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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Neelambari-



PART 2

In Banglore
rey:anu,ansh m gng to office.will come back early n then we can go for shopping.
anu n ansh:ok dad.
rey:kaka,dono ka khyal rakhna..bahut naughty h both.
kaka:aap chinta mat kijiye..me dono ka ache se kyal rakhoonga.
rey:thanx kaka.
in the evening rey took them both for sight seeing n shopping.
rey:m totally tired..lets have some thing.
anu:muje bi bahut bhook lagi h.
rey:so kya khana h?
ansh:pizza
anu:icecream
ansh:no i want pizza
anu:icecream;
rey:bas..bas..lets go to the restaurant first..jinhe jo chahiye khareed lena ,k
both:double ok.
they enjoyed their food.
rey:m gng to the washroom.plzz stay here u both.dnt go anywhere.
both:k dad.
and rey went to washroom..when he returned back he found the table empty.
rey:anu-ansh..kaha gaye dono..may be washroom.
he waited for sometym.but there was no sign of the children.he checked the washroom n asked everyone present there but couldnt find them.he was totally worried now.he called swayam.
sw:hello rey
silence
sw:rey,r u there?
rey:sway..vo..
sw:rey wat happened?
rey:swayam..anu ansh..they ..they r missing.
sw:wattt?? rey wat happened rey?tell me in detail.
rey told swayam everything that happened today.
sw:rey u dnt worry,m coming u just stay there ok.
swayam hurried to the hotel(swayam is also there with rey for business deal).he found a totally shattered rey there.they both searched for children,but no result.swayaum informed the police n then with much difficulty took rey to home.
xxx.
A car stopped infront of a huge mansion n a beautiful girl came out from it.


(her dress)
she opened the door of the house n was abt to go inside thats when she heard a voice from back.
voice:Mumma..
the girl stopped in her track n turned back.there stood 2 beautiful little angels looking at her with their little eyes full of hope.(yes they r our ansh n anu)

anu:aap kriya h na?
girl:haan..lekin aap dono...😕
(yes the girl is our heroin kriya ghai)
the kids looked at each other with happiness n ran towards kriya n hugged her.kriya was totally confused by their gesture but she too hugged them back
ansh:mumma,finally we found u😃😃.
kriya:mummaa😲??
anu:haan mumma..hum aapke bache h..me Anu or ye Ansh.
kriya:(mind talk) mumma??lekin meri to abi tak shaadi bi nai hui..zaroor kuch galat faimi hui hogi donon ko.
kriya:teek h,lekin aap dono yaha kaise..
ansh:hmm..vo hum..hum dad ke sath restaurant pe the aur tab aapko dekh liya..n when u went to buy something in the nearby store we entered ur car n hid below the backseat.
(he said it with a winning smile.)
kriya(shocked)kyaaa..iska matlab..that ur dad dnt know it..
ansh:haan
kriya:ye aap logone teek nai kiya..he will be searching for u n will be so worried by now.
anu:haan ansh..mumma is right.
kriya:ek kam karte h..hum pahle andar chalte h n aap ke dad ko call karte h..
she took them inside n made them sit on the couch.
she asked them the no n dialed it.
xxx
Rey was totally shattered n is lying on the couch ,thats when his phone started ringing.rey looked at the phone n finding an unknown no he ignored it.
when it again started ringing swayam took the phone n walked away from rey n attended the call.
sw:hello
kr:hmm..hello Mr..uhmm
sw:Swayam Shikavat
kr:hello swayam,aapke dono bache anu n ansh ab mere pas h.
sw:hello..wat/..who r u?wat do u want?
kr:hey relax..they r safe here plzz come to this address.(n she tells the address)
sw:k..m coming.
xxx
kr:k bacho..i have informed ur dad..he will be here in some tym.now lets have something..kya pina pasand karenge aap.
anu:orange juice..
ansh:grape juice..
anu:nai orange😭
ansh:pinapple😡.
kriya:k.k..anu ke liye orange juice n ansh ko grape juice..teek h?
both:haan.
kriya kissed their forhead n went to make juice..she felt a special affection towards them.
later anu n ansh joined her..
ansh:mumma..why did u leave dad n us?we missed u a lot..
kriya felt bad for them.though she have her parents she was just like an orphan..her parents left the 8yr old kriya with her granny n went to Newyork.her granny brought her up n she always missed her parents love n care.so she understood their pain.
anu:n y did u cut his call when he was talking abt us..dnt u love us?
kr:ofcourse i love u both a lot..who told u ye sab joot.
ansh:Dad..
kr:ahaan..vo to ek bar bi call nai kiya in these years..aur kya kya joot kaha aapke dad ne?
(kriya was unintentionally playing along with the flow.for sumtym she felt like she is their mom).
anu:he told us that he tried many times to bring you back but u were not ready to come,
ansh:n he also said that u r an angry lady.choti choti baaton pe aapko gussa aati h or humesha dad ko blame karti h..
kr:wat nonsense..usse to me😡..by the way do u feel the same abt me that m like that😭(she asked making a sad innocent face)
anu n ansh hugged her tight..
anu:no mummy..aap to bahut pyari h..kissed her cheek.
ansh:muje pahle hi shark tha dad par that he is lying.
kr:aane do usse.how dare he lie to my children.i m gonna kill him for that..
ansh giggled at it.but anu..
anu:nai mumma..dnt kill dad..vo bahut ache h..aur vo bi apko bahut miss karte h.i want to live happily with my mumma n dad.(she said cutely)
kr:aww my baby.she took anu up in her arms n kissed her cheek n anu kissed kriya.
ansh:mumma,muje bi chahiye kiss.
kriya put anu down n bend down n kissed ansh n he kissed her back.
they went to the living room,sat on the couch drinking the juice..kriya was njoying the fullest with the kids thats when the bell rang.
kriya:lagta h ur dad is here.
she went ,opened the door n she stood there frozen.
xxx
precap
Baatcutter n linecutter in college

Note:i will update the next part only if i get gud responses for this..i m so lazzy that i always tries to find some reasons to not update😛

amazing...
luv it...
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sorry for the very late reply
i dont know how i missed the last update

but it was so cute and loving
i loved the update a lot

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