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Posted: 10 years ago
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...LoVeLy CoMpLeX... IN 2007 ,2 FEBRUARY,UIU COLLEGE,MUMBAI... Chatting with friends in a tea stall while drinking tea was the best thing for our group.. We are the Fab 5--MAAN,ABDUL,RUQAIYYA,SALIMA,ME!!!We're popular..so everybody knows us in the college and in the college tea stall.So 1 fine day,I was chatting with my group while drinking tea..We're laughing on something that's when my eyes caught a girl coming towards us...She was fair,her eyes like the depth of the ocean where everything gets dizzy..her hair like a deep forest where anyone can be lost..she was looking elegant in her white anarkali suit..I was lost at her when she was fixing her bag and books..Maan and others noticed me looking towards the girl..They started teasing me and I shooed them by saying-"Not so easy to impress me.." "OH REALLY JALAL?!" I was about to retort back I heard a sweet voice asking us--" Excuse me! Can you please help me to find the painting lab??I'm new here and not finding it..so pleasee help me!" she pleaded with a cute expression..I found saying-" Sure! Let's go!" I showed her the way..Fab 5 group signalled me-"ALL THE BEST!!"I rolled my eyes at them and went with the girl..."Phew! Thankz a lot..umm.." "JALAL KHAN!" I replied.. "Oh!thankz..Myself Jodha Singh! THanks for the help!" She passed me a oh-so-beautiful smile..I returned her smile by mine..."Bye!Hope we meet again!" I said foolishly.."YA! Bye!" And thus our first meeting came to an end... IN 2011,FEB 2, IN ART AND CREATIONAL GALLERY... I felt like banging my head.. I am Jalal khan and nothing is impossible for me... And I'm not being able to propose Jodha?? What the...I've been trying from our college..but failed...and now when we work together, I am not being able to confess now also... WHAT A LOVELY COMPLEX!!! I gritted my teeth..I got a golden chance to exhibit our creational paintings today to the viewers..I saw Jodha busy with her phone...And the exhibition was successful..And we got more proposals too.. So everyone was happy and so is Jodha.. But I determined today to confess my love today..by any hook and crook..I grabbed my Iphone and wrote the most important messege--"Jodha!I was trying to say you from our college days that..that I Love You!!" And before I understand anything I sent the msg to Jodha...After a few minutes, realization drawned upon me..What I have done! OMG! What if she misunderstands and broke our friendship?? No no no!I have to say sorry to her.. As thought so work.. I ran out from my cabin.. I was about to ran towards her cabin but I bumped into someone.. "ouch!!" screamed a girl and I recognised it's Jodha.. I looked at her horribly and she stared at me... Then she showed me her phone and said--"Jalal did you send this to me?" I looked at the msg horribly..."ye..yes...sorry Jodha if I hurt you.." " I thought you my best friend and you did this!" I was again about to say sorry but I got shocked as I heard her giggling..." Aree dumbo! You should say it long ago nah! Then we could date each other and know well...much more..Aww you looked so cute!" she said by pulling my cheeks...I smiled foolishly and asked " so is it a yes??" "NO!" I again got shocked.."BUT WHY?" " Cause I love you and we'll get married as soon as possible!" she bursted into laughing and I too joined her... AT PRESENT,2015,JK PALACE "Aree!Jalal! What are you doing?" Jodha protested as I swung her up and was twirling her... " Doing lovely dance with my lovely wife..." I said romantically as I was about to kiss My Jodha!! Jodha also closed her eyes to feel my kiss but suddenly the bedroom's door swung open-" Daaadd!" A 2 years girl screamed as she saw her Dad after a month!! "Heyy Riyaa!!" said I as I saw my daughter running towards me..She jumped to me and I took her to my arms..She kissed me and sweetly said-"I missed you shooo much Dad! Whel ( when) did you come?!" "Just now..aww Dad also missed his princess!" I kissed her as she threw her hands around my neck.. " oh ho! Dad agaya and mum ko bhul gaya?" said Jodha poutingly! "No mum! I am taling (taking) Dad's lovu (love).. You tool (took) befole (before) nah!" Jodha and I were dumbstruck at our princess..Then we together burst into laughing.. And we shared a group hug...Jodha whispered in my ears-" LOVELY COMPLEX eh?" and She and me bursted into laugh again and without understanding Riya also gave her innocent two-teeth wala laugh!!!...
Edited by ...rio... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jodha, my love

"Jalal, Jalal...wake up! I have to leave!" the woman prodded her husband, who was in a deep slumber. Jodha had been trying to wake him up since the past 20 minutes, yet he hadn't moved an inch. Jalal, on the other hand, was in no mood to get up. His wife's ever-sweet voice seemed like dagger to his ears and after many attempts from her side, he finally opened his eyes to look at her, "Jodha! Yeh kya! Not even letting me sleep on a Saturday! And why are you dressed for office?" "Hey Kanha, finally you woke up! Achcha, my boss has called me to office because there is some overseas client visiting..." "But...but...what about our lunch plan today?" She gave him a sweet smile, caressing his cheek, "I know hon, we had planned...but I risk getting fired if I don't report..." Gloom had descended on his face, "Achcha, tell me at least when you will return..." "Just before dinner time..." she replied ruefully. "Kya yaar, tumhare office wale...don't they have someone to romance on the weekends!" He was complaining like a kid and Jodha couldn't help but let out a laugh at his childishness, "Arre...we will spend time once I am back! How about we dine out!" "I have lost all mood..." the husband frowned. She smiled, he was cross with her, "Jalal, I will make it up to you some other time...but I need to go...I have prepared lunch for you...heat it up in the microwave oven before eating...and don't bother about the vessels, Zakira will come and clean them...And..." "Arre, bas bas!" he placed his hand on his wife's lips, "I understood...and I won't make a mess!" She gave an expression of mock relief, when her eyes flicked towards the wall clock "Baap re, I think I should leave now..." She proceeded to leave, when he caught her wrist. She turned around, "Hmm...ab kya?" "Mrs Jodha, aren't you forgetting something?" "Oh yes," she murmured. Leaning forward, she planted a small peck on his lips and left for work.

***********

"Uhh...shows on TV are so useless these days...nothing is captivating enough!" the man roused. A frown had descended on his face as he continued to surf channels. He was terribly missing his wife; both were at the mercy of her employers, who had single-handedly ruined their plans for the day. Aimlessness had begun setting in; he had nothing to do without her. He couldn't even leave the house to kill time; Zakira was supposed to come. Boredom had begun setting in, and there was little he could do except take out his frustration on the remote. Ultimately, he landed on a channel where a cooking show was on. "Food! Chalo at last found something worth watching!" The chef was preparing a traditional dish and was slowly using all the ingredients laid out in front of him. As the chef continued whisking the ingredients and cooked them, his mouth was watering. His eyes were affixed onto the screen as the dish was finally presented onto the plate, "Wow...that looks so yummy! I should definitely tell Jo to make this once!"

***********

It was nearly 2 pm, as the hungry man sat at the dining table to eat lunch. Stuffing a morsel into his mouth, he was still thinking about the dish he saw on the show, "It was so amazing...I really want to eat it...but Jo will be too tired...wait! Why don't I cook for her today? But what should I cook? I haven't made anything beyond Maggi noodles and tea...I'll check out some easy recipes online, and I should be sorted!"

After lunch, he began aggressively surfing the internet for potential recipes and after much contemplation, he finally settled on a dish which was not only easy but also something that Jodha would eat. "Perfect! Jo loves red sauce spaghetti! Let me check the ingredients...I think it's better to go and buy everything from the supermarket!" He took a print out of the recipe, took his car keys and left the house.

***********

"Chalo, I finally bought everything! Its almost 5! I better call her up!" He dialled her number and she picked it up after a few rings, "Jalal! Missing me kya?" "Aur nahi toh kya, my day seems wasted!" The wife chuckled, "Aww...don't worry! I should be home in another two hours! We will spend time after that!"

Jalal referred to the recipe, and began heating some oil in the pan. "Hmm...add chopped garlic." He chopped the garlic finely and added it to the pan. After sauting it, he added a host of other ingredients, making sure to look at the recipe at intervals to make sure he was going the right way. On adding chopped tomatoes, he allowed the pan to simmer. "Oh no! I forgot to put the spaghetti on!" He added the spaghetti sticks to a pot of water and put it on high flame. "Okay so far so good...I need to add the chilli flakes, oregano and salt to the sauce..." Following the recipe, he carefully added the ingredients and stirred the liquid on high flame.

The spaghetti had come to a boil and it was time to drain the water from it. He held the handle at the sides and picked up the pot, "Baap re! This is piping hot!" As per the recipe, he had readied a strainer by the drain rack. He poured the water out slowly at first and then steadily increased the flow, not anticipating the blast of hot steam that eventually scalded his hands. "Oh crap! It burns!" He put his hand under the stream of cold water, providing temporary relief. He wanted to keep his hand that way for longer, but his drive for surprising Jodha was far greater than his pain. Eventually, he shut the tap, and lifted the strainer to pour the spaghetti within the sauce. The cooling effect of the water had gone off and his hand began burning again. "This is too painful...I wonder how Jodha handles such things in the kitchen...doesn't she ever get burnt? I have never heard her complaining even once...anyway this is almost done...better keep this covered till she returns..."

***********

"I hope he was fine the entire day...I got that call also so suddenly...and I felt so terrible leaving him in the lurch like that...anyway, I will make up for it by taking him to dinner!" Jodha was finally relieved to be home, and was waiting to meet Jalal. She rang the doorbell, and he swiftly opened the door; a bright smile gracing his face, "Jodha!" He pulled her into a tight hug, while she also melted in his arms. "Jalal, I missed you so much...I am so sorry...I should have just..." "Shh...it's okay, I know it wasn't your fault...anyway I have a surprise for you."

He led her by her hand to the dining table, which was completely set up. There was the spaghetti and some wine for them to drink. "Shall we?" Jodha was pleasantly surprised; she was definitely not expecting dinner, "Jalal...did you make this? How?" "Hon, I wanted to give you a surprise...and don't ask how I made it...I just want you to have a good meal..." "Jalal, I love you too much..." she said by unknowingly twisting his scalded hand, while he yelled in pain, "Aaah!" His scream of pain was enough to worry the wife, "What happened? Are you alright?" He regained his composure and spoke up, "I just scalded my hand a bit...nothing ser..." the word serious' barely passed his mouth, when Jodha panicked. She picked up his hand and began stroking it, "Jalal, why did you have to do this? I mean getting yourself hurt wasn't worth it!" "Jodha! I would do anything for you! This is just a small mishap! I love you!" She kissed his palm with love, feeling calm. "I love you too...and I would love to taste what you have so lovingly made for me..."

The couple sat for dinner, and Jodha relished the spaghetti which Jalal made. She was really touched by his surprise, and he was more than happy to see the smile on her face. He could do anything to keep it alive and kicking, and that was what he had precisely done that day. The two spent quality time together and eventually fell asleep in each other's arms.

Edited by justlovetv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys i wrote this os very time back and thoght to participate b y posting here today

guys i ALWAYS used to think how did jodha live after akbar died the loss of most beloved must be heartening

Autumn leaves have shed winter had arrived but I still mourn for u and will always till my last breathe

Autumn season has gone winter has started .today the first snow fell of this season and I look towards the sky from our room's window. The snow fall drifts me back to my memory lane. i have a beautiful memory of this season and a worst memory which left me alone and devasted for whole life. I still remember the day 30 years had gone but I still remember the warmth I have shared with u the love making that made me feel like heaven.

30 years back on the start of winter first snow fall

Jalal-come on jaan plz let me make love to u see the first snow had fall and it is so cool let me make u feel warm jodha said jalal and moved towards her.

Jodha- no sehensha I have to read my favourite book prithviraj raso so now stop ur naughtiness.

Jalal-come on I am not going to leave u just like that and picked her in his strong masculine arms.

Jodha- plz sehensha let me go she struggled a lot but more I struggle he tightened his grip on me

Then he placed me on the bed gently and started kissing me madly and made love to me and I could just moan his name.

Then we slept peacefully in eavh other arms. When I got up that evening I found ur so heavenly smile when u were sleepind and I could just pull ur cheeks kiss u and admire u,

Fb ends

I still remember u used to love my open hairs and would do anything to make me smile then why did u left me alone like this 5 years back the start of winter took every joy and colour from my life and had taken u from me.

5years back

At the start of winter u were so ill and what the hakima spoke the word are still ringing in my ears that was the most painful words I have ever listened.

Jodha-panicking shehensha is fine na hakima sahiba plz speak ur silence is killing me.

Hakima- I am sorry mallika she spoke with hesitation and fearfully sehensha is no more

Jodha was shocked her world fell around he he left me left me forever and ran towards their hojra to jalal's body and told with rage sadly and complaining like a small child aapne humse waada kia thaa saath jeene marne ka humse bahuth prem karte the aap phir aab kya hua aapke pre ka aapke vachan wade ka aapke wade joothe aapke vachan joothe aap joothe aap humein yun akela chodke nahi jaasakte sehensha she cried and wailed a lot but he was not there to console her .the one who could not bear a single tear was the cause of her tears today but he could not do anything as he Was no more to support her love her console her. He was lying dead every body was trying to console her . the most dignified and their strong queen was broken.

Salim- ammi in a teary and broken tone spoke ammi abbu ke laash ko le jaane ka waqt hogaya hai aapse iltiza hai ki aap hat jayie.

Jodha- hum nahi jayenge hum sehensha ko chodke kahi nahi jayenege and she lost her consciousness.

1 hr later

She was standing on the terrace and watch his body going away she just could see him going away from him that too forever.

BG Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan yun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau

Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan kyun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau

Un binn kate naa raina
Unn binn aawe na ik pal chaina
Unn bin jeeun tto kaise main jeeu'n haay..

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

When you go when you leave
Then you take a little piece of me with you
There's a hole in my soul
Cause you take a little piece of me with you (x2)

Haan Naino ke dwaare aane ke waade baandhe
Aise bolo kaaahe
Chokhat pe dil ki aahat rakhi hai taako pe hai torey saaye

Unn binn unhe manaye
Unn bin kabhi jo unko rijhaaye
Unn bin chhale hai mora ye jiya

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Haan
Komal badi hai saansan ki dori
Roothe se bhi toot jaaye
Baawan tarah se jee ko manaaya
Khoje ajaunh tori raahe

Unn bin unhe main paaun
Unn bin unhe main garwa lagaaun
Unn bin unhe mora jee lage haay...

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Days went on and I refused to eat or take rest and only wanted to mourn for u but my son made me realise I have to live for u my love

Salim-ammi hum aapse iltizaa karte hai aap kab tak aisi ghumshum rahengi ammi ab aapko aage bhadna hoga.

Jodha-hum unke bina kuchch nahi hai hume daya karke akela chod do .

Salim-ammi aapko abbu keliye jeena hoga unke sapnon keliye ek aisa hindustaan jisme aman aur bhaichara charo or ho ammi aap mallika-e-hind hai Mariam makani hai kya aap abbu ko Jannat mein khush nahi dekhna chahti.

Jodha- salim hum aapke saath hai bete hum sehensha ki khwaisk ko awashya pura karenge

Fb ends

And from that day my days were filled with court affairs and night with ur memories. I thank god for giving me a son like salim he always tries to entertain me by music concerts folklores and I also smile fakely because I can never overcome the shock or stop mourning for u.for the world I am out of the shock but I know the day u left me the real jodha also left with u my life is full of sadness now. sometimes I feel I can just goo back to my youngster years and live again the memories with u but I cannot.pyaar sach mein bahut dard deta hai hamne isse saha hai lekin hume hamare mohabbat ne jeene ki wajeh bhi diya hai but I cannot stop mouring for u.AUTUMN LEAVES HAVE SHED WINTER HAS STARTED BUT I STILL MOURN FOR U EVEN AFTER 5 YEARS AND WILL ALWAYS TILL MY LAST BREATHE. Jodha stretched her hand to feel the snow when the snow fell on her hand she smiled a heartly smile after 5 years and looked towards the sky she could see her sehensha smiling at her and telling mallika-e-jalal I told u ur smile is the most beautiful thing in the whole world for me.a tear escaped from her eyes and she told very slowly I love u sehensha and will always. She walked towards the courtyard to attend the music concert arranged by her son to entertain her all she could do is smile fakely for him because she can never move on and the dignified mallika-e hind Mariam makani walked towards the concert arena.life was never easy for her,

She had lost every vody but her life tell us how once can emerge as a winner after losing this was a victory from loss true love never dies jodha was the heart of her people so was only the last queen to be called malika e hindustan

She in every sense was malika e jalal this story never ended still continue and will till eternity guys this was my old os I had renewed it a bit snd posted

QUOTE-mohabbat insaan ka daaman kabhi nahi chodti aapko jeene ki koi na koi wajeh de hi deti hai

Written by marshi/anshita


Edited by marshi - 10 years ago
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His True Love


Today is the most important day of jodha's life.like every girls she too waited for today.but,she couldn't understand her feelings.
"what happen to me..today is my wedding..but i feel something wrong..oh jodha..just relax..you overthink..now go and ready.."she thought to herself.
yes,she is going to marry because of her parents.also she too didn't reject the proposal.but she don't have any feelings toward the groom.also she dont have a boyfriend.she don't know much about him.even she didn't have interest about it.she is only 21 years old.she want to enjoy her life as a girls.with her best friend.normaly the bride is eagerly wait for her groom.but jodha,she is waiting for him.he is none other than jalal.her best childhood friend.but will he come?will he come to wish her.?will he come to bless her for happy married life?how could he do this.how could he see his dreamgirl marry someone else.how could he see his love marry someone else.how can he bear it.she is his one and only true love of his life.she is the his reason to live.yes,he is a son of a biggest businessmen.he have every thing without someone's love.his parents live in their business world.from childhood,they didnt have the time for their son.he felt loneliness of his life.but after met jodha,he laughed his heartout,cried his heartout,studied,travelled with her.they met in their prymery class.from then they did everything together.she was the light of his darck life.she was the reason behind his smile.also now,she is the reason but not for his smile,for his hot tears,for his pain.he cried,he cried his heartout,not only today,he cried from that day,the day when he heared about her marriage with someone else.he wanted to say to her about his feelings for her.but he didn't have a sthrenge to do that.he feared about her rejection.so now,he took a desision,its not to propose her but to say goodbye to her.not only to her,to the whole world.he stood up from the corner of the room and went near the dresser.he opened the locker and took a little bottle which is filled with sleeping phills.he was about to put them to his mouth but his phone inturrupt.he knew the caller.yes, she is waiting for him.but what to do.how can he go there.today is the first day he is going to lie her.also he wanted to hear her sweet voice for the last time of his life.so he disided to answer to the call.he took a long breath.
"h..hello.."he tried his best to hide his pain.
"jalal..what are you doing..don't you come..please come fast..I'm waiting for you.."she almost shouted at him.
"s..sorry..jodha..i..I'll not come today.."
hearing this jodha's eyes widened due to the shock.
"what..jalal..are drunk..please its not a joke ok.."
"no..no jodha..i can't come today..because..because im not well..i..i have fever..plzz..try to understand jo.."he somehow controlled his voice.
"ok..then I'll not go out from this room ok.."he shut his eyes tightly and bit his lowr lip tightly to hold his pain.
"please jo..try to understand.."he pleaded.
"ok..then I'll never talk to you..ok..bye"
this made his heart like a shattered vase.but still he controlled his voice.
"please jo..don't do this to me..please promise me..promise me that you will never angry with me..please jo.."this time his voice is sheken.he can't speek further.
after hear his voice jodha's heart shatterd.she worriedly asked
"jalal..are you ok na.."but she didnt get any reply from him.she again asked but he didnt reply.her heart felt unknown fear about him.without wasting any second she ran out from the room.everyone who came to the wedding shockingly watching her running out toward the car.her mother and sister to followed her shouting to her but she didn't stoped nor looked at them.she immediatly setteled herself in the car and drove fast to jalal's house.she very well knew that something wrong with jalal.she prayed to god for him every second.her cheek wet with tears.otherhand jalal is crying his heart out.he don't have any hopes to live.he felt like lost his everything.he took his phone and looked at its wallpaper.it is jodha's beautyful photo.he immediatly stood up and went near to the dresser.he took the bottle of sleeping phills and again looked at the photo.then he loudly said while crying
"i love you jodha..i don't want to live without you..if i didnt do this i will die from burst my heart.i cant bear this pain anymore..please dont angry with me..i love you more than anything...i love you.."saying this he was about to put them to his mouth but someone frocbly grabed it from his hand threw it on the ground.he shocked and looked at the person.he could see jodha with pool of tears.
"j..jodha..how did you come in?"
"why..don't you know that i have extra key of your room.."
her cheek and eyes are completly red due to the cry and anger.she grabed his coler and shook him shouting at him between her sob
"how dare you..you told na..that you love me..huh..u told na that you love me more than anything..ha..then how did u even think to do something like this..ha..answer me jalal..if i didn't come on time..what will happend..what will happen to me..did you want to hurt me..ha.."
"no..no..i can't hurt you...never.."he whispered.his cheek wet with tears.
"then..why did you think to leave me..ha..why.."
"because i can't hold this pain anymore...how can i see u with someone else..you are my love..how can i bear it..you are the only one who understand me more..you are the only one who gave love to me..i dont want lonliness again in my life.."he yelld.but his voice is sheken.
jodha lovingly looked at him and cupped his face from both of her hand and asked
"but..why didn't you tell me..about your feelings...ha.."he lawerd his head and said in law tone.
"i..i feared..i feared about your rejection.."jodha smiled through her tears and kissed hardly on his forehead.then ruffled his hair and said
"how can i reject my jalal.."he surprisingly looked at her and asked
"do you love me.."she blinked her teary eyes and nodded her head say to yes.then a wide smile flashed on his lip through his tears.she took him to her embrace.he cried his heartout.not for pain or hurt.but for happiness.she closed her eyes for feel his touch.
"i love you soo much jalal..i never tried to accpt this but today when i saw u try to leave me forever..i realized that you are the most important..and preciouse person in my life.."hearing this he broke the hug and cupped her face.
"i love you too..you are my life..you are he shine of my life.."they shared an eyelock and jodha immediatly hugged him very tightly.he kissed her head.finaly he won his true love...



~The end~
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*****Their Little Princess*****

"Stop the car, Jalal. RIGHT NOW." Jodha ordered.

"What happened?" Asked confused Jalal taking his car on left side of the road. And he found Jodha pointing out to something. "What?" He looked outside but found nothing which must have caused her to get so excited.

"Watermelons..." Jodha said pointing out at the huge mountain of watermelons. She got down from the car and almost ran towards it. Jalal couldn't help but smile at this childish streak of his wife.

"Come on now, help me to find out the biggest and greenest of them all, what are you waiting for?" Jodha asked Jalal to join her.

After ten minutes of search the duo settled for one big dark green watermelon. No matter how foolish he felt but Jalal had to admit that he liked this task because he always loved watching happy, smiling Jodha and if buying watermelon makes her happy then so be it.

"Bhaiyya, ye meetha toh hai naa?" Now that they had finalized their watermelon Jodha asked the hawker.

"Haan Didi, bohot meetha hai"

"Sach batana bhaiyya agar meetha nahi nikla toh?" She asked again to make sure.

"Haan Didi, meetha hi niklega..."

"Dekh lena, agar meetha nahi nikla toh hum vaapas karne aa jayenge..."

"Didi, ab maine kya andar jaake thodi naa dekha hai..."

Both Jalal and Jodha burst out laughing at the shopkeeper's irritated expressions.

"How funny it will be naa, Jalal...we can live inside a watermelon castle...Green walls, and red colored clay. Everywhere red and cold. You will be the King and I will be your Queen and the seeds will be soldiers..." And all of a sudden her voice dropped to a sad whisper, "But...we can't have our little Princess..."

"Jo, we have talked about this..." Jalal quickly paid the shopkeeper. Wrapping his arm around Jodha to calm her down as they moved toward their car. He put the watermelon on backseat of the car and then joined Jodha in front taking the wheel.

"Jalal, why you don't want to know?" Jodha asked him again. It had become her pet peeve now a days. They had been married for five years now and still childless. They had visited the doctors, done all possible tests and treatments and doctors had come to conclusion that they couldn't have a child of their own.

"I don't want one of us to live in a guilt, Jo...so I asked doctors not to tell us that is all, we already have done whatever was possible and in our hands." Jalal tried to explain for the nth time.

"But, I always dreamed of a child Jalal and you did too...Don't you want us to have a little Princess?" Jodha replied with a tinge of sadness in her voice.

"Of course, I do. Did you give a thought to adoption as I had suggested?" Jalal asked her as he started to drive again. "Give it a thought, Jo please. You promised you would."

"Ok. I will think about it..."

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And after that day every day Jodha would come up with her list of questions to Jalal.

"What if we could not give the child enough time? We both are working..." She said one day.

"Do you know when the adopted child comes to know that he or she adopted when they grow up, they may undergo trauma sometimes..." She said on the other.

"We will adopt older child, Jodha. I guess that will settle many things." Jalal answered her.

"I know Jo, you are nervous about this decision and believe me I am nervous too..." Jalal assured embracing her closer as they laid down one Saturday night, talking. "But I think we should not delay any further, tomorrow is Sunday and we are going to a children's shelter. I have done all the background check and they will be happy to let us adopt one of the children there..."

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At children's shelter:

Jalal and Jodha sat across the strict looking Matron of the children's shelter who gave them details about the shelter and the legal formalities they had to complete.

"Do you want to adopt a girl or a boy? Many people want a boy and if you want a less than year old then you have to wait..." The matron asked.

"No...We would like to adopt a girl...and she should be older enough to understand that we are not her real parents but have adopted her." Jodha explained to the matron.

"Ok. Do you want a fair and good looking girl?"

They felt like they had come to some shopping place. Jodha tried to get up from there but Jalal held her hand firmly making her sit down.

"We don't have any conditions..." He said firmly.

"Ok then I would suggest a girl...Radha. She is eight year old and a very disciplined and active one, kind of eldest here. No one adopts children that old"

Radha...Jodha thought about the name. Umm kind of a common name and not at all like all the fancy names they had decided for their daughter.

"We would like to meet her..." Jodha approved.

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"May I come in Madam?" A little voice came from the entrance and both Jodha and Jalal turned around to look at the owner of the voice.

There she stood, a little girl of eight dressed in a simple but clean dress. Her hair tied up in ponytail. She had a common look, her only distinctive feature was her big brown eyes which were full of innocence.

"Come in Radha, say hello to uncle and aunty. They have come to take you to their home..."

Little Radha wished them with a pleasant smile. It looked like the "Take you home" bit did not surprise her much. Maybe she was used to this Jodha thought.

"I will have a separate room there?" Radha asked turning towards Jodha.

"Yes, you will and plenty of toys too..."

"But I like books more..."

"We can arrange that too..."

"Will I be going now?"

"Yes."

"I will come back with my things then..."

And that was it. Both Jalal and Jodha came back home that day as parents along with their adopted daughter, after completing the legal formalities.

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And then everyday Jodha would try something to make Radha feel comfortable to make her feel like home and night would be the reporting time when Jalal would have to listen to every little detail.

"Jo, I know you are trying to make her comfortable but she needs time to accept us and we also need time to understand her...that is all. Believe me you would be the best mother for our daughter..." Jalal assured her one night as he listened to his wife's various attempts which were quite not working according to her.

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"Where is Radha?" Jalal asked as he sat down for dinner one evening.

"She went to Riyaa's birthday party...her new friend who lives just next door" Jodha informed him happily. And they started their dinner chatting about their day. The doorbell rang, Jodha had already finished so she went to answer the door.

"Hey dear, so how was the party?" She asked Radha, guiding her towards the dining table.

"It was nice, Mom..." Radha stuttered a bit at 'Mom'. "Good evening, Dad..." She stuttered again which did not go unnoticed by Jodha and Jalal. "I will come back with my homework. I have to finish it today."

Jalal watched Radha struggling with a sum as Jodha cleaned out the table.

"I know an easier way to solve it. Here let me..." And father daughter duo started solving the sum together. Jodha watched them engrossed at their task.

They were getting there slowly... "Jalal was right, time is all we need..."

"It's much easier this way, thanks..." Radha said with happiness as Jalal smiled in return.

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"We will celebrate her birthday..." Jodha came up with her new plan.

"But we don't know her real birthdate..."

"Arre didn't that matron tell us that when she was brought to the shelter she was just 3-4 days old baby."

"Do you think she will be happy?" Jalal asked still not sure about this party adventure.

"Of course, all children love to celebrate their birthday."

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Exhausted mother daughter duo slumped on the lavish sofa and Jalal knew that both of them were shopping non-stop for whole day. They had taken this birthday celebration very much seriously. "What is with girls and shopping?" He thought as he put his newspaper aside and went to kitchen to get some cold drink for them.

"Had fun?" He asked as he returned back to them.

"Dad, do you want to see what me and Mom have brought?" Their eight year old said with delight jumping up and down with excitement, all her exhaustion a moment before was nowhere to be seen.

Both Jalal and Jodha were awestruck with those words. Both of them sat in silence for a moment letting the words sink in. For the first time she had called them Mom and Dad with such an ease. Of course they were trying that since long time but it was always a bit hesitance before she called them so. But today it came from her heart. Both of them looked at each other with happiness and their eyes locked speaking the unspoken language.

"Do you like it?" Radha demanded Jalal's attention flashing the new fairy pink dress in front of his eyes.

"It is beautiful. Won't you try it now and show me?"

"Yes" Radha agreed and ran to her room to change into her new dress.

"You know we must have tried at least twenty dresses, before finalizing that one so you better praise it to the skies..." Jodha warned him laughing.

"Now that sounds like your daughter...Don't worry Jo, you have trained me well."

"Yes...Wait a second what did you say?" Jodha asked him in mock anger.

"Nothing. I guess, I should be thanking god that at least now you will spare me from the shopping torture as you have found an able shopping companion for yourself" Jalal replied embracing her.

"What? Shopping with me is a torture for you?" Jodha punched him softly on chest. "Did you hear what Radha said?" She asked snuggling to him closer.

"Hmm...Maybe we were not there to hear our daughter's first words Jo, but now we know how it must have felt..."

***********************

"We are going to Mom's place..." Jodha declared. It was summer vacation for Radha so they had decided to go somewhere out of station.

"Mom's place means Grandma's? The one with whom Mom talks at least for an hour everyday on phone?" Radha asked her father.

"Yes dear, that one..." Jalal sighed. "And don't be surprised if your Grandma knows every small detail about you...you know whom to blame" And both of them started laughing.

"Having fun at my expense you two..." Jodha questioned her hands on her waist.

"No, Mom we were just discussing, it will be so much fun... Dad said he will drive us to Grandma's place..."

"Really Jalal? I thought you would say that you won't come at all. Thanks" Jodha hugged her helpless husband happily as Radha continued to laugh at her adorable parents.

***********************

Jalal was driving as promised.

"Mom...look out..." Radha pointed outside from the backseat of car.

"Stop the car, Jalal. RIGHT NOW." Jodha ordered.

"Stop the car, Dad." Radha too joined her mother.

"What is it this time? Watermelons again?" Jalal sighed looking at the huge mountain of watermelons stacked up at roadside.

Reluctantly Jalal joined the mother and daughter to help them choosing the greenest and biggest watermelon from the heap. After sometime the trio finalized their choice.

"Bhaiyya, ye meetha toh hai naa?" Radha was the one asking question.

"Haan Beta, bohot meetha hai"

"Sach batana bhaiyya agar meetha nahi nikla toh?" Her mother asked just to make sure.

"Haan Bhabhijee, meetha hi niklega..."

"Dekh lena agar meetha nahi nikla toh hum vaapas karne aa jayenge..." Radha replied pouting her lips very cutely.

"Beta, ab maine kya andar jaake thodi naa dekha hai..."

And Radha squealed with delight with that idea. "Mamma...how funny it will be naa...we can live inside a watermelon castle...Green walls, and red colored clay. Everywhere red and cold. Dad will be the King and you will be his queen and the seeds will be soldiers...and I will be your little princess..."

Both Jalal and Jodha went on their knees in front of their delighted daughter hugging her tight. "Yes, sweetheart..." Jodha uttered softly. "It would be such a fun..." Jalal completed her sentence.

Both of them couldn't help but remember last time they had bought a watermelon. It felt like life had completed a circle, and they were at the same place again. But today was a different day altogether. Today they were a complete family, finally they had found Their Little Princess.

***********************

PS: Based on a vivid memory of something that I had read years back and I don't remember where. It touched my heart then and hope you all would like it too.

PPS: Posting comments is not allowed on this thread so save them for later when I will post it in a separate thread...😳

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*MEET MY FAMILY* My thesis statement will either make u laugh or roll u r eyes."MY FAMILY IS COMPLETELY &UTTERLY INSANE".Your'e probably thinking "Yeah right whose family is not crazy?"ok I got u guys r confused let me tell u in detail why my family is crazy.It's really crazy I tell u guys.I have been dealing with these guys from past 5yrs.oh I was blabbering quite sometime with out introducing me,I m Jodha singh oops...soory Mrs.JODHA JALAL KHAN,wife of Mr.Crazy JALAL KHAN,owner of Khan industries and mother of 2 cute lil imp's AAYAN (3)&AASMAA.(1 1/2).Firstly let me tell u about my beloved hubby,who was called as Angry youngman by his and as cunning shrewd by his rivals,well they don't know about Mr.crazy JK.How can any1forget their 1st meeting.Infact I still remember when we 1st met with each other.It was lunch break,I was chatting&laughing with my frnds.But don't know from where I saw a guy running towards me followed by some goons.I was too shocked what was happening infront of me.That guy came towards me and held my hand and started to run,without giving any 2nd thought I ran along with him to university grounds like a lady Milka singh .He suddenly turned me front & now I was facing those goons who kept their knives on my throat,without thinking anything I just screamed "MAMMA"and started 2 cry.That guy came forward &gave some money 2 those goons and turned 2 me."Hey r u alright,actually it was a dare, beautiful"he said with a mischievous smirk.It took me some seconds to realise what happened and without further thinking I gave a tight slap on his face and left from there crying.OMG it was a breaking news nxt minute that Mr.Popular got a slap .If u guys guess, that guy is none other than Mr.crazy.But what an irony I fell for him head over heels,and married him and now I m having 2 beautiful imp's as our symbol of love.Ahh!how can I forget my delivery experience ,it was totally crazy bcz of Mr.crazy,I was 9 months pregnant with my son AAYAN,yeah Jalal consider's him as gods gift ,that 's why he named him Aayan.ok coming back,I was 9 months pregnant,and one day I suddenly got labour ,but all thanks 2 Abdul bhai&Salima who took me 2 hospital,wondering where my husband was,actually he fainted seeing me in labour even in that much pain I just couldn't help but laugh at my hubby,who took care of me all these months but when I need him most he was in unconscious state.For world he may b a arrogant&rude man but for me ,he was the craziest guy I have ever met and I m so blessed 2 have him as my partner.Now let me introduce my son,DADA'S BUDDY Aayaan,he's a carbon copy of me but he inherited those crazy traits from his dada.He's a gr8 animal lover ,generally People make dogs&cats as their pets,but my son was unique ,u guys don't believe my Aayan's pet is a frog,ewwh...let me tell u how he get that stupid frog.one day the trio was watching animal planet and they saw a slogan "SAVE ANIMALS".My Aayan one evening after playing with his frnd came back 2 home and gave me his waterbottle.I heard some sound and movements in the bottle,and I called Jalal for help.when Jalal opened the bottle a frog jumped from the bottle on the floor and I jumped on Jalal.My always cool , attitude son came and very lovingly kept that frog in aquarium.Aww...I know that was awful.But I can't refuse my Aayan's demand so I let that frog 2 stay in aquarium along with my fishes.If u guys r raising a frog as pet ,if u want name for it plz do feel free for asking name for it, my husband Mr.crazy will help u.By the way I forgot 2 tell that these guys named that frog as SLIMY.ok then, Not but not least let me introduce my sweet daughter,AASMAA,yes she was dada's precious &bhaiya's lil doll,a bundle of energy and a fighter by birth. ,she was really hyper active from the stage of foetus,aww...I remebered on delivery day,after taking Aasmaa from womb she didn't cry ,we all were worried for her.The doctor continously hit on her bums,after few sec she started 2 cry and doctor was busy in cutting the umbilical cord,then my phulan devi just kicked on his****oh no that doctor lost his balance and fall down and the scissors in his had hit the nurse,the nurse who was having an injection in her hand injected it 2 other nurse and after 2 min evrything was messed,while my princess was smiling there 2 which we couldn't help but smile. "CRAZY...FUNNY...STUBBORN...this is my family.well I have come 2 conclusion that I shouldn't really call my family crazy bcz I m just like them.I never realized how much I like them untill I told u guys and how much I love all these lil oddities &weird habits and that there not just their weird habits they were mine 2.I never realized how much I love these guys r my family till now&that I should thank god for everyday I get 2 spend with them.after all they are my life."MERI BIWI HAI,MERI MAMA,NAI MELI MAMA".Oh! no, should go now orelse who loves Jodha most war will never end,so bye bye,take care. *******************
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