Marine Drive..
It could have been a simple scene where he is reading the letter with the bg description and all, but you added a moment there, where you showed him imagining her..You add such things and the whole scene gets life..Not only in this particular chap, but there are many such scenes which, all I can't note here now..This above was an ex. I love this special quality about your writing..👍🏼Wanted to tell you long back.😛.
Conversing through letters is a different feeling altogether..And I LOVE letters..❤️
You have done a great job again at writing the letter..👍🏼 It gives away the fact of how strong their bond is.
Aha..the photographs..I feel anger rising in me..for all such low thinking..😡
Anyways..the point is she was being watched..And maybe it was planned that car attack.is that so..??
See if I get this right...It was this mysterious person who asked the shop boy to print the photos unofficially and hence no records. He asked him to lie to Arjun about computer not working and He made the phone call telling Arjun that it was Rajveer who printed the photos..right..???
Rajveer ka kya connection hai with these photos samjh nahi aaya..😕
I Loved the little moment between Arakshi in the flashback..😳 Rain..
Ok Will comment on the remaining half tomo..
Back again..
Poor Shree..😆 I liked that scene.
Aww..! he followed her to her haveli to see she reaches safely..😳
One more letter..
"It was just a memory, and yet it felt too calming, too soothing...". "I tried to hold on to the memory of her touch. " I still go through this feeling sometimes ..And I can't explain how it feels..And here too I liked that whole part.👍🏼
Hey..One thought crossed my mind..May be Natasha had an affair..and that person might be the mysterious man..and both had planned this murder and both were present at their flat when this happened..🤔
Anyways, the thing is simple..You have kept me hooked to the story and given my brain some work..😆
Oh damn..! A threat chit.?? That proves two things..1: Which is obvious that Sakshi was framed...2: The murderer is actually scared now..
I loved the suspense you have created till now..👍🏼Good going girl..! First ball pe hi four..not bad..!👍🏼
It was a brilliant 👍🏼and a long update..Aise hi long-wale updates dena..😳😛
Thanks for pm..continue soonish..
Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago
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