Sidni TS 'Khamoshiyan' Last Part pg 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: skinnypal

i really have one word to say about this update...

WOW. 👏
It is very good.. i was imagining the characters actually enacting all this.. i loved how nani just bashed her with the truth.. just wish roshni was sensible in the show too like here to understand for once that her nani is right! 😆
So next part is gonna be the final face off.. i hope its a happy ending
Update soon


thanks dear😊
i m really glad tht u liked it 😳
yeah it is so...let's see 😉
updating anytym today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Aroo... 😊
Thanx for the P.M... 😛
Well this was again a wonderful , well written and very good & gripping update... 👏
Aroo I must say this that you have improved very thoroughly and now your words are very gripping i mean they were very good previously also...but now you are kind of mastered it especially in Emotions... ⭐️
After reading this...I guess...Roshni isn't the only one who has to be blamed for her life like this...it has to be with everyone who always tried to control her life and ade decisions out of it...and now even when she is on the verge of losing everything...she still wanted to know Sid's reaction about it...I don't i should be angry at her or just scream and laugh at her insensitve foolish step...but she hasn"t realised her mistake yet..but Naani's efforts has to be applauded that she took the main work of knocking some sense into her granddaughter and somewhat tried to save her life...
I guess MOMS are really serious about their secret mission to re-unite Siddharth & Roshni...
But I hope everything goes well...
Great update..
Continue soon..


w.salam bhai
pleasure 😊

1thank u so nuch bhai...oh is it so, thank u i m glad...⭐️

hmm somehow...but she should use her mind which she usually don't use...but nwadays she is doing smart moves in the shw 😳
thank u bhai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: madhuharini

what an amazing update!!!

It's really worth of waiting dear👏👏
Things are slowing getting inside Roshni's mind to work and wanna read the next one too😊
eagerly waiting to see Roshni's realization and SidNi reunion😊
update soon😊 thanks for PM😊


thank u so muc madhu😊
m glad...yeah will update today...
welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: rachana10

Part 2 was amazing...wonderful...mind blowing...🥳 Poor sidni they know it very well they cnt live without each other even though they are soo adamant couple...😉 Feeling soo sad for sidni... 😕Already I have a doubt who's the one listened the conversation b/w raj and roshni but nw i got the culprit🤣... Just one more part to c sidni reunion😛.. Dnt keep us wait for next part...try to update soon dr...😆😆 I dnt mind if u update today itself...


thanks rachana 😊
hahaha good...yeah i m planning to update today only, sry couldn't update the same day as it wasn't ready😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: stephie34

mind blowing story...I love it so much...and I definitely think I know where it is heading..i just hope I am correct...oh how I wish the cvs can see this story they might hire you...👏


thank u dear...i m glad...let's see...u will knw today...
haha really u think so...😲😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: zoopassion

Wow!!! Really beautiful update👏 This is the kind of Roshni I would love to see and u have brilliantly written Roshni's realization👏 Nani had really played an important role... Don't know why CVs can't make the characters do things like this😕 Loved the update to the core... Do continue soon😃


thanks dr...mee too..i knw... *sigh*
will update today itself 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: 220420

Haha...seriously its a difficult task to show roshni's realization!
BuT u r damn good...superb!!! :)))


hehe...thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Salam All...well i am here with the last part of my Ts..firstly thanks for liking the second part...i m glad, ur comments made me smile to no extent moreover thank u madhu for suggesting about Laugh.Out.Loud for banner...thanks...well scroll down for the last part



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PART 3

They reached at the hotel in half an hour... 'roshni will you join me for the meeting or will wait outside?' durga asked 'umm no mom i am fine, you go and finish your meeting ' she said, durga nodded and left, roshni then looked at the divorce papers she took from home before leaving, she didn't knew why she brought it here...as she wasn't sure that will sid really come here now or she might be mistaken she started to look here and there making her way inside but stopped in her track, just a little away from where she was standing was siddhart with his parents but what caught her attention was the presence of some more peoples...both raj and simran were sitting on the different table with two people whom roshni assumed to be the girl's parents...yes girl, the girl who that moment was sitting with siddhart..

She went a little closer and tried to listen to there convo but couldn't hear anything...her eyes widened as the girl placed her hand on sid's and he too smiled instead of taking his hand away , she was now getting more and more insecure, so without thinking for any reuslt she just went and sat at the table behind sid's table and just to her good luck he was sitting with his back towards her

'siddhart, my parents told me about your separation and explain it to me that how many problems you faced because of that idiot girl' 'haww idiot' roshni opened her mouth wide just completely in O shape but kept on listening controlling herself 'but don't worry i am not like that jerk...i promise you that i will support you in every move of life, and you will forget her very very soon...waisa bhe there is no place of that psycho girl in our life...i am right na siddhart...i just want you to give me assurity that you will also support me and you will never think about her..i mean as soon as you two get divorce, you have to vanish her from your memories as if she never exits' roshni was listening to everything, her expressions were as if fire was passing from her nerves instead of blood 'look suhana..i know it's difficult to forget your first love but i will try my best...i know it would be difficult but i am assuring you that you will never feel that i can't keep you happy... yes i agreed for this wedding for my mom but as a husband i will fulfil all my responsibilities towards you, you will never cry because of me, and you are very understanding because even after knowing about my first wedding you didnt denied and in this way you made a place in my heart already ' he said, only he knew how hard it was getting to tolerate the nonsense, the way she was insulting roshni he was having a hard time controlling his anger but he did it well and said all this trying to get her away from him at least for now

'you mean to say that the place which once roshni had is somehow mine now right?' she asked excited 'umm i did'nt meant like that...' 'no please tell me na siddhart...please ' 'ahh actually...' while he continued fumbling with words, roshni stood up from her chair and rolling those divorce papers she made a roll and went and stood at his back,in a way that none of them noticed her , her anger was reaching at it's peak, she couldn't control herself from attacking him because he was finding words to cover her question instead of saying no 'that no...no one can take roshni's place' but he was still thinking and then *thud* she hit him on his head with all the force she had ouch' he cried rubbing his head he stood and turned 'roshni you?' he asked 'no mai roshni kahan hun...mai to idiot hun *thud*, jerk hun *thud* psycho hun *thud* ...' (no, who said that i am roshni...i am idiot, i am jerk, psycho)' she kept on hitting him on his head and shoulder 'no it's not like that roshni, wo actually mom an...' 'shut up...just shut up...mai idiot...mai *thud* she was calling me an idiot and you did'nt stopped her and now trying to make excuses...'

He step backed ready to run from there but she followed him you want to get married again...bohat shok ho raha hai dosri shaadi ka (so much impatient for second marriage ) *thud* you can't even wait for a week...you cheater...*thud* i am going to kill you siddhart ' she shouted while running after him 'roshni at least listen to me...let me explain' explain my foot..you dhokabaz...' he ran and tried to hide behind simran while she follow him but her foot tripped, she shut her eyes tight ready to hit the ground but it never came instead of it she was saved into his protective arms

Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun'ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..

Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan

'ankhein khol lo...bacha lia hai maine...' (open your eyes, i saved you ) he said out aloud, she slowly opened her eyes and looked at him angrily 'badi sherni bani phir rhe the or sahi se bhagna bhe nahe ata...' (you can't even run properly and act like a lioness ) he mocked, she made a face and again hit him by the role 'ouch...i swear if u will hit me again then i will drop you..' he warned 'ohh really...ye lo... *thud* *thud* *thud* leave me...chod do...chodo' she said angrily while he sighed 'i can't ' he said sincerely 'do you love me this much that you can't even drop me?' she asked innocently and he nodded honestly 'oh really then what the hell was that? Us ladki ke sath kia ono khel rhe the? (were you playing ono with that girl?) Hands in hands lost in her eyes...do you think i am blind?' she barked

'aur ye kia pakad ke rakha hai mujhe (and what is this, why are you holding me?)...leave...llleeeaaavvveee ' 'fine...' he said irritatingly and dropped her, her mouth turned in O shape 'haww...chod diya...(you left)' she tried to stand up, he gave his hand but she shrugged it off 'nahi chahie (i don't want) ' finally she stood up 'tumne mujhe choda...(you left me) you idiot, budhu, if i will say leave me so you will leave me...since when you started being so obedient? Han? And why did you did what i said? Itne bore hogaye ho mujhse that if i will ask you to leave me and you will really do it?' she asked all the anger in her vanished and she looked at him teary eye with questions in them 'now why are quite? Answer me' she asked as he didn't uttered anything 'roshni i...' 'no sid, no i...wo...aur actually...just tell me if i will ask you to leave me so you will leave me just like that? Don't you know that i love you?' she asked 'tell me na...why are you taking so much will you really do it...is it so easy...? Yes or no' she demanded for an answer

'Yes, i...' she stumbled, unable to hear anything else she raised her hand to stop him 'no...no need of any explanation...this yes of yours had given me all my answers...' she looked at the girl suhana then simran n raj n then back to sid 'looks like you really are planning to move on' she chuckled and then unrolled the papers 'roshni at lea...' he tried to say but she didn't let him 'don't worry i will sign them and won't create any hurdles for you...bye' she turned to leave but he held her hand and turned her back, and then held her shoulders tightly 'do you know what actually your problem is?' He asked with a firm voice ' i..' she started but he ssshhhd her by placing his finger on her lips 'not a word...i am repeating NOT A WORD' he warned she nodded silently 'why don't you let the other person explain itself...you never allow them to say anything morethan you want to hear..you didn't let me say that what actually i want to say...i was trying to say that yes it is difficult for me...yes i can't live without you but you didnt gave me a chance to speak like always...you know your problem is that you think that you miss perfect is the only person in this world who can sacrifice for everyone...10 months back you walked away from my life thinking in this way you are sacrificing for your mom, 10 minutes before you decided to walk away from here thinking in this way you are sacrificing for me...what the hell do you think you are?' he almost yelled, she blinked twice but didn't said anything

'your problem is that you think you can do anything...you keep acting like super woman around world pretending to be very strong...your problem is that you never understands your problem, that you never try to set thing right around you...rishte bikhar raha hai to bikharna do...jo ho rha hai hone do (relations r destroying then let it be, whatever is happening let it happen)...tell me now...am i saying anything wrong? Han? Bolo?' he asked she had tears 'you tell me..what could i do? Never got a love of mother in my life, but when i got it i lost you,i had to choose anyone...the most difficult decision of my life, and then ur lies...even though you never lied to cause any harm to me but what shall i do? It was like you or mom, i wasn't in a situation of deciding anything on my own, i was hurt deeply, my mind took over my heart, what ever mom said felt right, and that's why i did the way i felt is right...i know going away without giving you a chance to explain yourself was wrong, i know i had hurt you in every move of life and you like always had supported me this way or the other and always had stood by me...i know that i was wrong that i let myself go away from you...'

'The circumstances never let me realize that i am the soul reason all this happened, i made life so complicated because of my confusion, i am wrong...please i am sorry...forgive me sid...i can't live without you, i can't see you with anyone else...please ' she cried folding her hands in front of him...he hurriedly placed his hands on her nodding a 'No i am not going to forgive you because i was never ever angry over you...yes i was the one who filed for divorce but i did all this because i realized that you don't trust me at all, that may be i am doing wrong by keeping you in such a relation which has left nothing in it...that our love is lost somewhere, that we shall go away from eachother, and thus i did it to give you the happiness you want in life and where i don't belong..' he said, a tear rolled down his cheek while she sobbed

'idiot, you are a complete idiot, how can you even think that i want to go away from you, yes i know i said myself but it was because of the situation we were put in, par tumto mere ankhein parh lete the na? Kyun nahe samjhe is khamoshi ke peche ki takleef? (but you use to read my eyes? Then why didn't you understood about this silence?) you know every day in these three months i tried to make myself undestand that we are getting divorce and that i shall not love you, that there is nothing left but all those struggle, all those lectures i gave to myself went in vain as i realized that no it will be impossible to live in this world without your own life...mere jaan basti hai tumme (my life lies in you) ..i can't stay away from you... ' she cried

'acha, stop crying i can't see tears in ur eyes...please roshni, forget everything happened in past...let's start afresh..' he said wiping her tears 'han ji puttar ji...just forget your past...and move on in life with eachother...' raj said coming towards them and then hugged them 'in fact i have a surprise for you' he said while they frowned 'what surprise papa?' roshni asked 'oho, those two enemies of your life had become friends' he said aloud and laughed (mom?/sasumom?) they both asked together referring there MIL'S and he nodded laughing 'look Mrs.Khurana that they will react like that only' raj said looking at simran while she smiled faintly, there was guilt written all over her face 'roshni,sid please forgive me...i was the main reason that you two had to go through all this, i thought my revenge was more important from your happiness...but then i heard everything you told to raj ji, i realized i was really wrong about you, and because of me our beautiful relation turned sour...i am sorry' she confessed 'yes beta, not only simran, i am also the reason...my ego didn't let me accept you two and i kept bringing problems in your lifes...i am sorry' Durga said coming towards them 'no mom, please don't say sorry you two, you are our elders and all this doesn't suits you..' roshni said moving towards them...

'han bilkul sasumom, and waisa this maafi an all is not your cup of tea, you look best in your own self...DD patel...so please don't..' sid said 'no i had committed a grave mistake and i need your forgiveness please forgive me...' she requested 'sasumom please, don't...i love you the way you are and if you will kept behaving like this then i will feel that you are someone else and my sasumom has sent to a jungle' he joked 'i can't go alone in a jungle because someone like you should be with me to irritate me all the time' she joked back 'mom...mom, sid you two stop fighting ' roshni interrupted them 'roshni, rehne do na, let them fight like this only...we should go back at our home and they can return whenever they are done with there fighting...' simran said winking and placed her hand around roshni 'waisa bhe, i have to talk about so many things to my daughter...it's been so long' she added cupping her right cheek 'i missed you mom' roshni said with moist eyes

'i missed you too beta, i am sorry it took me so long to understand that you are more important than my ego and revenge...you are the light of my house, you are the happiness of my sid...in last few days i felt as if my sid is nowhere, it's just someone who is living with us and looks like him, he has changed a lot and i knew it all happened after he realized that everything is over between you too...that day my son lost his smile, all of his gesture were fake and it hitted me really hard that i can't stop myself from blaming me for all this...but now i won't repeat my mistake, i want you to go with us, i can't wait anymore to take you back...you belong at our home only' 'i am going with you only maa...' 'simmi, we shall ask durga ji first, that do she wants to make roshni stay at there place for sometime?' raj interrupted and then turned to durga 'so what do you say?'

'actually Mr.Khurana i think roshni shall go with me now, and as i and simran had planned we shall organize for there re-marriage, in last few months so much had happened, how many times they thought to break there marriage, of course it was us who forced them but still, mistake had happened, this time there wedding will happen with all the rituals and in the presence of each and every members of both families...what do you say?' she explained 'perfect...i can wait till there marriage as it will make there relation more strong only...and now i don't want to let my children go through any problem...so durga ji, how about all the functions shall start by tomorrow and wedding on next week?' 'ohh it's perfect simran...sid and roshni i hope you too don't have any issues with it?' they all turned to look at them... 'no sasumom if you guyz are ohkay then we too are ready ' sid said, durga came to sid 'good and yes, from today no sasumom, only mom' she smiled and he smiled back... 'ohkay mom' 'that's like my son ' she kissed his forehead

'sid, maa i am hungry let's have something here only and then we can go back at our home' roshni said diverting everyone's attention towards her 'not bad roshni, good idea of spending time with sid' simran said with a naughty smile while roshni blushed 'maa please...wait maa where is that girl and her parents?' she asked looking around 'ohh they, they were my friends and there daughter, i asked them to help me out and also told them to go as soon as you two start with your tom and Jerry fight...' she said laughing making elders laugh and embarrassing sidni 'acha come on let's have lunch and then we have to go back home also...maa and pratima are waiting for us...' 'oh sure...let's go' raj said and everyone made there way inside and had there lunch happily and were excited for upcoming days...

so that is the end,haha i know you guyz will get a tough time imagining both simran and durga turning positive and talking to eachother nicely but i have to write it that way so accept it ohkie guyz 😉
do leave back your response on the last part of my ts 😊
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Fabulous update dear
Loved it alot
Hope these both moms turn positive in serial too irritated with there negative drama drama
Keep writing more stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Khatam bhi ho gays. No worries...write on asya now...

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