly dialled her number and asked her where she was. nisha replied that she was standing in front of St. Florence's Convent School.. saurav got out of the academy and drove off to the school.
here, viraj reached the school and walked in through the gate. there he saw his little angel sitting on the bench, alone. no juniors were to be seen around except her. viraj went to Suhana with silent paws. Suhana saw him coming towards her from the corner of her eyes but she turned her face away. viraj sat beside her on the bench. he was able to feel her anger.
viraj - sorry Doll, aaj late ho gaya...(Suhana was not giving any response)... I am really sorry, Suhana, Dada ko aaj bohot kaam tha soch mein...
Suhana was still not looking at him.
viraj - Doll, idhar dekh toh lijiye... aap Dada se abhi tak naraaz hain???!! him sorry bol rahen hain na, ab toh humen maaf kar dijiye...
Suhana - wat sorry, Dada?? aap kitni baar late ho chuke ho!! pata hai mere saare frieends ka chuke hain sirf main yahan hun, akele...
viraj - agli baar se late nahi hoga, suhana. u luv ur Dada, na? and trust him also? I promise from next time I'll not be late. now happy?
Suhana -(hugged him) very happy, Dada...
viraj picked suhana up while she was hugging I'm, and headed out of the school gate.
nisha was standing in front of the same school which viraj and Suhana were. nisha was having a bunch of balloons in her hand which she was giving to every child passing by. viraj came out with Suhana and saw nisha with the balloons. her face was not visible due to the hair strands coming on her face. viraj turned to his car when suhana also saw nisha. nisha pushed the hair strands back of her ears and thats the time when Suhana saw her face.
Suhana -(shocked) mumma...
viraj - wat??????
Suhana - Dada, Maine abhi mumma ko dekha...
viraj turned to see where Suhana was pointing.

precap - will viraj be able to see nisha's face????

guz, I am waiting for ur lovely replies and likes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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After a long time got the 1st chapter.
So nice update.
Do continue soon.
And if possible plz give regular updates.
Pretty plz.

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