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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay here goes... Another OS... Hope you like it.
Thought to write something along the lines of the plot... Everybody has been waiting for a wet and drunk sequence... So here goes...Lol

Nachiket rushes to close the garden sprinklers before Ragini gets totally drenched... Sadly he was too late. Ragini glares at him... Annoyed... Says angrily, "I guess I have you to thank for this. Honestly Nachiket, it is about time you grow up." Stunned, he says, "you think I did this." His eyes glaring with anger, retorts, "your habit of blaming me when things go wrong has not changed. If anyone should grow up, it is you!"

Seething with anger, he walks away before he strangles her. Karan and RK observe the angry gazes... Look at one another... Roll their eyes... Here we go again. Nachiket walks up to them... His mood spoilt... Grabs his drink and says, "I am heading in."

Ragini walks out of her room... Feeling humane, now that she was back in dry clothes. RK calls her over... Raises a glass of brandy, saying, "Ragini you better drink this... You don't want to fall ill this close to the wedding." Nachiket looks over to her, saying, "don't bother. She won't heed your advise, because Ragini knows best." Ragini walks up, stares at Nachiket defiantly... Takes the drink from RK's outstretched hand and gulps it down. Feeling mischievous, RK refills the glass, saying, "better safe than sorry." Ragini takes her refilled glass and walks out... Back to the garden.

Moments later Karan and RK call it a night. Karan looks at Nachiket, then out towards the garden and says, "buddy, you might want to check up on her." Sighing, Nachiket gets up and replies, "yea will have to,she can't hold her liquor."

He walks towards the garden... Stops and stares... Calling out, "Ragini what are you doing." Ragini turns around and laughingly replies, "Nachiket, what does it look like I am doing. I am opening the sprinklers." Folding his arms... His says in disgust, "you are obviously drunk." She straightens up... Looks at him with outrage as she gets drenched and says, "I am not." Annoyed and impatient, he snaps, "come here... You won't like it if I get drenched." Laughing, she twirls around... Swaying to the music in her mind...saying, "come and get me..."

Nachiket stands there watching her make a fool of herself as she twirls around... Dancing in the makeshift rain... Shaking his head in disgust... He walks towards her... The closer he gets... The slower he walks... Until he stops... Lost in the woman in front of him... This woman, who made his heart skip a beat. "Beautiful," he murmurs, this was the woman he missed... He yearned for... He steps towards her... No longer carrying that he will get drenched... His gaze trapped by the expression of bliss on her face as she lets go of herself and lives for the moment.


Nachiket grabs hold of her hand and pulls her into his arms... She falls onto his chest as he locks his arms around her waist... She places her palms on his chest and pushes away... Looks him in the eyes as she laughingly says, "you got me." "What are you going to do to me now?" She asks. Wanting this moment to never end... Her in his arms... Nachiket says huskily, "how about a dance?" Smiling into his eyes, she nods... They sway to the music in their mind... Their bodies moving in rhythm... It was like their bodies recognised each other... Knew what the other would do before he or she did.

Swaying away, lost in each other... Unable to stop himself, Nachiket says accusingly, "you replaced me!" Ragini stares at him... Places her hand on her heart and says passionately, "no... Never." His eyes glint with emotions bubbling out of control... No longer wanting to stay locked away... They sway some more... ennoying the silence between them... For it spoke more than words would... She looks up at his sadly and asks, "why are you being nice to me?" He looks down at her... Surprised by her question... Answers honestly, "because you won't remember any of it." She rests her head on his chest... Her fingertips caressing where his heart lies... She whispers, "will she take my place?" He tightens his hold, whispers, "no... Never."



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dude that was the best thing ever!!!!!
Just perfect, thanks a lot for this. This would be ideal. "No, never!" Were the best words ever spoken
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww ... Cute !!!

"Will she take my place" - I hope Ragini asks this question to NK tomorrow...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Made me emotional. This is such a touching moment between them.
'No ... never' almost translates into 'I Love You ...'

Beautiful, will wait for more, Angel.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww - "Will she take my place" i can imagine Ragini in drunken stage asking this question lyk a cutie!! wish it hpns in episode today!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Angel!
Loved it.. Such a poignant moment shared in half their collective senses.. They're so perfect together.. Wish they have an intense conversation in the actual scene..

Thank you for writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Angel.

Really loved it.

Awesome! Great! their dialogue baazi made me emotional. ❤️

Thanks for writing such an awesome OS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful & Loively

ufff omg ❤️will she take my place?" He tightens his hold, whispers, "no... Never."

i loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was simply beautiful😊
I know Ekta will never show any such thing, but your so was a piece of medicine for the upcomming track, our expectations increase after reading such track frm the show.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb...!!
Loved it...it was soo cute!

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