REQUEST NOTE PLS PEEP IN - Pg 6

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Dear friends,
Here I'm trying my hand on writing first ss hope u like it, I need more ur suggestion then appreciation since it my first time before starting I would thank ff friend Appy fizz(Arpita) for motivating and guiding and The Blackrose for giving chance to make story.
I also want to thank to Pookhi, Raz (AmbroseFever), Sandhya (sevenstreaks) n Appy too 😳 as they started off the story...

My dear ff writters I really highly influenced by ur writing skill.

Index
Prologue below
Character sketch below
Part 1 Pg.3
Part 2 Pg.4
Needs your suggestions Pg.5


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appyK thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Post the prologue and cs soon.. And don't forget to pm me..😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update dear. We will motivate u :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤗 offcourse dear update d prologue soon😉
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BITTERSWEET LOVE
PROLOGUE
Kalpi stepped out of her Mathematics class when the college hero(Raghav😉)blocked her way!!Kalpana's eyes widened in surprise on seeing him but inside, her heart started beating rapidly. Raghav smirked at her as his eyes twinkled in delight. She was wonderfully responsive to him and lord help him but he loved teasing her.
"Where r u going, beautiful?" he asked brushing a stray strand of her hair out of her stunning eyes.



Prologue part is written by Pookhi and Raz


Edited by Cinderella81 - 11 years ago
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Character Sketch

Kalpana Kapoor: Daughter of Sahil and Neetu Kapoor both successful business person always busy in their work but due to high egoes they always fight they live in same house but separated long back Kalpi never got love from her parents ,the person who care whom she love is her nanny Kamala Jadav.But bcoz of her parents she become very reserved girl her world revolve around three people her Kamala maa. Samrat dada and her BFF Priya, she build a strong wall around her never allowed anyone to enter her life other than these three.

Raghav Singhania: Only son of rich businessman Vikram Singhania. Very lively person, believe in enjoying every moment of life never serious about relationship.Loves his parents the most.

Priya Raizada:Sweet, bubbly and bfff of Kalpi. Loves Samrat Jadav.

Samrat Jadav: Ambitious, obedient and serious about his relationship and follows from heart. Consider Kalpana us his real sister,BFF of Raghav and loves Priya but never told her.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice idea... Continue soon n plz pm me 😳
Btw one request, if u don't mind, plz give credit to Pookhi, Raz (AmbroseFever), Sandhya (sevenstreaks) n Appy too 😳 as they started off the story... Hope u Don't mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great syart.. Continue soon..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice idea... Continue soon n plz pm me 😳
Btw one request, if u don't mind, plz give credit to Pookhi, Raz (AmbroseFever), Sandhya (sevenstreaks) n Appy too 😳 as they started off the story... Hope u Don't mind...
[/QUOTEThank for telling, like this pls keep guiding me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome prologue and CS
I can't wait to read more

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