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Posted: 10 years ago
such a cutipie update... But itna chotu sa...continue soon nd thnks fr the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update but its too short n nxt time want long one n update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update acchu
Pls continue soon
Thanks for pm
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thank you all Dea Frnds.. love you all.. I am Sry I will not be able to reply fr all comments.. but I will definitely read all of Ur comments.. it encourage me write more..so pls keep commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its very chotu update acchu..
But nice one..
Next one we want bada update.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 15

How we will go up now, she shouted at him..

stop shouting and let me think he said

think, and think fast , get me out from here Jo said

why don't you have brain, can't you think.. actually this all happened because of you, its all because of your stubbornness , Jallal mocked at her

how dare you, did I tel you come here, I am in this pit because of you.she retorted back

stop shouting like a monkey and think something , an annoyed Jallal replied

Jallal someone shouted , both JA and Jo looked up and saw abdul, mothi, ankitha, Mann standing there

hey help us to get out from here yaar Jallal requested , get some rope

wait we will do something , Mann replied back and ran somewhere ,abdul joined him

Jo are you ok, Did you get hurt , a concerned mothi asked her

I am fine , Jo said showing her hand like a kid , see I am fine

ya she is fine , how will she get hurt, she had fallen on me. aaahh its still hurting me... , Jallal said

Jo with concern really, where its hurting, and started checking him

Jallal got surprised seeing her concern, here he said keeping his hand on his chest , please forgive me .. actually I didn't fool you purposely on that day.. I really...

Jo got angry hearing that ( April fool )
and pushed him backward and shouted don't come near me, I hate you...

due to sudden push Jallal lost his balance and hit to mud wall, he got hurt on his shoulder but kept quiet, he knew his Frnds, especially abdul he will take whole world on his head if he getting to know , and more Jo will never forgive herself for hurting him , he knew she care for him ,and cursed himself for spoiling her mood again..

Hey hold this his Frnds shouted throwing some rope type climber(plant which grows with the help of other)

Jo told that and go up, I will come behind you JA said

Jo took hold of the rope and tired to climb up, when Jallal lifted her holding her waist and helped her.. he felt immense pain in this shoulder, he felt as if he had fracture, aahh he hissed in pain

what happen, don't dare you do some drama now and make me fall now Jo said

Jallal couldn't hold her , he loosened the grip a little, which made her loose balance , both fell back , with Jo on top of Jallal..

precap not decided


Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear so sad of jalal nd jodha when will she understand...jalal...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear update soon but next time big vala hain na
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update n update nxt soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very very nice chapter update fast continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter

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