|FirefliesHavenMaNanAT#99|Two Hyenas & A Dining Table

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1201

Originally posted by: geet.a
i will hold you tight and wait till you cry
till you close your eyes and drench my skin
with those tears of pain
that you kept hidden deep within
in unrhymed expressions of stuttering, hesitating words
I will kiss your fears away,
by tracing my fingers over your eyes,
to ease the creases of your forehead
so that you can sleep,
and smile with me
as I dream new dreams
for you and me,
dreams when we won't have to hide
but can run and play
with sandy shores beneath our feet,
your tiny footprints,
besides mine,
patterned beauty
of your God's design

One suggestion .. just make sure you keep expressing the same way.. these words.. the poetic feel to it.. is so damn awesome..

How come I missed this ?😕 Anyways!

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Srujana

@Srujana7.MaNan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1202

@Genie One thing that cvs disappointed me with. For tag sake Navya is her "best friend" but is she really. Nandu had a few scenes with Abhi but he was never permanent. Yeah we saw her discussing her issues but he didn't have that connect either as he just randomly popped in her life. Which is why sometimes it is hard for me to understand her fears, like her past needs to be explored. I am glad that finally we are getting the opportunity to know more about her world.

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