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Posted: 10 years ago
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MINE FOREVER:- PART 2


He closed his eyes and sighed.
He had seen her at the mall with with Sanyukta. He had been talking with Arpita then when his gaze fell on her... so beautiful... so gorgeous. He had wanted nothing more but to touch her, corner her and feel her up. He had wanted to cocoon in her warmth but restrained himself for he knew something was wrong. He had seen her dull face, felt the pain that stabbed his heart when he saw her eyes moisten. Had something omnious happened? Had... had Varun done something...?

Her thoughts plagued him, her gloomy face haunted him; he had witnessed a sad Vidushi, consoled a weeping Vidushi but never had he faced a broken, a shattered Vidushi and it irked him. It irked him to know that Vidushi was hiding something from him... Why? It fueled his anger more to know that something rather someone was upsetting his Vidushi. Raw rage coursed withing him at the thought of someone else inhabiting Vidushi's mind.

Vidushi was his- soul, body and mind. The only person occupying her mind should be him. Her love, her companionship, her care and even her hatred, everything was meant to be his. Then how can she let anyone else capture what rightly belongs to him? How could she, rather how dare she think of that disgusting ba****d Varun?

He opened his eyes, blood shot red eyes and a low feral growl escaped his lips, "MINE!" His lips quirked up in a perilous lopsided smirk at the mere thought of his feisty cat... He'll have to teach her a lesson but first he'll erase the one engaging her mind...

Varun here I come

An hour later...
He grinned maliciously as he left the place and looked up towards the sky as the heavy droplets drenched his masculine form. The lightning had set the heavens ablaze, the darkness overpowering the blue. Things have never been better as they were now. He licked his lips at the thought of his ultimate destination... His mate, his possession... His Vidushi.

His phone beeped, signaling an incoming message from... Vidushi?
"I never knew love that you are missing me so badly." An uncharacteristic beautiful smile etched across his face. He hurriedly opened the message to receive the biggest shock of his life. He was taken aback rather scandalized as his eyes furiously scanned the contents once again-


"I saw you with Arpita today at the mall. I wish you both a very happy life together. I
don't want to be a burden anymore. I'm breaking up with you Parth. -Vidushi"
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
TEASER FOR THIRD PART


"You love her Parth, don't you?" she smiled bitterly. She was broken...
"Yes, I love her. I love Arpita so much." He broke her beyond repair.


Uh-oh! Now that was unexpected, wasn't it?? What do you think??

I'm really sorry but typing from phone is really irritating specially because I suck at that. My fingers are currenty aching so please have mercy on me. I'm sorry that I could reply to each one of you. I'll do that soonish.
So, tell me how was this part?? Boring enough??

Do read, like and review.
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
wow...first one...not bad... 😉
anyway, coming back to the update, it's amazing how u described parths emotions...be it his love, his possessiveness, his hatred, anger...everything...but what's up with the teaser?! 😲
waiting eagerly for ur next update...the much awaited confrontation...just let me know whenever u update please...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
well written

and the teaser is shocking!

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Boring ...are you kidding me ...this is everything good but not at all boring 😊

I am intrigued ...what will happen next ...plzzz update soon 👏

Great job doll 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Was eagerly waiting for the update...absolutely loved it keya...update soon❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wow! Keya..please do write more on VidArth! Okay. I'd to say that 1st :P
Coming to the update ;
How can this Parth be dark?? I tried counting the times he said "his Vidushi", then lost count everytime because the chapter was as interesting as it was during the 1st read!
I found it cute! But what was he doing with Arpita?? :S
And the teaser was interesting and confusing at the same time. I think he was hurt! No?? :P
That was a nice update. You got to update the 3rd chapter fast! I am waiting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
OMG Keya! Just today I mentioed you to my friends. But had lost the hope that you might update this and boom. This is the best surprise gal.

And I love Parth in this. Totally, irrevocable and blindly. I love this kinda Parth. A dark fantasy. The anticipation with which I am waiting to see what he will do now is just bubbling out of me. Okay so in the beginning of this there was also this word, sadism. Excited to see how you used that. *hides* *blushes to admit*😳

Thankyou so much for the surprise and dedication, Keya🤗
And the fact that you still pursued it after you lost the data, take another hug gal 🤗

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