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kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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meera30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congratulations and here's to many more threads!!

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seshatree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

congratulations...looking forward for more updates...

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@xshilohx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congratulations Mirabell! This story deserves all the love its gotten.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Congo MB
Me tooo need an early update (pouting)

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

congratulations on the new thread. waiting for the update

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khub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Congratulations on thread 2!

I have thoroughly enjoyed the story so far. You have an amazing ability to convey every emotion in words...waiting impatiently for the next update.

Khub

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bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Hello MB,

I read all 11 chapters in a go and let me tell you one thing all i had was a grin on my face and tears in my eyes. Each and every relations that you have described brought a smile on my face. So far the best relationship i could derive was FRIENDSHIP from all these chapters. 👏

Friendship between Friends-

Oh how i wish to have such understanding and outlasting friendship which is not selfish and is so strong.

Friendship between a mother and child:

Here I found 2 combo Khushi and Manorama and Khushi and Meera👍🏼. Its true that grief brings out best in relationship but this one was just too good. I loved reading how they stood for each other. Despite being a MIL - Manorama was more like a friend to her and then a mother. Khushi can discuss Naren with her and that shows the ease of the relation.

Friendship between a husband and wife:

Here again there were 2 combo: Arnav and Maya/Khushi and Naren.

I loved the friendship between Arnav/Maya a notch higher than Naren/Khushi. Its a rare thing to see that despite they could not continue their relation as a couple they still are their best friend😃. How with ease they interact and Arnav not judging Maya after all shows his strength of character👏

Khushi/Naren - Reading their friendship brought me in tears. How she miss him, She thinks about him at the most undesirable time, She miss him in day to day routine, she miss him during travel, she miss him for her daughter, she miss him at the most mundane moment, Oh the grief she is going through due to his absence brought me into tears. She remembers their intimate moment and then holds her frame. Even when all friends meet they miss them All the description of that just shows their state of bereavement.

There is so much to write about all other parts that i loved in your take that i don't even want to mention ARSHI😳

Although this is about ARSHI and second chance - I loved Khushi/Naren romantic scenes😃. May be in future we will get some ARMA scenes too to understand how can these two still be friends.

The bond between Arnav and Meera is increasing and will like to read more about that bond as your Arnav for sure seems to be a very understanding father. Is Arnav's son showing the signs of ADH 😕

There are small moments and some key statements in each of your chapters that i loved a lot. I think Chotidesi has mentioned few of those. Will not go into details now.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

I've just finished reading Chapter 11. Apologies for being so late but I was looking for the right time to read it. SC is not just a passing read, you know. It's supposed to be savoured .

So here is my comment on Chapter 11-

I shouldn't be surprised, yet I still am. Once again, M, your words made me a part of the story. How did you manage to make me feel the soothing presence of my grandmother, the warmth in my heart when she holds me in say, some hundreds of words? It astounds me how you get it right, everytime.
Khushi waking up to a new morning, the amalgamation of sounds that you identify with a busy Delhi locality, it's very...interesting as a reader to be able to perceive that change, of waking up in a different place.

But this update was all about Meera and Arnav. It's always endearing to see kids find friends in the most unexpected people, places. They don't fear rejection or any form of embarrasment. They're free to reach out for what they want.
Besides, how can anyone not fall in love with Meera?
And her reaching out for Arnav in her own little way, no questions asked, warms my heart. To see Arnav be there for her, the lovely picture they make, I can only hope that Arnav doesn't let her go. Though I think, this time Arnav isn't here to let her go, to let them go. It's a long way ahead, with the past still standing between them, but just this once, I think Arnav knows what he has to do.

Love,
Isha.

P.S. Now I feel bad about calling Hariprakash HP almost half the time I've known him. Tehehe.