ragna ff punishment for every wrong thing part 5 updat pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: premap

Superb ff. Your ff is a 'balm to a sore heart' after the sickening end to a beautiful serial [ EMA ! ] Your concept is the aasman but our serial 's concept is the 'zameen' [earth] . The difference is that distance ! Thanks.

thank you so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Hi dears here part 5 and I will update with hindi also in English language only I can't type speed
And I am from tamilnadu, I know little hindi ao adjust na please


Part 5

Kapoor mansion

Pakhi shocked to listening kalpi

Pakhi: kalpi how can you talk with me like this I am your friend

Kalpi: oh yaah mrs.singania I know what type of friend you are

Pakhi: kalpi please you hurt me you are like my sister also

Kalpi: seriously mrs.singania first friends and ab sister. Seriously I believe that

Pakhi start her acting start crying

Pakhi: maine kabhi naho sochatha kalpi thum mujse yesi thara bath karungi
Kya kamla ma thume yegi sikaya thi I will tell kamla ma thia

Kalpi: oh yaah go tell her but yaad rakhna pakhi meh angel nahi hoon devil vo be
Very dangerous. Deere deere samajme ajayigi and yaah I will wait for yor kamlama
As I say there is punishment for every wrong thing this time for your kamlama also

Pakhi stood there shocking and raghav also
Kalpi trying to move stairs andprem come forcibly pull her his one hand on her hair
One hand on her waist. All rk, aahil, abhi, arnavand raghav also get anger. Four of them moving
Towards prem but kalpi stop them through her eyes

Prem: how dare you talk to my sister like this you will pay for this kalpana

Kalpi: haath hatto prem

Prem: wo nahi karungi kya karpavungi kalpana thumari friends se pathavungi just look at
They are stood there only because they are scared

Kalpi: while smiling oh seriously you think like that prem how adorable you are
But it's my final warning TAKE YOUR BLOODY HANDS OFF

Prem: no what will you do

Im just a second prem is there in floor Because of kalpi

Kalpi: I AM A TRAINED MARTIALARTIST prem
So just stay away and haan meri friends ne darakhar nahi balki mujpe wisvaas
Rakhar vahi kadihe because I said so otherwise you will dead now
I think you know THEY ALL ARE FAMOUS FOR THEIR TEMPER

Kapoors are hell shocked now and raghav and Sammy just stare kalpi
Just like they are looking this girl first time in their life

Raghav: kalpi

Kalpi: ita kalpana for you mr.singania

Kalpi: please I want to

But kalpi didn't let him finish

Kalpi: muje aur bhi kuch important kaam hai mr.singania aapse baath karnekw
Lava so excuse me

She starts leaving for stairs she stopped in middle of stairs suddenly asks
To 4 of them
Kalpi: where ia my partner?

Aahil: as usual he ia late

Rk: ohhaan.agar wo lata ajathihe tho koi problem nahi hai lekin
Hum late ajayigi tho abhithak yaha ek aur mahabharath ojayingi

Abhi and aahil: rk thum bhi naa

Kalpi: punishment sab ka ek hi othahai.he have to do what I say
Aaj mai pathathi hounko

Rk : dekthi ho.haan yeh lo agaya thumari partner

One young handsome guy enters there and said

Guy: I am sorry partner please please kanpakadke sorry
With that he stood there pulling rk's ear and with that all are start laughing
And rk runs after that guy
Kalpi standing there trying to control her laughter and raghav also happy
Because kalpi smiling




Okay guys I finish here this chapter and comments please
And give some ideas also good night
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Awesome update. ..👏👏
Wow loved it how kalpi answer pakhi...Prem jerk😡..but our kalpi is 2 strong👏. ..1 second me prem is on floor. .😆😆 Loved it dear...I loved this kalpi. ...⭐️ I love this ff. ..⭐️
But what is u r name ? I don't know. .😕
Update soon next part... can't wait..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Lovedd itt
Sab ki lagegi ab toh
Maza aa gya
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Awesome update its just lovely kalpi is strong n teaching those stupid good lesson
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Cute update. I was thinking for rags reaction when all the frnds of kalpi preparing lunch and dinner for kalpi,feeding kalpi and vise versa.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
I read all parts on one go
all are nice dear Kalpi is a confident girl not satayi huvi love it 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice update Yuva... Dear u can typ in english also.. No need to write in hindi... Dear we want jealous Raghav... And plzz band baja do uss damla aur makhi ki... Aur neetu ko kalpi ke result ke liye bhi punish kerne...Show mei use koi punishment nahi milli that's why... And plzz update nxt chappy soon... Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Very nice update dear.

Kalpi reply to paki was just lovely.
And prem 😛 he fell down .? Wow.
And kalpis partner came.wow its nice ab start hoga raghav ko jalawing..
Love it yuva plz plz plz update soon.aaj ek update de dona.

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