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hi, I'm a new member in IF , I have read many arshi ffs , so thought of writing an os . I'm going to school only but I'm very interested in writing something so, bear my writing and English pls

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ARSHI OS: LIFE



Some don't know that life is complicated, some knows life is complicated.But me the great, ASR realized now.

I thought I ruled the world but it seems its not.before i lost my conciousness i want to see her. suddenly all blurred, the sirens of ambulance was the last thing he heared


flash back(45mins before)

" Arnav ji ! Careful don't talk while driving"wailed kushi.

"Arnav ji cut the call"


" arnaji slow down"


"Arnav ji red signal"


"Arnav ji watch out..."


" ahhh arnaaav jiii"


Thats it ...a truck directly banged the SUV and the SUV was turned upside down crashing the two souls inside ...

Normally people says LIFE is to enjoy but what happens when life ends when it started to enjoy...

City hospital

"They have lost lots of blood...we cant to save the baby" said the doctor

Inspector:huh k not to worry just inform us if there is anything

Doctor:sure doctor

yesterday

Arnav was furiously typing in his laptop.when kushi entered their room happily.she started humming her favorite song..

Kushi:arnav ji listen na

Arnav:what kushi let me do my work

Tears started flowing from kushi's eyes.you don't have Time for me..saying that she started sobbing very badly.

Arnav:kushi..kushi stop crying stop...now tell what you want to say


Kushi:vo arnav ji I'm pregnant


Arnav: what kushi is it true .realy so happy for us.



Arnav was so happy and organized a party at his guest house . Kushi asked him to take her to mandir and he promised that he will take her.that day was a happy day in raizada mansion,but unfortunately no body knows what is waiting for them.

Next morning after visiting the doctor they went to mandir and after that while going to hotel

Tring...Tring...

Arnav: hello ...hey...I totally forgot...I will be there...hey ...I'm.listening...Ya

Kushi:arnav ji watch out.

Suddenly the car losses it's control and hit the truck...


PRESENT


After examining injuries they saved both arnavs and kushis life but is it enough??
Kushi has gone to coma and arnav have bad injuries in his head.the happy Raizada mansion flooded with sadness.

5 months later


Kushi has recovered fully and arnav too.and started doing awareness programs on road safety and prohibition of phone calls while driving in the society, since he was famous it reached India e.and kushi to started helping him.


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Life is more valuable than anything and loss is more painful than anything

okay,this didn't turn out really well...





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Edited by memyselfjini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u ..can pls find out in which part I should improve
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so beautiful OS.. And i lyk ur concept.. Bt deary u should try to write deeply.. I mean to say.. Why he is doing Awareness.. Readers should get answers without asking.. And need more deep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice OS!!!
nice try for the 1st attempt...!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks fr the feed backs ..will improve my self .
Do check my work ..



arshi os friends kya?


arshi os crushed by my crush
Edited by memyselfjini - 10 years ago

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