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part 1 - 5 = page 1
part 6
part 7
part 8
part 9
part 10
part 11
part 12
part 13
part 14
part 15
part 16
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
part 1

It was the 1st day of college.. all were excited and the environment was itself excited and it was raining little making the surrounding more adorable ... all students were going here and there of the campus..
seniors were excited to welcome their juniors ( freshers) and all the freshers were also excited with their new college and had the fear too of seniors and ragging ..

jodha's house

jodha's mom shouted at her ..

maina : jodha get up ... its already 7 .. and its your first day at college...

jodha: ( gets up with a jerk n runs to washroom ) mom keep my dress ready...


so how's it Frnds ... I m updating via phone as I moved to hostel today :( ... so chotta update.. n update will b chotta ..as I will give update daily..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its really so much nice pls do continue
Super keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2

jodha rushes out from washroom and looks her mom had kept her dress all ready

jodha ( with smile ): nice mom
she gets all set and stands in front of mirror... to check out... she smiles looking at her n says .. you have no right to look so beautiful got it?? and smile even more wider... meanwhile her mom starts call her ..jodha come fast break fast is ready .. today is your first day at college.. and you be late today also...

sujamal( jodha's bro ) : ho it means she can go late from tomorrow... saying he laughs .. for which maina gives him a death glare.. and sujamal shuts his mouth
jodha: coming down stairs ... mom I am all set... see .. and gives maina a million dollar smile... to which maina also smiles..

maina : your looking beautiful princess

sujamal: oh princess... nice joke..

jodha: to sujamal ... jealous kiddo

sujamal: don't call me kiddo ...

maina : you both again started... stop fighting like kids... saying that she starts feeding jodha

sujamal: see your kiddo now to which jodha shows her tongue to him..
meanwhile barmal( Jo's dad ) comes Der..

barmal: so all set princess.. your first day at college... I am going to drop you

jodha : yes dad all set..

jodha and barmal leaves for college

precap: jo's first day at college n seniors ragging...
Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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part 3

jodha and barmal reached college..

jodha to barmal : ok dad bye... and sways her hand.. to which barmal also sways his sways his hand with a smile seeing her excitement...
jodha enters to college looking all see feels happy... she goes to auditorium reaching the directions... she sat in her place reserved for her... and saw who is next to her.. and the was empty seat reserved for Jallaludin ... she reads the name... jallaludin mohammed khan .. such a big name... Yuk..

meanwhile Jallal enters auditorium and sat in his place... he saw jodha sitting next to him... wow she is so beautiful .. he thinks

Jallal to jodha : hi miss??
jodha : jodha ... jodha singh
Jallal : ho jodha ... means fearless... you know... to which jodha smiles...
Jallal: I m... ja ... when jodha cuts him in middle... jallaludin mohammed khan
to which Jallal in surprise expression... how you know... to which jodha shows him the name plate...
Jallal: wow beauty with intelligent... can we Frnds ...
jodha: sure.. when the function begins with the principle address the function.. followed by some cultural function organised by seniors ..and campus view... meanwhile mothi came to jodha... yes the best buddies offcourse ...
mothi : jodha see here I got new frnd Mann ... Mann singh...
Mann to jodha : hi jodha .. mothi have told lot about you.. Wen Jallal comes their.with his frnd abdul ..
jodha : hi Mann... then turns to mothi and says meet him he is Jallal...
mothi : hey Jallal...
Jallal : hey... and he says so Frnds meet my best buddy abdul...
abdul : hey all
all : hey...
meanwhile abdul see's aproova ...and calls her
abdul to all meet my new frnd appu ..
to which aproova cuts him and says approva ... everyone becomes Frnds with all now...
they came out as the function got over... they all thought to go to canteen..

in canteen

one guy come to them and gives rose to jodha and says I love you...

jodha : taking the rose and says thank you brother ... to which all laughs...
that guys gets angry and says how dare you all to laugh at seniors ... wait.. you will all pay for it..

after few minute that guy came with his frnds.. and says something to him..
they all came to them and gives them some assignments and says..

seniors: get 10 copy of the assignment .. before evenin...

to which jodha Jallal n everyone looks at eachother faces...

senior: hey what are you look at eachother ... start writing ... and leave
the guy who came before says... its not over... and goes ...

precap : ragging continue ...
jodha : Jallal is my boyfriend
Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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part 4

all started writing assignment...

jodha : Arre what is this .. college first day itself ragging...

Mann : lets go and complain to principle..

mothi : are you crazy... if seniors get to know they will make our life hell here..

Jallal: I too agree with her.. we have to be here with seniors not principle got it

abdul: I agree with you..

ankitha : me too..

jodha : so what you guys mean .. they will ragg us and we should keep quite .. this is not possible...

Jallal : oh... go and complain .. and see the result from tomorrow... just keep quite and start writing all...

jodha : making angry puppy face... hmm... okay

all starts writing... it was soon evening... all returned home with some sweet memory of Frnds and bitter memory of getting ragged first day itself ...

next day..

as usual everyone came to college... very much excited ...but all were stopped at the entrance of the department by seniors..

guy1 : so all chotu' s .. say good morning sir to him ( showing shariffhudin ) he is the captain of college...

freshers : looking each other face... chotu's we .. 😡 ... but couldn't say anything..( Arre seniors hai baba ) together they told good morning sir...

shariff : so welcome all freshers to our college...

fresher: hearing his welcome .. all thought he is so nice and some thought look he is so handsome... and all together thank you Dea...

shariff : so we have a rule here...

all looking at each other .. with wide eye rule..

shariff : don't worry every fresher will receive a rose from me as the token of my wishes...but

freshers all seemed relax...but what
shariff : but .. cool all girls have to say I love you when you receive the flower...
to which all .. what love him ... some thinks wow he is so handsome ... some were still not able to comprehend ... mothi and ankitha looks at jodha ...
but our jodha gets irritated .. what love him.. no ways.. I won't say... she plans something ...
all we're receiving rose from him and saying I love you and moving in line
it was jo's turn she receive the flower and says sorry I can't say I love you... bcz I love someone else...
all were stunned hearing that... Jallal and her Frnds became shock... she didn't tel us... making their eye wider...

shariff : making big eye...hmm..so who is that lucky guy...
to which jodha shows Jallal...
Jallal eye became even more wider...

precap : not decided yet
Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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part 5

all her Frnds and Jallal was hell shock to hear that

shariff: tho Thum ho the lucky boy ( turning towards Jallal )

Jallal : still in shock ...me... ( to which jodha pinched on his hand .. not seen by anyone ) Haan me .. she is my girl frnd.. ( I also got to know now itself.. he said to himself ) soon the bell rang

shariff: ok everyone .. I will meet you all later.. go your classes ..

freshers : together ... ok sir...

shariff: good ..go now. and he left

all jodha's Frnds gathered her and Jallal

Jallal : what you said just now

mothi: jodha are you mad ... infront of whole college you told you love Jallal

jodha : ya so... ( acting like she did Ntg ny saying that )

Jallal : so ...?? are you mad... we don't even know each other properly ... and you told that ... without even asking me once...( with annoyed face but inside he was feeling happy )

jodha : Arre.. as girl I should worry about... why are you worrying ... Waise bhi muje boyfriend bananeka koi shouk nahi hai... and you know from now onwards no one will dare to tease me... cool ...everything will be alright... chalo chalo we will go to class .. we are getting late...
to which everyone including Jallal nods their head and follows her to class

Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update..u r going give daily updates ..great idea dear.. and congrats on ur new story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

nice update..u r going give daily updates ..great idea dear.. and congrats on ur new story

thank you Dea
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear
Continue soon

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