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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettyAaShu

Awesome Preview...
Cant wait for Update...Please Continue Soon...!!

thanks so much for the support girl!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I usually avoid teasers but I just couldn't resist
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter 😃
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ohhh another emotional chapter..i am such a sucker for them :D post the whole chapter...like NOW..lol

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3
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Originally posted by: chair1992

I usually avoid teasers but I just couldn't resist

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😃


Haha hopefully the preview didn't disappoint you! Hopefully will be up very soon <3
Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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Thanks lovely! <3
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

ohhh another emotional chapter..i am such a sucker for them :D post the whole chapter...like NOW..lol


- Reya aka Your Sunny <3

Hahah... teasers are suppoed to tease ... I'll have it up as a goodmorning present for you :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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twinkle, i just saw this.. it isnt fair you didnt tell about this earlier... 😡
As usual your writing is awesome.. The story is shaping up well.. Esp the second part.. Loved how you put up nandini's helplessness to walk when she sees maanik hurting himself.. Emotional scene..

Precap seems interesting and looking fwd to the story unfold..

You should definitely create a pm list and add me to it too :) Cant wait to read next part..
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Originally posted by: anotheranfan

twinkle, i just saw this.. it isnt fair you didnt tell about this earlier...😡

As usual your writing is awesome.. The story is shaping up well.. Esp the second part.. Loved how you put up nandini's helplessness to walk when she sees maanik hurting himself.. Emotional scene..

Precap seems interesting and looking fwd to the story unfold..

You should definitely create a pm list and add me to it too :) Cant wait to read next part..


Oh whooopsie! So sorry babe... A total slip of the mind because we're always so excited about analysing together I forgot about the story lol
I'm glad you liked the start though... I know it not the best of my work but hopefully you like the coming up chapters!
Oh that's a good idea... Thanks for that! Will definitely do it for the future chapters :)
Thankyou so much for praising the piece :)
Take care girl!
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CHAPTER THREE! - Let it all out!
PRECAP:

"Manik wait.", she stopped him

Manik leaned back and scanned Nandini's face, trying his best to understand what was going on in her mind.

"What happened?", he asked in a worried tone

"Why? Why Manik?"

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Manik quietly diverted his head in the other direction and started to get up from the rocky road.

"Manik? Manik no. You have to answer me!"

Manik carefully secured Nandini's seat belt and closed the front passenger's door.

"Ughh...why is he so impossible!"

Nandini leaned over to his seat and grabbed the car keys, hiding them against her left thigh, as Manik walked around to the driver's seat and slid in. He quickly fastened his seatbelt and turned to face her,

"Alright Nandini, hand it over."

"Hand what over? I don't have the keys.", she lied whilst shrugging her small shoulders.

A small smirk formed on Manik's lips. Lying and Nandini was a combination which was never going to work. He quietly leaned closer to her warmth and whispered in her ears; "But I never mentioned anything about keys."

Great. Not again. She turned her blushing face to face Manik. Peeking so innocently though one eye and biting her lower lip, she presented him his bundle of keys.

Manik felt his heartbeat quicken and he could feel his heart skipping beats every few seconds. She had always been the calm of his frenzied life. Her touch did magic. Filling him with the realization of her presence in his life. Awakening every part of him to experience the true love she carried within her heart just for him. She was that love which displaced all the anger, all the pain that once resided in him from the time of his childhood. She was that spark of light which helped him rediscover himself amidst this cruel world. She was that blessing that god had sent down just for him.

He had never told her but he would die without her. Perhaps that's why he can never forget..

"Manik? Manik? What happened?"

Her touch woke him up from the trail of thoughts that had taken a u-turn to the horrific accident which took place three years ago.

Panic once again consumed the guilty heart as he re-visited old memories. But he blinked back to reality as his eyes focused on her concerned face.

Her eyes gazing into his eyes to reassure herself that he was okay.

"Nothing baba. I'm fine"

"Are you sure?"

He smiled an assuring smile and reached up to tuck the lock of hair behind her right ear.

"You're with me, so I have nothing to worry about."

Nandini returned him with a warm smile and straightened up in her seat as he ignited the car and started driving.

The ride to Nandini's home was mostly quiet except for a few teasing moments from Manik's behalf and Nandini expressing her disbelief as to how can her monster possibly know her so well. But inside, her little heart was secreting jumping with merriment.

It had taken them endless efforts to become a part of each other's lives and she still looked back to that moment with so much admiration and enchantment. How she had hoped for the time to just stop ticking. How she had wanted to live the rest of her life re-experiencing that beautiful moment again and again. It was all so perfect. The paradisiac beginning of their journey of togetherness. The perfect end to their exile. No room for any more grudges, misunderstandings and no fear remained of losing each other. It was a night which she had impatiently waited for so she could finally explain to him the significance of her fireflies. She would at last express the definition of love in her life; Manik.

She could still remember that moment when she saw him for the first time that evening. The excitement was unexplainable. They stood there, unblinkingly gazing in each other's eyes as if they had come face to face for the first time. She had never seen him so happy before. The glow on his face was incomparable to the intensity of her fireflies. All the lights around them, the stars in the sky, it all fell dull in comparison to the gleam of his smile and the glitter of joy in his eyes.

But their happiness had been short-lived. That one sudden incident had seemed to wipe out Manik's smile forever. Of course he would smile his beautiful, small grin every now and then but Nandini knew that it just wasn't the same. His eyes never twinkled the same as they had on that night. His heart was the home to endless pain. Buckets of guilt. And she had tried so much over these last few years to make him smile that glowing smile once again. To ensure him that it wasn't his fault. That he should stop blaming himself for the unforeseen occurrence but it had been of no use.

Nandini felt a pair of lips press in her soft hair and a pair of fingers were easing out frowned lines on her forehead.

"Nandini...we're home"

Nandini stretched a little on the spot. She didn't realise when she had fallen asleep, reliving the old memories. As she opened her eyes and peaked out the window, her eyes widened in thrill.

"It's raining?!"

"Yeh, just started pouring a while ago. I didn't want to wake you up because I wanted to see this expression of yours.", Manik replied with a little laugh.

Nandini blushed a little but was soon impatiently grabbing onto Manik to take her out in the rain.

"Manik...hurry up! I want to go outside and play."

"Nandini not again. Last time I fulfilled your wish of dancing in the rain, you got sick. Sorry. We're heading straight inside today."

"Manik please?" She begged him with her puppy eyes. A weakness she had discovered over the years. He was bound to give in now. She just knew it.

"That's cheating you know".

"Everything is fair in love and war and you Mr. Malhotra, I know love me the most." She leaned in and rubbed her nose against his nose.

Manik chuckled silently to himself and leaned in to kiss her smooth cheek. "Alright. But promise you'll dry up as soon as we get inside?"

"I promise, plus not like I can run away anywhere", Nandini winked at him.

A flash of pain crossed Manik's face and he glanced away from her face.

"Manik...I'm sorry. I didn't mean it in that way." Nandini reached out to tilt his face upwards so she could look into his eyes again.

He forced a smile on his lips and cupped her hand with his own. "I know. It's okay. Let's go out there and fulfill your wish."

Nandini's squealed a little in happiness and leaned in to hug him.

Manik held her close and absorbed every inch of her. He could feel tears forming in his eyes again but he blinked them away before they spilled onto his cheeks. She was so happy, he couldn't ruin it for her. As soon as Nandini broke the hug, Manik stepped out of the car and made his way to her side and scooped her out of her seat and into the pouring rain.

Nandini swayed her right arm through the open air, absorbing every pearl of water falling on the ground. She bent her palm to form a little bowl so she could collect the beads of rain and as soon as her palm started to overflow she splashed Manik with every drop she had collected.

Manik gasped a little from the sudden surprise but he knew it was going to come now or later.

"Nandini Murthy, you just did not do that."

He tightened his grip around her body and spun her around in the open space of her porch. Nandini spread both her arms into the wet air, her head falling back in excitement, and she screamed in delight. Her laugh was echoing in the atmosphere around them and Manik couldn't help but laugh his own little chuckle. He hadn't seen her this happy for quite a few days and at that moment nothing mattered to him more. She was smiling, she was happy and so he was happy. He slowed down his ride for her but continued staring at her mesmerizing face.

He leaned down and kissed her forehead and she reached up to lock her arms around his neck.

"Thankyou. You have no idea how much that meant to me." Nandini whispered with the widest smile.

"No, thank YOU for smiling. It makes my day to know you're happy."

"Well I guess then every day should be a special day for you because you're the reason for my happiness and I get to see you every day so there never is a day when I'm unhappy."

"Alright we can continue this talk later, time to get you dried up and snuggled in bed.", he replied with a quiet laughter.

Manik carried Nandini inside the house and upstairs to her bedroom.

It had been just over three months since Chacha Chachi had flown to London for Rishab's treatment. Manik wasn't just a blessing for Nandini, but he had been the messiah in Rishab's life too. He had organised for the best possible team of doctors for Rishab's treatment and had ensured chacha chachi that they had nothing to worry about as long as he was with them. Chachi had been quite reluctant to leave Nandini alone at first, but she had full faith in Manik that he wouldn't leave Nandini alone for even a single minute. So after much convincing and reassurance, she decided to accompany Rishab and Murthyji on this trip.
"Wait wait wait!", warned Nandini,

"What happened?", Manik paused and questioned her just as he was about to sit her on the bed.

"I can't just sit on my bed, it'll get all wet. Take me to the bathroom first and I'll change there and then you can tuck me in bed."

"But Nandini how will you manage? Look, I don't think that'll work, just let me sit you here and I'll change the bedsheet if..."

"Manik, no. I'm telling you na, just take me inside."

"But Nandini..."

"Shhh..." Nandini placed a finger over Manik's lips. "Trust me".

Manik let out a loud sigh and walked in the bathroom and sat her down on her chair that he had permanently positioned next to the shower room for her. He started to walk out of the bathroom, once he handed her her pink nightsuit but stopped at the door.

"Are you sure you'll be okay?"

Nandini nodded and smiled at him in reassurance.

He half-heartedly stepped out and shut the door behind him.

After what felt like a whole hour, he heard Nandini call out for him to come in.
He barged in the bathroom, his heart filled with panic and he was now kneeling down in front of her shooting her with endless questions.
"What happened? Where did you get hurt? I told you it wasn't going to work bu no, you always have to be so stubborn. Why can't you just listen to me for once?"

"Manik...Manik...shhh, calm down. I'm perfectly fine." Nandini placed her hands on his shoulders."

But Manik didn't pay attention, he inspected each and every inch of her hands, her arms, her feet, searching for any scratch, any wound that she could be hiding from him. It was only when he was fully convinced; he closed his eyes to breathe in a deep breath and calmed down to his normal state.

"Satisfied?", Nandini asked with a teasing smile

"It's not funny Nandini."

"Manik, I was just..."

He gave her no time to finish her words and scooped her up once again so effortlessly in his arms and made his way out of the bathroom. He carefully sat her down in the middle of her bed and spread the quilt over her legs to ensure she didn't catch the cold like last time. He was about to walk away from her bedside and go downstairs when Nandini grabbed his hands and pulled him back.

"And where do you think you're going Manik?'

"I'll be back. I have a phone call to make.", he answered without turning around to face her.

"The phone call can wait. You have to get dried up first."

"Nandini, I'll be fine, don't worry..."

"Manik, don't even try and deny me. Now go and get ne a towel."

She let go of his hand and he wordlessly walked in the bathroom to grab a fresh, dry towel and returned to her side.

Nandini once again caught his hand and pulled him down to sit beside her on the soft bed. She grabbed the towel from his cold hands and started drying his dripping hair.

He couldn't help but smilingly adore her persistency when it came to him. He continued admiring her innocent beauty as she thoroughly dried his hair. When she finished, she realised a starling sight. His eyes. They were blood-red and there was another level of wetness on his face. It wasn't just drenched from the rain anymore.

Nandini threw the towel to the side and cupped Manik's wet face in her small hands. His head bowed down in defeat. A waterfall of tears streaming down his pained face. She gently wiped away the streaming tears with her shaking thumbs and inched his face closer to hers. She leaned in to join their foreheads together in the hope to transfer all his pains, all his agony upon her.

"Shhh Manik. I'ts okay. I'm okay"

She slid her fingers to the back of his head and continued to caress his hair. She tried to calm down his sniffles by continuously whispering that he had nothing to worry about. That it really all wasn't as bad as he feared it was.

"Shhh...Manik...Manik...Listen to me. It's all going to be okay. We're going to make it through this. Together. I trust you."

The minute she finished uttering the last of her words, he pulled her into his jacketed arms and snuggled her in his warm scent. "Promise me Nandini. Promise me that you'll never give up." The desperation in his voice was evident. His sobs had subsided but the pain in his voice remained.

"I promise." He tightened his muscled arms around her one more time and held her for what seemed like hours.

He continued to weep his agony and she continued to absorb it all in. Never loosening her grip on him. She wanted to take it all away from him. Heal the wound that was still aching and oozing with pain even after so many years. But she knew that his love was selfish. He was selfish when it came to sharing his pain, his sorrows, his miseries. He always did that. Kept it all locked up in a dark dungeon located in the depth of his truthfully pure heart. Protecting her from his own aching.

When Nandini felt that his sobs had hushed, she broke the hug to look into those wet eyes. She pulled his face close to her and dropped a long, soothing kiss on his wet forehead.
He kept his eyes lowered, not being able to find the strength to face her. She understood his hesitancy and so didn't force him to look up to her. Instead she swept her right hand over his eyes to nonverbally ask him to close them. Once he shut his exhausted pupils, she layed his head down into her lap and continued to caress his wrinkled forehead and semi-dry hair. She was scared to let him go just as scared as he was to leave her alone.

After much contemplation, she asked him her question.

"Manik, can you do me a favour?"

"Hmmm?", he hummed with his eyes closed.

"I want you to sleep here...with me. Tonight."

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Alright guys so that's chapter 3! A little longer than the other chapters I think but I hope you didn't get bored!

Twinkle <3

Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okies here i am. Finally
OMGGG before anything else, there is Manan RAINY ROMANCE !! how could you not tell me this twinkie ? like this chapter has been here for days and it has rainy romance and i didn't read it ! Okies, i think i am mostly done with my melodrama..lol.
Firstly, thank you for a longer chapter. And don't you dare think for a second that we would be bored. A longer chapter, more of your writing to drool on. WIN WIN. And tell me, please tell me your secret. Just how do you write so well ? Every chapter, you outdo yourself so please take a bow because your writing is so beautiful. You write Manan so well, you understand their depth, their love for each other and express it so beautifully.
Nandini's hurt, it shows. There is a way for her to eventually get healed. But Manik's hurt, his guilt is so deep that he is always hurting. God, that makes me so sad. That he loves her so that a part of him is unable to forgive himself, unable to get the guilt go. His smile, he has lost his beautiful smile. Nandini is with him, she loves him so much but until he can let the guilt go, find a way to forgive himself, he can't fully be with Nandini. He has to give all of himself to her too but he tries so hard to not let his emotions of sorrow show because he wants her happy, he doesn't want her to be worried. Man, that's so goddamn beautiful. The moments written from Manik's POV are especially my favourite because his pain, his raw pain, you emote that so damn well.
Aww..a man who is unable to deny his ladylove anything, even if it means playing in the rain. That scene was beautifully written like i could picture it. There was just rainy romance, there was happiness filled in those moments, where Manik and Nandini forgot about all their worries and just enjoyed life for those few precious moments.
Oh man..Your manik is such a worry wort, he flipping melts my heart. The way Manik worries about his Nandini. And the way Nandini still understands him, how she tell he is hurting even when he smiles at her. Their love, so rare this kind of love is.
I totally loved this chapter. You wrote it so well but then, you always write well :)
And now i don't have to wait for the next chapter..running running running.
Oh yeah, before that, I love you, a little extra love for writing this Manan story and giving us this amazing piece.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3
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