T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Wow di...It's awesome, blossom, amazing and mind blowing update...Just loved... Feeling really bad for sha...Do continue soon...And thanks for the pm...

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

"Don't worry... you are safe with me..." Shaina !!!!! where is she ???

Brilliant update it was Helna (as usual) 👍🏼

Sha... his condition and his thoughts are very nicely written. his uneasiness and his question for his own future... his thought about giving the answers to the question the outside people will throw at him... is very much understandable...

and his silent and calm bond with Roshni was very nicely written.

waiting for more😳

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

hi heli
such a short update?...or may be I can't get enough of AK anytime...

feeling bad for sha...he is trying to start afresh...

hope he starts his life happily with only his loved ones around and not arjun...

somehow...now I don't want arjun to b back...

but then I trust u...u MST hv something really path breaking planned out there...

so...finally 'they' are back...

PS: u used aman instead of zaid in the first line of their scene...

love
Birdie

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: kunchu
Hello...
Ouch who threw that?

I threw that...😆😆😆

Awesome update...

Sha is scared to meet outside world...

Sha is missing Roshni...😃😃😃

Sha called Raghu sir...😃😃😃

Sha amused to see change in Sam bcoz of Samay...😆😆😆

Z-N relation has improved...😃😃😃

Who is doing exactly same as Arjun & Why??😕😕😕

Where is Shaina??😕😕😕

Sha-Roshni met...😃😃😃

Sha ne sabse pehle yeh hi pucha ki Shaadi ki kya??😆😆😆

What was that in last???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

A new start for Sha...

lets see how he'll proceed.

Do continue...

Keep writing.

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

awesome

so arjun is back in action

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

First of all sorry for the late comments but u know the reason already!

second a very happy b'day dear...hope u had a great day and wish u a awesome life ahead!

Coming back to the update...it was awesome...Sha's return and his mindstate after the gap and staying away from his dear ones was superbly written!

Masa, Aisha and Sam's worries for him, his wanting to get away for giving them all some relief was superbly portrayed...

Roshni and Sha's convo and their entire interaction was very natural...and touched down to reality

The final part was again bringing in mysteries...who followed them and who was he/she informing the news about Sha?

The last line does gives some hint but intriguing...

does it mean that Arjun had passed his own personality to someone else to be passed on back to Sha???

Karan?? and Shaina??

Anyways, mind boggling and thrilling part it was...

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Ouch! Who threw that? Ok...ok...I know I am late but what to do dear! A lot happening with no time for the leisurely FF Khair...

Coming to the episode...It was heartbreaking to see Shaleen so disoriented & clueless. Poor guy! What fault was there of his that he should have to go through all this? But the presence of Roshni gives so much hope. Loved their tender moments. ❤️

Looks like Shaina & Abhay (hope I got the name right😆) have taken up the mantle to clean up society 🤔

Waiting for the update!

Some brillaint writing here!👏