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Posted: 10 years ago
As usual good one ramya...

Ithana naal krish dhaan yelloraiyum kalaaipaan, but ippo avana yellarum kalaaikuraangaley 😆

Yenna da romba naala oru twist vaikalayenu paarthen, idhu namma ramya va nu doubt vandhadhu, but neenga nirubichiteenga naan adhey ramya dhaan, innum maaralai nu 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: plily


My favorite jodi Hari - Simi . Yen Ramya yen ! 😕😭



Lily.. idhukke ippadi naa, then next part ku unga reaction eppadi irukkum nu think panren.. 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyvijay



Lily.. idhukke ippadi naa, then next part ku unga reaction eppadi irukkum nu think panren.. 🤔



Ramya , neenga update panunga pa , reactionla next than . Ready to face any twist 😉 😆

Then , how are you now dear ? Please take care . Health than first ok 😊 .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: plily



Ramya , neenga update panunga pa , reactionla next than . Ready to face any twist 😉 😆

Then , how are you now dear ? Please take care . Health than first ok 😊 .



health ippo ok dhaan.. but now problem with my system.. 😔 update thru mobile is much difficult pa.. comments I'll manage it.. will give as soon as it is resolved..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...
I just came across this thread.
I'm commenting for this story's prequel, "Nee Naan Aval"
The thread is closed now and I can't comment there!
The Karthi-Jeya and Raji-Tamizh pairing was awesome!
I read it only after knowing the pairing before hand!
And your writing style had a fervor of its own.
I haven't read this particular FF, because its new characters, it will be difficult for me. But, I will if get time.
By the way, I was very happy to see the photo I photoshopped put on your story.
Wondering which one?
The Tamizh-Thulasi one with the baby, you put in the last chapter😉!
Anyway, nice job. I really liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gisel

Hey...

I just came across this thread.
I'm commenting for this story's prequel, "Nee Naan Aval"
The thread is closed now and I can't comment there!
The Karthi-Jeya and Raji-Tamizh pairing was awesome!
I read it only after knowing the pairing before hand!
And your writing style had a fervor of its own.
I haven't read this particular FF, because its new characters, it will be difficult for me. But, I will if get time.
By the way, I was very happy to see the photo I photoshopped put on your story.
Wondering which one?
The Tamizh-Thulasi one with the baby, you put in the last chapter😉!
Anyway, nice job. I really liked it!



Wow !! Gisel.. Actually I'm surprised to see you here... Thanks for your comments..

Oh is it you ? yeah I think I got it from Thendral Section of this forum...

As you said, try reading this one when you find time 😊

And actually, only after u said, I noticed that the previous thread is closed..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 82 :

Previous Part : Part 81



Hari is upset as Simi spoke in that way.. He had a light dinner and went to sleep as he was also much tired after work..


Next Day : (Saturday)

He woke up late in the morning and sees Simi dressed up as if she is going out..

Simi : Good Morning !!

Hari : Good Morning dear..

Simi : habbaaa... you woke up finally...


Hari : sari.. enga kelambitta ? enna program.. ?


Simi : neeyum dhaan ... come on.. get ready... chalo chalo... fast..

Hari : where ?

Simi : sonnaa dhaan kelambuviyaa ?

Hari : not like that.. konjam tired ah irukku... evlo dhooram drive pannanum nu therinjakka dhaan..

Simi : no worries... en vandi la pogalaam... I'll drive...

Hari : appo... sollamaatta.. ?

Simi : first get ready and have breakfast.. solren..

Hari : (mind voice) appadi ennadhaan suspense oh.. ?




After having breakfast, he comes back to the room..

Hari : shall we start ?


Simi : ya... come... lets go..



She kept driving for long distance..

Hari : hey... so long ?

Simi : just few more minutes...



They get down in front of an individual house.. A person hands over a key to her and she thanks him..

She takes Hari inside that house..

Hari : whats this Simi ?

Simi : paarthaa theriyala... veedu..

Hari : adhu theriyudhu... yedhukku...?


Simi : haiyyo... stay pannadhaan daa... udane yaaru nu ketkkaadha... naama rendu perum dhaan..

Hari : Oh... So, ellaam plan panni dhaan nadakkudhaa.. ? ivlo seekkiram paathutta..

Simi : hey.. idhu ippo vandha yosanai illai..


Hari : whatever... inga dhaan koottittu varre nu therinjirundhaa, I wouldn't have come..

Simi : hey.. inga scene create pannaadha... just have a look... pidichirukkaa nu sollu... mathadha veettla poi discuss pannalaam..

Hari : neeye paarthuttu vaa... I'll wait outside..



After sometime, Simi comes out and gives the key back to the person and they return home.. They didn't talk on the way..

Once they go to their room, Hari starts shouting..

Hari : Simi... this is too much.. neeye ellaathayum pannittu pora... what are you thinking ?


Simi : hey... cool cool...


Hari : sari... just tell me... whats the need to go separately.. ?

Simi : ippadi porumaiyaa kelu... solren..

Hari : sollu...


Simi : If we are alone, we'll have privacy da..


Hari : yen... inga illayaa.. ?

Simi : naan chinnadhula irundhe inga dhaan valarndhen.. eppadi unkooda free ah inga irukka mudiyum.. sollu ?

Hari : come on... chummaa yedhaavadhu sollanum nu sollaadha..

Simi : not only this... I have many reasons to list down.. ellaam sollanumaa unakku... ?

Hari : sollu... ennanu dhaan paakkuren..


Simi : see... we are married.. we need to learn to do things by ourselves... inga irundhaa, you'll be care free ... adhe naama thaniyaa irundhaa, poruppu varum...

Hari : appo, ippa illanu solriyaa ?


Simi : adhilla... see... you are workaholic... paaru... nethu kooda, naan vandhu romba neram kazhichu dhaan nee vandha... eppadiyum inga ellaarum irukkaanga nu dhaane... If we are separately, you'll think of it, and manage to come home soon..

Hari : idhu dhaanaa ? idha direct ah enkitta sollirundhaa, I would change my workstyle..

Simi : idhellaam solli maaradhu vera.. but if you put in a situation and learn from it., thats different..


Hari : (silent)


Simi : apparam.. yen avlo dhoorathula veedu paarthen naa.., if we stay nearby office, again., we will be asked to stay long as the project becomes more hectic... but ippo, I can atleast take the last bus and return... apparam indha area la ye paarthirundhaalum.. , you would have a feel that our parents are there to take care and more dependent on them... please try to understand what I'm saying...


Hari : but ammaa appaa naan illaama.. ?

Simi : ya.. I'll come to that point... ivlo varusham appadi dhaane irundhaanga... ? I mean when you were in Jaipur.. Inga Krish kooda mattum dhaane irundhaanga... infact ippo Naana, Naani um irukkaangala ?

Hari : so, you are trying to find reasons everywhere to convince... right ?

Simi : not like that... but if you think so, I can't help it..

Hari moves from there to cut off the conversation..


Lakshmi notices that there must be some problem between them as Simi takes office bus stating that she has to take up client call early in the morning...

She then stops Hari who was about to leave for office..


Laksh : Hari.. just a moment.. urgent ah poganumaa ? can u spend 5 mins ?


Hari : sure maa..


Laksh : come... sit down...

Hari : hmmm... sollunga...


Laksh : whats the problem kannaa...

Hari : problem ah ? nothing...

Laksh : come on.. enakku theriyaadhu nu nenaikkaadha... its obvious as how you both behave..

Hari : adhu vandhu maa..

Laksh : veedu matter dhaane ?

Hari : hmmm... adhe...


Laksh : hmmm... inga varaikkum kettuchu... avlo satham..

Hari : naan enna pannattum.. ?


Laksh : porumaiyaa handle pannu paa..


Hari : but...

Laksh : just let her know what do you think... sit and talk with her...


Hari : ok maa...

Laksh : thats my boy... sari... you start...

Hari : bye maa...



Next 2 days pass by with their usual routine works at office..

Simi notices that Hari is not at his seat for quite some time... Initially, she thought he might be in meeting or in some discussion.. But all others were there... So, she moved to his cubicle to check..

Friend : vaanga Madam... Sir ah thedureengalaa ?


Simi : hmmm...

Friend : enakkum theriyala enga ponaaru nu... he is missing for quite some time..

Saran : hey Simi... Hari was not keeping good.. He is taking rest in dormitory...

Simi : what happenned ?

Saran : thalavali nu sonnaan... looks tired as well...

Simi : oh.. romba neram aachaa ?

Saran : aamaa...

Simi : ok thanks.. I'll see to it..

Saran : take him to office doctor if needed..

Simi : ya ... will do..



Simi goes and waits before the Gents dorm for few mintues.. Then as the security came, she asks him to wake up Hari and bring him..

Hari comes out and on seeing him like this, Simi looks much worried...

Simi : ennachu ? yen en kitta sollala.. ? vaa doctor kitta polaam..

Hari : illa... onnum illa... I'm ok..

Simi : sari vaa... kelambalaam...

Hari : veettukkaa ? ippave vaa ?


Simi : then.. ? I've informed the lead.. have booked cab.. we'll leave.. let your bike be here at office...

Hari : but Simi...

Simi : shhh... sonnaa ketkkanum...

Hari : (silent)



They reach home.. Naani gives some home remedies and he sleeps for sometime..

Simi was seated by his side watching him..

Hari : (wakes up) hey.. enna nee ... ivlo neram ippadiye va irukka ?


Simi : thats ok..


Hari : enna appadi paakkura ?

Simi : (mind voice) sorry daa... ennaala dhaane..?


Hari : hey... unnaala onnum illa...

Simi : what ?

Hari : adhaane nenacha...

Simi : but I know you... I never that it would affect you so much... you were thinking about this all through the day... thats why you might have got headache and ill...

Hari : maybe...

Simi : I thought you would understand me..

Hari : me too thought the same.. you understand me nu...


Simi : ok ok... cool... forget it.. you are more important..

Hari : Thanks Dear...



Next Day, Simi pretends to be normal with everyone.. But Lakshmi notices the disappointment in her..

As she needs to attend the client call, she leaves early to office on Friday as well..

So, again Lakshmi calls her son to speak up..

Laksh : ennappaa aachu veedu matter ?

Hari : adhuvaa... she is convinced... and dropped that idea..


Laksh : Oh... eppadi ?

Hari : on seeing me fallen sick on that day..


Laksh : so, no issues now between you la ?

Hari : yes..

Laksh : but do you think she is normal... ? I mean as she was earlier...

Hari : yen maa..

Laksh : illa paa.. I think you missed to notice due to busy work...

Hari : enna ?

Laksh : if you keenly notice., ippolaam she agrees for everything.. I mean earlier, edhu venumnaalum kettu vaangikkuvaa... now, she is accepting whatever is there...

Hari : ennamaa solla varreenga ?

Laksh : better, we shall go with her wish..

Hari : you mean ?

Laksh : you both move on..

Hari : maa...


Laksh : see... I know her for so long.. from when she was born.. she is such a nice girl..

she has something in mind.. avala naama dhaane sandhoshamaa vachukkanum... so, go ahead...

Hari : but neenga...?

Laksh : engalukku endha varuthamum illa.. if fact we will be happy only on seeing the kids happy... just sit and think...

Hari : sure maa... paakkalaam...



At office :

After the call, Simi comes to have breakfast at the canteen and sees Madhu seated alone and looks like she is not in a goo mood..

Simi : Hello... Good Morning...

Madhu : (didn't notice)


Simi : Hey... endha ulagathula irukka..? (shooks her)


Madhu : haan... hey... nee eppa vandha ?


Simi : hmmm.. half an hour aachu..

Madhu : hello... naan vandhe 10 mins dhaan aachu...


Simi : ha ha.. then ennaachu ? kaalailaye mood off ah ?

Madhu : obvious ah theriyudhaa ?


Simi : appo adhaanaa ? pinna.. eppavum irukkura prakkaasa oli miss aagudhe... yaar kaaranam..

Madhu : ellaam en brother Sudhan dhaan..


Simi : Oh... appadi enna pannaan.. ?


Madhu : morning, Bus break down nu, Krish came to pick me up..

Simi : okay..

Madhu : avanga rendu perum dhaan friends aache..?


Simi : yeah... adhukkenna ?

Madhu : hmm... he came and asked Krish if he knows what happened to Angel nu.. office la paathiyaa nu..

Simi : Oh... aamaa la... naan kooda marandhutten...

Madhu : what ?

Simi : illa... ava enna aanaa nu... I mean, ava chapter..

Madhu : enna aanaa namakkenna ? why should we bother.. ?


Simi : adhukku oru reason irukku... ava mattum kaila sikkunaa naa...

Madhu : hey leave it... adha pathi pesa vendaame..


Simi : but still we can't forget the problem she created on that day.. avala paarthaa kodukka vandiyadhu konjam irukku..




Simi then stops their teammate and asked about Angelina... It seems that she terminated from office, as she did not turn up for 5 continuous days without informing, which is as per their company policy considered as 'person absconded'..




--- to be continued..


Link to : Part 83
Edited by ramyvijay - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update Ramya
Hari and Simi first fight after marriage

Hari pavum wants to stay with his parents

Simi has valid points the way she is thinking is true but at the same hard for hari to digest

Hari becoming ill Simi getting worried and taking care of him and then changing her decision

Ithula i liked Lakshmi being understanding and tell her son to move out, it will hurt her but she was understanding liked that :)

Madhu and Simi convo naane marudhuten what happened to Angel, ohoo she lost her job ahh? Really or is there more to the storya?

Amma whats happening with Prem and Preethi, when will Prem tell Raji he is taking over his dads business with Pooja?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update Ramya...


Idha edhirparkala... Indha maadhiri that she will want to stay separately is may be soo unexpected that I am shocked :)... These days, there is a lot more push to stay together!!

Whats up with Madhu? And prem-pooja?

Pls do keep updating...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super Update Ramya... 😉

Oho... Now, I understand what the fight was about between Hari - Simi... 😛

But quite unexpected pa...

I actually don't want Hari - Simi to move out from VL house... But I am sure that you have a good reason (other than what Simi said) to why they are leaving... So fine... 😃

Lakshmi as usual fantastic... Very sensible and practical... Great... 👍🏼

Oh yeah... Even I forgot about Leena... Is her chapter closed or is this indicating that there is more to her in the story?

Also, it was really cute to see Simi caring for Hari when he fell ill... 😛

Waiting for the next... 😉

And your prof pic... I smile every time that I see it... Super !! 😉
Edited by SushK16 - 10 years ago

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