MG STORY *TAINTED ANGEL* updated part 8@102 18.4.15

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Goshhh geet got to knw abt dev's true in d worst possible ways dnt knw wat to say if it was all for good or nt

N seriously dev 🤬 is just dat high level wala ***********

Dnt knw wat words shud i use for him

Im scared actually aft reading dis part

Two things i ve noticed which can prove dangerous for next part

Geet ki hat neeche gir gayi baal khul gaye n nw she is gayab along with d gun

It can b either if she has run away coz still she has dat glint in her eyes to killl dev

Nw she can succeed or she ll b caught

I guess both are going to b dangerous

N still i c maan remains a mystery

May b secret agent police etc sumthing like dat or a social worker or a victim like sumone close to him has already suffered coz of dev i guesss with d intraction he had with dat chameli

Wonder hw is maan going to save geet nw

Curiousss

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

part 4

Though geets character in this story is that of a bar dancer who is forced to take up that job but u successfully has portrayed geet as a strong lady not a rondu one crying at her miseries... and i love this geet for that...

at odd situation too her mind works sharply and she tries to escape from her so called kidnapper...

maans character ab bhi mystery hain... is he an obsessive lover of geet? is that y he wants to help her from that dev... and so tried to kidnap her?

At last geet thought not fully .. but she now understands that maan is not that bad... atleast he is not trying to hurt her in any manner...

looking forward for more...

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

part 5

emotional part

last comment mein i told , i think maan is an obsessive lover ... but ab nahi lagtha... if he was obsessive he wouldnt have taken geet back to the person whom she loved, even if it was for a glimpse...

dev... hayee kameene se bhi zyaada kameena hain yeh tho... so happy that maan came on the right time for geet...

geet missing with pistol... abhi tak ka story padke i dont think she will try to harm herself with the dhoka she got... but as a fighter she is i think she will try to shoot dev... wow that will be great... i mean no shooting... jail jaana padega na... fir maan se setting kaisi hogi😉😆

will be waiting for the next...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 10 years ago

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

iska bhi waiting reee

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WhiteRussian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

dev is so bad 🤬 loved maan;s support to geet

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-Adwika-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

OMG sweety this kamina devcan be such a big kamina never thought about it, and Geet was trusting him more than Maan but it wasn't her mistake bcoz Maan was stranger to her and dev always pretend to be a nice guy in front of her, but thank god Maa showed Geet his real face and saved her from dev but what she is gonna do now

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

heyyaa people..i have typed the update ..just a little bit is left..M gona give u all...a long long update!!

HOPE u r missing this story!!

Enjoy the teasers..ill be back tom..with the update!!

TEASER #1

Dev gulped down another bottle of whiskey...and wiped his lips... He stood to his feet and made his way outside the bar..

Geet vigilantly followed dev... He was walking towards his car... In the next second she lost the sight of him.. She hastily looked of him...like a maniac..But he was gone..

dam.." she stomped her foot angrily..sighing heavily..

The roar of a car's engine drew her attention...Her eyes rolled in the respective direction..and found him exiting in his car..She pressed the trigger...taking her position...ready to shoot at him..As his car approached her

TEASER #2

He ruthlessly twirled ..taking her with him..

Subsequently a bullet was fired...Geet closed her eyes...shuddering due to the loud reverberation...

She trembled...feeling a sudden null and void... The man fell on the ground with a thud..

Hope u liked the teasers...

why are the likes and comment for this story going down ??

please like and comment...if u want the update

And guys i have started with a new story

Please have a look

~ONLY MINE~

LOVE

SWETA