Their Happily Ever After - Page 65

Originally posted by: arathim

The best thing in your writing is Chicks... the way your narrative just flows from one scene to another so smoothly... like Satin Silk...

We can feel the pulse of the narrative just by reading a few lines... we feel engrossed and drawn into the narrative... there is that magnetic pull you create with the tone of your words... it just never lets up... and takes us with it...

There are very few stories that have that ability ... and am so proud of you...and this story...its the sassiest and smoothest and the most addictive fiction ever... atleast in this forum...

Not to mention you would fit in right with the CVs for dangling the carrot at us at every turn of the story... keeping our eye fixed on the prize... done so cleverly and interestingly...!!!😊

Though we pretty much know the direction where its going... cant help but be excited to see you translate the beauty in words...😊

With that I take my Leave... have some other writing to catch up...😆

Originally posted by: dushturain

What the !!

I'll be back ..res for now

Okay ill keep this short...

the date...aww candles..i can just imagine...sooo romantic...I always feel these type dates are more romantic than the ones outsides..its just more intimate...

though chicks didnt mention rose but im going over board...

And he proposed...and the way he did it..its sooo beautifull...

Chicks you are giving us a Manik just the way we want it...and maybe thats why we love him so much becasue he is just the way we want...I want..he is my Manik...

thank you babes for a wonderful update...

Originally posted by: chair1992

I hope manik winS
I am so excited for the Wedding
Just wont Nandu want him to get tested?

Originally posted by: chair1992

I hope manik winS
I am so excited for the Wedding
Just wont Nandu want him to get tested?

Originally posted by: dushturain

res

wooo hooo finally!!

No matter how modern my manik is...deep down he wants to be nandini's one and only...and what does that that makes me feel???I find this hypocrisy superrr duper cute...

Nandini shy and wanting both aww

But poor thing doesnt know a thing how can she takes charge...though I wont mind seeing her seducing our righteous Baba.

I loved it how Manik decided to wait...Its just shows how much she matters to him...she is his precious and he wants to do every thing right with her...Thats why I love Manik so much...

however

It would be interesting to see how can Manik resist his ambrosia...when they would be together 24*7 sleeping in the same bed and breathing same air...

Im sooo excited...

things will definitely get hotter and lines will get blurred...can manik stick to his words??

Originally posted by: dushturain

OMG why???

do you hate Manik or sth like that??

Originally posted by: Chickee

And I will have you know ... My Manik always uses protection! Getit!!!

Originally posted by: dushturain

exactly and even when he slept around he did it with class with classy babes...not with just anyone...😉