My first Sandhir OS - Together At Last

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Mansi Vatwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow this is really great!! Luved it especially the ending 😆

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-Mrdodokk-

@-Mrdodokk-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful os Shivi👏

Ending was Blissful...

You should write more often👍🏼...

Love❤️

Harshita

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey Shivi..

Wow... Neatly penned...

Simple and neat story...

Nice concept!!

Ur banner is too gud :-)

Keep writing

Luv

Chandu

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Anjali

@AnjaliAnand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wonderful OS Shivi 😛
Loved it 😊
Awesome banner 😳
Keep writing
Luv u my little sis 🤗

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Oh my effin' Lord!!
Samosa what is this re??
A flawless piece of brilliance with emotions oozing from every word... Tremendously splendid! Good job done Samosa!
This being your first OS is hard to believe. You are kidding right??
Ah! A bit of push can do wonders and here you have provided the perfect example of it. Just fantastic re!
Randhir's remorse is beautifully penned down. The way in which you have described him being guilt ridden for prioritizing his mammoth ego is commendable.
Even though it took 5 long years, but I'm glad that we got SanDhir in the end.
In the beginning I had thought that maybe we'll be getting a sad ending but then miracles happen and tnis is it!
Keep writing more Samosa!

Regards
Keya

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