||The Melody of a Broken Heart|| A NiRaj Fiction*Chapter 1-Page 7*19/4

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"Main Aarti hoon..."

"Aap mere pyaar ke laayak nahi hai..."

"I just hate Viraj Singh Rathore!"

"Aapko lagta hai ki main aapse shaadi karungi?"

All these words kept repeating themselves in his head, as he walked blindly on the middle of the road. He couldn't believe that the girl he loved was married... his love... maybe not his anymore. Maybe she was never meant to be his. Maybe love was never meant to his...

As he kept walking, he never realized that it was actually raining... and he was drenched from head too foot. But he was actually not aware of it... he was actually not aware of anything except for the fact that he lost everything.

Love... Life... Meaning... everything was over.

And suddenly everything went blank and dark. All he could remember was her face, her smile, her eyes...

"Miss Nisha..." was all he said, before he sunk to the ground.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello NiRajians, My Dear Cousins!
For those who don't know me, I'm Niru, a die-hard NiRaj and Viraj fan!
Well... this is my 1st NiRaj FF, and I finally got time to post it!
Do give it a chance.
Open to suggestions and criticism.

love,
Niru
😊
Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 10 years ago
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INDEX
Prologue - 1st post
Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 10 years ago
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Heyyy!
Plz continue soon..
The memories of that epi came rushing back! Nice start!
VSR<3
Love him so much!
Edited by nirajfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey hi dear...pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An another story from you

Have no idea about this serial or the couple

I am reading this because i like to read your stories

Have no time to find out more about the serial as my exams are nearing

Nice prologue,update soon

jiya:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Niru di! This was really really very good! This was seriously one of the finest pieces of writing I have read in this forum!! You seriously have to continue this!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just loved it! Has Viru met with an accident? I love how you left it in suspense. Update the first chapter soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one niru.. cont soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice proloug
Loved it

Wtng for updates
Do update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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