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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Gisel

Yes SushK16...ok how do I call you? Sushk?

Sadly, We still have Priya's past and Ashok is still out in the loose...and there is Pooja's dad who may make an appearance sooner.

Thanks GIsel! Story is getting better and better.
Waiting for the next part to who is Pooja's father. I hope is not Ashok...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Priya started to fall in love with arjun..❤️
Still wondering who is Pooja's real dad..I thought Arjun but still confused..
Superb progress,Gisel..keep it up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Happy to see you after so long 😊



awesome...😊


lovely update😊



Eagerly waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: SushK16



Sush is fine... Is Gisel your real name? Or do you have another?

Oh alright... Well, it's always interesting with twists and turns! I am eagerly waiting to read more and see how you will take the story!


No, my name isn't Gisel. My name is a very tamil name...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: ramyvijay



yes pa.. It came in serial sometime back.. when Pooja was with Vandana.., she came to be with Priya... so Priya came to inform Arjun that they hav planned to go out.. remember the VGP scene? Arjun as the statue man.. 😛


I started watching the show only after the court cases...I seem to have missed it. Once I get my free wifi, I'm going to sit and watch the whole show😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sulaayini

Priya started to fall in love with arjun..❤️

Still wondering who is Pooja's real dad..I thought Arjun but still confused..
Superb progress,Gisel..keep it up..


If I answer this question, I will be giving out spoilers😛.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

*****

Part 11

Chapter 12

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"Priya."

"Arjun."

"Seri. Ok. Aana Chennai la winter clothes enga kadaikum?"

"Enaku epdi theriyum. Ithu unga ooru," she said dusting off a pillow as she made the bed.

"Apdi therinjalum, kalaila 7 maniku yarum kadaiya thoranthu vechirukamatan."

"Ippo ena panurathu. Neethu vera ice pota cokeu. Ungala sollanum," she said hitting him with the pillow.

"Hey..." he dogged her attack and grabbed another pillow from the bed and hit her with it.

All Pooja could do was pinch herself to see if this was just a dream. Her parents laughing and having a pillow fight. They didn't even notice her come from the bathroom after her bath.

Ok! This was getting dangerous! As much as she loved seeing them together, they had to give some attention to her too, right?

"Amma! Appa!"

They stopped their violence and turned their attention to the little one in the room. She was, indeed, glaring at them.

"Ena Pooja?"

"Kelambunga. Neram achu."

"Naan kelamba 2 minutes thaan agum. Unga amma kelamba thaan 2 hours agum."

"Yaaru sonna. Such a hypocrite! Pakalama, yaaru first ready aguranu?"

"Aiyoo! Rendu perum porapudunga!"

Both of them dashed to the bathroom. But, Arjun was quicker. He entered the washroom and quickly closed the door behind him and Priya hit the door in frustration.

Rolling her eyes at the childishness of her parents, Pooja exited the room.

Before Priya could turn away, the door slowly opened halfway and Arjun looked behind her, satisfied at the absence of Pooja in the room, he smirked at Priya and asked, "Unaku prechana illana, rendu perum seinthu ready agalam."

It took all of his control to not laugh at the priceless expression on her face. Then, as suddenly as she had been shocked, she regained her composure and replied, "Ok!"

"Wh...what?"

Now, it was Priya's turn to control her laughter.

"I said, ok', thalunga," she pushed him away and entered the bathroom and only she knew how fast her heart was beating.

Arjun stared after her. Was this girl for real?

He gulped as he realized she was actually unpinning her salwar shawl.

"Wait!"

Still hands on her shawl, she turned to face him and asked, "Why Arjun? Kelambavendan?" in a voice dangerously sexy.


If only she knew what she did to him. He had to leave before things got out of hand, "I...I will wait. Bye!"

Without another word or gesture, he left the room.

She laughed till her stomach hurt. The look on his face had been epic.

"Phew! Avuru matum pogalana ena airukum?"

She didn't want to think about it though she knew she wouldn't have gone through any further. She would have just kicked him out of the room.

A faint smile played on her lips as she felt something special. There was something in this man. She had never felt this happy before. Was she falling for him? She shrugged away the thought as she turned and stepped into the bath.

*****

He placed his hand over his chest telling himself to cool down. What the hell was that?

He had expected to play with her. He had expected her to shout at him or beat him but this. Phew!

What would have happened if he had stayed in there? Surely she wouldn't have gone through with it. But seeing the extent to which she went to tease him, he felt a faint hope growing. Life was never going to be the same.

*****

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes."

"Priya."

"Arjun."

"Priya, stop it. Thala valikuthu."

"See, ithukagavai, naan thaan car otanum. Olungu mariyathaiya poi passenger seat la ukarunga."

Arjun shook his head, there was no way she was going to listen to him. His wound wasn't that bad, but she wouldn't listen. If she was going to drive, then most probably they were going to be late. Sighing he took his place in the passenger's seat.

*****

"Priya, pathu. Speed a kora."

"Relax! 140 la thena poren."

"Enathu? 140 la thena poren a? Ena kolama iruntha seri!"

Laughing, she accelerated away, with Pooja telling her to overtake the speeding car in front of them. Sighing at the duo, he answered his phone which was ringing.


*****

"Ethavuthu hotel iruntha niruthu."

"Hotel ethuku? Naan sapadu kondu vathuiruken."

And before he could say anything, she stopped the car near a tree.

The trio got out. One side was a paddy field, while the other side was a field of sunflowers.


"Evalo azhaga irukula."

"Aama, Pooja."

"Itha vitutu ethuku Dubai la irunthom ivalo varusham?"

"Kaval padatha. Enuma inga thaan irupom, seriya?" said her mother and she looked on contented.

Arjun looked at the duo and smiled.

Could life be anymore perfect?

*****

"Aha. Thairu satham. Theinka thovayal. Manga urga. Sollumpothey nakula thani uruthei. Priya, I love you!" he said taking a plate from picnic blanket she had laid down. He casually started eating and looked up to see Priya, who was staring at him. And only then, did he realize what he had said.

"I...uhm..."

"Pooja, pesama sapdu. Nasil earidum."

Arjun knew it was for him. He cursed himself for his enthusiasm, but when he saw a faint smile on her face, he smiled and went on to enjoy his lunch. Thankfully, Priya seemed to have accepted that his hand was healed enough, now.

*****

It was five when they reached. Arjun had stopped in front of a shop to buy some sweaters and other necessaries. So, they were now decked against the sinful chillness of the Nilgiris.

"Cottage No. 6, sir."

"Thank you," he said taking the keys.

They walked through a canopy of trees. They looked in a marvel at the small yet beautiful cottage that appeared in sight.

"It's beautiful," stated Pooja.

"Fresh up panitu velila polam."

*****

"Ithu nijamavai wax a pa?"

"Aama Pooja. Athunala thaan intha museum peru Wax Museum'," he said ushering her to move forward and not keep the next people waiting.

Suddenly, Priya nudged his elbow, "Ein ga, antha ponnu..."

He looked towards where she was pointing. And indeed just few steps away from them stood a girl he knew very well, since the day she was born.

"Shruthi?"

She turned to look at him dumbstruck.

Her companion nearby leaned and asked her, "Yaaru Myna ithu?"

*****

Outside the wax museum, just Arjun and Shruthi,

"Anna, naan solluratha kelu na."

"Ena solla pora. Ithu en friend, engaluku ula vera onum illa nu solla poriya?"

"Anna..."

"Ithula Myna vera."

"Aama, naanga love panurom. Athuku ena ippo? Una mathiri oru 6 vaisu ponna pethu mariachi vekala."

"Shruthi!"

"Anna, wait pannu na. Sorry. Naanga love la panala. Enga college project, "Polished fantasy," athuku konjam naturala ethavuthu panalamnu thaan inga vanthom. Nee kojam olunga pathu iruntha, naanga oru group a thaan vanthirukom, rendu perum thaniya varalanu purinjirukum," she said pointing to the group that had emerged outside.

"Sorry, Shruthi," he said, giving a menacing look to the guy next to her.

"Sorry na."

"Naanga one week, Ooty la thaan irupom. Una college la vanthu pakurom."

"Seri na. Hostel ku time achu."

*****

Pooja was sleeping, exhausted with the day's travel. Priya and Arjun sat in the balcony sipping hot coffee.

"Athu unga thaangatchi a?"

"hm...Ava Ooty la thaan hostel la thaangi padikira. En kalyanathukaga leave potu Chennai vanthiruntha."

"hm...antha incident nadakum pothu naanum college thaan padichitu irunthein."

Arjun turned quickly to look at her, who was looking out at the setting sun. If she had sensed he was looking at her she didn't show it.

"MD. Final year."

Arjun listened in silence as she started telling him her story.

(To be continued)

Part 13

*****

Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Wow Wow Wow.. Super 👏 kalakkal update 😳

Arjun Priya getting along.. 😉

most importantly, she is opening up her past with him.. eagerly waiting to know the past..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: ramyvijay

Wow Wow Wow.. Super 👏 kalakkal update 😳

Arjun Priya getting along.. 😉

most importantly, she is opening up her past with him.. eagerly waiting to know the past..

just want to echo Ramvijays quote. Awesome chapter. Poor Arjun getting it from Shruthi. Omg can't wait to read Priya's past. You're killing us with suspense Gisel.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Superb Update Gisel 😃

Enjoying all the fun Arjun - Priya - Pooja scenes... 😛

Waiting for her past to unfold... Do update soon... 😉

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