Abhigya FS:A Second Chance[COMPLETED]

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Hey friends i am here with another TS.This is based on how actually i expected Abhigys'a love story to happen.I really hoped that Abhi will be one who would fell in love with his chasmish first then deny it as he will think that its wrong to love the girl who spoiled his siter's life.Then when he finds the truth i wanted him to make up for what he did to his love and make her fall in love with him.Because still can't understand how a girl like pragya who has self respect and self esteem fell in love with Abhi so soon even though he is good at heart he did really bad things with her.Its ok she started to like him in after spending time with him and seeing how much she cares for his loved ones,but falling in love something i expected from Abhi first as it felt like very out of character for pragya coz she is the same girl who broke the engagement with suresh after knowing he is not in lov with her but Bulbul.Then i don't understand how she fell in love with a man who is still with another women and claims to love her.BUT afterall its EKTA MAATHA'S show and ofcourse female leads will be always the scape goats and will be used a door mat.so its useless taking about it.So enough with my ranting and lets go to the story.Enjoy reading...
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Abhigya TS:A Second Chance.


CHAPTER:1
Abhi who was sleeping on in his comfy bed on the suday morning started to wake up hearing the daily bajan of his wife.It became a routine for him to wake up hearing her melodic voice which bought some kind of peace to his confused heart.They have been maried for the past 6 months and lying under the same roof as husband and wife though he never accepted her as wife coz this marriage only happened to take revenge from her for spoiling his sisters life by stealing his bestfriend and his sisters fiance from her.He wondered how pragya and Bulbul be so different.Because for him Bulbul is a sweet ,bubbly and innocent girl while pragya is a gold digger who loved purab for money and married him when she came to know he has more money.At first he loved torturing her though its not physical as he know no women is deserved to be physically absued inspite of how bad she is and he is also not that type of guy who will do something as low as that as he himself has a sister.But still he never allowed to sleep in the room and made her to sleep in the balcony knowing it will be uncomforable from cold and insects.At first he though pragya will beg for his forgiveness by showing her crocodile tears but she suprised him by agreeing to do whatever he say and untill today she is doing whatever he say and taking all the insults from him,his sister and Tanu.Sometimes he really felt bad when she used to control her tears when their insults cross a line or smile infront of everyone when they used to tease about how much him and pragya are in love though it will not reach her eyes and he could see the pain in her eyes which she tries to hide.But the next moment when he remembers what she did to her sister he know this is the least she deserves.But Abhi was really confused by the feelings that is growing inside his heart for the last couple of moths for his chasmish.He started to feel incomplete if he didn't see her face in the morning,or feel restless when she stays in her mom's house for couple of days,or feel guilty when she gets sick or cold,or when he feel king of peace in her presence or when he feel something not right when they end a day without any fights or getting her glares and witty remarks.He even sometimes want to take her in his arms and console her when he sometimes saw her crying silently in the balcony.He really started to get confused by his changing feeling towards her and don't know what to do about it.He know he was becoming soft towards her and hated himslef for that.He didn't know what these feelings are but he know he whatever it is ,its very dangerous.Just then he saw pragya entering the room in a white salwar with a small gold hearing and started to get ready for college.Abhi started to get up from his bed and entered the washroom to get ready for the day.But after few seconds he noticed that he didn't bring the towel and came out only to look at pragya talking in her phone with some one with her back towards him.
''Sure Ranveer you go and take care Anjana i will take care of the test you have to conduct today.I only a two classes today then i will be free.''said pragya with a smile while she packed her bag for college keeping her phone in loud speaker on the bed.
''I know you will take care pragya but still Anjana didn't like troubling you.Sometimes i think she loves you more than she loves me and i think she married me as she can't marry you''said Ranveer and Pragya started laughing.Abhi thought she was more beautiful while she was laughing and a small smile formed on his lips unknowingly.
''Ranveer just shut up and take care of Anjana and junior .Its her 8 month so take care of her and make sure she feels comforable .I will come and see her this sunday if i am free ok''said pragya .
''Sure pragya.But when are you going to give us good news about the arrival of Junior professor or Junior Rockstar?''asked Ranveer with a humor in his voice and Abhi noticed the pain that flashed on her face through the dressing mirror for few seconds before she forced a smile.
''Ranveer chup kar.Otherwise i will call Anjana and will tell her that you are telling me she is becoming moti''said pragya .
''Meri ma you know she will literally kill me if this happens.So i will disconnect the call now .Bye see you tomorrow''said Ranveer .
''Bye Ranveer''said Pragya and disconnected the call .Then she took her hand bag and mobile and left the room without even noticing him hurry.And Abhi stood there not understanding why he felt like someone stabbed him in his heart when he saw the hurt flash in her eyes.
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Its was nearly 20 past 3 in the evening when Abhi sitting in the car on the traffic with Aaliya beside him who was talking to her friend about her and purab's engagement next week.
''Ok shilpha i will see you tomorrow bye''said Aaliya with a smile and disconnected the call.Then she turned towards Abhi with a smile .
''Bhai i am really so happy that i am getting engaged to purab and that behanji will be out of your life soon and you can get married to Tanu''said Aaliya with a smile which Abhi returned.Though Abhi smiled he can't ignored the pain in his heart when he thought of his chasmish leaving him for good.He felt like he was already loosing a part of him and think made a more angry and confused as he know he must never have this feeling for the girl who only loves money.Just then Aaliya called Abhi breaking his thoughts.
''Haan''said Abhi looking Aaliya.
''Bhai you said purab is out of town for couple of days right?''asked Aaliya .
''Haan Aaliya he informed me this morning that he going to visit his friend who met with an accident last week''said Abhi.
''Then what is doing here?''asked Aaliya pointing purab who was sitting in the car opposite side of the traffic with confusion.
''I don't know.wait let me call him''said Abhi and took his phone but Aaliya stoped him.
''No bhai lets fallow him.I am sure he is going to meet that behanji''said Aaliya with anger.Hearing pragya and purab's name in a single sentence made Abhi's blood boil.Just then the traffic started to move and Abhi started to follow purab .After 15 minutes when he saw purab's car entering pragya's college he felt like someone punched him in his face.
''I told you na bhai.Today i am not going to leave this behanji and will make her pay for this''said Aaliya with anger .Abhi then parked the car outside on the college and entered the gate and followed purab with Aaliya who was entering the college garden.After few seconds Abhi saw pragya standing near a bench and was waiting for purab.once she saw purab her tensed face was replaced by an angry face and as purab came and stood before him pragya slapped him hard.
''How could you agree to get engaged to Aaliya purab?''asked pragya with anger .Seeing this Aaliya was about to step out of the tree behing which there are hiding but what purab uttered next made her stop in her tracks and made Abhi body to became numb.
''Di?''asked purab in shock while keeping a hand on his burning cheek.
''Don't call me Di purab.Coz if you really considered as your elder sister as you claim you would have never did what you did yesterday without even asking me once''said pragya with anger.
''But Di i thought i am doing to right thing coz once i got married to Aaliya you can live with Abhi happily''said purab and hearing thid pragya clamed down a little and sat on the bench and singled purab to sit beside her .
''Purab do you really think i can be happy with Abhishekh and he will accept me as his wife just coz you will get married to Aaliya.You know what you are saying is impossible.He didn't even want to share the room with me let alons his life.I know you are feeling guilty for what happened to me and how Abhi married to get revenge on me ,but let me tell you purab its no one's fault.Its was written in my destiny.so please stop blaming yourslef for this''said pragya.
''But Di its all my fault coz i am the one who fell in love with Bulbul when i was about to get enageged to Aaliya and even after Bulbul returned my feelings i didn't tell her the truth about Aaliya.And coz of this your life is getting spoiled Di'''said purab with guilt in his eyes.
''Purab i know you made a mistake by keeping the truth from Bulbul about you and Aaliya.But its not the way to make up to it.You know what will happen if you get married to Aaliya purab.It will destroy everyone's happiness.Yours,Aaliya's,Abhishekh's ,Dadi's and everyone in your's and Abhishekh family.I know how much it will hurt when you see the hate in your husband's eyes instead of love or respect for you purab coz i am experiencing the same pain everyday and i let Aaliya go throught the same pain ''said pragya and Abhi closed his eyes in regret hearing the pain in her voice.
''Di how could you even care for a girl like Aaliya who only cares for herself .She is such a selfish girl who made her own brother get married to the girl she though who was s gold digger just to get me back and still using Abhi's love for her to hurt you and insult you on daily basic.This is the first reason i never Aaliya more thana friend ,i just agreed for Abhi's sake to get engaged to her in the first place.She is the main reason for your current state Di and yo are supporting her here?''asked purab and Aaliya felt like she has been slapped by purab's words.
''Purab i know whatever you are saying is true.But Aaliya is this way coz there was no one to tell here what is wrong and right as she never had her mother with her.I know daadi and Abhi loves her a lot but none can replace a mother's place ever.She may be selfish and cunning now purab but i know she was good girl in the past that why she bacame your best friend.But even if she is slefish from her childhood she didn't deserve a loveless marriage purab.No girl deserves it.I know you still love Bulbul and gettin married to Aaliya will only increase your haters towrads her coz you think she is the reason Bulbul left you.It will not just Aaliya alone purab it will hurt Daadi and Abhishekh too.If Abhishekh sees his sister unhappy in her married life it will eat him alive everyday purab so please stop this engagement before it destorys everyone's life.''said pragya.
''But Di what about you.''asked purab with concern.
''Purab you don't understand that even you get married to Aaliya Abhishekh will not take me as his wife.He is in love with Tanu so i don't have a place in his life or never had before.so stop thinking about myslef.But even after you wanted to get married to Aaliya you can,but on one condition''said Pragya.
''What is it Di?''asked purab.
''You have to forget Bulbul and the love you have for her once for all''said Pragya in a stern voice.
''DI''shouted purab in shock as he know he can neve forget Bulbul in this life time.Even if he marry Aaliya his heart will always belong to Bulbul.
''Yes Purab you have to.Coz its unfair ro marry a girl when you are in love with someone else.I know it will hurt like hell coz i know the pain and seeing Bulbul going through the same pain trying to forget you.But purab if you want to marry Aaliya then you have to Do this.Otherwise i will break my marriage with Abhi making Maa understand and then i will tell the whole truth to Abhishekh and Aaliya .so decide yourslef purab coz i don't want you life to get spoiled with Bulbul and Aaliya just coz you want to see me happy which is never going to happen''said pragya and purab sat there thinking while Abhi stood like a lifeless person while Aaliya stood there with tears flowing from her eyes freely realising the mistake she did.
''Purab i know its hard to decide this soon.But take your time coz the prepaation for the engagement is going to start after 3 days and you have time till that.''said pragya keeping a hand on his shoulder .Purab sat there thinking for few seconds then closed his eyes taking a deep breath.
''Ok Di i will think about it''said purab and pragya smiled a little.
''Thanks purab''said pragya and purab too gave her a small smile.
''Di will you still love me and consider as a brother even i you will not like my decision.I really don't want to loose Di after many years in my life you are the only person loved me as her own brother after Abhi,daadi and my chachi and i don't want to loose this with you Di''said purab with moist eyes and pragya cupped his face .
''Purab though we met through Bulbul i love you as my own brother and will always love you as one.You are the only perosn who called me as Di from your heart apart form my family and even you are like my family.so don't worry about loosing me coz i will always love as my own brother''said pragya with a smile and purab hugged pragya with a smile.
''Thanks di''said purab and pragya to hugged him back with a smile.
''Its okay purab''said pragya and after few seconds they broke the hug .
''Ok di i will take your leave.chachi wanted to meet me''said purab with a smile.
''Ok purab you go.Even i have class in 15 minutes.''said pragya and stood up from the bench.
''Bye Di''said purab and pragya nodded.
''Bye purab.''said pragya and purab left with a smile and pragya left for her class.

Here Abhi started to walk wiping his tears followed by Aaliya who was doing the same in complete silence to the car.Once they reached the car Abhi sat without a words on the driving seat while Aaliya sat on the passenger seat and closed the door.Both of them sat in silence taking in what they heard in the past few minutes and how many life they destroyed with a single misunderstanding.Abhi felt like a monster now remembering how he treated pragya for a mistake she never did.And on the other had Aaliya was dying out of guilt for wornging a great person like pragya and realised that purab was never hers and even if they get married he will always belong to Bulbul .
''Bhai i am so sorry''said Aaliya finally finding her voice but Abhi just shook his head .
''Not now Aaliya.''said Abhi and Aaliya nodded her head in understanding.Then Abhi started his car and drove towards their house in complete silence.Once they reached the house Abhi turned and looked at Aaliya.
''Aaliya you go inside i have to go somewhere ''said Abhi and Aaliya looked at her brother in concern.
''But bahi...''started Aaliya to protest by Abhi cut her off.
''Aaliya i will be fine.I just need some air''said Abhi and Aaliya nodded getting out of the car and saw Abhi driving the car out of the car the gate and she rushed towards her room as she can't control the tears of self disgust and guily anymore.
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Pragya came home at 5 pm and first to Abhi's room to get fresh,Once she came out of the washroom she took the exam papers from her bag and started to correct it sitting on the couch in the balcony.After 30 minutes she felt thirsty and was looked at the jug empty and mentally slapped her for not brining the water with her before .Then she stood up from the couch and took the jug with her and left to fech water from the kitchen.But as she crossed Aaliya's room she heard soft sobs coming from inside and stopped walking .Pragya hesitated before opening the door knowing Aaliya hates even the sight of her,but she know her heart will not allow to walk away so she opened the door softly and saw Aaliya sitting on her bed sobbing with her back towards her.Pragya walked towards her slowly and placed a hand on her shoulder once she stood infront of Aaliya .
''Aaliya''called pragya in a soft voice and Aaliya looked pragya with teary eyes.But what Aaliya did literally shocked pragya to the core .Aaliya stood up and hugged pragya tightly and started to sob loudly .Pragya on the other hand stood in shock for few seconds as she expected Aaliya to shout at her but never hug her like a child hugging her mother seeking for love and comfort.Then pragya slowly wrapped her hands around her shoulder and caressed her back.
''I am so sorry Bhabhi.''said Aaliya in between her sobs and shocking pragya once again.
''Shhh Aaliya everything will be fine''said pragya in a soft tone comforting Aaliya while Aaliya continued to sob in her arms .After few minutes pragya broke the hug and made Aaliya sit on the bed and haded a glass of water on the table near her bed .
''Drink this''said pragya in a soft tone and Aaliya took the glass and the drank the water.Once she finished drinking the water pragya sat beside Aaliya on the bed and place a hand on her shoulder.
''Do you want to talk about it?''asked pragya and Aaliya looked at her with pain,guilt and regret in her eyes.
''I am sorry bhabhi for destroying your life thinking you are the only who purab was in love with''said Aaliya and pragya shocked to hear this .
''Aaliya what are you taking about?''asked pragya .
''Bhabhi i know that everything and please i am really sorry for whatever i did''said Aaliya .Pragya on the other hand was shocked to know this and was thinking how Aaliya came to about everything .But seeing the state Aaliya was in she decided to ask about this later and decided to comfort her.
''Aaliya its ok.I am not saying what you did is right.But at the same time its not unforgiveable too.I know whatever you did is for the love you have on purab.But you should have realized how many lives would be affected by the way you decided to make him yours.Don't think i am saying this because i am Bulbul's sister but Aaliya the truth is purab loves Bulbul more than himself and i have seen this myself and now if you get married to him you could never be happy.I am not saying to let him go coz i don't any rights to ask that.But just think about it.I know you love purab,but he only loves you as a friend Aaliya.So before deciding to marry him thinking about this well,coz marriage is a life time comittment and you have to choose the correct life partner for it.We may get divorce the marriage didn't work out ,but you know well about the society and how it will treat the girl if they leave the husband even the mistake is with men.I don't want you to go through the same Aaliya coz even though you don't like me you are also my sister and i only want the good for you.I know you hate me and Bulbul for purab leaving you,but Aaliya Bulbul didn't even know you and purab was about to get engaged and if she known this before she would never loved purab coz we know how much it will hurt when a guy who you love leaves you as we have seen our Maa suffer when out father left.Now it you who must decide what to do''said Pragya with care and concern .Seeing the care and concern for her Aaliya felt like she didn't even deserve to sit beside a girl like Pragya.
''I am really sorry Bhabhi .Now i understood how much mistakes i did because of my selfishness .But Bhabhi what is wrong with me that purab can't love me like i love him?''asked Aaliya and that moment pragya understood under the hard exterior Aaliya was just a litle girl who was lost without a proper guidance.
''Aaliya nothing is wrong with you and i am sure there is someone out there who will love you like you deserved to be .This may sound like a typical movie dialouge but its the truth.''said pragya with a smile.
''Thanks a lot bhabhi .I know i did a lot of mistakes but from now i will try to correct it.I promise you Bhabhi''said Aaliya.
''I am really proud of you Aaliya but now you really need some rest from all this crying .so sleep for sometimes''said pragya and Aaliya nodded.
''Bhabhi will you stay with me?''asked Aaliya and pragya nodded.Just Aaliya laid on the bed and pragya covered her with a blanket sitting beside Aaliya.After few minutes she saw Aaliya drifting into sleep and she rested her head on the headrest and drifted to sleep after few seconds from the tiredness of the whole day finally catching up.
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Abhi came home nearly at 6 PM and entered the house .He was glad that everyone including Daadi went to attend her friend's grand daughter birhtday party coz he didn't have anymore strength to explain for his bloody eyes from crying after the things and truth witnessed today.Abhi just wanted to go and lay down on the bed to get some sleep.But first he wanted to check on Aaliya as he know she was hurting too from the guilt and pain and walked towards her room.As Abhi opened the door he was suprised to see pragya sleeping in the sitting position resting her head on the head rest with a hand on Aaliya's head who was sleeping with tear mark on her cheeks.Abhi didn't even know how to feel seeing this scenes infront of him.This is how their mother used to make Abhi sleep when he was a child when he didn't any sleep.He just closed the door softly and left to his room as he can't stand and look at the girl who he tortured on daily basic comforting his little sister like a mother when she only received pain and insults from both of them. As Abhi entered the room he closed the door with a loud thud and started to throw all the thing in anger.He remembered every moment he hurted her in the room and felt like buring the whole with the memories.Then he went and stood infront of the mirror looking at his face.But istead seeing his handsome face he saw the monster he has became and punched the mirror in anger and closed his eyes feeling the pain but he felt some peace by the pain and as he was about to punch the mirror again but a familiar voice shout his name and a warm and soft arms catch his hand .He openly and looked pragya who was standing there with concern and panic in her eyes.
pragya who was sleeping on Aaliya's bed woke up hearing a mobile ringing and looked around for it.Then she noticed Aaliya mobile onthe bed and took the mobile and put the mobile in silent not want to diturb Aaliya's sleep.Then she thought of correcting her remaining papers again and left the room taking the water jug.Once pragya came out the room and closed the door behind her.As pragya was about to walk she heard the sound of mirror breaking from her room and rushed towards it.Once pragya opened her room's door she was shocked to find the state of the room as it was like hit by a storm.Then he saw Abhi standing in front of the mirror as blood his hand and broken mirror pieces on the dressing table.Before she could react he saw him raising his hand to punch the mirror.
''ABHISHEKH''shouted pragya rushing towards him and caught his hand in time and looked at him with concern and panic.After a couple of seconds Abhi opened his closed eyes and looked at her with such a pain,hurt and guilt made pragya to stop breathing for few seconds.
''Abhishekh what's wrong?''asked pragya with concern.But Abhi just stood there looking at her.Then she noticed her bloody arms and looked back at him.
''Abhishekh sit here i will be back''said pragya and rushed to get the first aid before he could replay.After few seconds she came back and started to clean his wounds kneeling down infront of him.once she cleaned and took the glass pieces as possible he kept the box aside and looked at Abhi who was sitting there closing his eyes as silent tears ran down his eyes.pragya was really worried seeing his condition as she never though she will see Abhi in this state.
''Abhishekh what is wrong?''asked pragya in a soft voice but Abhi just sat there without any response.pragya shook her head and stood up to go and call Aaliya to talk with Abhi.As pragya was about to walk out of the door Abhi called her.
''Pragya''called Abhi in soft voice and Pragya turned to see Abhi standing looking at her.Pragya waited for him to speak but the next moment she saw Abhi was about to faint and rushed towards him and holding him before he could fall and made him sit on the bed but Abhi just laid there unconscious.

-To Be Continued.

With Love,
Scarlett.


INDEX:

CHAPTER 2:PAGE:4

CHAPTER 3:PAGE:9

CHAPTER 4:PAGE:13


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow dramatic start!
Hope abhi is okay!
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Refreshing start scarlett😊...
YOU've written a fabulous story with a different tone...I liked it so much😛...

Loved the way the truth is revealed and how abhi & aliya are feeling guilty knowing it...
Pragya is too caring and loving 😛...Purab seems to be a good brother to pragya...
Will wait to see how Pragya ,Purab reacts to abhi,aliya's guilty feeling 😃...

And Thank you for the PM Scarlett😳.

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OMG SCARLETT

you had me crying from like the third sentence...so powerful...i'm hoping no one steps into my office because i can't dry my eyes, seriously!! LOVE the way you have explored all the emotions here, abhi's, pragya's, aaliya's purab's. that conversation of purab and pragya was perfect and i'm SO SO happy you gave the nanad bhabhi (aaliya-pragya) scene. and oh pragya, to hear her talk about how she accepted the pain in her destiny!! and this abhi's suffering too. it's FANTASTIC and i'll be so happy to read the rest.

thank you for posting!!
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loved it...thanks for the pm...
continue soon
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thank you for the pm ...WOW this story is awesome and fab I read it 3 times ...and I was crying reading your story ...OMG all the emotion was here with different person I love it ...bravo your written is amazing and I can't wait to read more ...pls update soon
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Awesome start. Please con't soon. Thank you.
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scarlet you made cry
i loved the pragya and aaliya scene
wonderful start
please continue soon
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Originally posted by: Humzy

fab start

loved it
cont soon

Thanks dear...Glad you loved it...will continue soon...
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Originally posted by: MarGan

Refreshing start scarlett😊...
YOU've written a fabulous story with a different tone...I liked it so much😛...

Loved the way the truth is revealed and how abhi & aliya are feeling guilty knowing it...
Pragya is too caring and loving 😛...Purab seems to be a good brother to pragya...
Will wait to see how Pragya ,Purab reacts to abhi,aliya's guilty feeling 😃...

And Thank you for the PM Scarlett😳.


Thanks for such a comment dear...Glad you loved it...will update soon...

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