I love you. #1 closed - Page 12

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

So cute...

just like my cute readers

part 6

In class room

morning last hour physics classes were going on... actually the boring class and all students were tired and sleepy listening to lecture .. our jodha was Damn sleepy ... so thinks to do something funny ... after a while she returned to last page of her book and write something on it and pass to mothi who was sitting beside her...

jodha : Arre why are staring to lecture like that... I am fully bored here and feeling sleepy

mothi: ( reads that with irritated smiling face ) Yuk I am staring him.. I am just trying to control my sleep keeping my eye wider ... ( writing that she passes book back to jodha )

jodha : oh I thought your listening to lecture ..

mothi : me and listening to boring class .. must be joking I guess ..lol

jodha : ( smiles reading that ) I know ...I know.. tel me what have you bought for lunch

mothi : noodles... and you

jodha : oh wow I love it...me panner

mothi : I love panner

jodha : we will exchange our box ok..

mothi : smiles and draws a smilee and sends her..
to which jodha also draws smilee to which both laugh

proffeser caught them smiling .. he throws chalk on them.

proff: you both stand up... can I know what made you both laugh and what are you writing in book as I didn't tel anything to note down

jodha and mothi both stood up

mothi got frighten ... she wisherpered ... mar gaye jodha abb Kya kare ...

jodha : squeezing mothi hand... sir oh I was just writing the important points down

proff : really .. then answer my question
... what is e=mc2

jodha stands still has she Havnt listening to lecture and mothi bends her head...

Jallal who was sitting back of them whispers " mass- energy equivalence"

jodha: ( hearing his whisper smiles ) it's ... its mass- energy equivalence

proff: ( with smile ) good ... both of you can sit...
to which both of them sighed relief and sat down
soon the bell rang and its time for lunch...
& proff leaves

jodha : turning to Jallal ...thank you ...

Jallal smiles and says teasingly ... Arre I am your boyfriend and its my responsibility to save you

jodha : bas kar majnu lets go to have lunch .. I am very hungry.
to which all her Frnds say yes and Jallal also nods his head taking his bag and all left class giggling and thinking about what happened just few min ago

precap : lunch together
Frnds I know its not good chappy ... I wrote in urgent . pls excuse me for that

part 7

lunch hour

Jallal was sitting next to jodha and on otherside mothi was sitting and Mann was sitting next to mothi and next to Mann approva and next to approva , abdul was sitting... meanwhile all open their box

jodha tries to open her box but it was hard and lid of tiffen box tightly closed... she tried hard to open

jodha : ( making puppy face) hmm hm hm... my tiffen box is not getting opened ..

mothi : give me I will open .. and took jo's box and tries opening it.. but can't .. oh oh jodha its not opening...

Mann : ( teasingly ) sooo sad... for which all laughs...
jodha gets angry seeing them laughing at her...so she takes her box back and with full force opens it... suddenly box slip from her grip and food spills on ground ... seeing that all starts laughing even loudly ...
and Jo making a crying face

mothi couldn't see others laughing at her best buddy and says... stop laughing you all their was nothing funny in it... ( turning towards Jo ) hey let us share my lunch... Waise bhi you love noodles na...

appu(approva): yes Jo.. I have bought padu's .. we can share ..

jodha : still upset .. mothi , appu...but I am very hungry lets us go to canteen

mothi smiles at her and says ok

appu also smiles and says good idea.. lets go...

Jallal: Arre what about us...

appu : you 3 enjoy your lunch ... to which jodha shows her tongue to him...

abdul: but we were just teasing as Frnds ...

Mann : okay sorry come now will share and eat...

mothi : no ...

jodha : hey lets go ... don't waste time on them ... and turns to leave...

Jallal: hey girlfrnd ... holding his ears sssooorrryyy..
making sad face...
jodha smiles seeing him...

abdul : ahem ahem ahem... abb tho maff kardo thum theeno ... bejara Jallal Aaj thak Kisise bhi mafvi nahi mangha ... pheli Bhar jodha se mangrahahe ...

jodha, mothi and appu looks at eachother ...okay maff kiya ... and sits down with them...

mothi and appu starts feeding Jo and same time having their lunch too...

abdul : wow ... Kya unity yeh...

Mann: right abdul...

Jallal : ( to Jo) do you like to have halwa ...

jodha : Huu I love it... and opens her mouth ... indicating him to feed her...

Jallal : with all pleasure majesty and smiles feeding her.. now all 3 mothi appu and Jallal were feeding her... by taking turns...

abdul : (looking at them n smiles to himself seeing Jallal feeding her and thinks...jodha is the only only girl who can make Jallal dance according to her wish)

Mann : yaar jodha in house also your parents feed you??

jodha : ya why ( giving confused looked)

Mann: oh your very lucky but we are been neglected here now...

abdul : (in complaining tone) ya your right Mann... and says we are also present here guys... (now looking at Jallal who was busy in feeding Jo) yaar feed me also...
to which Jallal gave him what is your problem ?? look ...

abdul : see how he is looking at me... I am your frnd ... feed me also ...

jodha : don't worry bro ... I will feed you...( saying that... she took halwa box from Jallal's hand ) and says open your mouth bro and feeds him...

abdul : so nice of you behena ... ( and gave teasing look to Jallal)

Jallal : (got annoyed) abbe behan hai teri

abdul : whatever bro and smirks seeing his possessive side...

Mann , appu and mothi shouts for me...

jodha : ok ok I will feed all
and saying she fed one spoon to all
now Jallal turn

jodha: Jallal open your mouth

Jallal opens his mouth and Jo feeds him... ( Jallal thinking what's happening to me .. she is ordering me .. and I am listening to her , but ya halwa seems to be more taster from her hand) and soon bell rang dragging him back

jodha : clsing box fromlets go... and getsup and all follow her and left back to class..

precap : not yt decided

ha dear its nice i am thinking some ideas for this story when i got abetter idea i will definitely share with u dear.

Part 8

Night in khan mansion

Jallal was thinking ... what's happening to me .. why I am getting so close to her.. he was so deeply engrossed in his thinking that he didn't notice his mom ( Hamida ) and abdul was standing near the door of this room ...

Hamida : Jallal .. look who s come home...

Abdul : hey buddy..

But their call went un-heard by call.. now Hamida and abdul were amazed to see him like this engrossed in thinking something so deep..

Hamida : ( with little annoyance , called him bit louder ) Jallal... is everything all right

Jallal : ( who's thinking was disturbed .. saw his mom and abdul waiting at door ) .. mom you here... and abdul when did you come..

Abdul : I came.. when you was completely immersed in thinking something... by the what were you thinking so deeply..

Hamida : ( with little worried ) beta.. is everything good..

Jallal : yes mom ... nothing to worry everything in good... and turning towards abdul I was thinking nothing come in..

Abdul : ( to Hamida ) aunty .. today I will my dinner here... and gives her a toothy smile..

Hamida : sure beta.. you both come down .. I will prepare for your dinner...smiles saying that.. and makes her way out..

Abdul : hey ... why I think I know what you're thinking... ( saying he jumps on jallal's bed )

Jallal : ( irritatedly ) what ??

Abdul : arre bhai... why are you hiding from me.. I know you're thinking about jodha... I have seen you .. how you keeping staring at her, how you obey her order without any word, how you kept quite when she said that your her boyfriend in front of whole college, and you jallaludin asked her sorry without your mistake... truly amazing na...

Jallal : abdul stop nothing like that not my girl friend.. she is just a friend..

Abdul : smirks hearing that... haan tho when I told she is your girl friend... it's you who is telling that...

Jallal : ( bit his tongue thinking what he just told) but.. but.. there is nothing like that...

Abdul : bhai.. why are you hiding from me.. I know you from childhood.. how adamant your.. but when it comes to her .. you silently obey.. that can't be only friendship...

Jallal : what ?? ( with little surprise ) have I changed so much.. to which abdul simply noded his head..

Abdul : don't worry.. its common in beginning stage of love... cool ...

Jallal : ( looking suspiously at abdul ) how you know? As per my knowledge you don't have any girlfriend...

Abdul : ( feeling caught ) no nothing like that.. it's just I read in a book...

Jallal: don't lie me bro... you and book both are anonymous (opposite ) .. tell me what he matter.. who is that girl...

Abdul : Jallal ... I am telling you nothing like that..

Jallal : bhai .. why now I think I know who is the girl... ( giving him teasing look

Abdul : ( curiously ) who..? ?

Jallal : now I am 100% sure there is someone.. tell me bhai who is she...

Abdul : you lied .. that you know her..?? lier

Jallal : wait bhai.. let me guess... I thin... I think.. its apoorva... isn't it..

Abdul : ( looking the other way..) no nothing.. I need to go..

Jallal : bhai... so its appu.. I did have doubt from many days.. the way you look at her.. and everything I knew you like her...

Abdul : Jallal ab bas kar... let's go down

Jallal : wah.. hai tho cheating hai.. first answer me.. then only I will let you go..

Abdul : ( feeling shy ) nods his head in yes..

Jallal : waa.. bhai you are feeling shy..and laughs.. at him

Abdul: accha ab chalo.. we will talk aunty must be waiting..

Jallal : ok bhai.. chalo.. I need to talk so much with you .. and put his hand on a abdul's neck..

Abdul : ( trying to remove his hand ) Jallal.. chod muje...

Both goes down stairs to have their dinner .. where Hamida was waiting for them...

Precap: not yt decided

Part 9

The following day in college.. All were sitting in college garden and chatting... While our bubbly Jo was eating lays chips tomato fav ( my fav ) while Jallal was watching at her.. The way she was enjoying like a kid.. He thought how could one be so innocent and naive ..while abdul looks at his frnd and smiles

Jo: ( putting lays to her mouth) hmm.. Its so yummy .. I love it...

Mothi: Arre .. For me.. And came to take some lays ..when Jo pulled it back.. Its mine.. And got up

Mothi : but I also want it... I like it too.. And starts going towards Jo.. Jo immediately ran behind abdul ..

Jo: bhaiya... Helppp Meee

Abdul : mothi leave ... You buy new one...

Mothi : abdul you stay out of this.. I want that lays only.. The one she is having.. Saying she ran to Jo...Jo immediately went behind Jallal..

Jo: boyfriend ... Help Meee

Ja : Jo .. Give her some.. She is your frnd

Mothi : see Jo.. Give me also.. I won't leave you until you give me..

Jo : very bad boyfriend ... Thum mere boyfriend ho uski ...

Ja : I am your boyfriend .. But she is also your frnd na.. Just give her little..

Jo : ( making puppy face ) little only...

Ja : yes Dea.. Little only

Jo: ok.. Mothi take.. N shows lays pack

Mothi : taking some lays.. Wow thanks Jallal .you have done a miracle.. She won't listen to anyone when it comes to lays

Jo: I won't give next time .. See showing the lays pack ..Its empty now..and makes crying face

Ja: don't worry girlfriend I will buy new one for you...

Jo: really .. ( jumps n hugs him in excitement) I want 2 lays pack...

Ja: ok baba... I will buy as much you want..

part 10

After thinking and talking to abdul .. Jallal decides to propose Jodha .. He was thinking on how to propose her atlast finally he brings himself to propose her.. He heard her giggling .. She was with ankitha and mothi... only they were their in class .. she was looking beautiful eating chocolate..

Jallal : hai all

Jo : hey boyfriend

Jallal : actually I want to tel you something ..
Jo: yes boyfriend

JA: actually ho mai... I... I.. Love you .. He said it with much difficulty .. Forward rose to her...

Jo was surprised and happy on hearing that.. She hesitantly takes the flower from his hand and smiles at him..

Next moment what happened really pissed her off..
All shouted April fool , Jallal your really good actor you become actor man.. Jallal was himself was unaware of it.. Jo got really angry and desected .. She runs away from their with teary eye throwing the rose on Jallal..

Now JA got really worried and angry ..he ran behind Jo to convince her..he ran away..

Abdul comes and says , sorry yaar even I forgot today is April 1st..

JA : no abdul .. Real fool is me.. I should have checked before acting ..

Originally posted by: laharipriya

ha dear its nice i am thinking some ideas for this story when i got abetter idea i will definitely share with u dear.

sure Dea... your mostly welcome...

Hey achhu its 9:25 dear where is the update.. Waiting.

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Hey achhu its 9:25 dear where is the update.. Waiting.

ho Sry Dea... actually I was watching JA in YouTube so I forgot just few min I will give update