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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: sweetshre
Awesome part...!
rd kitna darta h sanyu se 😉 lolz
lets c rd kya karta h sanyu se confess karwane k liye 😛
continue soon
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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.
Awwsssmmm tammy di <3
Finally You unveiled thats Sanyukta is in luv :)
Wow.. Luv them.. <3
Both r great actors :D
Hilarious update.. <3
Randhir is on a mission to make her confess..^_^
Good going ^_^
Thanks for Pm <3
And My like button will not work often as I'm frm my mobile :(
Post the next soonish :)
Waiting...

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Thank you So much chandu
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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
Maza aa gaya...😆
Amazing update👏
Do update next soon..
I can't bear this torture of waiting for updates of ur other works like crazy stalker, my dark lover etc etc..😭😕
Do update them soon..
It looks like u r very regular with this story.. I'm luving this track.. Keep it up..
Do update next ASAP..

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vl update asap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

just luved it :)

thnx for regular updates :) n pm

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: priya_31
just luved it :)
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thnx for regular updates :) n pm

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Tamanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Banner credits-Anu😊

~Chapter 13~

The whole gang came from their trip ... Randhir had a different smile on his face as the hopes became alive in his heart of getting his love,his sanyukta in his life

The whole gang reached homes in afternoon,so they thought to bunk the clases for the day and morover they were too tiered to go to collage and do study ... So they thought to do rest at home itself ...

In evening,when randhir was standing outside building,he saw sanyukta coming towards building ... She went towards lift,randhir too followed her
She entered in lift and to randhir's good luck as well as sanyukt's badluck,there was no one inside lift except them 😉

She was just standing near gate of the lift as she was not able stand with randhir alone in lift 😆 ... Randhir moved closer to her,she moved back untill her back hit wall of lift

S- Randhir ... What ... happened ... to you ... why are you ... coming towards me

Randhir pressed the button of lift for top floor

R- Nothing yaar ... Wo actually i wanted to talk to you about us

S- What us? ... And why did you ... Why did you pressed lift's button

She was stammering due to their proximity ... Randhir again pressed the button as the lift was about to reach top floor ... This time he presses the button for ground floor and kept his other hand on wall of lift just above her face moving closer to her

S- Dekho randhir ... tum ye theek nahi kar rahe ... The results of this would be really bad

R- I dont care about the results ... i just want to live this movement sweet heart

S- Randhir please let me go

He was looking towards her face,which was sweating in month of feb and her eyes,which were looking everywhere except his face ... But he his mind was fully working too ... So he pressed the button of lift again

R- No ... firstly tell me what you feel about me

S- Randhir you are ... You are doing wrong ...

R- Aur jo tum kar rahi ho wo thekk hai?? Secratly keeping me your heart

Sanyukta who was not looking at him looked at his face in horror ... he smirked at his own shamless words and her changed expressions

He moved his hand near her face and wiped the whole sweat from her face making her close her eyes ...he kept staring her scared face whick made him forget about the world world and about lift button too ... The lift stopped on ground floor ... Sanyukta hurridely went out of lift after pushing him ...

Randhir kept looking at her going towards stairs ... She went by stairs just to avoid him

Randhir hurridely entered inside lift and presses the button for their floor ... He kept standing near his home's door and kept waiting for her to come towarards her home and hurridely went inside closing the door ... Randhir smiled at her

At night, Randhir was not able to sleep properly ... It was too late so everyone was sleeping ... He woke up and went towards sanyukta's balcony and climbed inside her room

She was sleeping peacfully ... He went near her and looked at her face carefully... There were a few lines of stress on her forhead ... He put his hand on her forhead and she smiled at little in her sleep making the lines on her forhead go away ... Randhir smiled at his effect on her even in sleep

He was about to go,but a dairy caught his sight ... He picked it and looked at its first page carefully ... It seemed to be her personal dairy ... He quicly closed it as its bad habit to read someone's personal dairy ... But his heart ordered him to keep his principles aside and read the dairy

He fastly went out of he room holding her dairy in his hands ... He rushed towards market ... He was searching for some shop where he could get its photocopy as he didnt wanted sanyukta to find out that the dairy is missing

After walking alot,At last he found a photostate shop where he get her copy photocopied ...he went through balcony again and kept her dairy back on its place

So,next part will reveal everything ... Right??
Umm ... May be
Now press like & comment for this part 🤗

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago