VIRIKA FF: Bleeding in Love... chapter 35(final) - pg. 24 - Page 17

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"CRYING IN A CORNER"
u r not allowed to end this story u should be knowing this ! How can u even think abt ending this story ?! There is so much more left to write !!!
NO NO NO ! u have to write more and more and more and thats final !
Otherwise my blackmailing will start 😆

Now coming to this update !
Do u know how many emotions i felt in this single update .
From being worried to sad to happy to contented !!! Everything i felt in an apporopriate manner !
Finally Riva is healthy and they are officially one family now ! Awww
The Best gift Viren can ever get !
And the last words stole my Heart
"From Being Bleeding in Love to Now Smitten in Love"
Thats what i call a perfect line to end ! But that doesnt mean u can end it !
Its just the start to happy Times and i Wanna read all those Happy Momens now so better pull up ur socks and write next part !

This story became so special to me as it proceeded like i never thought i will et connected to something sad but it made my fall in love with itself all thanks to ur amazing writing skills !
The way it started and now till the end u kept all ur readers engrossed in it !
We all started living as a part of Jeevika's life and felt her emotions !
Thank u so much for writing this amazing Story and making us a part of it !
Love u alot Twinsie ❤️

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I'm Second On The Final Update Of 'Bleeding In Love' 😛 And Probably First To UnRes My Comment!

What Do I Say!? I'm Crying. Deliberately. Bleeding In Love Was One Of My Most Favoritest Story By You. And Now It's Come To An End.

The Journey That Began With A Mother Struggling To Give Her Daughter All She Deserved, A Daughter Who Loved Her Mother Like Anything, Then A Person Entering Their Lives, Making It A Heaven, Ending Their Sorrows, And Finally Riva Being All Well To Live. Live More Than She Probably Have Thought. Live Her Dreams, Her Parent's Dreams.

I'm Speechless. Really Describing The Story In Just One Mere Comment I Guess Would Be An Offence To Your Efforts As Well As To The Story Which Turned Out To Be A Most Precious Peice Of Art I've Ever Come Across.

All I Can Say Is You Never Stop Writing. You're A Flawlessly Excellent Writer. Thanks For Giving Us 'Riva' And Thanks For Giving Us Another FF That Defines 'Life', 'Love', 'Family' and An 'Individual'. There Isn't A Single Part In This Story That I Didn't Love.

I'm Gonna Miss Waiting To Receive An PM For Getting A 'BIL' Update.

Commented. It's Shorter Than What You Deserve But That's All I Could Gather And Comment. From Day One When You Started Writing This Story I've Told You It's Closer To My Heart, It Will Continue To Be So. Thanks A Lot For Giving Me This Story. The Feelings About It Are Far More Than I'll Ever Be Able To Express.

Keep Writing More.

Love You Always.

This is absolutely amazing
A very good job done in describing the emotions and the love and the bond they share
Everything about it was wonderful
Could not help but tear on the emotional dialogues
As usual you nailed it again
You are truly blessed with this amazing talent
Keep it up
And do write more and more
As we genuinely enjoy it

Karina...
I just don't know what to comment...
Dude u know what...
Ur tooo good...
Oh not good. But d bestesttt writer...
Every emotion is to be feeled ...Just love the way the legal adoption,future planning & all happened...
And yes ...loved d end...the last stanza was something more thanm agical...
U described d title sooo perfectlyyy. ...just hats off to u & ur writing skills...
Wanted this to continue lil longer. ..
Plz think abt it...
Always ur fan...If not continue give a bonus chapter at least...
And if not that...Waiting for a new FF...
Lots of love...
RjRj 😊 ❤️ 😳

awww Keennii.. u made me cry.. Such an emotional updatee!! I could literally feel the pain and tension of Virika waiting outside the surgery room bcz ihv been in Jeevika's place! Its scaryy duddeee!!

What??? It's ended????
Nooo!!! 😭
but as much as im gonna Miss it
And im depressed that its finished
you really ended it beautifully
each and every emotion Of virika's was described so perfectly
I felt as though I was in the story myself!
The way viren reassured jeevika, talking to her about their future with Riva together
it was the best thing he could've possibly done
When jeevs made him a legal parent/guardian...
I got so emotional over that entire scene
"Partners in parenthood"
Viren's love for Riva is really heartwarming, really sweet
and virika's love for each other...well you just summed that up perfectly!
Thank you for such a lovely story and such a fitting ending <3

Wow that was a beautiful ending!