One Shot : Nirajbir - 3 Broken Hearts: A Tale of Lost First Love!

Hello cousins.. I don't know whether how will this story reach upto you'll.. I don't know how you'll will take it but im still writing it..
Note: 3rd post.. Even if u don't read the os still I request you'll to read the note!

NiRajBir - 3 BROKEN HEARTS ~ A TALE OF LOST FIRST LOVE


(Daaji in hospital taking last few breaths of his life.. Viraj Nisha and Kabir with him)
Viraj - Daaji.. Hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge daaji.. Plz aap himmat mat hariye.. Aur aap hume chodke kahin nahin jaa sakte! Aap ke alava koi nai hai humara.. Aap mere pita hai daaji.. Hum ab aapko nahi kho sakte!
Daaji - Chotte Hukuum. H.. Hum aa..aapse jaane se pe..pehle kuch kehna ch..chahte hai!
Viraj - Daaji plz aap aise mat boliye..
Daaji - H..humare paas zyada waqt n..nahi hai.. K..kabir Nisha aap log j.jinhe dhoondh rahe hai wo aur koi n.nahin Cho..Chotte Hukuum hai..
(Viraj didnt understand anything.. Kabir and Nisha well shocked)
Chotte Hukuum.. Aa.aap ake..akele nai hai.. Aap humse vaada kijiye k k aap humesha ap..apne aap ko sambhalenge.. Vaada kijiye
Viraj - ye aap kya keh rahe hai daaji? Nahin hum aapse koi vaada nahin karenge .. Aap hai na hunare paas..
Daaji - C.H. Vaada kijiye.. Humare paas waqt nahi..
(Trying to breathe)
Viraj puts his hand in his and promises him
Daaji - (gives him a smile and says) Kabir aapke bhai hai. Maharani ke bete..
(saying so he passes away)

Viraj couldn't understand anything.. He started crying like hell..
Kabir didn't know what to do now
Nisha was also whipping by now

Viraj - Daaji.. Crying badly :'(

Kabir puts his hand on Virajs shoulder and says)
Bhaiya sambhaliye apne aapko aapne daaji se abhi hi ye vaada kiya tha

(Hearing this he stopped crying but for some other reason)

Viraj - Aap log plz jaiye yahan se.. Hume Daaji ke saath akele rehna
(They both left)

In the evening at Nisha and Kabirs house
Kabir - Ye kya hua? Jinhe mein bade bhaiya kehke bulaata tha wo toh sach me mere bade bhaiya hai.. Mujhe kuch bhi nahi samaj aa raha hai. Aur ye meri maa ke bete kaise ho sakte hai?
Nisha - Mujhe bhi kuch nahi samaj me aa raha hai.. Lekin me itna jaanti hu jab Viraj 7 saal ke the tab unhe unki maa chod kar chali gayi thi kuch bina bataye. Tab se wo akele hi hai.. Daaji hi unke saath 25 years se hai.
Kabir - Kya? Sach? Lekin.. Ab kya.. Me maa se puchu?
Nisha - Par tu unhe kya puchega aur kaise?

Kabir - Haan yaar! Me kaise puchu maa se?

(Viraj enters)
Viraj - Kabir?
Nisha and Kabir both gets up..
(It was clearly seen that he had cried a lot)
Viraj - Maa? Agar daaji ne jo kaaha wo sach hai toh! Maa? Maa kaisi hai? Wo kahan hai? Wo theek to hai na?
Kabir - Par? Aap mere bhai?
Viraj - Hum nahin jaante kuch!
Kabir - Maa Dubai me hai..
Viraj - (crying) Kabir hum aapse haath jod ke request karna chahte hai.. Plz aap ek baar meri maa se baat karwa dijiye. Plz.. Nahin baat bhi nahin.. Hum sirf ek baar unki aawaz sunna chahte hai.. Plz aap unhe phone laga dijiye plz..
Kabir - Par
Viraj - (takes kabirs phone in his hand which was on the table and said) plz Kabir hum kuch nahin bolenge.. Bas ek baar unki aawaz Sunni hai.. Plz
Kabir - Haa aap kar lijiye baat
Viraj (as he unlocks kabirs lock screen he sees his moms picture)Maa.. Ye to maa hai.. Humari maa.. And starts crying!
(Their doubts where clear.. Daaji said was true and proved but the reason was still unknown)
Viraj calls From the phone
(Phone is ringing and somebody did pick up the phone)
Voice - Hello! Kabir beta? Aaj achanak maa ki yaad kaise aa gayi? Kaisa hai tu beta?
Virajs tears were not stopping! He wanted to speak but he didn't..
Maa - Hello! Beta tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe ho? Sab theek hai?
Viraj ends the call and starts crying again.. He couldn't stop..
Maa hai.. Humari maa hai.. Maa.. (he was silent for few minutes neither did Kabir or Nisha say anything)
After some time..Still crying .. Goes towards Kabir and says
Hum aapka ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulenge Kabir..
Hume maaf kar dijiye.. Humne aapko aur aapki wife ko bhi bohot pareshan kiya hai.. (Joining his hands)
Plz hume ho sake to maaf kardijiye gaa.. Holi ke din ke liye bhi aur aapki shaadi ke din ke liye bhi!
Ab hum aapko aur pareshan nahin karenge! Hum chalte hai
Kabir - Bhaiya par aap sach nahin jaan na chahte hai?
Viraj - Hume chalte hai (he takes his things and leaves)
Nisha and Kabir both stopped him
Nisha - Viraj! Aap ..
Viraj - Dekhiye Mrs. Kabir hume kuch bhi nahin sunn na hai aur hume mat rokiye.. Hum jaa rahe hai.. Aap chinta mat kijiye.. Hum aapko ab kabhi pareshan nahin karenge.. Aur ho sake to aap hume maaf kar dijiye ga
(Nisha and Kabir were shocked hearing this)
He had already left..
(Nisha couldn't see him like that Kabir couldn't see her like that)

That night
was the darkest night!
Nisha spent her whole night crying.. (Kabir couldn't see that and that was when he realised that he loved her and his love loved Viraj)
It was morning now..
Nisha got a call from sukku..
Sukku - Jaldi tv on kar
Nisha - arre kya hua?
Sukku - Hum sab tere ghar hi aa rahe hai tu bas tv on kar
Nisha did so
Gangwals had arrived
It was a live press conference by Viraj
(He confessed the whole truth in front of the world and asked for forgiveness to the Gangwals and Saurav for the harm to their reputation)
He revealed the truth buajis truth and said that she is already behind the bars for the cyber crime and killing my daaji

Nisha and gangwals were shocked..
Nisha and Kabir told them the whole truth
They all decided to talk to Viraj..
(Nisha called him.. He didn't pick up the phone.. They all waited but no response for a long time so they all decided to leave and told Nisha she should let them know when Viraj would be availble and they all left)
After some time..
A man came on the door and handed over 2 letters and 2 legal documents to Kabir
It was from Viraj
He opened the documents first!
The first one was the house agreement which was transferred in the name of Kabir and Nishas name. That rented house was their now..
When Kabir saw the second one he was hell shocked and couldn't believe his eyes
Nisha - Kya hua kabir
Kabir - Wo.. wo.. Unhone ye ghar to humare naam kiya hi hai lekin
Nisha - Lekin kya?
Kabir - Unhone apna pent house, Vikram Singh Rathore ka palace.. Unke naam jo 80% property thi wo 40% maa ke naam aur 20-20 hamare naam kar di hai aur jo Lakshya Academy ki jagah thi wo kisi Priyanka ke naam pe hai!
Nisha couldn't believe it! She was scared now.. What was he upto
Nisha - Aur ye letters?
Kabir said ill read wait

First Letter

Dear Kabir, Hum sab kuch humare parivaar ke naam karke jaa to rahe hai.. Aur hume pura bharosa hai aap pe.. Humari maa aur humari zindigi hi de kar jaa rahe hai.. Rahi baat sach jaan ne ki, toh ab hum me aur koi sach sunn ne ki taqqat nahi hai.. Bas aap apne aur baaki sab ka khayal rakhiye ga.. Aur ho sake to hume maaf bhi kar dijiye ga.. Aur ek bure sapne ki tarah bhula bhi dijiye ga..

Next letter read

Mrs. Kabir,
Hum to apki maafi ke layak hi nahin hai. Par umeed ke saath jaa rahe hai ki aap aur apka parivaar mujhe kabhi na kabhi toh maaf karenge..
Aapko thanks bhi kehna chahte the.. Jitne bhi pal ke liye aap humari zindigi me thi aapne usse khubsoorat bana diya tha..
Humne aapko bohot dukh diye hai.. Phir bhi aapne humesha mujhe samjha..
Par iss baar hum maafi ke layak nahi hai..
Aapke papa ne sahi hi kaha tha.. Pyaar kamana padta hai! Hum iss pyaar ke layak hi nahi hai
Aur honge bhi kaise? Jab humari maa hi hume pyaar nahi kar payi jab humne humari maa ka dil bhi dukhaya hoga tab hi to wo hume chod kar chali gayi hongi.. Ya phir unki koi majboori bhi rahi hogi.. Jo bhi ho hum kabhi kisi cheez ke layak hi nahin the!
Aur acha hi hua aap humari nahin hui.. Kyuki kya pata humari kismat aapki bhi jaan lele..
Maa nahin thi humare saath tabhi shayad wo zinda hai.. Itne saalo baad unki aawaz sunkar hume itni khushi hui hai hum bata nahi sakte..
Khair.. Aapki zindaji humare liye zyada kimti hai phir chahe hume aapse humesha ke liye kyu na door jaana pade..
Hum aapko aapki nayi zindagi ke liye All the best kehna chahte hai ur hum itna jaante hai Kabir aapke wo saare ghaav bhar dega jo humne aapko diye hai..
Hum unhe itna to jaante hai ki wo kabhi kisi ko bhi dukh nahi de sakte..
Isiliye hum humari maa aur humari zindagi unhe de jaa rahe hai..
Bye..

Nisha was tears.. She screamed.. She cried loudly.. Mujhe chodkar mat jaiye
Kabir too was in tears..

Nisha immediately went outside Kabir followed her
They went to his penthouse so that they could talk to him and clarify things

They reached there

It was locked with a note there

Nisha took it..
"Hum jaante the aap yahan aayengi Mrs. Kabir.. Isiliye ye note hai..
Hum jaa rahe hai.. Nahin aayenge kabhi wapas..
Ye maa ki bangles hai.. Wo unki bahu ke liye..
Lots of love Mr and Mrs.Kabir"

She couldn't believe he was gone.. He loved her so much.. But he was a broken man.. More than love he had pains in his heart.. He was alone.. She left him alone.. She couldn't understand him..

Somewhere in some other city..
A man smiling in front of the sky said
"I will smile till you will get tired of hurting me"
Wearing that smile he walked in an Anaath Ashram where he had once gone with his mom..
He remembered her words
"Hum bohot lucky hai raja beta.. Par sabke paas jeene ki wajah bhi nahi hoti.. Ho sake to humesha sakbo khush rakho and pyaar baatt te raho"
He promised himself.. Maa aapki baat hum kabhi nahi bhulenge.. Aaj se iss Aasharam ka koi bhi baccha kabhi bhi nahi royega..


Viraj had lost his love..
Nisha did too..
Kabir had his love but she was still not his!

SOME HEART BREAKS RE MEANT TO BE.. THE LOST FIRST LOVE..

2 years later:
Nisha and Kabir were happily married.. Their contract marriage was no more a contract marraige..
They had a kid too named Nibir..
Maa lived with them..
Kabir never asked her about the truth behind Viraj and He being brothers..
But she had told him "I left him because I knew he will manage and you wont be able to.. I had to select one.. I chooses you because I knew Viraj will take care of himself.. 'And God gives problems to only those who has the ability to face them' in proud of him though I don't deserve my kid she said clearing the tear on her cheek"

Hey guys sorry of I made it too sad.. Too creepy.. Too lenghty..
But this was for Viraj..!
He is the Hero.. He lost everything but accepted that fact with a smile..
He is my hero..
U may find me mad! Okay!
All kinda comments accepted.. :)

1st one 2 comment...it was awesome nd hearttouching meghu...d way u have portrayed viraj's emotion was too good...nd yeaah dis is our viru who can sacrifice his happiness 4 d person he loves..!bt thank god u depicted nisha more considerate of viru's feelings 👏

Note: I don't wanna loose this opprotunity to say that..
I know the story was sad.. And it revolved around Viraj..
All the cousins out there..
U'll may find me mad.. But I wanna say..
Can we please stop blaming this charater.. Who all don't like Viraj okay.. But still don't use bad words against him..
He has really been an insipration to me.. Not Viraj but Taher sir..
In the few previous articles .. There has been a kind of world war 3 between nirajians and nibirians..
I really wanna say can we plz stop it?
They are playing their characters..
I'm myself so connected to the show that I cry sometimes.. I do..
The CVs have managed to play with the emotions of all..
I want to say that.. We are all cousins.. Before nirajians or nibirians.. We are cousins..
The CVs have themselves forgotten the gist of the show.. But we don't have to..
The way we react to the articles and all is way too much.. I'm just saying we all together have to show CVs that its not fair!
I don't know how you'll will take it but this is what all I wanted to say..
We cant and should not bash any characters..
I hope my cousins will support me..
This forum is divided into nirajians and nibirians.. I would insist that can we make an AT for cousins than nirajs or nibirs..
They'll be there but an AT for all the cousins..
"Cousins are for life"
No other show will give me so many cousins ever..
Thank you and sorry if anyone got hurt!
Sorry Taherians also.. I made this charater a way too sad..
But I wanted to show.. He can fight with his destiny.. He could begin a new life..

@nishu830.. I'm sorry especially to you.. I don't know whether I did justice to it or not..

Ok so what can I say...

You're not crazy at all. This is good. Your note's even better.🤗

Originally posted by: shreya_32

1st one 2 comment...it was awesome nd hearttouching meghu...d way u have portrayed viraj's emotion was too good...nd yeaah dis is our viru who can sacrifice his happiness 4 d person he loves..!bt thank god u depicted nisha more considerate of viru's feelings 👏

Hey Shreyaaa.. Thank u soo much.. I'm happy that u liked it.. I was a bit nervous about the post that how u'll will take it:)

Originally posted by: _UptoNoGood_

You're not crazy at all. This is good. Your note's even better.🤗

Hehe Shivi 😆
Thank uu..
Yea.. The note is something I really wanna make happen! :)

Am still crying yaar... 😭 awesome 👍🏼 👏

U made me cry yaar.. still i cant control myself.. 😭 😭 😭
Every motions of viraj, u described it perfect yaar.. viraj lost everythng but he is facing that fact with smile in his face.. he is a true knight.. no one can replace him.. and he will be always my inspiration too..
Meghu!!! Still am crying cant control.. ur a fabulous writer yaar.. i jst loved it.. i dont know how to deacribe my feelings now (* hats off *) 👏 u did a great job yaar.. 🤗 simply superb...

Originally posted by: Taherianforeva

Hey Shreyaaa.. Thank u soo much.. I'm happy that u liked it.. I was a bit nervous about the post that how u'll will take it:)

we r cousins nd there is nothing to thank about...! 😊