REQUEST NOTE PLS PEEP IN - Pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear friends
In this part two main character are making entry Samrat Jadav( Sammy) and Priya Raizada(Priya)
Hero entry in next part till wait.

Part 2
Kaplana comes out, by seeing her driver comes to her.
Driver : Baby , where u want to go?
Kalpi:(smiles) Kaka, I will go by myself in my scooty(says by pointing her scooty)
Driver: But beta if ur parents come to know that u went in scooty they will be angry on me.
Kalpi: Kaka they don't have the time to figure it out until u inform them (with pleading eyes) so don't tell, bye.

Kalpi reaches to temple first she went to her bappa and had a fight for spoiling her mood
Kalpi: what is this bappa at least today you could have arranged for some urgent meeting or important deal or conference so they don't have time for me at least on my birthday I have to not see them fighting?
Kalpi: Bappa I'm very angry on u, and my mood is also off.
Then let's first switch on ur mood(sound comes frm behind). Hearing familiar voice she turns behind with smile.
Kalpi:Dada (with smile she forward her right hand)
Sammy:Hmm, so here is ur dairymilk. Now ur mood is on.
Kalpi:Full on(hugging) thank u dada.
Sammy: Happy Birthday
Kalpi: Where is my gift?
Sammy: But maa told Kalpi is allergic to gifts (saying this he take outs pair of earring) is it ok.
Kalpi:(smiles and hugs him again)thank u.
Priya(showing her fake anger)Now enough of hugging like this nobody hugs me(pointing her eyes on Sammy and says)
Kalpi: Dada some burning smell is coming naa.😉
Sammy: ya yes 😉
Priya: ok ok now Kalpi if ur bappa scolding session and ur dada hugging session is over than we can go and celebrate ur birthday.

All three come chawpati and celebrate Kalpi birthday it Kalpana favourite place
Sammy:So, girls tomorrow is ur first day of the college.
Kalpi and Priya both said unison: Ya waiting eagerly.
Priya:Sammy I'm very excited that whole day I can be with u.
Sammy: Priya it's college we go there for studying and I'm ur senior so behave properly. Kalpu inform her not to talk like this in college and maintain distance frm me.
Priya:(going close to him)So outside college I can do anything.😉
Sammy:What😡
Kalpi(starts laughing badly)Drama queen enough stop troubling and flirting with my dada.
Priya:Kalpi tu bhi (starts singing) Dost dost naa raha,Pyar pyar naa raha( with fake tears in her eyes)
Sammy: Kalpi and Priya now enough it's already late maa must be worrying come lets go home.
Sammy and Kalpi leaving Priya at her home, head back to home.
Sammy:Ok Kalpu Good night, tomorrow we meet in college.
Kalpi:Dada ur not coming with me.
Sammy:Kalpu I want u to face the world tomorrow is first day of ur college, I want u to handle it by yourself.
Kalpi:(with a sad tone) Ok
Sammy: Hey I will be there, now smile otherwise maa will scold me.




Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice update. Where is raghav?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
sammy-kalps bond is beautiful...waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Very nice update. But no rags so... Ek sur update tho banta hai yaar 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

HELP! HELP! HELP

Dear friends needed help actually I was planning our hero entry so I thought as its Kalpi first of college and our hero will be her senior but can't able to start of how to make them meet the reaction should like when we throw a stone in stagnant water and create vibration, this effect our hero has to create in our Kalpi's heart when he meet so I'm in hard need of your help I'm good reader but very bad in writing please help me out and give ur suggestion pls pls help me out.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
How about rag doing raging of freshers
n den kalpi come n he make her do some funny things
it will be fun 2 read
wat say
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssna

How about rag doing raging of freshers

n den kalpi come n he make her do some funny things
it will be fun 2 read
wat say

Thanks for suggestion I noted it." "
Will funny thing create havoc in Kalpi's heart as she made her reserved she is not comfortable sharing anything except Kamala, Priya and Sammy. Specially facing world since she had seen from childhood being daughter of successful businessman all want to be her friend for her money, which she totally hate. R u able to get it what I want.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
u can make rag do thing that kalpi think rich guys won't do since they are quite focus on their wealth n attitude .like rag helping someone n scolding the accused n kalpi looking at rag the way he is talking pure sincerity n kalpi would feel something in her heart
Edited by amykaulizt - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice updates
Update soon next part and please PM once update
Edited by sampa79 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Request to my ff writter friends as I'm unable to write further the story I would be very happy if someone is interested in continuing it.

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