MG FF : A TORN RELATION #4 NOTE FOR UPDATES PG 162 JULY 25 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
nice update
maan is helping geet to forget past
he gifted her phone to overcome her fears
suddenly maan shouting on geet to abort
its for geet's health but he should explain calmly
awesome teaser
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all thank you so much to all those readers who liked and commented..
i really like your detailed review ..
i have replied to all your queries still you find anything leave a comment

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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A TORN RELATION








PART 37



FOR PART 36 CHECK PAGE 6





Maan : stop mom just ask her to abort this child I don't want it.. make this clear to her ...

Before he could utter a word he was given a tight slap across his face..

Maan was given a tight slap across his face.. Everything was fine until maan contacted her doctors and the conversation with them last evening made him aware that its really critical situation.. geet's doctors had already contacted the physiatrist for geet and maan had already met twice with him.. it was first time just after her strong reaction when he asked her to abort the baby her words that "he don't care about them" maan had discussed everything with the doctor.. from geet's upbringing to the reaction that she hates hospitals , her changing behavior minute by minute .. and yesterday after listening to her words he was more worried maan had immediately contacted the doctor and had taken appointment ...

Last day around eight at night..

Maan reached the hospital .. though Dr. Ishaan Awasthi was a young doctor but he was too experienced and was a award winner in the field of psychological treatments for the depression ..

Maan : thank you so much doctor for meeting at this hour..

Ishaan asked maan to be seated .. from last meeting , maan was appearing more tensed and maan started discussing geet's nightmares and her doubts.. maan for a reason didn't hide the fact that she had went attempt to rape and didn't told anyone..

Ishaan : how is her behavior towards you and your family Mr. Khurana.. she must be introvert and the way you are describing her I can say that she doesn't take any step herself towards anything ..

Maan : she doesn't doctor.. And today when I asked to sleep ..She said that she can't sleep.. I had asked her further when she said that she used to take sleeping pills at night.. She didn't completed her graduation just because she was scared if that person will again come.. She thinks that she killed him.. Still she doesn't go out.. She doesn't interact..

Ishaan : it would be better if you bring her once here .. ishaan suggested he could examine her once.. her words her behavior clearly ..

Maan : she will not agree doctor..

Ishaan : how is your relation with her.. if she shared all these with you that means she trust you.. Mr khurana , antidepressants will not work here.. geet is not having any severe depression , she is scared of the outcome.. she faced a brutal attempt of R*** and then as you said that her childhood friend left her and in the time she got married.. this all had affected her.. she needs IPT (interpersonal therapy) as far as you said.. she is having a loving relationship with her family and yours too so she can open up with her near ones especially you.. she needs counseling where the doctors will make her assure her with the relationships.. right now she needs your control In her life ... make her feel comfortable , find out why she gets de motivated..

Maan : she doesn't want to abort the baby and it will cost her life.. this is also becoming a reason of her depression.. she had forgotten everything till the doctor suggested abortion..

Doctor smiled.. The guy was really worried for his wife and he was ready to do anything for her..

Ishaan : the same incident had affected her , that attempt had made her think that her husband wont love her..Will leave her , as you said she was in a sudden panic for the nuptial chain so this

time she won't agree but you have to make her agree by taking her in confidence ...Mr. khurana your emotional and physical bond can give her a sense of security that you won't leave her... you need to make sure that she feel loved and will reciprocate your actions..

***********************************!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!****************************

Doctor's words were ringing in his mind , geet's emotional stability is must and for that he had to make advancements towards her and how will she react ..how will he face her till now only he had made sure that she doesn't get hurt by his words or intentions but now he needs to take the decisions and make sure that she agrees.. in fact the tough work was to let the family know.. for how long he can hide everything.. things are getting more complicated ...

Meanwhile geet was in the room she was feeling alone was on the terrace attached to their room..the cold wind was blowing and she was standing holding the railing looking at the sky.. though there were clouds still she could see the hide and seek of moon .. she was happy and the reason was maan.. Nowadays her mood changes in seconds.. she had totally forget what they shared what she told him .. She was just standing there and for some seconds she closed her eyes like savoring the cold winds and making sure that her insides that were disturbed were set right.. maan entered the room and found it empty..

It was almost ten and by this time he always found his wife sleeping on the couch and it was his daily routine to make her sleep on the bed..His umpteenth requests to her to sleep comfortably were always ignored and he had to bent like always.. maan loosened his tie and changed in a shirt and track and was about to move outside when he found the glass door opened that was connecting his room with his terrace garden.. moving closer to the terrace he found the sight that took his breaths away there she was standing while her long silky hair were freely flowing with the wind and geet was getting drenched in the rain that had started to pour a little time ago.. it was a heavenly sight and he was amazed seeing her so free.. There was no restless she was free .. maan was getting what doctor was trying to say.. geet needs emotional stability and for this she needs some companion and now the companion was the rain.. Since it was not pouring too heavily so her let her enjoy leaning himself on the glass door himself looking and admiring her.. Since it was a rare sight she was like a carefree baby..

But he couldn't hold himself and went towards her .. geet didn't recognized his touch until his warm breadth fell on her neck.. his hands were on her waist and he was engulfing her in the cage of his arms .. some seconds she was in a trance and when the reality touched her blocked mind she tried to look at him.. she knew its him even in her worst nightmare she could recognize him that was the relation they were progressing on..

Geet could trust him.. she could let him feel her but the doors that could lead her to him were still closed and it was now totally dependent on maan how he will make her his life.. well she was already but the acceptance from her side was now must.. as geet was looking at him without any blinking maan could feel her getting in a trance again and he just to get her reaction squeezed her waist slowly making her moan his name like she wanted the same relation..

Geet : maan...

Maan : geet he whispered near her ear almost making her breath heavier.. maan was registering her each and every gesture slowly her hands hold his shirt like she wanted to get lost in him and he needed no more reaction .. geet moved a step forward placing her feet on his.. since both were bare feet he lifted her chin and made her look at him.. and kissed the corner of her lips .. maan was still not sure if she would allow him..every time they were close either she was in a panic or his main motive to make her comfortable..but today it was the first expression of love that they were sharing..

Geet didn't shied away though maan could feel her body temperature rising .. and he didn't took a second to scoop her in his arms and took her inside .. she wrapped her hands around his neck and he moved downstairs.. maan could feel her eyes on him and with each step towards their room her hold tightened..

Geet : aap kab aaye.. finally she asked something.. maan was relieved she was not in any kind of illusion his touches does have a positive effect on him.. maan looked at her expectant eyes ..she wanted an answer ..

Maan : when my wife was enjoying alone on the terrace.. he with due purpose used the word WIFE .. and she smiled .. that small smile that was on her rosy lips was enough to calm his senses ..

Maan made her stand on her feet and he took off her dupatta , there was no shyness in her eyes she was lost in him , his gestures , one things that affect geet most were maan's eyes.. she could read his eyes , his intentions those chocolate brown orbs had something that made her calm and restless like his anger made her angry.. his pain his anguish makes her scared and cry.. maan didn't knew but she noticed his each and every gesture from the time they married ... she wouldn't initiate to talk to him but she would look after him...

Geet : aapne mere cell phone me apna number nai feed kiya.. she questioned and that made maan happy she did noticed.. everyone's no. was there except maan..

Maan : why do you want mine geet .. that was a simple question that would test her ..meanwhile maan had gone to get the dry set of clothes for her .. he first handed her the towel to make her dry but she was lost in getting his answers ... deep inside her she knew that she was a step ahead of trusting him..she was feeling relieved with him.. and somewhere that trust was changing into the love..

he literally thrust her clothes and asked her to change.. she first looked at the clothes and then at maan he again gestured her to go while he himself changed.. Contemplating why she want his number.. geet came out wiping her hair and maan lead her to the bed before she made her way towards the couch..

Maan : geet come here.. what is so fascinating in that couch that every night you go and sleep there and then I have to carry you.. his words opened her eyes wide he was teasing her ..Leaning on her maan first took her legs and placed them on the bed and she shifted a bit making place for him ..

Geet : I didn't ask you to carry me.. she pouted.. ohh how damn she look like a baby..maan could compare her innocent features just like she was in the photographs that were in her home..

Maan pulled her close to him and kissed her cheek making her startled..

pyaar tumhe kitana karate hainpyaar tumhe kitana karate hain tum yeh samajh nahi paaogetum yeh samajh nahi paaoge

Maan : but I can't let my wife sleep there you see .. he whispered near her ear kissing her earlobe and she herself shifted towards him maan's one hand was on her waist and he caressed the bare skin of her stomach making her jolt ... he slowly made her lie and started kissing her feather kisses starting with her eyes making her feel the love that he was having in his heart ...

jab hum na honge toh piharawajab hum na honge toh piharawa bolo kya tab aaogebolo kya tab aaoge

Her hands which were warm a second before were now ice cold and he could feel her nervousness but maan continued his other hand moved towards her curves and opened the hooks and caressed the tip of her b*** .. geet was lost and slowly she started responded.. maan feared that she would push him but when she found that he stopped she slowly opened her eyes and herself moved a little and kissed his lips slowly..her initiative made him to carry on.. he pushed her completely on the bed and made sure he didn't hover her .. the gentle kiss turned into a passionate and ferocious and he nipped , sucked her lips .. geet was too sweet to love.. her too freed herself and both of them were lost.. he took off her kurti and kissed her curved , kneeding them.. making her moan.. geet too was lost and soon she slept as maan finally kissed her eyes and made her calm ..

Their was a soothing smile that was playing on her lips .. he covered her with the duvet and slept taking her in his arms ...

Whole night maan couldn't sleep ..it was first night he was seeing her no nightmares no cries .. no fight ..she was peacefully sleeping hiding herself in him seeking his warmth.. somehow he knew that the incidents replayed in her mind because of the hormonal changes and the words that the B**** instilled in her mind..

The words that her husband wont love her.. she couldn't be a mother was one of the outcome of that r*** attempt. And that was the reason she doesn't want to abort the baby... now maan needs to assure that she would be with his decision..

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Some confusion

Geet remembered all the events all of a sudden because of VEER.. read the pervious parts I have mentioned there..

Again quoting the same..

A guy in his late twenties was sipping his drink he was smirking and gulping that bad smelling drink.. he hold the girl close to him she just stick to him while his hands played with her assets she was giving in to the guy while he was talking to someone his friend who was sitting in front of him...

Guy 1: so how was that se*y B***h ..i must say she must be so hot and unimaginable on bed... I must say that you know how to make her loose In your fake love talks..

Guy 2: that's why I am veer ...

Guy1: don't you say me that you are going to leave her now ...

Veer: no not know I have to gain that beauty you know veer khurana knows whom he wants and till I get that F**** b**** I wont leave that payal so easily till then let me easily her after all she is just a mere scared asset of my ploy .

Guy 1: but you don't even know her veer , then how will you find her know..its been almost seven months she is missing we haven't seen her in her college she is just missing I am not sure that you will again get that chick to hunt...

Veer : I know but payal knows where is she ... I will find her at any cost..you know that attraction and that beauty I still cant get away with that slap..and that silky soft skin that day when I had literally trapped but then...

Guy 1: then what...

Veer: let it go ajay... I will get her in any cost... you know that , that F**** B*** wont get anyone and if she will get anyone by chance then those words which I have instilled in her will not let her move in her life... after all she is such a marriage material and that mush stupid that everything I did will now not let her live in peace I heard she is in depression that's what makes me more contented ...

No sane person will love her ...she won't be married after what I have done... she was after all touched by me ... and that idiot innocent geet didn't understand but to fail to know whom she is dealing with... I will get her at any cost you know that... ajay...

He laughed menacingly while gulping his drink...

This is the reason she had a strong impact on her mind ..

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Next : the events continue and what make maan so harsh that he forced geet to abort

for PMS related issue see below

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
PMS RELATED ISSUE

Will be making a pm list (for pwd protected updates) according to me there are 30-40 readers will post as soon as I will get time (BUT BEFORE NEXT UPDATE).. sorry but cant pm all 350+ buddies when even half of them too didn't respond..


AND THOSE WHO ARE NEW READERS .. I WOULD LIKE TO SAY DEARIES FIRST READ THE PARTS AND THEN ADD ME..
MOST OF THE REQUEST I AM RECEIVING ARE OF THE PEOPLE I HAVEN'T SEEN IN MY UPDATES.

IF ANY READER WANT PM THEN ADD ME..
AND I AM HAVING 150 PENDING BUDDIES SO EVEN IF I WILL NOT ACCEPT YOU WILL RECEIVE PMS IF YOU ARE MY READER

SUHANA

Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
very emotional update 😭
maan trying 2 follow doctors advice n give emotional support 2 geet n he tease geet so that she can express her heart with him😳
chalo inka romance toh shuru hua 😆
finally geet slept without any nightmares
Edited by preetymaaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
very emotional update... but maan is trying to gain her trust slowly.. geet is trusting him but pulled back by the words instilled in her her mind by that veer always haunting her... hope maan makes her to come out of her shelll
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
amazing part loved maaneet moments very much she now trust him maan is trying very hard veer is so disgusting hope maans love will be able to forget her all nasty comment of veer very nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Amazing update. Maan is very caring and supporting. Geet b open up ho rahi hai. Good Maan take initative and tried to get cozy with her which was miuch needed this time and it works also. His little effort made her sleep comfortably without any nightmares. Hope everything goes well and smmothly between two pained soules.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update
maan dr. ki salah ko man kae geet ka khayal rakh raha hai aur geet responce bhi de rahi hai...geet ka maan pe yakin karna badh raha hai...maan ki aagosh mein geet achhe se so pati hai...loved maaneet moment...veer😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice n emotional update
maan slowly geting geets mind set
her fear n how emotional weak she is
hope maan will able to take away geet from her fear n tourchering past
is veer related to maan in any way

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