ITS TOO LATE....MY FIRST TRY ON SANDHIR

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HELLO GUYZZ...THIS IS MY FIRST OS...ACTUALLY I HAVEN'T WRITTEN ANYTHING FICTIONAL BEFORE EXCEPT MY ANSWERS IN EXAMS...YES MY ANSWERS ARE SOMETIMES REALLY OUT OF THIS WORLD.😆 OK, SO AM I NERVOUS??...YES HELL NERVOUS !!!!

ITS TOO LATE...

HE COULD SEE DROPLETS OF WATER DRIPPING FROM THE LEAVES OF EUCALYPTUS TREE AFTER GETTING FILTERED THROUGH THEM. SILENCE...COMPLETE SILENCE WAS THERE...WELL NOT EXACTLY. SILENCE IN A SENSE THAT THERE WAS NO ANY ANNOYING HUMAN VOICE. OTHERWISE IT WAS FILLED WITH SOUND OF RAINFALL. BUT THE RAINFALL WAS NOT HEAVY. IT WAS ONE OF THOSE RAIN WHICH EVEN THE YOUNG PETALS OF ROSES ENJOY WITHOUT THE FEAR OF GETTING BROKEN DOWN BY DOWNPOUR. BUT AS THEY SAY NOTHING IS PERMANENT..SO HOW COULD A SIMPLE WEATHER BE AN EXCEPTION OF THIS. SO, SUDDENLY WINDS STARTED TO BLOW WITH SUCH A SPEED AS IF THEY HAD ESCAPED FROM SOME KIND OF PRISON AFTER BILLIONS OF YEARS. RAIN WHOSE DROPS WERE SOME MOMENTS EARLIER ENHANCING THE BEAUTY OF ROSES, WAS NOW THE CAUSE OF THE FALLING OF SAME ROSE PLANT. BUT HIS EYES SUDDENLY FELL ON A WHITE FEATHER BIRD. SHE ( ASSUME THAT IT WAS A FEMALE BIRD) WAS LOOKING BEAUTIFUL BUT AT THE SAME TIME VERY VULNERABLE AND WEAK. SHE WAS SITTING ON ONE OF THE BRANCHES OF EUCALYPTUS TREE AND WAS TRYING TO PROTECT HERSELF FROM THAT MERCILESS RAIN IN WHICH SHE WAS LOOKING QUITE UNSUCCESSFUL. SHE WAS BADLY SHIVERING. SHE WAS NOT READY TO GIVE UP .NOW SHE WAS EXHAUSTED ...TIRED OF FIGHTING WITH THE SITUATIONS, AT THE SAME TIME NOT READY TO ACCEPT HER DEFEAT. BUT UNFORTUNATELY HER BODY WAS NOT AS STRONG AS HER WILLPOWER. SHE WAS ABOUT TO FALL...BUT SUDDENLY ANOTHER BIRD WITH THE SAME WHITE FEATHER WITH A ADDITION OF GREY STREAK CAME AND SAVED HER FROM FALLING. IT WAS A MALE BIRD. HE WAS STRONGER THAN HER. HE COVERED HER WITH HIS FEATHERS TO PROTECT HER FROM COLD AND RAIN.
HE KEPT ON LOOKING THIS SCENE...
FLASHBACK-
SANYUKTA- RANDHIR I WANT TO TE...
RANDHIR- SANYU ..CAN WE TALK LATER BABY...MAI ABHI BOHOT JALDI ME HU.
SANYU- RANDHIR IT'S IMPORTANT AND..
SHE WAS CUT OFF BY RANDHIR
RANDHIR- SANYU RAT M BAAT KARE PLEASE...I HAVE TO RUSH NOW.
SAYING THIS HE WENT OUT FROM THEIR BIG MANSION , STARTED HIS CAR AND AND HEADED TOWARDS HIS OFFICE LEAVING HER ALONE LIKE EVERY DAY AND SHE WAS DISAPPOINTED LIKE EVERYDAY. AND THE WORST PART WAS THAT SHE COULD NOT EVEN COMPLAIN ABOUT IT COZ ..COZ SHE LOVED HIM. IT WAS SO SIMPLE. SHE KNEW THAT HE WAS DOING ALL THAT FOR THEIR GOOD..BUT SHE COULD NOT HIDE HER SADNESS AS A TEAR ROLLED DOWN HER CHEEKS.
BECAUSE OF SOME REASONS SHE WAS MISSING HIM TODAY .. JUST NOT MISSING HIM ACTUALLY CRAVING FOR HIM.
THE WHOLE DAY PASSED ON...
AT NIGHT SHE WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR HIM . JUST THEN SHE HEARD DOORBELL . SHE RUSHED TOWARDS THE DOOR AND OPENED IT HURRIEDLY...ONLY TO GET DISAPPOINTED AND SAD AGAIN...
'MA'AM, SIR HAS ASKED FOR THAT BLUE FILE', RANDHIR'S MANAGER SAID TO SANYUKTA.
'AND RANDHIR? WHERE IS HE?', ASKED SANYUKTA
'ACTUALLY HE WILL BE LATE TODAY BECAUSE A VERY IMPORTANT MEETING IS GOING ON WITH THE SINGAPORE CLIENTS'
SANYUKTA SAID NOTHING AFTER THIS. SHE WENT UPSTAIRS, BROUGHT THAT FILE, GAVE IT TO MANAGER AND WENT TO HER BEDROOM.
SHE WAS LYING ON BED WITH HER HEAD CRUSHED INTO PILLOW WETTING ITS SOFT FABRIC WITH HER CONTINUOUS FLOWING TEARS. AND THE MOST PECULIAR THING WAS THAT SHE HERSELF DID NOT KNOW WHY SHE WAS CRYING...SUDDENLY HER THOUGHTS LED HER TO ANOTHER WORLD... SHE REMEMBERED THAT DAY WHEN SHE LEFT HER HOME AND FAMILY AND CAME TO FITE. SHE WAS SHATTERED , BROKEN AND COMPLETELY EXHAUSTED WITH EVERYTHING. THAT TIME RANDHIR CAME LIKE A KNIGHT IN THE SHINNING ARMOUR IN HER LIFE . HE SUPPORTED HER AND HELPED HER TO FIGHT BACK. SHE WAS MISSING THAT CARE , CONCERN AND LOVE OF HIM. SHE KNEW THAT HE STILL LOVED HER BUT ...


3:30 AM
RANDHIR ENTERED INTO HIS HOUSE BY USING SPARE KEYS AS HE DIDN'T WANT TO DISTURB ANYONE AT THAT MOMENT OF TIME . HE WAS VERY ANGRY ON NOT SEEING ANY GUARDS AT MAIN GATE. HE ENTERED HIS ROOM AND NEXT THING HE SAW WAS ENOUGH TO KILL HIM ON SPOT. HE FELT THAT ALL THE OXYGEN FROM ROOM HAS BEEN PUMPED OUT AS IT WAS BECOMING DIFFICULT FOR HIM TO BREATH IN . SANYUKTA WAS LYING ON THE FLOOR OR I SHOULD SAY IN POOL OF HER OWN BLOOD. HE IMMEDIATELY RUN TO HER AND TURNED HER AROUND. SHE WAS SHOT BY 4 BULLETS. HER WHITE DRESS WAS NOW COMPLETELY RED BUT FORTUNATELY HER NERVES WERE STILL GOING ON.

AFTER SOME MINUTES
RANDHIR WAS DRIVING THE CAR LIKE A MAD MAN BUT HIS HEART BEAT WAS EVEN FASTER THAN THAT. THIS WAS HIS LAST CHANCE TO GET HIS LIFE BACK. CONTINUOUS FLOWING TEARS WERE BLOCKING HIS VISION BUT IN NO WAY HE WAS GOING TO LET HIS ANGEL GO AWAY

AS THEY REACHED THE HOSPITAL , HE CARRIED HER IN HIS ARM AND RUSHED INTO THE HOSPITAL
RANDHIR- DOCTOR PLZ SEE MY WIFE ..SHE IS...
HE SAID CHOKING WITH HIS OWN WORDS TO THE FIRST DOCTOR HE SAW
DOCTOR- IMMEDIATELY LAY HER DOWN ON THE STRETCHER...NURSE FAST ...TAKE HER TO OT
AS THEY TOOK HER IN OT RANDHIR FELL ON THE FLOOR . HE WAS STILL NOT ABLE TO COMPHREHENED WHAT WAS HAPPENING. SUDDENLY HIS EYES FELL ON HIS PHONE. 14 MISSED CALLS FROM SANYUKTA...
"SHE CALLED ME. SHE CALLED ME SO MANY TIMES. SHE WAS IN DANGER, SHE NEEDED MY HELP BUT I WAS NOT THERE FOR HER. THIS IS ALL MY FAULT, AGAR MAI USKE SATH HOTA TO YEH SAB KUCHH NHI HOTA. EVEN THIS TIME I WAS LATE...LIKE ALWAYS...GUILT WAS ACTING AS A SLOW POISON FOR HIM."
HIS TRANCE WAS BROKEN BY DOCTOR'S VOICE.
'HER CONDITION IS VERY CRITICAL. SHE HAD ALREADY LOST LOT OF BLOOD. AAPKO USSE THODA JALDI LANA CHAHIYE THA. HAMLOG PURI KOSHISH KAR RHE HAI BUT THERE ARE VERY LITTLE CHANCES OF HER SURVIVAL..."
THE FIRST THING WHICH CAME IN RANDHIR'S MIND WAS TO KILL THE DOCTOR RIGHT AWAY. HOW COULD HE SAY THAT HIS SANYU MAY DIE. HOW DARED HE DO SUCH KIND OF FILTHY PRANK WITH HIM...YES THIS WAS A PRANK FOR HIM OR AT LEAST HE WANTED TO ASSUME THAT AS A PRANK. IN NO WAY HE WAS READY TO ACCEPT THE REALITY.
" KYA MAI USSE MIL SAKTA HU"
"YES, BUT SHE IS UNCONSCIOUS RIGHT NOW"
WITH LOT OF COURAGE RANDHIR ENTERED THE ROOM. AND THERE SHE WAS...HIS ANGEL. HER FACE WAS PALE BUT STILL SHE WAS LOOKING GORGEOUS FOR HIM. THERE WAS AN INNOCENCE AND PURITY ON HER FACE WHICH RANDHIR LOVED MOST ABOUT HER. SUDDENLY REALIZATION HIT HIM HARD WHEN HIS EYES FELL ON THE SEVERAL WIRES AND SYRINGES WHICH WERE ATTACHED TO HER BODY
HE SLOWLY WENT TO HER AND HELD HER HAND SOFTLY. "SANYU...I KNOW YOU ARE ANGRY WITH ME. I KNOW I HAVE HURT YOU MANY TIMES. I KNOW THAT I NEVER GIVE YOU TIME. I KNOW I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED TO YOU IN THE MORNING. I KNOW THAT YOU MAY THINK THAT NOW I DON'T CARE FOR YOU..I KNOW EVERYTHING. BUT I AM SORRY SANYU..YOUR RANK NO. 1 HAS FAILED THIS TIME. I WAS SO MUCH BUSY IN MY WORK THAT I DIDN'T REALIZE I AM HURTING THAT PERSON JISKE LIYE MAI ACTUALLY ME ITNA KAAM KAR RHA HU. BUT NOW I PROMISE YOU ...MAI SAB KUCHH THIK KAR DUNGA. JUST PLEASE OPEN YOUR EYES ONCE..."
HE COULDN'T SAY MORE AS HE FELT A SLIGHT MOVEMENT IN HER FINGERS. SHE SLOWLY STARTED TO OPEN HER EYES. RANDHIR FELT LIKE ..LIKE WELL, HIS FEELINGS CANNOT BE EXPRESSED IN WORDS!!!
BUT AS I EARLIER SAID NOTHING IS PERMANENT...
PRESENT-
WHITE FEATHER BIRD WAS ON THE GROUND ...LIFELESS. THAT MALE BIRD TRIED HIS BEST TO PROTECT HER FROM FALLING...BUT HE HAD TAKEN A LONG TIME IN COMING WHEN SHE NEEDED HIM. IT WAS ALREADY TOO LATE...
A TEAR ROLLED DOWN RANDHIR'S CHEEKS AS HE WATCHED THE WHOLE SCENE. HE WAS A LIL SURPRISED THAT HE STILL HAD TEARS IN HIS EYES...BECAUSE IT IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR A PERSON TO SHOW ANY HUMAN EMOTION WHO IS ALMOST A LIFELESS BREATHING BODY.
THAT DAY SANYUKTA DID OPEN HER EYES BUT JUST TO LET HERSELF LOST IN THOSE BLACK ORBS OF RANDHIR FOREVER..SHE DIDN'T EVEN BLINK ONCE. SHE WENT AWAY AND WITH THAT SHE TOOK AWAY HIS LIFE ALSO...
THIS WAS THE END OF A HAPPY LOVE STORY...BUT ALSO A START OF ANOTHER TALE...A DARK STORY OF REVENGE AND PAIN. AGAIN WINDS WERE CHANGING THEIR DIRECTIONS..THEY WERE MORE FURIOUS AND RUTHLESS THIS TIME. STORM WAS TAKING ITS MOST TERRIBLE FORM...
" I AM COMING FOR U . YOU HAVE SNATCHED MY LIFE FROM ME...I PROMISE THAT I WILL MAKE YOUR LIFE WORST THAN DEATH" RANDHIR SAID TO A PICTURE ON A NEWSPAPER CUTTING.



END.




I KNOW I HAVE ENDED THIS WITHOUT DISCLOSING MANY THINGS LIKE..WHO KILLED SANYUKTA.?? AND WHAT DID SANYU WANT TO TELL RANDHIR????THE REASON BEHIND THIS IS THAT I ...I..HMMM...EVEN I DON'T KNOW WHY I DID SO!!!...OR MAY BE BECAUSE SOME MYSTERIES ARE NEVER MEANT TO BE REVEALED...




❤️AANYA😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow ...it dint luk lik dis is ur 1st time ... its one of d best os i read ...u shld write more
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Hey...are you sure this is your first fiction???
You wrote it very well
It was very emotional
Too good
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Originally posted by: kasturiroy18

wow ...it dint luk lik dis is ur 1st time ... its one of d best os i read ...u shld write more



thank u soo much for liking this😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anudoll

Hey...are you sure this is your first fiction???

You wrote it very well
It was very emotional
Too good

awww...thank u for such lovely comments!!!!
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how active u became pehele comment nahi karti thi an now my god u are writing story.
Os was very nice
keep writing
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Hey yr it was really awsme
Beautifully written


So much mystery left

Bt u r right some mysteries r meant to be hidden


I so loved it

Keep writing more
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Originally posted by: sweetastha

how active u became pehele comment nahi karti thi an now my god u are writing story.
Os was very nice
keep writing



well, don't know about active or inactive..but my boring vacations forced me to write something😆...atleast din bhar bed pe pade rehne se to achha h na😃😆
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey yr it was really awsme
Beautifully written


So much mystery left

Bt u r right some mysteries r meant to be hidden


I so loved it

Keep writing more


thank u for appreciating my os
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thanksss dear😊

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