IS DIS LOVE?? a new sanhir ss

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Posted: 10 years ago
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pt 1

pt 2

pt3(updated)


















CHARACTER SKETCH
sanyukta aggrawal-a 22 year old,talented lady.wid gr8 fashion designing skills...keen 2 know d meaning of love...lives in delhi
anju&kishore-parents of sanyu..open minded and luvs dere daughter a lot...
randhir singh shekhawat-a casonova , do not believe in love , lives wid his father in mumbai..just graduated...girls drool over him
harsh-rd dad , owner of shekhawat fashion industry
PROLOGUE
pyar, love, ashiqui ye sare words to hum roj hi sunte hai..par humme se kitne hai jo jo ye jante hai ki pyar exactly hai kya. koi to love @ 1st sight mein manta hai..aur koi pyar ko jankar v nahi janta...kya yahi pyar hai..is dis love?

So here goes the 1st part of my ss " IS THIS LOVE ?"
By : POOJA SINHA

(Delhi, Aggrawal house)
A beautiful girl dressed in an angelic white gown was standing at church waiting 4 her prince charming...there comes a prince of her dream...dressed in perfect sherwani with heavy "shehra" (BG tone -a soft romantic song...)
the girl(in mind):maine to gown pehna hai...mera prince charming sherwani mein kyu?
The boy was steeping forward 2 d girl...n girl's heart beat was increasing...den suddenly her sight was turning blurred and heavy voices of UTH BETA ...SANYU UTH... begins 2 come
Girl: mera prince charming mujhe beta kyu bula raha hai...all of a sudden a jug of water was splashed on her n she wakes up wid a jolt...
Girl: ahhh...mumma aap ho ..aur ye kya hai apne mujh par pani kyu pheka?
Anju:pani nahi dalti to kya karti...kab se sanyu uth sanyu uth chila rahi thi..aur tu ..tu to apne prince charming ke sapne mein khoyi thi...waise kisko dekh rahi thi sapno mein haan?
Sanyu:mera prince charming...uski shakal v kaha dekhne di apne..
Anju:ab maine kya kiya?
Sanyu: kya kiya...wo meri tarf aa hi raha tha aur apne ..apne mujh par JALVARSHA kar di
Anju:ohhh sorry bachha ..achch a chal bata na kya dekha tune sapne mein
Sanyu:sapne mein..main thi..ak pyare se white gown mein..church k bahar khadi thi..ek pyari si dhun baj rahi thi...aur tab mera prince charming ata hai ek SHERWANI mein..can u believe it SHERWANI mein..yahan main gown mein hoon to use v to suit woot mein hona tha..
Anju ( controlling her laughter) : kya Jodi hai ek gown mein ...to dusra sherwani mein
Sanyu: maaa...aap has rahe ho ye to tension wali baat hai...mujhme aur mere prince charming mein itna bura synchronization.. kahi sachem mein aisa hua to..
Anju:are beta ..tu itna kya tension le rahi hai...it was just a dream
Sanyu:par maa apne hi to kaha tha k subah k sapne sach hote hain..aisa hua to
Anju:beta agar sach hua v to kya...jodiyan to upar banti hai..aur waise v pyar mein dressing nahi dil milne chahiye
Sanyu: par maa koi agar humse itna different ho..agar hamare choices itne alag ho to pyar kaise hoga...apne to kaha tha ki pyar do similar logo mein hota hai
Anju: ab main kya koi love guru hoon..jo v bolungi sahi hi hoga
Sanyu:matlab?
Anju: matlab pyar to kabhi v kisi se v ho sakta hai...kisi ko ekdum perfect bande se to kisi ko bilkul imperfect bande se..
Mean while kishore shouts anju..anju kaha ho...meri tie nahi mil rahi
Anju: haaan aayi..main jati hoon ..ab chal bahut ho gayi pyar bhari batein ..jaldi se fresh hoja aur breakfast k liye niche aa jana...anju was going out but stops in mid and turns sanyu who was lost in her own world
Anju: beta itna soch mat..pyar soch kar nahi hota..aur haan jaldi se uthke niche aa..papa breakfast k liye wait kar rahe honge
Sanyu: haan mumma aa rahi hoon..
Sanyu{in mind} : kya sachem aisa hota hai..kya shiv ji pyar kitna confusinf hai..mujhe kab pyar hoag aur kis se ...aur agar pyar hua aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala to
Mean while anju shouts :SANYUUU..BETA bed se uthi v ya nahi
Sanyu: han aa rahi hoon...n rushes 2wards d washroom

So here I finally post my 1st part ...do read it and comment ur views..really need it ..its my 1st ever public work...ooops sorry precap to batana bhul hi gayi
PRECAP::: "RANDHIR'S POV OF LOVE"😊


NEXT PART K LIYE I WUD LIKE 2 HAVE GUD REPLIES...😛..PLZ





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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
hayeee...a vei cute story ...plzzz continue nd pm me the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice story
Loved first part

Really it was awsme

Sayu n her dream land


Continue soon
Wtng


Pm me for sure

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey nice start dear. prologue seems interesting. do continue soon. pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a ton guys...wil post d nxt part soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IS THIS LOVE??

PART 2

BY:POOJA SINHA

MUMBAI(SHEKHAWAT MANSION)

A Handsome hunk was resting his perfect body under the blanket...suddenly his cell starts buzzing with his ringtone...ringing again n again...even after almost 10 consecutive ringings, sleeping star was not ready 2 open his eyes...after almost an hour another guy of the same age comes 2 his room..and starts screaming..Randhir...Randhir ..uth na yaar..but our sleeping star was giving no response 2 him..finding no other option...the guy splash a jug of water upon him and he wakes up with a jolt...

RD: What the...ye kya tha parth??

Parth(Rd's best friend , totally different from him, n d only 1 person who can shout at rd,gr8 looking, responsible..a true well wisher of rd) :rd pani aur kya

Rd:ha ha ha...very funny..n makes n irritated face..

Parth:sorry yar, agar tujhpe ye bemausam barsat nahi karta to tu to KUMBHAKARAN ko v beat kar deta sone mein...

Rd:tu to aise bol raha hai ki main rat se so raha tha aur abhi din k barah baj rahe hai...

Parth:exactly...dumbo kahi ka

Rd:kya 12 baj gaye...tune mujhe uthaya kyu nahi...tujhe pata tha na ki aaj meri aur shubhra ki date thi?

Parth:subhra nahi...shruti..tu itni gfs banata hi kyu hai jab tujhe unke naam tak nahi yaad rehta

Rd:haa haa wahi shruti..ab sari ladkiyon k naam itne similar hote hai to, whats my fault in it

Parth:haa haa teri kya galti hai...bhale hi tu har hafte apni gf change karta hai..par isme teri kya gati hai..itni ladkiyon k emotions se khelta hai..isme v teri koi gati nahi hai

Rd:dude aaj pravachan sunkar aaya hai kya..itna kya gyan de raha hai..aur tu kya chahta hai main v teri tarah ban jayun..sorry bro but I cant b SATA SAVITARA type..

Parth: I'm not saying that tu mere jaisa ban jaye..par kabhi to serious hoja..duniya bhar ki ladkiyon ko patata hai,college ki v sari ladkiyan teri deewani thi..but tu mujhe seriously bol ki tune kisi ek se v pyaar kiya hai..??

Rd:pyaar huh..ye pyar vyar k chakkar mein mujhe nahi panda..mein aise hi thik hun...acchi khaasi life hai...pyar vyar karke romeo nahi banna mujhe..

Parth: ye to tu abhi keh raha hai..jab pyar hoga tab puchunga tujhse..

Rd:pyar aur mujhe..aise koi ladki hi nahi hai jissse main pyar karne lagu..waise mujhe to sachme ajeeb lagta hai kaise koi pyaar k naam pe din bhar I love u ,I love u kehte rehta hai..rose,chocolates aur pata nahi kya kya ...love thing is just not made 4 me...

Parth:par rd..

Parth was intrupped due 2 sudden buzzing of rd's cell flashing shruti

Rd:oh shit..teri is pyar vyar k chakkar mein I just forgot about my date..i can challenge u abhi call uthate hi bolegi..what is this baby..kabse call kar rahi hoon..tumne mere gd mrng ka reply nahi kya..tum bhul gaye na hamari date..r u dating sm1 else..bla bla bla..aur phone katne se pehle I love u baby..imitating girl's tone..

Then rd picks up the call n puts d phone on speaker..

Shruti: ..what is this baby..kabse call kar rahi hoon..tumne mere gd mrng ka reply nahi kya..tum bhul gaye na hamari date..r u dating sm1 else..bolo na

Rd give parth a I TOLD U WALA LOOK

RD:Kya shruti..chill I told u be4 also don't expect such mushy things from me...don't u remember or don't wanna remember.. follow my conditions or else it's a break up.. ya I was sleeping..will meet u after an hour..

Shruti: sorry baby..wo I was little worried na..dont talk about d break up..will wait 4 u @ CAFETERIA..I LUV U BABY..

Rd:ya bye now..

Rd:dekha sari ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hai ...no 1 is different..khair ab main fresh ho jata hoon..tu yahi wait kar..

N rd leaves the room 2 take a shower

Meanwhile

Parth{in mind} : God please iski life mein 1 aisi ladki ko vej do jo ise pyar karna sikhaye..koi aisa jise milne k baad ise usme kuch to different dikhe..jise dekhke iska dil puchhne pe majbur ho jaye..Is this love??

PRECAP: SANDHIR'S FIRST CONVO..😛


THANKS 2 ALL DOS WHO READ D LAST PT..DO REPLY IF U LIKE IT...REPLIES DEKHKE ACHCHA LAGTA HAI YAAR...HOPE U LIKE IT

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update

Loved it to the core

Rd a Casanova
He plays with girls emtns

He don't believe in love
Parth tried to make him understand
Bt he's not that easy to Handel

Precap exciting

Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IS THIS LOVE??

BY: POOJA SIN HA
Part 3

Few days pass in jiff for both rd and sanyu...for rd the days passed in changng gfs...n for sanyu days used 2 start wit thu8 of
love...n ended in d tho8 of love only...apart from bieng in love with the feeling of love...there was 1 more thing that she used 2 love..
n that was her dream of being gr8 fashion designer..

Aggrawal House

(@night..dinner table)

kishore(ki) : arey anju..jaldi kro na..bht bhook lagi hai
anju : haaa...bs 2 min..laa rai hoon.
ki : kya kbse 2 min 2 min kr rai ho..tumhare 2 min aadhe ghante se chal rae hai...jaldi kro na..aur ha sanyu v niche nai aayi ab tk
chal kya raha hai iss ghar mein
anju: ji bs do min ...sb pata chal jayega
ki : kya pata chal jayega..offo accha thik hai jaldi kro..
(after few minutes..sanyu comes from d kitchen with a bowl of gulaab jamuns in her hand..n anju with other dishes)
sanyu (screams in his ears) : papa ..surprise
ki : wow..gulaab jamun...la de de de...ise dekh k to meri bhook double ho gayi( he takes d bowl from her hand n starts eatng one by

one)..then looks at anju..anju gives him a blank look
ki (with a puppy face): nai khata hun..hata isse yaha se
anju: ji aap kha skte ho..issme sugar free dala hai sanyu ne..
ki : sachi?? mtlb tum gussa nai karogi mai khau to
anju : ha baba nai gussa karugi
ki : grabbing d bowl..waw..sanyu bht achche bane hai
sanyu : papa sachi mein?? mtlb mumma se v achche??
ki : na baba na..meri biwi se achcha to nai bana skta koi..wo to bst hai..pr ye 2nd bst hai
anju(blushes) : kya ji aap v
ki : oye hoye..anju aise sharmaogi to mera pet to aise si bhar jayega
anju hits him with her hand..n points 2wards sanyu
sanyu who was witnessng all dis dreamngly( in mind) : kita pyaar krte hai mumma papa ek dusre se..meri life mein pata nai kb aayega ye pyaar..kbi aayega v ya nai..( her trance get brokn with anju's voice)
anju : ji bs kijiye..kya srf gulab jamun kha k hi pet bharna hai.
ki: ummmh..anju aaj mt roko na ... kl double round maar luga field k.are ha beta sanyu aaj tune gulaab jamun banaya ..chal mang kya mangna hai
sanyu: nai papa..maine to bs yu hi..
ki: sb janta hu..ab bata kya chahiye
sanyu : wo papa..aapko pata hai na mujhe fashion dsng k liye ek saal k liye internship krni hai..to wo mujhe milgayi
ki : arey wah..ye to bht achchi baat hai..isme kya manga hai
sanyu : wo papa..mujhe shekhawat fashion industry mein internship mili hai..mumbai mein
ki : kya..pr mumbia kyu?? delhi mein v to kyi indsty hai na bete..uske liye itni dur kyu jana
sanyu : papa plz..wo india ki top companies mein se ek hai..plz papa bs 1 saa ki to baat hai..plz
ki : thik hai..tu itna kh rai hai to
sanyu : sacchi papa..tysm
ki : abi meri baat poori nai hui...mai phle tere boss se baat karuga ..agr mujhe convncng aga to hi ha kahuga..ok
sanyu : pr papa..wo itni badi company k head hai..unse kaise baat kroge
ki : wo mai nai janta..agr mumbai jana hai to baat to karani hi hogi
sanyu : thik hai..mai try krti hun.
(n goes 2 her room)


on the oher side...Shekhawat Manshion

parth : aaj rd kitna late kr raha hai...uncle k puchne se phle aa jaye..warna wo to gaya
(after some time)
ramu kaka : rd baba, parth. baba.dinner ready hai..niche aa jao dono aap dono
parth: ooh freak...ab kya karu..
harsh : rd , parth..come fast.. mujhe late hone wale log bilkul nai pasand
parth : haa uncle...hum aa hi rae hain..wo video game ka last round chal hai..
Parth( in mind) : aaj to tu gaya rd..agar uncle ko pata chal gaya k wo itni late bahar hai..bs aj usne drink na ki ho..call krta hu.
" the no. u r tryng call is not reachable..pls try after some time"
parth: damm..ab to tujhe koi nai bacha skta

after some time parth hears the knock at the door..
parth : marr gaye
harsh : rd , parth open the door
parth : haa..aa raha hu...n opens d door
harsh :beta rd kaha hai ?? kahi wo fir se late night parties to nai kr raha??
parth : nai uncle..mt..lb..wo to washroom mein hai

both of them hears the sound of d door bell

parth : uncle mai dekhta hu..
harsh : ruko..mai dekhuga

harsh goes 2 poen the door n is shocked 2 see rd in cmpltly drunk state..whom driver was holdng 4 support

parth : wo uncle aaj samar ki b'day party thi..to issi lye rd
harsh : steve(servant) rd ko kmre mein le jao..n parth kl subah 8 bje..apne bst frnd k sath mujhe mere room mein milo
parth : ji uncle hum aa jayege..bt kyu??
harsh : kl baat krte hai..abi jao so jao..raat bht ho gayi hai

PRECAP : Sandhir 1st convo..

sorry same precap dene k liye..n itna late post krne k liye v..bt exams the ...plz give ur viws..n thnkzz 4 lkng prvous pts..
Edited by avraj - 10 years ago

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