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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Avni Di..Superb banner..👍🏼

Arjun said,Natasha Bhabhi got what she wanted..Now..she wanted Sakshi behind bars or her husband's death or both?
And Raina also lives in the same building..hmm..
Curious to know about the "photograph story".
Natasha's character is kind of strange..I get an inkling feeling that she may be happy with Sakshi's arrest and also, not sad either for his death but feel like she is not behind this..

The flashback was cute..😳the one where Sakshi was writing..

Mangoes again..ha ha I'm already having it..Pieces of raw mangoes with salt and chilly powder..umm..😛 ( though you have mentioned Ripe mangoes)
This Vikrant's role is only limited to fb na..??
Angry Acp arrived at the right time.,.
"You can let go of my arm now."..😆
And her last line..😃Loved this whole scene..❤️

Kya twist hai..Her father arrested for a murder..😲
Waiting..waiting..Update soon ..
It was a very very nice update with lots to think upon, 🤓and yet you didn't revealed anything..Its getting more interesting now..Good going..👍🏼
Going back to detective mode..thinking...thinking..
Thanks for pm.

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sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Awesome part

Con soon

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Humairaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

wow awsm updae

loved it

very nicely written

continue soon

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Areesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

rituuu

that was just...

beautiful

banner is awesome

love it

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
well that was again bewitching.👏 its till now like ''we r not friends,we are strangers with memories.''😊 i hoped for a letter again(was a very little bit disappointed).I noticed one thing that mangoes have been pilling since 1st chapter...😃 Awaiting for some case(s) and clues to unfurl.
over all loved every line and it was ''perfect''.👏
Thanks for the pm.

Hehehe it kinda happened without planning.. but yes, I LOVE mangoes and summers are coming so maybe that's why😆

Hehe I couldn't include it coz it was going to get really long😛 But there will be one in the next😃

Thanks soo much.. hope u like the coming chapters😃

Originally posted by: Devangana
Loved it. Thanks for the pm and continue soon please.

Thanks a lot😳😳

Originally posted by: Armagadon
I am back!

Bas bas... don't thank me again for the letters re! Idea chilo, toke kikore na boli re?

Accha, coming to chapter 1 now.

Chapter Uno.

The quote was simply lovely - truly lovely! I loved the way you crisscrossed his dreams with the stark reality he was facing. So basically over here Arjun and Sakshi really love each other to a deep extent! I loved the way his heart reached out to feeling what his Sakshi was like...

How her state was... *sigh*

baki ka pore :D

Hehehe ok ok thanks bolbo na!😳

Oh wait.. i can't say thanks for all those words.. ebar ki boli? Love ya❤️

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing..
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much Niki!🤗

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
lovely update plz update soon

Thanks a lot!😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Continuation de Chapter Uno.

Sniff, *blowing nose*

You dedicated this chapter to moi 😭 I became senti man, whenever someone dedicates something to me I become highly emotional! *Tight hugs* Thanks a tonnn...

Awwieee... you aren't supposed to say thanks!! It fitted in so perfectly with this story.. sigh!

Now coming to Ayesha and Sameer, the matured couple out of the lot, I guess they have unsaid feelings for each other? Sigh, this time even I agree with Sameer that in reality it is very very difficult to not say that he has failed them.

But then, sometimes will power is behind everything? That's what creates miracles...

Yep yep.. they do! 😉 It is... if I were in his place, I would think the same.
Perhaps the person who can actually save Sakshi is the one for whom her heart beats

I believe that the Rawtes were in the budding shades of their love, I would state that they are recently married.

Correcto!

That's true, even for a fleeting second death brings about a moment of sympathy for your enemy... especially is it's a relative.

Now... coming to my assumptions...

She had told me then, that she would visit Rajveer, even though she didn't want to, just in case he was there already.

This line my lady, this line... you know ki agla Sherlock kaun hai *point me* LOL...

But yeah, I had already placed my deductions on fore as to why I thought.

1) Rajveer was a luthra character

her bracelet lying under the sofa of his living room, a neighbour overhearing a heated conversation between her and Rajveer

Yeh sentence brings a sign of struggle between the two.

she had appeared frightened

Ugh, when and why would a woman be scared of her husband's brother? Unless...

2) Sakshi is the innocentwa

she had appeared frightened

Anger, bhaagna, anxious... but fear? Kuch toh problem hai... kuch toh choot raha hai!

3) She had told me then, that she would visit Rajveer, even though she didn't want to, just in case he was there already.

SHe was ready to go because she expected her husband to be there...

So Judge sahab, yehi hai kuch daleele jo hum pesh karna chahte the. 😉

He he he he .. tu toh Sherlock nikli rey.. or should I say, Felu da?😃 Yep, all that you said are correct!

Ah the letter, we were never meant to be.

And that line proved one more thing, Arjun would cross anything to prove the counter na?

Brilliant, the letter came out to be fab!

Loads of love!

Shree :D

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Chapter Deux

The quote - simply lovely and gorgeous! Ah, I don't know why our constitution becomes highly effective while putting the wrong person behind the bars!

Ahh I know...

Sigh... the moment when he walked into the jail was painful, damn painful... in fact it was haunting! Brilliantly sketched Ritu!

The first night was beautifully written, mone ache na I had told you that I love where the first night is about soft whispers, getting to know and smiles :) I loved how the two moulded to get used to each other's presence.

Of courseee.. 😉

Oh by the way...

Assumption numero quatre : Not a love marriage... could be... a spur of the moment or could be to save her or...

Giving her freedom...

Correcto... theirs wasn't a love marriage. But I'll let you read how and when the proposal actually happened.😳

Back to updatewa,

I wanted to tell her that I loved her.

This line made me emotional...

You know when people hesitate to speak out for they don't understand and when they understand then they don't have enough time to speak out...

Something similar in the case of Arjun and Sakshi.

Their meeting touched our hearts, it was so damn emotional.

I know... I got emotional while writing it.. and the song😭

By the way, couldn't have the defence stated something on the violation of woman and etc etc.

Ah... but then who was the witness... oh wait.. there were noises of heated argument... argh... there must be something more... definitely something more...

Somebody is hiding something... somebody.

We got to hire KD Pathak!!!

Arjunwa... hire KD!

OMG u watch the show? I do too!! Hehehe.. eeesh imagine them together

Oh God... oh wait wait wait...

Did his brother do something... jeta teh Sakshi's dad ka tata goodbye... Hmmm...

Yep.. correct Miss Felu😉

That Rajveer is a first class a**, donkeys bhi sharma jayenge...

Hmm... this Rajveer and Sakshi... I am eager to know what' the story behind them. Grr

I was lost in the update *Again*

The last two lines took it man! Big time! 👏 ⭐️

Awesome update!

Love you...

Shree :D

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Chapter Trois

The quote - hai, maar hi daaloge! Jokes apart, the quote was damn damn damn damn awesome!

Eeesh... thank uu.. oops no thank u.. Love yaa🤗
Ah! She was writing their own love story! That's so damn gorgeous! it will also give Arjun a peek of her once colourful and beautiful mind.

Okay I was totally lost in reading it again!

Mango Pickles! Yumm... hahahahaha...
I LOVE THEM. My dida makes yummy achaar.. he he oh and mum too.. raw mangoes are loveee!

The first meet between Sakshi and Arjun was epic!

I was laughing like anything, over that Kasturi... hehe...

But I loved the relation amidst Sakshi and her Baba.

Waise found out Villain No: 1 - Her stepbro... If I think my assumptions are right, tahole oke phoshate help koreche or bhai! Grr...

Yup yup.. hehe I loved writing the first meet soo much!

Hmm I like the relation amidst her and her Babasa cause... she loved him yet she was caged in rules...

one of whom seemed more like two men put together

this line cracked me up - bechara Chotu... hahahahah... but Oh my, I loved the mango achar churi thing... it felt so nice ... so nice!

The first meet of Arakshi *flutter eyelashes* hayeee...

Hahaha, ACP Rawte's furious glare to poor Sakshi provided to be a source of entertainment for the rest of the team, I was laughing in trying to imagine the scene in my head. Haha...

But it was also magical 😉
Really?😳😳😳

Hahaha, cheeni waali chai, LOL! Hashte hashte oboshta kharab hoi geichilo! LOL! It just reminded me of JWM ka dialogue

But of course it would be different

"Gau ki chori hoon Deogarh ki!" I can imagine Sakshi glaring at him... aah... I guess she met her match 😉

Hahahahaa I laughed so much when I read that😆😆 Yess she did!

Is Raina the common name for negative lead - female?

For in Mars V/S Venus the name of the -ve lead female is Raina!!! Coincidence I tell you (we are mind telepathing re)

I HATE RAINA

This was a strange coincidence!! I actually like the name you know😛

Simple as that, the previous one as well as this one! Grrr

Ah... bhabhi...

So updating my list...

People to have conspired against Sakshi

~ Dev Shekhawat
~ Raina Kapoor
(upar dono ko shadi karwado) 😆 LOOOLLL🤣 this cracked me up😆
~ Bhabi - aka Rajveer's wife.

Loads of louve,

Shree :D

Replied in bold😃

Love you sooo much for all that.. it really means a lot! And I know u know🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
What do I comment on case part...bcoz I m hell confused... 😆😆😆
What was their in photographs???😕😕😕
Sakshi & Kasturi again stealing mangoes...😆😆😆
Sakshi helped him in catching that man...😃😃😃
Sakshi's father arrested in someone murder's...😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Hehehehe.. abhi aur confuse karne wali hoon😆😆😆

The photographs part will be revealed in the next chapter!

Hope u like the nexttt... thanks soo much Sneha!😳

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Chapter Quatre

Yes!!! I managed to complete my comments!!! Woohoo...

And I loved reading them😃

Stolen Moments and FWY... yeh dono baad main *grin* even PM ka epilogue 2 baad main *grin*
Arrey take ur time😳

@ Avni ji : Awesome Banner re! Loved it!

Coming to the update...

Mere trio Villains...

Versus Trio Heroes...

Kaun jeetega? Trimurti ya Trishul? Of course Trishul!!!

Oh by the way... teams announce hi nahi kiya...

Trimurti - Dev, Raina and Natasha

Trishul - Arjun, Sam, Ayesha.

This seriously cracked me up🤣 Of course Trishul😆😆

Do you have something with the colour mint green? From bedsheets to his shirt you seemed to be focused on mint green!

I dooo! I love the colour! Actually, I love all pastel shades.. pale blue, mint green, pale pink, pale yellow (loveee), peach, lilac😳
But of course, fav remain purple and yellow😃

cut across his right arm

Sign of struggle? As well the first attempt to save oneself from attack... but wait... kuch toh choot raha hai..

This was actually mentioned in Sakshi's account of what happened.. she was responsible for that cut when she tried to defend herself

no signs of a forced entry into the flat.

Known person - could be Natasha or Raina... Dev... perhaps but then we don't know if the two shared an acquaintance?

Yep yep.

Raina lives on the third floor right?

Her friend testified.

a perfect alibi, but then could be the want to perhaps separate Arjun and Sakshi... for her benefit be a motive enough to kill a person and frame Sakshi? Or could it be that there was again another heated conversation amidst Raina and Rajveer due to which the incident happened.

And being a lawyer herself... it stated that... she knew very well what to hide what.

Also I believe that they should get a check of all the... oh Arjun suggested that... haha...

You and hotwa think along the same lines na😉 Hmmm sochte raho😆

She got what she wanted

Benefit from the murder... benefit.

The photographs had stolen the life of her stepfather.

Damn it... something was cooking up!

That was when her indifferent behaviour towards me and Sakshi had faded away. I had been surprised when she had struck up a conversation with Sakshi on the phone one day. They had started meeting more frequently and I had begun to develop a sudden friendship with my sister-in-law.

I have a vague feeling that this was a very much well planned murder... everything seemed perfectly fine. This case seems like an open and shut case, but I truly believe that either this is a well planned murder...

or... hmm let me rest that to thoughts.
Well-planned murder.. yes. For sure😉
"Yes, I had, Arjun," she replied firmly. "I was informed through the phone and returned to Mumbai. You don't think..." Her voice started to gather a shade of anger.

Anger, firmness. She started to justify even before he asked. Kuch toh choot raha hai.

Vikrant Solanki

I just want to know more about this guy... jani na kano... but yeah... just you know curiosity!
Hehe of course.. more of him in Sakshi's story!
The man stopped and shouted over his shoulder, "Yeah I know she's hurt. I'll be back with the first-aid box."
"Where's Aisha when I need her." I heard him mutter under his breath.

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

"You can let go of my arm now."

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I just loved this chapter, it gave me immense food for thoughts!

Love you loads!

Shree 😳
Yaaay glad u liked it all so much... your comments mean a lott to me and u know that! I already said that lol. Love yaaa loads and loads❤️

Originally posted by: Armagadon
WAITTT

A light buzzed in my head! 😃

This has to be a planned murder... 😊

Or maybe not... 😆

But what am saying...

Sakshi thought no one was there in his house... suppose there was someone? Why because that someone killed Rajveer with the same knife which had Sakshi's imprints which means that she/he had wrapped a glove around the knife or a hanky or something!!!

So as to Sakshi is framed...

Hmm... or else... nahi nahi.. yeh ho sakta hai... 😕

Actually there's lot more to think... haha... am still thinking!

Hehehehe you're so funny😆😆😆

Hmmm I'll say you're going in the right direction.. sochti raho Miss Felu😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Nice update
arjun and sakshi ka connection ban gaye hai ye mangos
those letters are their memories
loved them
waiting for next

Thanks soo much!😳

Hehe yes.. mangoes are something that links them😉

Originally posted by: NainaSM
hummm arjun trying to save sakshi
sakshi is innocent he knows that
but still web is strong
arjun and sakshi flashback cute
arakshi got married how ?
lot of questions
continue soon

Thanks soo much Naina! So.. how and when their marriage happened will come soonish.. keep reading😉

Originally posted by: fly.high
A well collaborated chapter I must say...

This chapter gave deeper insight into all the characters of the story...
this Bhabhi of arjun seems way too mysterious to me. ..don't know why but she definitely is under my radar of suspicion ...

she was so called out of station...she suddenly and surprisingly started to change her behaviour towards sakshi...and now her sudden hatred in order to show her fake pain of loss. .all seems to b a pretence for covering up something...

the flashback was soon cute... but the sudden twist had me yearning for more...

continue soon na ritu

love.

Heyloo!!🤗

Sooo happy that you liked it 😃

Deffo.. keep reading to find out more😉 hope u like the chapter that's coming up!

Thanks soo much for leaving a comment😃

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
amazing part.
loved it.

Thanks soo much Pari!😳

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome part
Con soon
And thanks for pm

Thanks a lot😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
Amazing part...
Arjun has reopened the case...G8..
Arjun's bhabi natasha.. She seems dangerous 😕
And raina too ..
Loved arakshi and their meetings... Sakshi's dad has been arested in an murder case 😲 ...
Waiting to know more
Contd. Soon
Thnx for pm

Heyloo!😃

Maybe she is..😉

Thanks soo much..glad u liked it all😃

Originally posted by: Swara85
Avni Di..Superb banner..👍🏼

Arjun said,Natasha Bhabhi got what she wanted..Now..she wanted Sakshi behind bars or her husband's death or both?
Hmm.. read to find that out 😉

And Raina also lives in the same building..hmm..
Curious to know about the "photograph story".

That's coming up in the next chapter!

Natasha's character is kind of strange..I get an inkling feeling that she may be happy with Sakshi's arrest and also, not sad either for his death but feel like she is not behind this..

The flashback was cute..😳the one where Sakshi was writing..

Sochte raho!😛 Personally, that was my favourite too out of the whole update😳

Mangoes again..ha ha I'm already having it..Pieces of raw mangoes with salt and chilly powder..umm..😛 ( though you have mentioned Ripe mangoes)

Nooo.. I want them now!! Yeahh salt and chilly.. yummm! I can never have enough of them😆

This Vikrant's role is only limited to fb na..??

Who said?😛 Maybe not...

Angry Acp arrived at the right time.,.
"You can let go of my arm now."..😆
And her last line..😃Loved this whole scene..❤️

Yaaay.. glad u liked it😳

Kya twist hai..Her father arrested for a murder..😲
Waiting..waiting..Update soon ..
It was a very very nice update with lots to think upon, 🤓and yet you didn't revealed anything..Its getting more interesting now..Good going..👍🏼
Going back to detective mode..thinking...thinking..
Thanks for pm.