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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: illa8

awesome part i wish in actual the serial was like this =)

Thanks a lot dear...glad dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
thank you for the pm wonderful and fab update like always...I really love it ...abhi and aliya feel guilty about their wong doing...but abhi has more pain and he was hurt because of tanu ...
I can't wait to read more from you ...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sara7iris

thank you for the pm wonderful and fab update like always...I really love it ...abhi and aliya feel guilty about their wong doing...but abhi has more pain and he was hurt because of tanu ...
I can't wait to read more from you ...pls update soon

Thanks a lot dear...glad you liked it... will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasreenroja

Nice episode.
Love it

Thanks dear...Glad you liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey friends thanks a lot for such a lovely feedbacks.I am so glad that i got such a supportive and lovely readers.Here goes the next chapter,hope you guys will like it...
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CHAPTER:3

Abhi know he has to let out the pain of betrayal he was feeling from this evening and he also know if someone can understand his pain its none other than pragya so he took a deep breath and started to tell what happened in Tanu's apartment this evening.
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Abhi who dropped Aaliya just drove his car without any destination lost in his thoughts.After seeing the bond between purab and pragya in the college he felt disgusted with himself thinking how he insulted their pure bond by called it by names.He didn't know with whom to share his pain and guilt for hurting an innocent girl like pragya and destroying her whole life.Before he had his best friend purab to share everything ,but now he lost that same best friend coz of his own stupidity.He felt like the worst friend for not understanding purab's feeling and didn't support him when purab needed him the most.Abhi stopped the car with a sudden break and placed his head on the steering wheel and let the tears he was holding back from the moment he left the college.Abhi felt like he failed everyone and for the first time in his life he felt completely helpless.Abhi felt like he couldn't breath from the guilt he was feeling now.After few minutes of thinking Abhi decided to go to Tanu's house .He know its not right to go to Tanu's house now ,but he didn't really know where to go.He felt like this pain from guilt will kill him if he didn't share with someone .so he turned the car and drove to Tannu's apartment.
Once Abhi came and stood infront of ther apartment door he was about to press the calling bell,but he stopped at the last minute coz he didn't want to disturb her if she was sleeping.so he took the spare from the hiding place and opened the door entering the apartment silently.Once Abhi reached her bedroom,he saw the bedroom door was opened and was about to walk inside the room but the converstion she was having stooped him in his tracks.
''But Tanu how are you sure that you can get all the properties of Abhi without him knowing?''spoke a male voice from Tanu's phone which was in loud speaker while she was painting her nail .
''Its simple Raju.Once Aaliya and purab's wedding is over Abhi will surely divorce that behanji and i will mix the property papers with the divorce papers and will make sure he will sign it.He will never doubt me Raju afterall all these years he is thinking that i am in love with him when i was just with him for the money and fame.''said Tanu with a smile and Abhi felt like someone punched him in the guts.
''But Tanu why don't you first marry and get the sign in the papers and then you can divorce him if you want.Its has less risk''said Raju.
''Are you out of your mind Raju?If i wanted to you this idea i would have said yes to his proposal when he wanted to marry for his Daadi.I can never take care of his house or family Raj and especially his daadi.Thank god that Behanji became the scape goat in all this.Just few days of this acting of i am so in love with Abhi ,then when i get what i want i will leave this country and start my own fashion house in France''said Tanu with a smile.
''Whatever Tanu .Be careful and make sure you will not caught''said Raj.
''I will .so when is my next fashion show ?''asked Tanu and continued to talk with Raj while Abhi stood there not able to believe how much fool he was in his life.Abhi silently the apartment as he didn't have the strength to fight with her .As Abhi came near his car in the parking he sat down on the ground resting his back on the car.Abhi just sat there feeling numb feeling how Tanu just used him when he really cared for her.She just didn't betray his trust but Aaliya's too.He never thought out of all person Tanu will do this to him. But what confused him the most was that he didn't so much pain he expected to learing her betrayal.Even a small part of his heart was glad at this knowing he can consider his growing feeling for pragya.Abhi slowly got up from the ground and decided to think about the rest in the house.
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PRESENT:
Pragya just sat there in shock after learing what Tanu did to Abhi and she didn't even know how to console him as she can't imagine what he must be going through.She always know Tanu is the right girl for Abhi coz Tanu was selfish s,lef-centred ,buut pragya never thought Tanu will do something to Abhi like this.
''I never thought the girl who i loved will betray me like this pragya.After my parents left me i was really lost and never allow anyone to get close to me apart from my family except Tanu and purab.I though they can understand me and will love me as Abhi not the rockstar Abhi.But Tanu proved me that i can't be loved like others pragya.Even i lost purab and i am the only one to be blamed for that.But how can i except anyone to love me when i hurted a loveable person like you pragya.I think i really deserve this for destroying your life''said Abhi in a defeated voice .
Pragya who couldn't handle his pain anymore just pulled him to her chest and Abhi too hugged her back as his life depending on it.Pragya just ran her fingering through his hand while Abhi started to sob in her arms.
''Let it out Abhishekh.Let all your pains out and cry as much as you want.I will be here to hold you till you want''said pragya in a soft voice and finally the pain,guilt,betrayal Abhi was holding for the past several hours came out as he started to sob loudly while pragya continued to rub his back slowly hold him more tightly in her arms.
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The next morning Aaliya was the first to wake up and entered the bathroom to get ready.Once Aaliya stood under the shower she felt the tension in her body from the last day leaving as the hot water hit her nerves.Aaliya didn't know how she is going to apologize to Bulbul and then to purab but after everything happened she know its necessary.After last night conversation with Bulbul Aaliya was glad that Bulbul agreed to meet her today.Aaliya then left the washroom after 30 minutes to get ready to meet Bulbul.Once Aaliya got ready she walked towards Abhi's room to get check on her bhai.Though she know her bhabhi will take a great care of him,she just want to make sure he is alright.As Aaliya carefully opened Abhi's door without any noise and entered the room.But what Aaliya saw there bought a bright smile on her face.Abhi was sleeping like small child placing his head on pragya's lap and hugging her waist while pragya was sleeping resting her back on the bed rest placing on of her on Abhi neck while another was hold his hand which Abhi was holding to his chest.Aaliya felt like fool for not understanding how they are made for each other and trying to separate them.She then left the room without disturbing the couple to meet Bulbul.
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Bulbul was sitting in the coffee shop where Aaliya asked to meet her last night.Bulbul was really suprised to hear the requesting tone Aaliya talked with her and how she even agreed to meet where bulbul was comforable.Even though Bulbul didn't want to meet her something in Aaliya's voice made her say yes.Just then she saw Aaliya entering the shop and walked towards her table once she saw Bulbul.
''Hi Bulbul.Thanks for coming''said Aaliya with a smile which Bulbul retured.
''Its ok Aaliya.Lets order something,i was waiting for you''said Bulbul and she nodded.After 10 minutes Aaliya was sipping her coffee while Bulbul was sipping her coffee milkshake .
''So Aaliya what you want to talk about?''asked Bulbul.
''Well i here to talk about you and Purab''said Aaliya and Bulbul looked her in shock.
''What?''asked Bulbul in shock.
''Bulbul i know everything about you and purab.You don't know how much i was hurt and feeling guilty when i came to know the truth and for hurting Bhabhi.I know i did a big mistake Bulbul but now i want to make up for that.I can even face myslef in the mirror remembering how i hurted bhabhi.I know you hate me for what i did Bulbul ,but please forgive me.I really want you and purab to get together again.I will do everything in my power to gain everyones forgiveness and i want to get you and purab together at first''said Aaliya and Bulbul didn't even know what to say.Bulbul didn't know how Aaliya came to know about the truth but she was glad that finally the truth is revealed so that her di can atleast live in peace without getting hurt.
''Aaliya i really didn't know what to say.Its true that i hated you but not for coming between me and purab but for hurting my di for something she didn't do and didn't deserve.Though you may be the reason me and purab got separated but i can't blame you completely coz purab is the one keep me in dark about you both and i never hold you responsible for it.so there is no need to ask for my forgiveness .Its my di's forgiveness you have to gain coz she is the one who got hurt most by you and Jiju.If my di is happy there from now that's enough for me Aaliya''said Bulbul with a smile and Aaliya was really suprised to see how the sisters love each other to the core.
''Thanks Bulbul.I promise you that bhabhi will be happy from now on.I never realised her true nature before ,but now after knowing how loveable she is i will never let anyone hurt her''said Aaliya with a smile.
''Thanks Aaliya .''said Bulbul with a smile .Just then her mobile rang and she smiled seeing it was purvi calling her.
''Hi purvi''said Bulbul .
''Hi Bulbul. I immediately want to go for shopping for my friends party tomorrow nights.so will you come and help me to select the dress?''asked purvi and Bulbul smiled.
''Sure purvi.I will meet you in the shopping mall parking in 30 minutes if you are ok''said Bulbul looking her watch .
''Thank you Bulbul you are a life saver i will be there in 30 minutes.see you there bye''said Puravi.
''Bye purvi''said Bulbul disconnecting the call.Then she looked at Aaliya who got up from the chair.
''Ok Bulbul i will leave you now .I think you have some plan with purvi.Will see you later''said Aaliya with a smile.
''Aaliya why don't you join me and purvi for shopping if you don't have any plans?''asked Bulbul with a soft smile.Aaliya was really taken back by this but smiled .
''Sure Bulbul i will join you''said Aaliya with a smile and they left the coffee show knowing it was a start of a new friendship.
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Here in Mehra's mansion pragya was the first to wake up from her sleep and looked at her husband who was sleeping like a small child without any worry.she softly caressed his forehead and moved his head to the pillow slowly removing his hands from her waist.Then she properly covered him with a blanket and left to get ready after checking his temperarure.After 15 minutes pragya cam back and left the room to prepare breakfast for them,once she entered the kitchen pragya noticed a sticky note on the fridge and she took it with confusion.
Bhabhi,
I went to meet my friend and will return home only by noon.So prepare breakfast only for you and bhai.
Aaliya.
Pragya smiled a little reading the note and started to prepare the breakfast.
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Abhi woke up with a headache in his bed and looked around the room for his wife but she was nowhere to be found.He remembered how she consoled him last night like a mother when her child was hurt.Abhi didn't know what he did to deserve a wife like pragya and her care when he behaved liked a monster with her.He didn't know what he should name this newfound and growing feelings for pragya,but whatever it is he is going to give it a chance if pragya agrees.Abhi for the first time in his life left like belong last night when he slept in her lap and cried in her arms letting his pain and hurt.Just then Pragya entered the room carrying his food and smiled seeing him.
''Good morning Abhishekh.How are you feeling now?''asked Pragya with her usual smile.
''Good morning chasmish.Well you know how i will be feeling ,like a rockstar''said Abhi with his cheesy voice trying to making the situation normal.Even pragya smiled seeing him trying to be normal.
''Whatever Abhishekh .Go and fresh up you must have your food and medicines.''said Pragya with a smile and Abhi got up from the bed but as he stood up he lost his balance co he was still weak and pragya rushed towards him and helped him to stand properly.
''Aaram se Abhishekh''said pragya with concern.
''Haan haan chasmish.Its just i tested how you would react when i slip and not bad you didn't disappoint me chasmish .I can see the bollywood effect from you.Me the unwell hero and you the sweet heroine who takes of him''said Abhi with his teasing smile and pragya rolled her eyes.
''Shut up and let me help you Abhishekh''said pragya with a irritation thought she was trying to hide her smile.Then pragya helped Abhi to the washroom and waited outside to let him fresh up .After 10 minutes Abhi came back and pragya helped him back to bed and then feeded him the food.Abhi just keep looking at her the whole time and slapped himslef for noticing how beautiful she is before.After he finished the breakfast pragy gave him the medicines.
''Chasmish''called Abhi.
''Haan boliye''said pragya.
''Thanks for taking care of Aaliya yesterday''said Abhi and pragya smiled hearing this.
''Its ok Abhishekh.Its not a big deal even she is like my little sister''said Pragya.Just then the door bell rang .
''I will see who it is''said pragya and left the room carrying the plates and spoon.As pragya came and opened the door after keeping the plates in the kitchen,she was shocked to see the person standing there.
''Purab''said Pragya in shock.
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Pragya was sitting nervously in the living room thinking what Abhi and purab doing inside the room for the last 2 hours.She know Abhi is not angry with purab anymore but still she was tensed.Just then she saw purab coming with Abhi and there are laughing happily.Pragya stood up from the sofa and purab gave her a hug.
''I am so happy for you di''said purab and pragya stood confused.
''What ?''asked pragya with confusion.
''You will know soon .But now i have to go.Bye di,bye Abhi''said purab and he left before pragya could replay.Then Abhi came and stood before her and caught her shoulder.
''pragya i have to talk a lot with you but this is not the right place or right time.I know you are confused by what i said last night .so will you go on a date with me today?''asked Abhi with a hopeful smile and pragya didn't have the heart to say no seeing the hope in his eyes.
''Yes.I will''said pragya in a soft voice.
''Good .Get ready before 7 this evening ''said Abhi and kissed her forehead and left the house to make arrangement for their date with purab.pragya rushed towards her room and called Bulbul.
''Bulbul i want you here now ''said pragya.
''Di are you alright?''asked Bulbul with concern.
''No .I am not.Abhishekh asked me out on a date today and i didn't know where i lost my maind to say yes''said pragya in irritation.
''DI I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU''shouted with happiness and pragya slapped herself for telling this to Bulbul out of all the people.
''Bulbul stop shouting and come here ASAP.otherwise i am canceling the date with Abhishekh ''said pragya .
''Don't you dare.I will come there ''said Bulbul and disconnected the call.Pragya sat the couch taking a deep breath.
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Bulbul who was standing in the parking with Aaliya and purvi discooncted the call and hugged purvi with happiness.
''Arrey Bulbul what happened?''asked purvi with a smile.
''JIJU ASKED DI ON A DATE CAN YOU BELIVE IT?''shouted Bulbul and everyone in the parking looked at her.
''Shh keep you voice down.Everyone is looking like you are mad''said Purvi.
''But purvi i am so happy .''said Bulbul with a smile.Aaliya who listen to this conversation smiled with happiness.She know how much her bhai was hurt after Tanu's betrayal.She can't believe that Tanu will do something like this to both her and her bhai and she like killing her when she overheard his bhai and bhabhi's conversation accidently.But she was glad that his bhai got someone like her bhabhi to support him when he needed someone the most.
''Bulbul i know how to make my bhai's jaw dropped by seeing bhabhi.Lets go and make her really hidden beauty reveal''said Aaliya with a smile and the other two nodded.Then the placed the bags in the back seat of the car and left for Mehra's mansion.
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Pragya who was sitting on the dressing table mirror chair her back facing the mirror while Bulbul and Aaliya was getting her ready for her date.Finally they both finished with their work and moved a little back to look at pragya .
''Wow bhabhi i am sure bhai is going to faint seeing you''said Aaliya with a smile.
''Haan di you really look like a diva''said Bulbul with a bright smile .Pragya then turned to look herself in mirror and thought they both are indeed right .She really looked like a diva in her black saree with matching jewels ,he perfectly curled hair which was made into a french braid and her smokey eyes.Just then they saw purvi entering the room .
''Jiju is waiting for you down di''said purvi with a smile .Hearing this pragya stood up from the chair with a deep breath .
''Enjoy di''said Bulbul and purvi hugging her.Pragya too hugged them back with a smile.
''Thank you guys ''said pragya with a smile and they broke he hug.
''All the best bhabhi''said Aaliya with a smile and pragya smiled back.
''Thanks Aaliya''said Pragya.
''Now go di''said Bulbul and pushed her out of the door.
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Abhi was standing near the stairs in a black jeans and a white T-shirt rubbing his hands nervously.For the first time in his life Abhi was feeling nervous on taking a girl for a date.But Abhi know she is just not another girl she is pragya and very unquie who can't be impressed by his costly gifts.Just then he saw pragya coming down the stairs looking like a diva and Abhi forget to blink for few seconds.
''Damn where she kept all this beauty of her hidden till now''though Abhi.Then he forwarded his hand to pragya once she came and stood on the last stairs and pragya placed her hand on his after a couple of second.
''You are looking beautiful chasmish''said Abhi with a smile which made Pragya blush.
''Thanks Abhishekh.''said pragya with a smile .
''Shall we?''asked Abhi and pragya nodded and they walked out of the house hand in hand.
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Once they reached the resturant Abhi got out of his seat and opend pragya's door like a gentle man and they entered the resturant.Seeing them entering the resturant a waiter came and greeted them with a polite smile.
''Welcome Mr and Mrs.Mehra.You table is ready''said the waiter and Abhigya smiled and followed the waiter.Once they reached a door the waiter left and Abhi stood behing pragya keeping his hand on her eyes.
''Abhishekh what are you doing?''asked pragya .
''Keep quiet and stop asking quetion chasmish ''said Abhi and opened the door and helped pragya to walk inside the room.After few seconds they stopped walking and Abhi removed his hand from her eyes.
''Now open your eyes chasmish''said Abhi and pragya opened to look at the sight infront of her.The whole room was decorated with balloons and candle and there was a table in the middle of the room with a single candle in the middle of the table.
''Abhishekh this is...''said Pragya didn't even know what to say.
''Well we can't diacuss how it is after the dinner.First lets have the our food''said Abhi and walked her towards the table and pulled the chair for her and pragya sat with a smile.Then Abhi went and sat opposite to her.Then the waiter came and placed both of their favorite food and they started eating with small chat.Once they finished eating Abhi stood up from the chair and stood infront of pragya .
''Can i have the pleasure of dancing with you pragya?''asked Abhi with a smile and pragya placed her hand on his with a smile .
''Ofcourse''said Pragya and stood up as the music started to play .
After 5 minutes as the music stopped Abhigya stopped dancing and Abhi stood infront of pragya taking her hands in hers.
''Pragya i know our marriage happened coz of a misunderstanding and i married you only to take revenge .But once you became my wife and entered our house as a bahu you took care of everyone and loved them as your own even when i insulted you.Its true at first i didn't even liked the sight of you but as the days passed i started to grow this unknowing feeling for you and tried to deny its as much as possible coz i know i should not get emotionally attached to you .But after leanring the truth yesterday and knowing the true colors of the people around me i know you are the only person with whom i can get emotionally attached and trust with everything i have.But for that first i have to make up for all the mistakes i did and wanted to give another chance for this marriage.But i don't want this second change just for making up for my mistake but also for falling in love with you.Yes pragya this great Rockstar finally fell heel over heals in love with his own wife before a long time ,its took a pep talk from purab to realize though.so...''said Abhi and get down on his knee and took a small black velvet box from his pant pocket.
''Mrs.Pragya Abhishekh Mehra,will you give this stupid a second change and give me the pleasure of making you my wife once again with love.Will you marry me again pragya?''asked Abhi opened the box to reveal a beautiful platinum ring with a gorgeous diamond sitting on the middle of a heart while pragya stood in shock with tears in her eyes.

-To Be Continued.

With Love,
Scarlett.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
wow fab update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update scarlet
i love bulbul aaliya friendship
and i am so happy that tanu is out of the picture
please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Fab update scarlett 😊...
Abhi finally knew his feelings for Pragya...Hope Pragya will accept his proposal 😛...
Loved to see Aliya-Bulbul are friends 😃...
Hope Tanu doesn't give a shock😉...
Waiting for the next update ... Thank u for PM scarlett 😃😳...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Wow such a emotional & beautiful upd.
Loved it.
Tfd pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
amazing
hope to have more soon
thanks for the pm
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