AbhiGya TS - The Gunshot - Part 2 (Page 3) - Completed - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aafrah

Hi Guys! So here is the last part! I feel Abhi is an immatured character - so if he is shaken by such a scene where Pragya has taken a bullet for him, this is how his immediate reaction would be. I just wanted to write about that moment of gunshot more than anything else - so please don't expect an ending with all loose ends tied.


WOW! I was eagerly waiting for the next chapter and you did NOT disappoint at all! 😊

I was sitting at the edge of my seat while reading this chapter and was hoping for something similar in the upcoming track!

Surprisingly, more than Pragya getting shot, I was more moved by Abhi's feeling once he learned the truth about Aliya... 💔 Talk about heartbreak! In that sense, Pragya saved his life by getting shot!

I was quite disappointed about the open ending, though, since I thought there would be some kind of closure! 😭 It's actually quite a good thing you initially warned about not tying all the loose ends...

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Wonderful story! Can we look forward to a sequel? 😉 😃
Edited by Preeah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
blast it- that last wish of pragya 😭 and then the last sentence 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

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nicely done!! i liked your version of an injured pragya/hospital track, which i was convinced i couldn't stand on principle. the build up was exciting too. and i love how you chose to end - powerful moment.

i still want a sequel to the street harassment one where you used the same ending technique, but this one stands so well as is :)


I'm with Mina! I would LOVE to see your version of the sequel!

Maybe... Hopefully...

Your fic now just makes me more eager for tomorrow's episode! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
lovely ts
loved it
very nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AAFRAH!

How do I tell you how much I love reading your stories?!

Thanks for updating I was very eager! You write so well, the gunshot was so greatly described I could imagine the scene very well! Now my only hope is that CVs show something like this! They defo need to learn some stuff from you! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
aafrah
u write so beautifully
pls pls pls
write an ending to this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice...superb...
nd pls make it three shot instead of two shot wid happy endng...pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for the PM the update was awesome and amazing ...I really love the nok jhok. it was so cute
the mosquitoes part was very funny and fab ...I can't wait to read more story from you
Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago

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