MG STORY *TAINTED ANGEL* updated part 8@102 18.4.15 - Page 44

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Swetu di is teaser n to sachi muchi tease kar diya...
Waiting for update...

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Ab ye kon gira???😕😕
Tension aur zayada ho gai hai 😕
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Teasers seems interesting!!!
Can't wait for update...
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Teasers with suspense
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Kya teaser hai...geet ne kisko goli maari
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Teasers has me in suspense
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It's amazing story. Geet is working in bar as a bar dancer for fulfilling her step father's demand. Her mother is in a bedridden state. Geet is so much helpless n doesn't want to work there where all eyes are full of lust only. Maan is a misterious man. He kidnapped geet but according to him he is not going to harm her. Then who is he. Why is he Behind geet. But one thing have to say that only this kidnapping saved geet from dev who was pretending to be a good lover in front of geet. Maan exposed him infront of geet n geet is totally broken. Now it seems she is going to do something dangerous. I hope maan stop her to do so. Waiting for next dear
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who shot whom in this😆 big mystery. waiting for update to know more.
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BANNER CREDITS GOES TO GUNJAR AND PRIYA...LOVE U BOTH!!

PART 6


Geet stared dev fiercely..A tear rolled down..her blazing eyes.. She gripped the revolver in her right hand..lividly...clenching her jaw..

She recalled the beautiful..moments she spent with him.. Maan's words were mocking her.. She groaned... wiping her tear...

Dev gulped down another bottle of whiskey...and wiped his lips... He stood to his feet and made his way outside the bar..

Geet vigilantly followed dev... He was walking towards his car... In the next second she lost the sight of him.. She hastily looked of him...like a maniac..But he was gone..

dam.." she stomped her foot angrily..sighing heavily..

The roar of car's engine drew her attention...Her eyes rolled in the respective direction..and found him exiting in his car..She pressed the trigger...taking her position...ready to shoot him..As his car approached her

All of a sudden..a hand came across her hand..swiftly grabbing her revolver..while the other arm went around her lips..shutting her mouth..

" hmmm..." She writhed and wriggled under his hold..violently..

" not now geet..please not now.." maan whispered... to her gently..trapping her in his arms..and instantly hid behind the car...

" ummm.." She protested...with tears welling up in her eyes... She gazed his eyes..helplessly...when he made sit on his lap...and lowering himself on his knees..

Maan shook his head...at her..grasping her tightly..

Once dev's car was out...of the gate..Maan slowly let go of her...and recoiled his hands back..

" geeet..." maan screech...When she pushed him...angrily..making him stumble down..

" why dint u let me kill him..give me the gun..i wont let him go...give me.." She sat on his stomach... with legs on either side and tried to capture the gun..

" noo...no geet...no" Maan repeated..trying to shove her body...

Seemed like she was furious...She fidgeted with the gun in his hands..trying to pull..it..

Maan with all his force..plunged her down...and rolled over..her.. Now geet was under him squirming...as his body was pressing her's..

Maan slid the gun..under the car...and pressed her hands..down ... She still did not give up... kept on struggling...under him..

Maan gazed her face..which was all red in anger... His hold on her hand was loose..He kept holding her..until she was calm.. Not one did she meet his eyes..

She closed her eyes...panting ..finally surrendering .. Tears formed in her eyes...She was in pain..the only person who she thought to be her Knight ..was..such a beast..prepared to strangle her..

Maan...left her hands..and his hand on moved her tresses...sideways.. she rose her eyes to meet his..

Her eyes filled with rage and helplessness at the same time..while his were patient unwearied..

" its okay geet...its okay..." maan uttered framing her face... looking straight in her eyes..

It was his words or he himself..which had a strange influence on her body and mind...that her heart immediately believed it..

Their body was plastered to each other's...and both were lost in each other's eyes..

Without giving it another thought he leaned on to her..and pressed his lips on her forehead.. she shivered feeling his warm lips..on her skin.

" kya maal..ko pakda hai..re tune..waaah..waahh..mast hai..." two guys commented passing by..Them...

Maan tore his eyes..off her ...tightening his jaws.. He gathered himself..and stood to his feet.. Geet laid there feeling weird...and immediately sprang...

Both looked away from each other..Maan cursed himself for kissing her..even though it was just a peck..he wasn't suppose to kiss her when she was so vulnerable..God knws what took over him..." i hope now she doesn't takes me wrong..shit " he prayed

Geet was trying to calm her heart which was beating ..so fast.. her skin still possessed the feel of his lips..

Maan slanted his neck in geet's direction and found her shirt..ruffled... the end buttons were open..making the skin of her belly obvious ..

He right away tugged her arm..pulling her closer... And started stuffing her shirt inside her trousers.. Her eyes popped out when his hands brushed her lower belly... She held his hands...stilling them..and looked up at him..

Maan frowned and glanced at her..

" woh...ur shirt..i mean...it was out...i dint..mean..i mean..." he mumbled...taking his hands back..

Geet nodded her head understanding..and tucked her shirt inside..

" whats wrong with me.."

After she was done..she glanced at him...clearing her throat..gaining his attention..

" ah..geet..i m sorry please don't take me wrong..." Maan uttered sincerely..

Like she knows..he wont harm her...she nodded..smiling faintly..

" thanks.." he breathed out in relief..

" geet...i knw..u must be devastated..with his truth..but dev ko khatam karna solution nahi hai..'

Tears welled up again..in her eyes...

Maan held her shoulders.." geeet.." she raised her head..

" Dev is the master mind..in this business...If u want him to be punished..U have to do it lawfully ... Why u want ur hands to get dirty...Mai nahi chahta ki..dev k wajah se tumhe kuch bhi ho..."

" its just not dev k wajah se aur bohot lakdiyo ki zindagi tabha hogayi hai...if u want to fight..fight for them..too.."

Geet nodded..' u r right...mere jaisi kitni ladkiya is jaal mai phasi hui hai...par hum dev ko..kaise"

" exactly geet...and trust geet Dev mere hatho se bach nahi sakta...i promise to save all the girls...But..u have to have faith in me.."

" par...tum...kaun ho maan..aur kyu meri madat karna chahte ho.." She moaned...

Before Maan could reply...A bullet was barreled..few centimeters distant from geet..

Oh my god..shit..." Maan uttered grabbing her hand...and lowered themselves..

" jaooo...dkeho...kaha gayi woh laundiya..sahab se bhag gayi hai..dhundo..." One of dev's men who had recognized Geet..screamed...

In the next moment..a number of bullets were fired...at them... Maan and geet dogged the bullet and kept running lowering their head...

" shit.." maan peeked through the tree they were hiding under.. GEet held maan's arm...tightly..

" geet..u stay here...okay..ill get a car..we cant runaway from here..woh log bohot sare..hai and i don't even have my gun.." he instructed..her... He had parked his jeep...at a little distance from here...

" but maan.." she was frighten...

" don't worry nothing will happen..okay..Just stay still..and don't move.." Maan responded...confidently...cupping her cheek To which she nodded..

Maan escape out..And sprinted towards his jeep dicing the bullets..

Geet gulped down the lump..shutting her eyes in fear..Her heart was throbbing in her chest..

"har jagah dekhooo kaha bhag k kayegi s**t...aur uske ashik ko bhi maar dalo...Dev sahib k ane k phele"

She froze hearing their words... she clutched her chest..contemplating..her enact ..

" i..i should...find maan...i should..find maan..." she murmured..quivering ..

She slowly...bowed down...and lurched behind cars...

She closed her eyes keeping still...When she felt someone behind the car she was hiding..

She slowly peeped..from the side and found no..one.. Sighing in relief she tried to make a quick escape...But dashed into dev's men..

" ab kaha jayegi..tu chamiya...' He sniggered...holding her wrist harshly..

" let me go...let me goo...' She struggled..Trying to push him...But couldn't...

" maaannn..." she screamed... He tangled his arm..around her neck...and the other held her writs

" maaan..." she yelped..clasping her eyes...when his nails scarped her skin..

" bula le..usse bhi nahi chodunnga...' he said..pointing his gun... She went mum...terrified..for her and maan..

He ruthlessly twirled ..taking her with him..

Subsequently a bullet was fired...Geet closed her eyes...shuddering due to the loud reverberation...

She trembled...feeling a sudden null and void... The man fell on the ground with a thud..

" geeettt..." Maan reached besides..her..

HE was knocking the other two guys when ...this guy got hold of geet...

" geeet are u okay..geeettt..' he shook her...grasping her tight... Geet opened her eyes...quaking ...and found maan in front of her..

maaann...maaan." She trembled...spilling tears.. Maan thanked his stars for landing there on time.. with his spare gun...or else.. He cupped her face...when he found her quivering ...

"maan..woh..woh..i.." she mumbled..

" its okay geet it ohkaaay...kuch nahi hua..kuch nahi huaa" he assured her...pulling her closer...embracing her ..

She hid herself in his arms...gripped his shirt..sniffing " shhss...geet..." Maan brushed her hair...


" lets go...shh.." He held her stiff in his arms..and moved with her...carefully in the jeep... HE settled her in the jeep...and drove off...



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How was this part???

I guess maan is still a mystery...

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Love

sweta





Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sounds like maan is undercover cope and he knows geet.

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