current jealousy track os part 6 updated

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hii guys m new to the forum and I love reading the write ups that u ppl write...u guys r amazing..
This is my first os attempt on the current jealousy track and its super short
part 1
Panditji asked nandini to come at 9 pm for the riyaz and obviously ordered her not to inform Manik.
9 pm at the jam room
Both of them are doing the riyaz with full concentration. Niyonika was passing by and had a evil smirk on her face . She locked the room from outside. When the riyaz got over nandini was shocked to find out that both were locked inside, she kept shouting for help but to no success. She took out her phone to call Navya and the battery's dead...wad hard luck! And panditji does not carries the cell phone during riyaz as nobody can come between him and his music..



Now this is super quick I knw :p
Part 2

Panditji said that they have no option but to spend the night in the jam room.
Nandini's pov : Aiyapa kaha fas gyi Mein..mere sath hi ye sab kyu..
Both of them sat down and were discussing about the fusion concert.
Nandini was feeling cold and rubbing her shoulders. Pandit took out his waistcoat and gave it to nandini.
Nandini hesitated , but pandit convinced her by saying that he could not afford her to fall sick before the important concert.
They both were sleepy, nandini did not realise that she slept taking support of pandit's shoulder.

Next morning fab 5 enter the jam room and all were flabbergasted to see nandini and pandit.(no points for guessing that Manik was fuming with anger)
Kabir be like ab ye volcano phatega...

Part 3

With the noise around. Pandit and Nandu woke up , slowly realising what akward situation they were caught in.
Kabir singing playfully Uff uff mirchi...
Maniks pov : Iss pandit ki toh mein...
Nandini noticed those akward glances and left immediately..manik follows her..
Manik : Kya kar rhi thi tum uss pandit k sath?
Nandini : Wo..manik hum riyaz kar rhe the n achanak se...
M : N achank se kya Nandini?? It looked lyk u wanted to be with him..ur head resting on his shoulders
N : Manik meri bath toh suno wo..
M : N ye tumne kya pehna hai?? Ye toh uss pandit ka...
N : Mr. Manik Malhotra listen to me aisa kuch nhi hai wo toh I was feeling cold so..
M : So??
N : See all of this was an accident , we got Locked inside isliye..
M : So avoid such accidents!
N : Really manik?? Ur saying this..bhul gye wo holi party k din
M : Tum tpic mat change Karo...tum sirf meri...
(realising wad he was abt to say)
M : Uhmmm..mera matlab...kuch nhi..n he leaves
Nandinis pov : Ayappa ye ladka kabhi koi baat Puri kyu nhi Karta? N muje samjta kyu nhi..isse kaise samjhau it was just an accident.

Pandits driving back home and is in all smiles recollecting the memories of last night.


Part 4
Navya spots Nandini
Navya : Nandini tum thi kaha kal raat..chachi ka call aya tha..humne unhe toh keh diya ki tum humare sath ho..tumhe pata hai hum kitne tension mein the..ek min..kahi tum manik k sath..?
Nandini : Aisa kuch nhi hai navya..apne thoughts pe break lagao..aur ye sab chodo...i love you..thank u so much..tumne chachi ko sambal liya..warna wo tension le leti..
Navya : Arey hum hai toh kya gum hai..yo navya !
Nandini : Miss nautanki chale ab..bohot bhuk lag rhi hai..

Here manbir talk
Kabir : Tuje jalne ki bu nhi a rhi ?? I thnk kuch jal rha hai
Manik: Wad Kabir? Give me a break
Kabir : Nhi I mean kamal hai..kisi ekta Kapoor serial mein bhi itne twists nhi honge jitne tumhari love story mein ab tak a chuke hai...
Manik: Wad love story..tu na ye sad pjs apne pass rakh!
Kabir : Oh toh mr adam bura man gye..no m sry ab toh adam koi aur hi banta fir rha hai
(Kabir ishtyle laugh)
Kabir :Chal ye sab chod lets go to jam room and make some good music

Next morning manan are present for the riyaz
Pandit : Maine kuch socha hain..aj se tum dono alag room mein riyaz karoge..isse tum better concentrate kar paoge
Manan are shocked and look at each other
Manik : But..its fusion music right? We ought to practice together..
Pandit : Tumhe kitni baar samjhau ki guru mein hu..aur decisions lene ka haq sirf muje hai..
Manik u continue with ur guitar and Nandini tum mere sath chalo
Manik : Listen...
Nandini : Ji panditji..

Nandini ' s POV : M sry manik..tum shayad ghusa ho but ye humare guru hai and we should respect him..
Manik's POV : God ye ladki kab samjhegi..this world is not as good as she thinks..ab muje hi kuch karna hoga..


Chotu update

Part 5

Pandit : Good Nandini..maine tumse yahi expect kiya tha...and tumse kya..maine manik se bhi ye argument hi expect kiya tha
Nandini : Nhi..panditji...wo manik na..
Pandit : Rehne do..tum sirf music pe focus karo..ab tumhe koi disturb bhi nhi karsakta

Nandini is busy with her Veena..and panditji is adoring that cute baby face..
Meanwhile manik : God..guitar k sath continue kya khak karu? I mean..how..i need to check on her..
(peeping inside the room)
God..the way he is looking at her..looking kya..he is checking her out..iski toh mein..

Nandini's hair flicks are coming on her face due to the wind..pandit gets carried away and puts them behind her ear.
Nandini is surprised
Pandits POV : Wad did I jst do? Am I..am I falling for ..? No no how can I? She is my student..what am I even thinking?
Pandit (trying to sound as convincing as he could) : U wer busy with the veena ..n I thought its distracting u..isliye..

Maniks pov : Distraction kya pandit..ye toh chance pe dance kar rha hai..
this being his signature move, he is dam frustrated and leaves

Part 6

Cabirs pad

Cabir : Mere dost k Lyf Mein ghost..kuch toh karna padega..
Navya overhears
Navya: Kya kaha tumne?
Cabir : Kuch nhi..acha tumhe nhi lagta ye pandit kuch zyada hi frndly ho tha hai miss nandini Murthy k sath
Navya : Ha Mata rani Ki kasam Hume us pandit k irade Nek nhi lagte..
Cabir : Madhubalaji...muje lagta hai Hume hi kuch karna hoga
Navya: But kya?
Cabir : Mere dost Ki love story ko track pe lane k liye solid idea hai..iss pandit ko villain nhi hero bana dete hai..
Navya : Matlab? Hum kuch samjhe nhi..
Cabir : Matlab ye Ki kab tak Mein cupid Banta firu..ab pandit ko cupid banayenge..
Navya : Par hum ye karenge kaise?
Cabir :(with his signature smile) nautanki baby nautanki..jst wait and watch..

Maniks house
Maniks thinking : This new emotion wad is it? I haven't felt anything lyk it before..wad is it? Cabir says its jealousy..is it?
No no..manik Malhotra cant be jealous that to of that pandit..
But why cant i see nandini with anyone else? Why does my blood boil's when someone touches her? I hate her..then why ? What is it
This girl ..i can never get her out of my head!
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1d_kisses thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so small ...it was more like an intro but still nice concept ...continue soon. ...
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I was going to write a longish one..but was sceptical...so I cut it short..will update soon :)
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Awesome!!
Waiting for the volcano to erupt!😉😆👏
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Its nice but next part...make it a little long...
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Wow yaar part three awesome tha
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha.. Awesome update..😆😃
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Awesome update
Continue soon jaldi jaldi se
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hehe this was amazing
Why didn't you continue it?
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Originally posted by: kyyalways

Hehe this was amazing
Why didn't you continue it?



Hehe thnx but

I forgot abt this probably 😆 😆

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